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Epica - Fools of Damnation

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lolcubes
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lolcubes
Managed to take a small peek on the taiko once again cause I had a feeling I missed something and:

05:31:819 (1657) - Maybe a kat? Because the pitch of the guitar is the same as the previous note which was a kat. Just a minor suggestion.
05:37:419 (1684,1685,1686,1687,1688,1689,1690,1691,1692) - First note has to be a kat for this to be rankable. Only pairs are rankable if a finish is at the end (meaning kkkkddddK, ddddkkkkD, kkddkkddK, ddkkddkkD, etc), else just remove note 1691.

No need to kd.

Oh yeah and the final kiai should probably be fixed, it gets cancelled too early. Just remove the green section and start the kiai with the red one.
HellDawn
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All fixed.
LKs
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LKs
I think I'd recheck this after lolcubes reb, or finish his modding. if it goes smoothly maybe we can give bubble#1&2 or etc
lolcubes
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04:48:614 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - This is still repeaters on blue ticks. You have to change this. Why do this? I already explained why this is wrong, and you removed the circle and added another repeat. That's even worse. Remove the extra repeat on 04:48:614 (1) and then move everything back by 1 tick, yes, everything, and then add a circle at 04:53:811. This fits the music the best and plays the best too.

07:52:624 (4) - The vocal ends on 07:52:824, so this slider should end there too. There is nothing on this tick where it ends and it makes the slider feel wrongly snapped.

Ask [Luanny] what she thinks about my suggestion in her taiko and have her fix that one stream with a finisher at the end, so I can bubble this finally ._.
I have rechecked the timing and it seems spot on so I guess that's sorted.

edit:
04:07:930 (2,3,4) - These are still inaudible. It doesn't matter if it's 5%, 20% or 50%, if you can't hear them regularly when playing, it's not rankable. :/
HellDawn
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HellDawn
waiting luanny.
[Luanny]
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[Luanny]
lolol unsnapped stuff
anyways done

http://puu.sh/2dcF9
Xakyrie
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Xakyrie
aaaa not yet, sorry I'm late! _:(´□`」 ∠):_

