oukaitou - Princess

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Hi 这是我挑了半天的鱼骨头
I think this map is so good that it should be ranked asap.
[General]
没个TAG什么的吗/w\

[Despair]
00:48:688 (5) - 和00:49:921 (1) 的末端对齐怎么样o.o
01:52:387 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉之前样不太好看 这样可以么0 0然后把5的起点和3对齐
02:44:990 (1,2,3,4) - 同上_(:з」∠)_

[Fear]
01:38:723 (8) - del? 这样后面节奏一样0 0
02:37:695 (6) - 这样改一下?
02:41:907 (1,2,3,4) - 这样0 0?
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
Thanks for modding! Your suggestions are really suitable to me to improve this map! :D

And @Scorpiour:

Scorpiour wrote:

[General]
  1. Your mp3 is 320kbps, so change it to 192kbps and don't forget to do timing againk
  2. No tags?这个真没有
  3. Recommend a silent sliderslide also since the song is quiet.k


[Normal]
  1. 00:40:583 - add a slider here to instread of 00:40:994 (2) - maybe better? also 00:43:870 -
    一上来就这样感觉有点难
  2. 01:40:377 (1) - extend to 3/2 length?那样节奏对新人就不好掌握了
  3. 01:51:062 (4) - make it curved? the song here is soft as aways..k
  4. 02:06:062 (2) - move to prev white tick and extend to 1/1?
  5. 02:07:706 (4) - ^, these place are not suitable for shorten slider to alternate beat imo
  6. 02:09:350 (2) - ^
  7. 02:10:994 (4) - ^, move forward then add a repeat这几个都是为了增加一点节奏多样性 不然玩着玩着睡着了
  8. 02:28:459 (2) - depends on your hitsound, clap here is better than finish, i'd like to put finish at 02:29:281 (3) - but not here故意的 最高难度也是这个下法
  9. 03:50:240 - suggest to reduce volumn from here to end graduately其实没必要 因为音乐本身音量其实并没有减少 加一根绿线配合一下足够了


[Hard]
  1. 00:37:192 (3,4,5) - the beat here is heard mess...remove whistle here first, and then combine 00:37:192 (3,4) - ?故意的 为了节奏的多样性
  2. TBH, i didn't very agree with your usage of whistles before 00:52:706 -
  3. 01:05:857 (1) - confused slider overlap完全不会unrankable啊...不过你这么一说我修了修slider的形状 现在stack得更加完美了lol
  4. 01:20:035 (4,5,6,7) - bad flow i suppose.. try this placement?k
  5. 01:26:404 (3) - ctrl+g and move head left a bit like this?故意的
  6. 01:30:514 (1,2,3,4) - whistle here are heard weird改了节奏
  7. 02:44:074 (4) - Unsnapped circlek
  8. 03:07:089 (6) - ctrl+g?k
  9. 03:32:569 (3) - move to 180:280 for better flow~感觉现在这样 flow不差多少 美观不止一点
Scorpiour
recheck:

[General]
  1. remove good machine oil from tags, i don't think it makes any sense....


[Fear]
  1. 01:55:264 (1) - ctrl+g to this slider? since your prev notes are jump for each two, i think a ctrl+g for jump may make better flow:>


[Despair]
  1. 00:47:661 - add a note here or make a 1/2 slider for consistent beat?


no kds
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
good machine oil

The other two have been fixed.
Scorpiour
bubbled~~~

Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
Finally finally finally. Thanks a lot.
NatsumeRin
[Doubt]
01:12:524 (1) - a strange shape here doesn't really fit imo
01:44:579 (2) - whistle on the beginning too

[Despair]
00:36:770 (2,3,4) - the stack here looks awkward when playing
00:47:044 (2,3,4) - i assueme it's something between Normal/Hard, this kind of stack won't be appreciated.
01:39:236 (2,3,4) - i'd prefer you to change how these notes placed too...
01:40:880 (2,3,4) - ^
01:42:524 (2,3,4) - ^

[Fear]
00:36:360 (1,2) - plz no. http://puu.sh/2949a i don't think this is a fine way.
00:38:825 (3,4,5,6,1) - ...not sure what do you want with those beats.
01:05:538 (7,8,1) - maybe you could make this more clear with manually stack http://puu.sh/294cG
01:12:113 (6) - after stack this note would overlap with 5 a bit, i think this is not what you want.
03:49:099 (3) - 0.5x is a bit too much, (easy to recognize as 1/2)
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
Fixed all except these two.

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Fear]
00:38:825 (3,4,5,6,1) - ...not sure what do you want with those beats.I just wanna map something different and creative here, if my map could fit in other songs with the same BPM, then it is bad.
03:49:099 (3) - 0.5x is a bit too much, (easy to recognize as 1/2)Generally speaking, I would like to fixed this kind of problems immediately. However imo this should be a special case, since this kind of rhythm have been looped again and again before, I think it's pretty easy for players to judge the rhythm here.
Thanks for modding!! :D
NatsumeRin
Ranked.
Kiiwa
Gratz \:D/
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
\Yeah/~
Thanks a lot! :)
Snowy Dream
哇 鸭子又rank图
Strawberry
恭喜囉~
Jordan
UnitedWeSin
Brilliant mapset. Gratz JPY~
vizzy
Absolutely outstanding beatmap. Congrats!
MaxiMilliaN
Beautiful<3
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