1. Easy (1.28 stars, 76 notes)
2. Hard (2.61 stars, 187 notes)
3. Insane (3.73 stars, 307 notes)
4. SWEETNESS (5.85 stars, 433 notes)

1. not works video in collab. you must add it.
2. tag is not same between diffs. you must add "gaten ohzero arkemaky" to other than collab
3. downbeat does not fit song. you must change offset to 00:00:535 - .
   t/20998

1. Unused image file: arkema~1.png
2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times: fix it in sweet difficulty
3. The difficulty gap between your "normal" (which I would have called Easy) and your hard is too high imo. You are not supposed to "skip" a difficulty if you want to get this ranked. As of now, there is no real normal diff in the mapset, since the one you labelled as normal has 1,84 star rating and plays pretty much like an Easy diff except for the approach rate

1. 00:30:535 (5) - remove the last repeat and add circle at 00:32:008
2. 01:09:642 (1) - curve it more to make the combo overall look better

1. 00:03:615 (3) - remove circle, there is nothing in the music here
2. 00:16:339 (5,6) - make 00:16:607 (6) blanket around 00:16:339 (5)
3. 00:14:464 (2) - too close from previous item
4. 00:13:660 (1) - ^
5. 00:05:892 (6) - ^ etc. I think you shouldn't use the 0,7 DS at all in the map, it makes it hard to read, which shouldn't be the case in hard diff. Try to be more consistent inspacing overall, this is not insane diff
6. 00:11:517 (4,5) - why not map the music a little more? these are ones of the "strongest" notes in the song, it's a shame they are not mapped. Remove the sliders and go for a stream or smth. Obviously same comment for rest of the map: placing all your notes on 1/2 beats without mapping the actual music makes the map really boring imo
7. 00:25:848 (5,1) - stack perfectly if you want to stack this. My suggestion would be to not stack, though. (also, there should be a note at 00:25:311)
8. 00:27:321 (5,1,2) - this doesn't follow the music either
9. 00:50:357 (7,8,9) - ^
10. 00:52:366 (2) - remove circle, there's nothing in the music here
11. 00:57:455 (3) - remove slider and place circle at 00:57:588
12. 01:01:740 (9) - no reason for this to start on blue tick
13. 01:12:723 (1,2) - same again, you could map music much better. Make 01:12:723 (1) end 1/4 beat earlier and 01:13:392 (2) start 1/4 beat earlier too
14. 01:20:758 - maybe add circle here
15. 01:26:249 (1) - this should also start 1/4 beat earlier

1. Unsnapped notes:
   
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   01:04:821 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:05:223 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:05:892 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   01:06:294 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
2. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at 00:57:42
3. 00:21:695 - add circle
4. 00:44:464 (3,4,5) - could follow music better. Make 00:44:463 (3) end 1/4 beat earlier, place 00:45:267 (4) 1/4 beat earlier, and make 00:45:535 (5) start 1/4 bit earlier as well
5. 00:46:472 - add circle? (if you do, change the previous slider to something else, otherwise it will be weird)
6. 00:46:607 (1,2,3,4) - would be better if you mapped voice instead (same general comment as for Hard diff)
7. 00:57:186 - add circle?
8. 01:01:607 (1,2,3,4) - again, why do you place all those notes on 1/2 beats when you could map the music and make it ten times more fun to play?

1. Unsnapped notes:
   
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   01:27:054 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start)
2. Fix kiai time to make it same as other difficulties
3. The clap hitsound sounds a bit awkward to me, maybe customize it?

• General

1. Why does "[sweet]" have a different kiai time than the other osu!standard difficulties? I recomend you to have the same kiai times between all difficulties, except taiko since taiko specific difficulties can have a different kiai time. The kiai #1 of [sweet] should start at 00:09:107 and end at 00:26:250. Kiai #2 should start at 01:09:107, and end at 01:26:250 like in the other difficulties.
2. Capitalize [Sweet], [Collab] and [Sweety Taiko]. Looks much better and it's consistent with the other difficulties' names.
3. The offset sounds too late! try changing it to 523 (-12). However, I modded this map with the old offset so before you change it, apply changes to your difficulties.
4. The storyboarded images of names for the collab difficulty don't look neat. They look pixelated, see? I highly recommend you to improve the quality of these images. I also recommend you to add to them a black stroke/line around the letters so they don't blend with the background.

• Normal
  
  *About this difficulty, I don't agree with SuperMoutarde, to be honest. It DOES play like a Normal, at least that's what I think. What decreases the star rating is the slider velocity. You could have used an higher SV but it's okay like this, I guess. Still, you should map an easy. That's something I agreed with.
  *This difficulty lacks LOTS of hitsounds and NewCombos so this will be a NC and Hitsound mod. I'll put Hitsound stuff and NC stuff apart, inside spoilerboxes. If I don't do this, the mod will look stressingly long.
  