[Luanny's Taiko]
  1. 00:29:420 (13) - This might be hard to explain. Starting after every downbeat by 1/1, you get either a o o o or a o o o. I suggest you alternate every bar; bars 1 and 3 would work better with your patterns as o o o and bars 2 and 4 as o o o per measure.
  2. 00:30:820 (19) - This is somewhat confusing to follow considering how you chose to represent the drums here. Notes (20,21) are clearly kats but adding (19) to the mix-up just doesn't sound right. Keep the accents on the last two notes in this bar; make this a don.
  3. 00:35:020 (36) - Like you had in the previous section, try making this a don to show the pitch change (it's more effective). Also the triple following this note is kinda random and I don't see its purpose. If it's a density increase, you could least add some more around it consistently so it doesn't stick out like it's out of style.
  4. 00:50:620 (91) - If it's following the vocals, should this not be a don? 01:25:020 (193) - as well.
  5. 01:00:220 (102) - All suggestions (with the exception of the one above since it applies to a segment inbetween similar phrases) above apply to this phrase (up until the next bookmark at 01:21:820 (189)).
  6. 01:34:420 (217) - Removing this would contribute to a nice build-up into the kiai, especially since there's no music to support this poor little note. ;w;
  7. 01:56:514 (392) - Maybe making this a don would make this pattern much better. None of the other patterns/streams in kiai contain a quad of kats and it just sounded somewhat off.
  8. 02:04:820 (441,442,443) - Why no 4-plet like 02:10:420 (474,475,476,477)? S:
  9. 02:10:720 (478) - Removing this would not only help the consistency, but it would probably make this a lot more playable. Changing (478) into a don would be nice too D:
  10. 02:21:620 (548) - As a don it would make the finisher sound much better since it's supported in the music, though this is just a small personal preference.
  11. 02:37:830 (618) - As mentioned before, this vocal representation should be a don. I'd also like to suggest fixing the density here. I know it's steadily increasing, but in unison with the vocal mapping as it's the only thing to map to here, the density increaser notes used just sound...not so pleasant.
  12. 03:09:320 (831) - Same suggestion as before.
  13. 03:17:620 (883,884,885) - Treating this as a triple feels wrong. Maybe try doing what you did in the previous bar. It also follows the string instrument better (since this is what and will be consistent in this phrase, right)?
  14. 03:22:020 - Please don't miss this note, it breaks an important consistency you have.
  15. 03:30:420 (966,967,968) - Same suggestion as before.
  16. 03:34:820 - Same as before.
  17. 04:00:626 (1119) - All patterns end with a don, and this doesn't. I guess if you change this you'll want to make this pattern something different; ooooo is boring. If you want to be very consistent, ooooo follows your patterns instinctively.
  18. 04:03:426 (1135,1136,1137,1138,1139,1140,1141,1142) - The speed up makes this nearly impossible to predict/read. I suggest moving the middle green timing point backward 1/4 to 04:03:726 (1139). This also properly separates the 1/6 and 1/4 patterns.
  19. 04:06:630 (1156) - This would follow the string instrument better if it was a don.
  20. 04:39:630 (1375) - As a don, this would resemble the end of the previous stream in which both triples represent the same musical patterns in the music. It's up to you if you want to keep it or not, this is just a suggestion.
  21. 04:44:117 (1405) - I highly recommend you remove this note. The carrying of this stream into and past the downbeat to the next pattern blends them; it causes major confusion and is a playability problem. Removing this note is a minimal thing and yet it creates a world of difference.
  22. 04:46:616 (1419,1420,1421,1422,1423,1424,1425,1426,1427) - I guess you chose not to map the 1/6 in full since it would not fit? I think it would be acceptable seeing as you use a lot more later on (yeah yeah density...it's up to you really).
  23. 04:50:513 (1448) - Depending on the pattern, having kats on blue ticks can work. This here though (especially with the blending of patterns) makes this very hard understand while playing. As the previous suggestion said for the same kind of stream in the phrase, just remove this and it will suffice without destroying your patterns.
  24. 04:55:210 (1477) - A suggestion would be to turn this into a kat finisher alongside 04:55:610 (1479) so they all represent the same thing (the rise in pitch of the string instrument). Turn the other two notes that were previously finishers into dons to retain a nice consistency.
  25. 04:58:408 (1498) - Finisher if you fix above so it melds.
  26. 04:59:807 (1508,1509) - Just a suggestion but changing these both into dons would follow the string instrument better.
  27. 05:03:028 (1519) - This would make a better don since it follows the guitar and makes the following kat follow the drum. Try not use an excessive amount of kats where the representation should be clear.
  28. 05:05:826 (1529,1530) - These notes here would work much better as dons since they follow the drums and give more significance musically to your kats.
  29. 05:11:524 (1558,1559) - DOUBLE TROUBLE @ @ if you hadn't used any doubles in this map (it's too long for me to remember fully; it's all hazy), then please just turn this into a triple or something to constitute better playability.
  30. 05:48:425 (1749,1750,1751) - Missing a 1/6?
  31. 05:59:625 (1832,1833,1834) - Maybe you could fill in the gaps here to continue the stream? These breaks don't really fit considering there's lots of heaviness in this section, though I can understand if you don't want to do this because of the SV change (might confuse players).
  32. 06:08:414 (1904,1905,1906,1907,1908) - Only pattern that ends with a kat; it's out of place in your consistency so I suggest changing this pattern (simply making this a don might be a bit too boring for your tastes).
  33. 06:29:214 (2064) - The 1/6 actually starts here. To make the transition much easier to read and play, I suggest removing 06:29:114 (2063).
  34. 07:07:714 (2394) - To start a double kat in the middle of a stream on a blue tick is a nightmare. The patterning from here to 07:10:214 (2419) is quite unintuitive. I know your current layout follows the drums almost to a straight T, but maybe try creating a new pattern to compensate for playability. I believe the real major problem here is the kats starting on blue ticks. If you can find a way to fix those, then it should be good.
  35. 07:16:614 (2433) - For the first half of the kiai, refer to the above suggestions for the same phrase.
  36. 08:07:814 (2854) - For the outro, refer to the above suggestions for the same phrase.
  37. 08:31:614 (3003,3004,3005,3006,3007,3008,3009,3010,3011,3012) - Since you've been focusing on the string instrument, I feel the outro would have a stronger finish if you kept it consistent as well as mapping to the more dominant instrument. Removing 08:31:814 (3004,3005) I feel lets your map finish strong.
Damn I have to say, you really nailed the density thing here. It increases and decreases in the right areas, there's nothing anti-climatic that suggests this map is boring and you managed to create the perfect streams while incorporating variety. I'm so awestruck at how you were able to take such a long and fairly repetitive song and transform it into a masterpiece.

