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Epica - Fools of Damnation
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oh, thx~Rika :3Kawayi Rika wrote:
You forgot move to pending
Moved by me.
- 00:25:820 - This part is actually 75bpm 7/4 time. Instead of using so many red lines when they aren't necessary, just change the time signature here to 14/4 since you have the bpm doubled.
- 01:00:220 - Likewise, change this to 14/4.
- 02:00:214 - This also.
- 04:28:930 (7) - Somehow bent out of shape. Looks bad.
- 04:43:118 (1) - Bad repeat slider placement; the start of these should begin on white. You've got many more, like 04:48:714 (1) - and 04:51:313 (1) - . Please find all of them.
This is totally 4/4 resetting. It does the same style of beat three times, then a different style into the reset. So it's like, 4/4 three times, then 4/4 into a reset.
Checked over the other sections, Luanny 2 pro
Checked over the other sections, Luanny 2 pro
Topic Starter
those wrote:
- 00:25:820 - This part is actually 75bpm 7/4 time. Instead of using so many red lines when they aren't necessary, just change the time signature here to 14/4 since you have the bpm doubled.
- 01:00:220 - Likewise, change this to 14/4.
- 02:00:214 - This also.
- 04:28:930 (7) - Somehow bent out of shape. Looks bad. Fixed
- 04:43:118 (1) - Bad repeat slider placement; the start of these should begin on white. You've got many more, like 04:48:714 (1) - and 04:51:313 (1) - . Please find all of them. Done
Oh hi! I'm here just to point out that you not eternity right every time, if you can count carefully this is actually beginning in 75pbm with 3/4 following by 4/4 and 2/4 in the end. (on 45.820 there must 2/4 but this is unable in osu) And there a lot more switches with 3/4 5/4 and 6/4 I'm just too lazy to point this all out and don't think this is such wrong deal to not have always 100% accurate meter signature is osu in such complicated songs.Charles445 wrote:
This is totally 4/4 resetting. It does the same style of beat three times, then a different style into the reset. So it's like, 4/4 three times, then 4/4 into a reset.
Checked over the other sections, Luanny 2 pro
Just some fixes needed at the beginning.
Remember to resnap all objects!
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Remember to resnap all objects!
Topic Starter
Updated, Thank you so much those.
Repairing.
Shouldn't this be moved back to Pending Beatmaps?
you missed "[Luanny]" in tags. just info for next modder~
actualy she shouldn't be in the tags since she diddn't collaborate in the diff ,she did a taiko wich is not in the mapset but just in the description .w.Aleks719 wrote:
you missed "[Luanny]" in tags. just info for next modder~
also you should remove LuannyPheonyx from tags o3o
nice map o3o/ gogo
The tags were fixed.
Bubble #2
~
Suggested a hitsound fix so thats why that kd is there.
Bubble #2
Suggested a hitsound fix so thats why that kd is there.
The offset need to be tuned again. Sorry :/
Here is the tuned offset.
Besides that, here is a small mod.
Here is the tuned offset.
SPOILER
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Besides that, here is a small mod.
- 03:53:826 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl+G this for better playability. The jump for this stream is too far, and easily break the flow.
- 07:39:000 (1) - Change combo color of this combo to red for better readability. This slider 07:38:600 (6,2) - is kinda hard to read due the similarity of color.
Topic Starter
All done.
Rebubbled #1!
Much much better now :3
Much much better now :3
grmblnbl timing checking I shouldn't be doing this when I haven't slept in so much time
get someone to rebubble or something, this should be final
this circle size kills the playability, this isn't a TV size map, these small circles will get too tiring
log
2013-05-19 12:28 Shiro: first offset +5
2013-05-19 12:29 Shiro: 3rd offset +5
2013-05-19 12:29 Shiro: 4th offset becomes useless
2013-05-19 12:30 Shiro: oups nvm
2013-05-19 12:30 Shiro: ><
2013-05-19 12:30 Shiro: @4th offset
2013-05-19 12:30 HellDawn: will i delete ?
2013-05-19 12:30 Shiro: no
2013-05-19 12:32 Shiro: 5th offset -5
2013-05-19 12:32 HellDawn: 01:34:614
2013-05-19 12:32 HellDawn: this one ?
2013-05-19 12:33 Shiro: oups, no
2013-05-19 12:33 Shiro: the one after
2013-05-19 12:33 Shiro: 2 minutes
2013-05-19 12:34 Shiro: 2:20 or so
2013-05-19 12:34 Shiro: -5
2013-05-19 12:36 Shiro: 3:38
2013-05-19 12:36 Shiro: -7
2013-05-19 12:36 Shiro: And 150 BPM
2013-05-19 12:37 Shiro: 3:51
2013-05-19 12:37 Shiro: -10
2013-05-19 12:38 Shiro: 4:04
2013-05-19 12:38 Shiro: -20
2013-05-19 12:40 HellDawn: 4:04 (there is have 2 timing)
2013-05-19 12:40 HellDawn: which one
2013-05-19 12:40 Shiro: the red one obviously
2013-05-19 12:40 HellDawn: with bpm ?