  
  Hitsounds

  1. 1. 00:00:535 (1) - Here's missing a hitfinish at the start of this slider. A strong, loud sound can be heard so why not adding a hitfinish?
     2. 00:02:678 (3) - ^
     3. 00:04:820 (5) - ^
     4. 00:06:964 (6) - ^ At the start and end of this slider.
     5. 00:08:035 (7) - ^ Also, remove that clap at the end! it doesn't fit in anything with the song imo. Sounds odd.
     6. 00:09:107 (1) - ^ At the end.
     7. 00:18:214 (8) - ^ At the start.
     8. 00:30:535 (5) - ^
     9. 00:32:678 (7) - ^ At the start and end of it.
     10. 00:49:821 (3) - ^ At the start. I know I shouldn't mention this here but the hitsound at the end sounds late because this slider shouldn't end here. Shorten it, making it end at 00:50:758. Now the hitfinish at the end will sound good.
     11. 00:51:428 (4) - ^ At the end.
     12. 00:56:250 (4) - At the start and 2nd repeat.
     13. 00:58:392 (5) - ^ At the start.
     14. 00:59:464 (6) - ^ Start and end.
     15. 01:00:535 (7) - ^ Start.
     16. 01:03:750 (10) - At the start and end.
     17. 01:04:821 (2,3) - ^ At start and end of both sliders.
     18. 01:06:963 (4) - I like how it sounds with repeat at start, repeat and end. Try it!
     19. 01:17:142 (1) - Here you can add a whistle at the end of this slider and then you can add hitfinish at the next slider's start. Sounds perfectly with the music imo.
     20. 01:25:177 (7) - Hitfinish at the start to follow the music?
     21. 01:26:250 (1) - ^
     22. 01:30:535 (1) - ^
     23. 01:32:678 (1) - At both end and start.
         
         Remember! they're all suggestions! I also suggest you to consider adding some whistles like you were doing over 00:52:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) that section. Sounds too monotonous since it doesn't have any hitsound.
  New Combos

  1. 00:06:964 (6) - Here, I suggest you to add NC, since the melody changes. This is also to avoid +(5) combo numbers. Long combos in Easier difficulties should be avoided if possible.
  2. 00:13:392 (4) - ^
  3. 00:18:214 (5) - ^ and then you should remove NC of the next slider.
  4. 00:22:500 (4) - ^ then here you can add a nc after doing that ^, again, due to the change of melody.
  5. 00:32:678 (7) - ^
  6. 00:47:678 (1) - The vocals don't change here nor does the music so I suggest you to remove this nc. After this, add nc to the next note. It fits much more imo.
  7. 00:56:250 (4) - And again, due to the change of vocals and melody in general, I suggest you to add nc here.
  8. 01:00:535 (4) - ^
  9. 01:20:892 (4) - To shorten this combo number of 7, I suggest you to add a nc here since the vocal changes here.
     
     As I've stated already, this is to shorten unnecessarily long combos. I hope this helps you!
  • Hard

1. 00:01:339 (2,3) - This rhythm doesn't feel nor sound good. A slider at a blue tick like this isn't a good idea. Slider mostly play fine on white ticks. Sometimes at red ticks too but those are special cases. Well, to make this pattern sound better and play better, I suggest you to remove a repeat of 00:01:338 (2), add a slider at 00:01:606 (end at 00:02:142) and then a note at 00:02:410. Sounds muuuuch better imo. Try it!
2. 00:03:749 (3,4) - ^ Same issue here about slider at a blue tick. Try a similar pattern mentioned above here. Would be much better imo.
3. 00:04:821 (5) - Here I suggest you to add a nc and a hitfinish at the start of this slider since the melody changes here. After this, if you agreed to add the newcombo, remove nc at 00:06:696 (1) and then add nc to 00:06:964 (2).
4. 00:05:892 (2) - Why does this slider end at that blue tick? there's a important beat at the next white tick, so please consider ending this slider at that white tick (00:06:427). Sounds much better! follows more the music.
5. 00:06:963 (1) - Since the song gets emphasized here, I suggest you to add hitfinish at both start and end of this slider.
6. 00:08:035 (3) - ^
7. 00:09:107 (1) - ^
8. 00:16:607 (6) - Well this is a kinda.. ugly placement of this slider. You should take advantage of slider shapes to make blankets or other kind of patterns with them. Here, you can move the slider a tad to the left to make a blanket like this. Wait, why does this slider end here at this white tick? there's an important beat at 00:17:276 so it's better if you extend this slider, making it end here. Here's the screenshot of the blanket pattern:
   
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   Well I'll better stop here! these are some suggestions. Try to follow my hitsound mod of Easy and apply it here if you agree with it! I would write for the rest of the difficulty but since you didn't read the rules of our queue, I'll just leave you a couple of advices to improve your beatmap.