No kudos since this is unfinished I guess HellDawn didn't read this.

EDIT: Taiko mod is now complete. I guess since Makar is going to take a look at the diff after Luanny applies my suggestions (if any), I'll point out a few things in the standard diff I thought should be fixed tomorrow. Also Makar, make sure to check for any unrankable end finisher constellations in case I missed them. They played so well I must've passed over them XD
Last edited by Xakyrie , edited 3 times in total.
Sieg
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Sieg

Xakyrie wrote:

and fairly repetitive song
what?
Xakyrie
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Xakyrie
Drum beat. It's taiko.
HellDawn
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lolcubes wrote:

[Unity]

edit:
04:07:930 (2,3,4) - These are still inaudible. It doesn't matter if it's 5%, 20% or 50%, if you can't hear them regularly when playing, it's not rankable. :/ Fixed

Waiting luanny again :D
Makar
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Call me after Xakyrie's mod is applied for the taiko, please (would prefer if she finishes it too, I'm sure she can make some good points at the end of the song).

There are some things here that I could highly suggest changing (mostly related to the flow of the streams), but Xakyrie's mod might fix most of them. For the most part this map is great with problems only really in the last 1/3 of the map or so.
[Luanny]
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[Luanny]
too long to answer
http://puu.sh/2gvd9
[Luanny]
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[Luanny]
MATs? :(
Sieg
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Sieg

[Luanny] wrote:

MATs? :(
HellDawn
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HellDawn
MAKAR ?
Xakyrie
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Xakyrie
^ Okay actually...

