This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年2月27日 at 13:29:28

Artist: oukaitou
Title: Princess
Tags: Dulcet Series summer special collection good machine oil
BPM: 146
Filesize: 6894kb
Play Time: 03:56
Difficulties Available:

1. Despair (4.31 stars, 346 notes)
2. Doubt (3.04 stars, 253 notes)
3. Fear (4.98 stars, 588 notes)

Download: oukaitou - Princess
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Mapping with doubt, despair and fear.
Shit.

25th map.

下载试试= =~

嗨咯~！

你这背景都哪找来的！快给我也发几张~！

[Hard]

[Normal]

好听的歌
然后看到那个shit
然后我就想抽你了

[Normal]
Ar-1，现在太快了我说真的O_O...
00:54:761 (X) - 这边加个note还是比较带感的
00:58:048 (X) - ^
01:04:624 (X) - ^
01:43:048 (X) - 这边这样搞
02:10:994 (4) - 加个whistle在中间

[Hard]
00:37:500 (4,5) - 这个换一下位置节奏就对了
00:37:911 (1) - 这里可以加clap
01:08:733 (6,7) - 这块节奏没那么急促
01:19:007 (1) - 去掉whistle
01:19:829 (3) - 然后把whistle放到这里
01:43:254 (3) - whistle搞掉

嘛考虑加个静音轨道?
然后建议加个diff在hard和normal之间？

[Normal]

01:12:432 (1) - i dont like it D:
01:17:980 - missing a beat. i suggest to place the slider here and make him to repeat
01:27:226 (4) - i really think these sliders would not fit to the song
01:58:870 (2) - ^
02:02:158 (2) - move the first slider-waypoint to 64;156. [url=02:02:158 (2) -]looks[/url] much better to me
03:17:363 (1) -
03:20:651 (1) - make the the cure more smooth and it would be fine
03:52:295 (2) and 03:53:939 (2) - meh :c
[Hard]

its a very hard Hard and since the first kiai-time it really is an Insane. rename
hp-drain -1. its too hard fo a hard and also it doesnt fits to the song
00:29:281 (7,8,1) - looks good but plays really weird because there isnt any rhythm like this in the music
00:29:487 - and instead a beat is missing here >.<
00:32:569 (7,8,1) - same
00:36:884 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:38:733 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^
00:42:432 (7,8,1) - ^. i swear im not the only one who think so. you need a change there :\
00:45:515 (7,8) - it should be sth like this http://puu.sh/1I9dY to make the beats hit the music (add whistle on slider begin and on circle)
00:46:131 (1) - if you did ^ add whistle at start
01:02:158 (6,7,1) - doesnt fit here
01:02:569 (1,2) - thats a pretty big and also random jump to me. i suggest to move 01:02:158 (6,7,1) a bit to the left (and maybe a bit down too) and mirror (1) (dont forget the hitsounds!)
01:08:733 (6,7) - make them to one slider is better
01:15:309 (6,7) - ^
01:18:185 (3,4,5) - ? why O:
01:25:172 (6,7) - remove (1) and move the slider on the white tick http://puu.sh/1I9Bg?
01:30:514 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - dafuq?
01:38:322 (6,7,8,1) - make a triplet and a single
01:39:144 (2,3) - add nc on (2) and remove on (3). thats better to read
01:40:788 (2,3) - ^
01:42:432 (2,3) - ^
01:43:254 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - the song is just nice, polite, kind and quiet. such a highlight moment doesnt fit
01:43:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - if you remove the whistles it doesnt it doesnt sound like a epic moment (and then in the music never was one)
02:48:391 (4,1) and 02:49:213 (4,1) and 02:50:035 (4,1) - dat jumps are so random and impossible...rly
03:07:089 (6) - ctrl+g

nice map though^^

Hi there. From my mod queue.

Unrankable stuff中的意见是很有可能要修改的，如果你的map是要ranked的话。
Map designing部分、Rhythm/Placing部分和Hitsounds部分的意见是我的个人见解，如果你觉得不好可以随时忽略。

[Normal]

1. Unrankable stuff
   
   1. None.
2. Map designing
   
   1. 参照Hard部分
3. Rhythm/Placing
   
   • 
     节奏上不科学的空拍略多，碍于星数还是不说了..
     
   1. 00:47:158 (2) - 这种排版给人一种不是1/1节奏，很容易打快的感觉，建议分开
   2. 00:47:774 (3,4) - 换成3/2折返?
   3. 01:10:788 (4) - 这个slider的形状略单调...可以考虑加几个支点复杂一点
4. Hitsounds
   
   1. 前面的whistle显得略单调..00:52:706之前的whistle可以再多点，每小节加一个也可以
   2. 01:21:884 (4) - 移除whistle?后面的3/2slider也同理适当移除，因为下一小节第一拍也有whistle听起来有点重复
   3. 01:53:117 (4) - clap?
   4. 02:07:911 (4) and 02:11:199 (4) - clap换成whistle?
   5. 02:30:514 (2) - 头加finish，尾部finish换成clap?
   6. 03:06:678 (5) - 移除其中一个hitsound?合起来不太好听
   7. 03:16:131 (5) - 移除whistle?
   8. 03:19:829 (4) - 同03:06:678 (5)
   9. 03:37:089 (1) - 降低音量。如果之前的spinner没换位置也一样最好降低音量