2013-05-19 12:40 Shiro: BPM is always 150 from what I could hear
2013-05-19 12:41 Shiro: 4:36
2013-05-19 12:41 Shiro: -20
2013-05-19 12:42 Shiro: 4:41
2013-05-19 12:42 Shiro: offset is okay, BPM is 150
2013-05-19 12:44 Shiro: 5:00
2013-05-19 12:44 Shiro: -20
2013-05-19 12:45 Shiro: 5:25
2013-05-19 12:45 Shiro: +3
2013-05-19 12:45 Shiro: BPM 150
2013-05-19 12:46 Shiro: 5:38
2013-05-19 12:47 Shiro: +8
2013-05-19 12:49 Shiro: 6:00 is fine
2013-05-19 12:51 Shiro: 6:13 is fine
2013-05-19 12:52 Shiro: 6:23 is ok
2013-05-19 12:52 Shiro: rest is fine
get someone to rebubble or something, this should be final
this circle size kills the playability, this isn't a TV size map, these small circles will get too tiring
[General]
- The height of the BG looks a bit stretched. it has lost its aspect ratio somewhere during resizing. Here is a better one: http://puu.sh/2WxQE.jpg
- you must add some intense finish spam during the kiai parts. like 1 finish every two white ticks and more finished throughout the whole song. it's really lacking them
- why is there a playfield.png in the folder? does it add to the map in any way?
- where are the kiai fountains? i can't see them o-o
- Reduce the HP drain to 5 or less? It's really high for a marathon.
- add "Simone Simons" in tags
minor timing improvements that should be done:
Offset -200 -> -188 (+12)
Offset 77010 -> 77016 (+6)
[Unity]
02:00:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make the spacing in these streams equal, disable grid snap perhaps
02:03:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:24:220 (4) - 1 grid down lv4 ~_~
03:00:220 (1) - not perfectly parallel to the previous slider (2)
04:02:426 (1) - make the endpoint perfectly in line with the next stream
04:07:930 (2,3,4) - out of place, far too difficult comparing to the rest of the map
04:09:030 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
04:51:313 (1) - remove NC add it on the next note
06:16:214 (1) - extend this slider by 1/4. this "silenced" endpoint doesn't fit there
06:26:514 - add a note?
06:52:814 (1,2,1) - why do these start on red? make them start on white. it will play much smoother
08:26:200 (7) - make this perfectly in line in the stream
- The height of the BG looks a bit stretched. it has lost its aspect ratio somewhere during resizing. Here is a better one: http://puu.sh/2WxQE.jpg
- you must add some intense finish spam during the kiai parts. like 1 finish every two white ticks and more finished throughout the whole song. it's really lacking them
- why is there a playfield.png in the folder? does it add to the map in any way?
- where are the kiai fountains? i can't see them o-o
- Reduce the HP drain to 5 or less? It's really high for a marathon.
- add "Simone Simons" in tags
minor timing improvements that should be done:
Offset -200 -> -188 (+12)
Offset 77010 -> 77016 (+6)
[Unity]
02:00:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make the spacing in these streams equal, disable grid snap perhaps
02:03:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:24:220 (4) - 1 grid down lv4 ~_~
03:00:220 (1) - not perfectly parallel to the previous slider (2)
04:02:426 (1) - make the endpoint perfectly in line with the next stream
04:07:930 (2,3,4) - out of place, far too difficult comparing to the rest of the map
04:09:030 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
04:51:313 (1) - remove NC add it on the next note
06:16:214 (1) - extend this slider by 1/4. this "silenced" endpoint doesn't fit there
06:26:514 - add a note?
06:52:814 (1,2,1) - why do these start on red? make them start on white. it will play much smoother
08:26:200 (7) - make this perfectly in line in the stream
My offset is -200, Shiro offset is -195, happy30 offset is -188. Well timing is always subjective issues :/
http://puu.sh/2WAqL.txthappy30 wrote:
04:07:930 (2,3,4) - out of place, far too difficult comparing to the rest of the map I don't agree with the fact that it's too ''difficult'' comared to the rest, but since this is the only place where it's used i'll fix it
04:09:030 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
06:16:214 (1) - extend this slider by 1/4. this "silenced" endpoint doesn't fit there Can't even remember putting it like this lol, fixed
06:26:514 - add a note? Done
Thanks
Topic Starter
eveything is okey.
rebub! #1
Please check timing carefully next bat
Please check timing carefully next bat
gogo
Sieg wrote:
gogo
sorry for pop orz..countdown issue
General
- Enable countdown You have the a countdown skin in your folder. (or if you're not using it, delete the countdown files)
- idk if it matters but there's an extra space after "-Kevincela-" in tags
Unity
02:27:415 (4) - Soft finish on tail would fit the bgm imo
02:27:415 (4,6,7) - didn't see the point of the spacing change here. I'd make the stream all the same spacing
03:17:220 (3,4) - Space these out, i feel like the spacing between 03:16:820 (2,3,4) - are too similar which may cause confusion
04:14:630 (7,8) - Try this rhythm instead http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/787110 , similar to 04:12:530 (2,3) - ; right now it sounded kinda awkward following the violins
04:19:015 (4,5) - ^, it's also nice to catch the emphasized part on the white tick
04:43:020 (1) - Delete a reverse and replace it with a note , i think it feels more natural starting a stream on the white tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/787117
08:04:600 (1) - putting this in the middle of the donut might look cool http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/787129
hopefully this will be the last round of bubbles
Fight!