[Unity]
  • HellDawn
  1. 00:36:020 - You should be able to include a note here since it follows the drums. Make a pattern with 00:36:220 (3) to keep things flowing. Currently the pause just makes the player hesitate too much. It would be even more nice if you had a note at 00:35:820 as well, because timing gaps larger than 1/1 play awkwardly and they were not established in the beginning. Just a thought.
  2. 00:45:820 (1) - The drums in the background are so awesome! Maybe you could map this in instead of a spinner? It feels a bit random.
  3. 02:02:120 - Because the drums start here, jumping into the stream 1/2 after the previous slider when in reality it should be here is hard to play. I would consider arranging your pattern again to accommodate this sound
  4. 02:06:620 (7,8,9) - Since the drums follow a 1/2 pattern here, I would suggest using a slider like in 02:03:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7).
  5. 02:07:220 (1,2,3) - Regarding the music, this pattern just makes things harder to follow. There's actually nothing on the downbeat, and playing something that doesn't exist on it sounds strange. For example, the distance between the first note and the next sound is 1/1. Representing this as two notes in 1/1 or a 1/1 slider would work. There should also be a note on 02:07:720. Please adjust your pattern accordingly. This applies to 02:12:820 (4,5,6) - as well, and 02:18:420 (8,9,10) -
  6. 02:19:820 (1) - The spinner really kills the build-up, can't you just map it? D:
  7. 03:45:024 (1,2) - You should fill in notes here like 03:48:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - for consistency within this section.
  8. 04:02:426 (1) - Ending a slider on a downbeat sounds funny because you usually hit notes or start sliders on them (downbeats are strong accents in the music most commonly). You even had to resort to silencing to mask its musical irrelevancy. I would suggest you remove the slider and just start the stream on the downbeat.
  9. 04:26:430 (2,3,4) - Strange. I think (2) is supposed to be two notes in 1/2 and where (3) starts should be a kickback slider like (2) to follow the music? Basically, it should sound like this.
  10. Oh I just noticed, maybe snap your bookmarks too for cleanliness. -w-
  11. 04:29:230 - Sounds empty ;w;
  12. 04:29:630 (2,3,4) - Same suggestion as before.
  13. 04:33:230 (4,5) - There should be a note in between these two on the blue tick to represent the music correctly. Please consider this since you do the same with 04:35:030 (4) - in a sense.
  14. 06:54:214 (2,3,4,5) - I think these play better as single notes in 1/1, but this is just a personal opinion. The notes on the blue ticks that make them doubles aren't necessarily backed up by strong instrumental sounds, so that may be why.
  15. 07:00:614 (1) - to 07:07:014 (7) - If you're going to follow the vocals, follow them accordingly. The random streams felt so awkward to play, especially with the sacrifice of flow and spacing for symmetry with patterns like 07:01:014 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - . I suggest going over these patterns and trying something more consistent and intuitive.
  16. 07:17:824 (6) - Since this first bar is triple - 1/2 slider - triple - triple, I think it's best if you turn this into a 1/2 slider. It follows your patterns nicely and accompanies the music well.
  17. 07:21:024 (4) - Slider looks sort of ugly S:
  18. 07:22:224 (8,9) - Whistles don't fit this part. Maybe use a different hitsound for them or not at all? Especially since this is a heavy drum-laden section.
  19. 07:35:824 (1) - Plays better as a 1/2 slider considering there is not a strong sound on the end. It's also very inconsistent. If you were to use this pattern consistently (since there are drums that support the use of 3/4), then that would be different.
  20. 07:42:024 - Add a note here and/or on the blue to have a nice lead in from your section into Gabe's. It doesn't leave a huge gap in the beatmap, it prevents hesitation by the player and the music calls for it.
    XavierJones
  21. 01:02:420 (6) - Remove clap? Sounds a bit overdone. Remove at 01:08:020 (7) - as well.
  22. 01:04:820 (4) - Clap here? Follows the clap pattern. Clap on beginning of 01:10:420 (3) - as well.
  23. 01:10:420 (3) - Ctrl + g for better flow?
  24. 01:12:220 (3) - Again to follow your patterns, a clap should be on the end.
  25. 01:13:620 (6) - Remove with same reasoning.
  26. 01:15:420 (2) - Clap on end.
  27. 01:18:420 (4) - Clap.
  28. 01:19:220 (6) - Remove clap?
  29. 01:20:820 (5) - Smoother curve and less arch?
  30. 01:21:620 (6,7) - Might be more epic to end with a jump instead of a stack.
  31. 05:10:724 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Unfitting stream, map something else. Since I know it sounds weird to start the stream on the downbeat because of the music, something like this makes it easier to follow without breaking too much and still remaining intuitive.
  32. 05:14:223 (6) - Why is there a finisher here? Also 05:15:822 (6) -
    Sieg
  33. 01:38:614 (1,2,3,4,5) - After the stream, the sudden density and movement drop feels extremely weird in terms of the music. Maybe be a bit more creative and use a bit more notes? You could try continuing the vocals as you started with the 1/1 slider with a bit wider spacing or something. Also fix the new combo here. It's not really necessary to have a new combo switch like that here.
  34. 01:40:614 (1) - Hear how the downbeat is very accented? To make your mapping reflect that, you could try a 1/2 slider+ note combination. A repeat plays weakly in regards to the music.
  35. 01:50:614 (5) - Not feeling the finisher.
  36. 01:53:414 (1) - Same suggestion as before. With the heavy guitar, I feel a jump of some kind would work nicely with notes used in 1/1 (starting from (13) and up to the downbeat, like this).
  37. 01:59:614 - A 5-note stream here would sound nice and work up to HellDawn's next section quite well. It's more effective in grasping the essence of the song here.