• Collab
  
  I'll give a general opinion of this difficulty as I'll do as well about [sweet]. Well, this difficulty is very .. messy. The circle size is too much. I suggest you to change it to 4. About the patterns.. well.. at gaten's parts there are a lot of messy patterns such as 00:19:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7). Plays bad, and the notes get overlapped by each other. Also.. there are a lot of sliders at blue ticks and that's bad. Sliders should start at white ticks since they emphasize and fit more with the music if they're like that. If they're at blue ticks, they feel awkward to click. Try it by yourself. Try playing this difficulty and clicking slider such as 00:17:008 (7), 00:19:955 (2), 00:23:705 (1). These are very unintuitive and don't sound good with the music. They will most likely mislead the player and confuse him. You should avoid doing this if it isn't necessary! just place sliders at white tick and you'll see how it sounds and feels much comfortable to play. Well there are also various inconsistent placements as at 00:21:562 (1,2,3). (1) and (2) don't have the same distance between them as (2) and (3). You should fix this with distance snap. Other overlaps that I disliked are ones like at 00:22:500 (5,6). Uhmm the rhythm isn't consistent either. You leave empty spaces all of a sudden and then, a lot of consecutive notes with sliders at blue ticks snapped 1/4. It's odd.
  Some sliders should end earlier than how their are.. there are also some missing notes such as at 00:26:249.. a lot of stuff. Ah, also, there are plenty of overmapped streams like 00:51:428 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11). Listen with 25% playback rate and you'll understand. This is very overmapped. The drum sound is more slow than this. This part, is actually 1/6! also, if you fix this i would recommend you to watch out and make the stream with sliders with repeat. The player would get confused if you make it with single notes because he'll most likely think that it's a 1/8 stream. Therefore, he'll fail hard when clicking it. Well resuming everything, this isn't rankable like this. I suggest a remap here, for the sake of the mapset. This difficulty has a lot of issues and fixing them all would be like a remap. :<

• sweet
  
  Kinda the same about the Collab difficulty, but this difficulty has a more unrankable issue. First of all, the slider velocity. Why such a fast and aggressive slider velocity for a 112 BPM song? It's a slow song so you shouldn't do this. Only some maps get ranked with such a fast velocity, and its because they're 250+ BPM. This difficulty is overmapped too. For instance, at 00:51:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9). Like I mentioned about the Collab, this part is a 1/6 stream, not this. 00:07:433 (4) - overmapped note.. 00:07:566 (5) - slider 1/8 without any reason because there's no sound here. Kinda the same issues as Collab. Here I would suggest a remap too. This isn't rankable. The claps don't fit with the music.. you should have used whistles and finishes like you did with Normal and Hard. I don't know what happened here, your normal and Hard are much better than this! Collab and sweet derailed the overall quality of the mapset.

1. Open AIMod (crll+shift+A) and you will see you have a lot of unsnapped notes and things. Fix them ASAP.

1. This must be called 'Easy' as it is under 1.5 stars.

1. AR 6 and HP 5 pls
2. 00:03:468 (2,3) - this will be hard for to read properly. Maybe move 3 to the slider end of 2 as oppose to the head.
3. 00:45:774 (1) - NC pls and nerf the jump it feels too big.

1. This diff name is inappropriate - only the highest star rated diff can have a custom name. The rest must have an order to the names. This should therefore be named 'Insane'
2. I see that you like high ARs. I would say make this AR8 but you wont like that - so instead pls make ar8.5
3. OD is too big pls make 7
4. HP is lower then previous diff? Make 6 or 7 ty.

1. no problem actually

NucleaRaven wrote:

Hi from my queue o/

[General]

1. Open AIMod (crll+shift+A) and you will see you have a lot of unsnapped notes and things. Fix them ASAP.

[Normal]

1. This must be called 'Easy' as it is under 1.5 stars.

nothing else -- your flow could be a tad better at places tho.

[Hard]

1. AR 6 and HP 5 pls
2. 00:03:468 (2,3) - this will be hard for to read properly. Maybe move 3 to the slider end of 2 as oppose to the head.
3. 00:45:774 (1) - NC pls and nerf the jump it feels too big.

nice diff actually.

[Sweet]

1. This diff name is inappropriate - only the highest star rated diff can have a custom name. The rest must have an order to the names. This should therefore be named 'Insane'
2. I see that you like high ARs. I would say make this AR8 but you wont like that - so instead pls make ar8.5
3. OD is too big pls make 7
4. HP is lower then previous diff? Make 6 or 7 ty.

nothing wrong wrong with note placement in my eyes. gw!

[SWEETNESS]

1. no problem actually

All in all nice map
Gl!