[Hard]

1. Unrankable stuff
   
   1. None.
2. Map designing
   
   1. 02:11:610 (1) - 这里的spinner感觉有点强硬，可以考虑在02:08:322开始做一些引向高潮的节奏/DS比较高的排列，02:11:610换成note，之后是break，然后在02:21:473建一个spinner持续到02:24:350，我觉得这样会好一点
3. Rhythm/Placing
   
   1. 00:35:857 (8) - 这里感觉跟平时一样slider移后到蓝线上，原地加个circle比较好，spacing可以不用变
   2. 01:16:747 (4,5,6) - 换个角度摆同DS的三角形会更好？这个地方音乐应该是往高处进行的
   3. 01:19:624 (2,3,4,5,6) - 换种漂亮点的摆法？
   4. 01:30:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - (1)变成1/2 slider，之后的移后一个1/16拍，5连换成4连，这样的节奏比较不突兀
   5. 01:42:021 (1,2,3) - 这里也略有弧度地摆一下？
   6. 02:08:322 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 如果Map designing那里不改，这里还是觉得作为高潮的地方这么摆不合适，个人认为还是摆得大气点好
   7. 02:29:692 (1) - 这里的前后无论节奏衔接还是排版都略生硬？感觉全局对称太难用好了
   8. 02:49:418 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里的纯1/2节奏略单调，就算是02:50:548加个note也会好很多
   9. 03:17:363 to 03:23:733 - 这里也一样，同上在同样的小节位置加note之类的形成3连也会听起来顺耳很多
   10. 03:39:555 (4) - 按照前面这里这个(4)应该是跟(1,2,3)是同一条弧线比较好？
4. Hitsounds
   
   1. 00:28:665 (6) - whistle?
   2. 00:31:952 (6) - 同上，(8)的头尾也可以加whistle
   3. 00:35:651 (7) - whistle从slider尾换到slider头上
   4. 00:38:322 (1) - 也许可以加个whistle
   5. 00:39:144 (6) - whistle
   6. 00:41:815 (6) - 同00:28:665 (6)
   7. 00:49:213 (1) - whistle?
   8. 00:51:473 (6) - whistle?
   9. 00:54:761 (4) - whistle?
   10. 00:58:048 (4) - 同上
   11. 01:01:336 (4) - 同上
   12. 01:04:213 (4,5,6,7) - oxxoxoxx?(x代表whistle
   13. 01:07:911 (4) - 同00:54:761 (4)
   14. 01:11:199 (4) - 同上
   15. 01:14:487 (4) - 同上
   16. 01:15:411 (7) - 头尾可以加whistle
   17. 01:17:158 (6) - whistle?
   18. 01:17:774 (2) - whistle?
   19. 01:48:391 (8) - whistle?
   20. 01:54:966 (8) - 同上
   21. 01:55:994 (1) - 这里的whistle移动到01:55:583，然后(2)加whistle?
   22. 02:25:994 (3) - finish?
   23. 02:28:459 (2) - 这里给我的感觉clap比较好？同时02:29:281加finish?
   24. 02:30:514 (1) - finish?
   25. 02:36:678 (6) - 移除finish?
   26. 02:43:254 (6) - whistle?
   27. 02:46:541 (6) - 同上
   28. 02:49:829 (3) - 同上
   29. 02:53:117 (3) - 同上
   30. 02:56:404 (1) - 同上
   31. 如果spinner没换位置还是同Normal末尾降低音量

都25张图了

不是很喜欢啊......

Hi~ mod from my Mod Queue

那張圖我真的不認識是誰lol
不過因為是好歌~所以還是來mod>_<

如果我的建議不好請原諒.
神mapper!我只能mod出這些>_<

good luck ></

麻烦的格式就不写啦~

[Normal]

1. 01:12:432 (1) - 平滑的slider中突然出现一个这种扭曲的slider有点不舒服~
2. 01:33:802 (4) - ^

[Hard]

1. 03:30:617 - 降音量~？25%？~
2. 03:43:665 - 20%?~
3. 03:50:240 - 15%。。。。。。。

唔。。我来凑SP好了。。。~
<☆~

Hi there~~mod from queue~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. Your mp3 is 320kbps, so change it to 192kbps and don't forget to do timing again
2. No tags?
3. Recommend a silent sliderslide also since the song is quiet.