    Pereira006
  38. 02:24:030 (3,4) - Just a suggestion, but a jump from (3) to (4) would feel better to play since your other patterns of the sort do the same. You travel from (2) to (3) in a spaced manner, while (3) to (4) usually plays with a jump (see 02:27:030 (2,3,4) - and 02:30:230 (2,3,4) - ).
  39. 02:24:030 (3) - Remove this to be consistent with your other note + note + 1/1 repeat slider patterns here.
  40. 02:33:230 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The drums on the end of these triples are heavier and much stronger. I suggest a different clap pattern as they only hide the drums, or remove them overall.
    MoodyRPG
  41. 03:15:820 (7) - Ctrl + g for better flow?
  42. 03:21:820 (1) - ^ Also it fits the music (they represent the same sound in the music so the back-and-forth motion works extremely well).
  43. 03:22:620 (1,2) - Reverse these? (1 becomes 2 and 2 becomes 1) The flow moves across instead of down, which plays far better.
  44. 03:25:020 (6,7,8) - Now I don't care much if you forget the 5-note stream before this (03:24:020 (4,5) - from the end of the slider to the end of this repeat should technically be a stream in 1/4), however the drums are intense here and mapping according to them would fit the music way better. It would seem something like this, although you can use variations of this as long as the right ticks are hit.
  45. 03:29:020 (1,2) - Would actually play better if you flipped this and started it on the right since the patterns are moving downward in a zig-zag motion. Your current pattern kind of breaks flow.
  46. 03:34:020 - Dude, you're totally missing the drums here ;w; You should map this! You're forgetting musicality here D:
  47. 03:35:420 (1,2) - Triples mapped over with sliders...okay well if you like it keep it, but (2) sounds really strange.
  48. 03:36:820 (4) - Try not to map over the most epic sections with sliders...it totally kills the progressive intensity.
    Kyshiro
  49. 04:07:430 (1,2,3,4,1) - I know this section calls for bigger spacing because it's more intense, but this is such a throw off. I'd consider changing the spacing to be smaller, or just using the typical overlapping stream. Just remember that most 1/4 notes are not this sparse throughout the entire map.
  50. 04:14:630 (7,8,9) - While I do agree this sounds nice, it's not fitting at all. Especially when you have slider jumps like 04:21:430 (1,2,3,4,5) - following it later in the phrase, these entrance patterns will just further confuse the player and their sense of rhythm. I suggest not using blue tick sliders like they currently are. Applies to 04:19:030 (4,5,6) - as well.
  51. 04:18:430 (1,2,3) - Compare it with 04:19:830 (1,2,3) - The spacing is different, and the spacing change doesn't match the music. Fix all 1/4 that are spread like so (such as 04:19:630 (6,1) - and 04:15:230 (9,1) - those are the really major ones, 04:17:030 (1,2,3) - is fine as is).
  52. 06:16:214 (1) - Nope. Nope nope nope, please don't do this. It just confuses the player's understanding going into the pattern, especially since there's an even stronger sound on the red tick before it. There's no reason to use a 3/4 slider here, so just shorten it a tick and add a note instead.
  53. 06:31:614 (4,5,1) - Fix this pattern? Lack of flow; feels awkward to play.
    Ezek
  54. 04:44:117 (7) - Why end this with a slider? Sliders that end on downbeats don't fit well since you typically play notes on downbeats, so I suggest just finishing the stream with notes. In fact, end the stream with a kickback slider in 1/4 so it follows the musical representation you chose, like this. The repeat pushes the cursor back upwards in that general direction, so it works.
  55. 04:49:914 (4) - I would just turn these into notes since it follows the change in violin. Makes it more desirable to play.
  56. 04:53:511 (1) - Again, just end it with notes. Repeat sliders that end on downbeats don't work as efficiently when trying to map patterns within bars.
    Gabe
  57. 07:44:624 (4) - New combo to follow your previous patterns?
  58. 07:48:424 (5,1) - Just enter the next bar appropriately with a triple (I'd say stack looking at (2,3,4)) instead of a slider jump that doesn't quite fit.
  59. 07:51:824 (1) - Don't use 3/4 sliders when they are not called for. It does not fit the music because the sound on the end is not strong enough (moreover, blue ticks are weak in this song as in most others). Avoid using them when they are not prominent in the music.
  60. 07:54:024 (7) - Since this is the final kiai, instead of dropping the intensity try mapping a stream continuing from 07:53:824 (6) - to 07:54:824 (8) - and/or keep the note on 07:54:924 to create a long stream, which matches the perfectly. Increasing density is welcomed.
  61. 07:57:424 (4) - New combo again to suit your patterns?
  62. 08:01:424 (1,2,3,4) - Same suggestion as before with the 3/4 sliders.
  63. 08:03:624 (10) - Stream please, don't kill the intensity now.
  64. 08:06:824 (7) - Just listen to the music. Follow the drums.
    Leyko
  65. 08:13:424 (7) - Why is it empty between here and 08:14:224 (1) - ? You should fill this in.
  66. 08:22:824 (5) - I would stick to making this two notes because the slider is not being used to push the cursor further, it's just there for variation I'd assume. Since it has no purpose, I'd suggest what I said.
  67. 08:29:224 (5) - Same as above.
  68. 08:08:624 (7) - Matches the music well if you made it a 1/2 repeat like 08:11:824 (7) -
  69. 08:16:624 (3) - Splitting this into two 1/2 sliders like 08:10:224 (7,8) - represents the music much better.
  70. 08:31:424 - A jump here to (10) stacked on (1) of the final stream is an extremely nice build-up to the end. The jump to stream ends the map perfectly. It should look like this.
Makar
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Oh, I expected a PM D: I'll try to get to this soon.
Sieg
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Thanks Xakyrie 

