1. missing the video to normal diff.
2. 03:12:215 - unsnapped green section at #4 kiai time.
3. why don't you add " soft-sliderslide " of silence ? feels too loud on this part. 00:00:215 - ~ 00:05:404 - it was a strongly marked.
   Link : http://puu.sh/5hWjv.zip
4. I agree Moway's diff about volume of the first part. I recommend you to use low volume here. please try comparing this to the other diffs.
5. Tag: ryo ,As you know he is a producer.
6. i don't like this o_o it is a hindrance to play imo. If someone wants this skip, downloading by my own. so consider removing it.
   
   this

   

1. Approach Rate -1. because this map does not have easy diff.
2. 00:00:215 - ,00:00:215 - this green section is unnecessary.
3. 00:11:890 (4,1,2) - a bit nazi mod, please check these spacing here.
4. 00:20:971 (1,2) - ^ Same, you should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the part.
5. 01:10:593 - ,02:02:485 - ,02:31:025 - this is not particularly necessary.
   
6. 01:16:755 (1) - please put on the head of next slider. just a little xD
7. 02:25:674 (1) - add a finish here to follow the crash cymbal in the music. 02:30:701 - If you add it here, don't forget to put 40~60% volume.
8. 03:00:215 (2,3,4,5,6) - contiguous 5 notes feels too hard. so consider remaking some sliders.

1. 01:43:836 (5) - Please try to rotate this slider around 20°. The part will flow more naturally also it looks better to me.
   
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2. 02:30:701 - 40~60% volume please i cant hear this hit sound.
3. 02:44:323 (3,1,2) - ,02:48:215 (3,4,1) - try to unify the new combo patterns ,it looks better to me.
4. 03:12:377 (1) - i want a finish sound for the climax here. and same reason 02:30:701 -

1. 01:16:674 (1) - hmm 5 hits would fit well with this kind of sound same as previous part. 00:14:485 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - so consider removing a note here. will be more interesting imo
   
2. 02:25:674 (1) - Same as Hard diff. and missing a finish sound to this spinner.
3. 02:40:431 (1) - feels that these consecutive whistles do not match. I recommend you to put it to the head only.
4. 03:12:377 (1) - Same as Hard diff.

alacat wrote:

yo Kuria

[General]

1. missing the video to normal diff.fixed
2. 03:12:215 - unsnapped green section at #4 kiai time.fixed all
3. why don't you add " soft-sliderslide " of silence ? feels too loud on this part. 00:00:215 - ~ 00:05:404 - it was a strongly marked.
   Link : http://puu.sh/5hWjv.zipokay
4. I agree Moway's diff about volume of the first part. I recommend you to use low volume here. please try comparing this to the other diffs.reduced that part to 50% for now
5. Tag: ryo ,As you know he is a producer.okay
6. i don't like this o_o it is a hindrance to play imo. If someone wants this skip, downloading by my own. so consider removing it.
   this

   
   the problem is the filesize is way too big if i must include the skin onto the mapset, so i'm rather make it separated like this.
   
   this way, the player will have a chance if they want to use the skin or prefer their default one with the combo color from the mapset instead.
   
   also i don't think this skin is annoying to play, if it does, i'll never put it on the first place because i'm really serious with the readability of my map >_<'

[Hard]

1. 01:43:836 (5) - Please try to rotate this slider around 20°. The part will flow more naturally also it looks better to me.kay
   
   img

   
2. 02:30:701 - 40~60% volume please i cant hear this hit sound.kay
3. 02:44:323 (3,1,2) - ,02:48:215 (3,4,1) - try to unify the new combo patterns ,it looks better to me.i'm not really understand about this part, i hope this one are fix'd now
4. 03:12:377 (1) - i want a finish sound for the climax here. and same reason 02:30:701 - okay, but i'm not raising the volume because it feels awkward for the finishing to be loud like this on this spot ;3;

[Insane]

1. 01:16:674 (1) - hmm 5 hits would fit well with this kind of sound same as previous part. 00:14:485 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - so consider removing a note here. will be more interesting imo nah, i wanna follow the percussion completely for here, i think it's not too complicated to play knowing this one is insane level already XD
   
   already tried your way when i frst mapped it, somewhat it leaves me some awkward feel on that blank spot.
   
2. 02:25:674 (1) - Same as Hard diff. and missing a finish sound to this spinner.kay
3. 02:40:431 (1) - feels that these consecutive whistles do not match. I recommend you to put it to the head only. kay
4. 03:12:377 (1) - Same as Hard diff.same too lol

It leaves something to be desired, so i want more finish sound on kiai time.haha, i know that feel too XD

anyway, that's all i got. whenever you're ready, call me back for recheck.

alacat wrote:

yo Kuria

[Normal]

1. Approach Rate -1. because this map does not have easy diff. O_O was only supposed to be 4 fixed
2. 00:00:215 - ,00:00:215 - this green section is unnecessary. fixed
3. 00:11:890 (4,1,2) - a bit nazi mod, please check these spacing here.fixed
4. 00:20:971 (1,2) - ^ Same, you should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the part. fixed
5. 01:10:593 - ,02:02:485 - ,02:31:025 - this is not particularly necessary. kk
   
6. 01:16:755 (1) - please put on the head of next slider. just a little xD OWO
7. 02:25:674 (1) - add a finish here to follow the crash cymbal in the music. 02:30:701 - If you add it here, don't forget to put 40~60% volume. alright fixed
8. 03:00:215 (2,3,4,5,6) - contiguous 5 notes feels too hard. so consider remaking some sliders. added a slider, didn't want to get rid of too many circles here~

It leaves something to be desired, so i want more finish sound on kiai time.

anyway, that's all i got. whenever you're ready, call me back for recheck.

UnderminE wrote:

Shit Kuria this is old

Chewin wrote:

new most played for next 69 months
gratz~

Soaprman wrote:

A shame you didn't map the last 20 seconds of the song, and an even bigger shame that only one other person in this thread thought to point that out. A really disappointing way to end an otherwise nice beatmap.

Soaprman wrote:

A shame you didn't map the last 20 seconds of the song, and an even bigger shame that only one other person in this thread thought to point that out. A really disappointing way to end an otherwise nice beatmap.

Edit: Probably should have used the beatmap comments for this... forgot those even existed! Oh well.

Kuria wrote:

done adjusting, let see