[Normal]

1. 00:40:583 - add a slider here to instread of 00:40:994 (2) - maybe better? also 00:43:870 -
   
2. 01:40:377 (1) - extend to 3/2 length?
3. 01:51:062 (4) - make it curved? the song here is soft as aways..
4. 02:06:062 (2) - move to prev white tick and extend to 1/1?
5. 02:07:706 (4) - ^, these place are not suitable for shorten slider to alternate beat imo
6. 02:09:350 (2) - ^
7. 02:10:994 (4) - ^, move forward then add a repeat
8. 02:28:459 (2) - depends on your hitsound, clap here is better than finish, i'd like to put finish at 02:29:281 (3) - but not here
9. 03:50:240 - suggest to reduce volumn from here to end graduately

[Hard]

1. 00:37:192 (3,4,5) - the beat here is heard mess...remove whistle here first, and then combine 00:37:192 (3,4) - ?
2. TBH, i didn't very agree with your usage of whistles before 00:52:706 -
3. 01:05:857 (1) - confused slider overlap
4. 01:20:035 (4,5,6,7) - bad flow i suppose.. try this placement?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:26:404 (3) - ctrl+g and move head left a bit like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:30:514 (1,2,3,4) - whistle here are heard weird
7. 02:44:074 (4) - Unsnapped circle
8. 03:07:089 (6) - ctrl+g?
9. 03:32:569 (3) - move to 180:280 for better flow~

that's all, give me a call when you're ready.

顺便一提，Hard的难度我认为已经超出一个正常的Hard应有的难度了，虽然不是完全不能放过但是diff spread确实感觉有些不好。另外非黑色的地方如果不改要给我有说服力的理由。

Ahh finally finished...to read the modding posts and edit such a long map is really a big work. It's so painful for such a lazy guy like me to go with...
And I know it was not easy for you guys to mod this map, too! Some modding are really useful to me! Great thanks for you!

Map updated~
@Scorpiour: I'll reply your modding on-line.

yo. bg name made me lol

Despair
OD+1. Rhythm is too simple to need such a low OD, right?
01:19:921 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing and awkward slider paths to follow, use spacing 0.43X to fix (5) spacing. Also, maybe rotate (5) and place like:
01:39:853 (4,4,4) - Nicer rhythm to move these all to the next 1/2, right?
02:27:729 (3,2) - Having both as these as custom sound feel awkward. Maybe remove one?
02:40:469 - Remove whistle.
03:28:346 (4,1) - Transition between these two sliders doesn't feel right.

Fear
00:38:620 (2,3,4,5,6) - You can make hitsounds here like 01:18:277 (3,4,5) -
01:16:429 (2,3,4,5,6) - Can be arranged better.
01:19:716 (2,6) - Stack (2) on (6) so it doesn't have such a random overlap maybe~ (and also you don't need to stack (7) too... It seems unnecessary)
01:44:373 (4) - New combo? Splitting it into grounds of three looks cool~
01:53:209 (4,1) - Good location, but so easy to mistake for a 1/4. Maybe CTRL+G 01:53:620 (1,2) - and 01:54:031 (3,4) - or something to make less confusing. Looks like:
02:40:469 (7) - New combo.
02:47:044 (7) - New combo.
03:10:058 (5) - New combo.

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Hi, JauiPlaY

My mod from your request in my modding queue


Comment: All diffs are look good for me. Especially, in Doubt diff. I really prefer for your mapping.

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you. (Sorry for I mod delay, too)

Good luck~

Hi 这是我挑了半天的鱼骨头
I think this map is so good that it should be ranked asap.
[General]
没个TAG什么的吗/w\

[Despair]
00:48:688 (5) - 和00:49:921 (1) 的末端对齐怎么样o.o
01:52:387 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉之前样不太好看 这样可以么0 0然后把5的起点和3对齐
02:44:990 (1,2,3,4) - 同上_(:з」∠)_

[Fear]
01:38:723 (8) - del? 这样后面节奏一样0 0
02:37:695 (6) - 这样改一下？
02:41:907 (1,2,3,4) - 这样0 0?

Thanks for modding! Your suggestions are really suitable to me to improve this map!

And @Scorpiour:

recheck:

[General]

1. remove good machine oil from tags, i don't think it makes any sense....

[Fear]

1. 01:55:264 (1) - ctrl+g to this slider? since your prev notes are jump for each two, i think a ctrl+g for jump may make better flow:>

[Despair]

1. 00:47:661 - add a note here or make a 1/2 slider for consistent beat?

no kds

good machine oil

The other two have been fixed.

bubbled~~~

Finally finally finally. Thanks a lot.

[Doubt]
01:12:524 (1) - a strange shape here doesn't really fit imo
01:44:579 (2) - whistle on the beginning too

[Despair]
00:36:770 (2,3,4) - the stack here looks awkward when playing
00:47:044 (2,3,4) - i assueme it's something between Normal/Hard, this kind of stack won't be appreciated.
01:39:236 (2,3,4) - i'd prefer you to change how these notes placed too...
01:40:880 (2,3,4) - ^
01:42:524 (2,3,4) - ^

[Fear]
00:36:360 (1,2) - plz no. http://puu.sh/2949a i don't think this is a fine way.
00:38:825 (3,4,5,6,1) - ...not sure what do you want with those beats.
01:05:538 (7,8,1) - maybe you could make this more clear with manually stack http://puu.sh/294cG
01:12:113 (6) - after stack this note would overlap with 5 a bit, i think this is not what you want.
03:49:099 (3) - 0.5x is a bit too much, (easy to recognize as 1/2)

Fixed all except these two.

Thanks for modding!!

Ranked.