General
- Enable countdown You have the a countdown skin in your folder. (or if you're not using it, delete the countdown files)
- idk if it matters but there's an extra space after "-Kevincela-" in tags
Unity
02:27:415 (4) - Soft finish on tail would fit the bgm imo
02:27:415 (4,6,7) - didn't see the point of the spacing change here. I'd make the stream all the same spacing
03:17:220 (3,4) - Space these out, i feel like the spacing between 03:16:820 (2,3,4) - are too similar which may cause confusion
04:14:630 (7,8) - Try this rhythm instead http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/787110 , similar to 04:12:530 (2,3) - ; right now it sounded kinda awkward following the violins
04:19:015 (4,5) - ^, it's also nice to catch the emphasized part on the white tick
04:43:020 (1) - Delete a reverse and replace it with a note , i think it feels more natural starting a stream on the white tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/787117
08:04:600 (1) - putting this in the middle of the donut might look cool
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/787129hopefully this will be the last round of bubbles
Fight!
Acutally you can instant app this after fix since the issue is not a must-rebubble issue. 
Topic Starter
Thank youLunarSakuya wrote:
sorry for pop orz..countdown issue
General
- Enable countdown You have the a countdown skin in your folder. (or if you're not using it, delete the countdown files) Deleted countdown files
- idk if it matters but there's an extra space after "-Kevincela-" in tags
Unity
02:27:415 (4) - Soft finish on tail would fit the bgm imo whistle is good
02:27:415 (4,6,7) - didn't see the point of the spacing change here. I'd make the stream all the same spacing
03:17:220 (3,4) - Space these out, i feel like the spacing between 03:16:820 (2,3,4) - are too similar which may cause confusion okey
04:43:020 (1) - Delete a reverse and replace it with a note , i think it feels more natural starting a stream on the white tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/787117 no, its already nice with them
08:04:600 (1) - putting this in the middle of the donut might look cool
hopefully this will be the last round of bubbles I hope
Fight!
Fixed itLunarSakuya wrote:
Unity
04:14:630 (7,8) - Try this rhythm instead http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/787110 , similar to 04:12:530 (2,3) - ; right now it sounded kinda awkward following the violins
04:19:015 (4,5) - ^, it's also nice to catch the emphasized part on the white tick
Topic Starter
Updated
happy30 wrote:
rebub! #1
Please check timing carefully next bat
Wait.. What!?popner wrote:
Acutally you can instant app this after fix since the issue is not a must-rebubble issue.
I think you mean she can give the mapper the second bubble, no need to give the mapper again the bubble number one.
Yeah I was confused too, but we settled this through pm eventually so it's ok now
@HellDawn: You forgot to delete go.png and ready.png
@HellDawn: You forgot to delete go.png and ready.png
Topic Starter
Done
Bubble #2
gl
gl
[General]
Sadly I can't approve this right away because of the timing issue (incorrect downbeat), but I believe I could be able to restore the bubble #2.
- The first downbeat is incorrect.
I saw that people wanted to simplify the timing, I can't really agree but whatever, but the downbeat needs to be corrected.
Set the first offset to 00:25:812.
- 03:15:320 - It feels like there is a note missing here. Why not have a stream all the way up to the slider? It's in the music and to be expected.
- 03:31:320 - Same here.
- 04:12:230 - Is it intended to be soft hitsounds here? The clap sounds bad. Why not continue using normal since it's an active drumming part? If you really want to keep it soft, can you at least figure out some custom sample to replace the clap?
Sadly I can't approve this right away because of the timing issue (incorrect downbeat), but I believe I could be able to restore the bubble #2.
Topic Starter
All done
03:31:420 (10) - missing clap
That's all. Don't kd please.
That's all. Don't kd please.
Topic Starter
Ok
Rebubble come ooon
Yeah yeah!UnderminE wrote:
Rebubble come ooon
Though, why did you increase AR to 9? 8 was such a fitting AR for this. This map can be played nicely with doubletime too and with AR9 that's kinda out of the question, besides AR9 looks dumb here.
EDIT: After some checking around, since the timing of the notes didn't change, I am actually allowed to approve this.
Flames, oh yeah.
Topic Starter
THANK YOU SO MUCH