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164,48,119814,1,8,0:0:0:0:
ZekeyHache
3,316 posts
Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache

Xakyrie wrote:

^ Okay actually...

[Unity]
Ezek
04:44:117 (7) - Why end this with a slider? Sliders that end on downbeats don't fit well since you typically play notes on downbeats, so I suggest just finishing the stream with notes. In fact, end the stream with a kickback slider in 1/4 so it follows the musical representation you chose, like this. The repeat pushes the cursor back upwards in that general direction, so it works. Changed to kickback slider
04:49:914 (4) - I would just turn these into notes since it follows the change in violin. Makes it more desirable to play. No change here
04:53:511 (1) - Again, just end it with notes. Repeat sliders that end on downbeats don't work as efficiently when trying to map patterns within bars. Ok..
:p
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100,240,281119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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228,232,287115,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,272,287215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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148,304,287415,1,12,0:0:0:0:
204,360,287615,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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452,204,294011,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,164,299207,2,0,L|256:244,1,80.000000298023,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,308,299607,2,0,L|328:228,1,80.000000298023,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Thanks 4 the mod Xakyrie! :)
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006
hi sorry later
only one thing fix is jump

here code

SPOILER
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396,208,142430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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120,56,143030,2,0,L|200:56,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,143430,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,272,143830,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144030,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,352,144230,2,2,B|272:360|272:360|288:352|288:352|304:360|304:360|320:352|320:352|336:360|336:360|352:352|352:352|368:360|368:360|384:352|384:352|400:360|400:360,2,160.000000596046
368,236,145430,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,156,145630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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108,116,146230,2,0,P|148:100|184:100,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,192,146630,5,0,0:0:0:0:
368,236,147030,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,236,147230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,176,147430,2,2,P|464:236|420:296,2,160.000000596046
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400,204,149430,2,0,P|396:244|372:280,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,316,149830,5,0,0:0:0:0:
296,156,150230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,156,150430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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364,240,151830,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,312,152030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,348,152230,1,4,0:0:0:0:
148,144,152630,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,72,152830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,36,153030,5,0,0:0:0:0:
328,72,153230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,72,153330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,72,153430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,144,153630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,144,153730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,144,153830,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,216,154030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,252,154130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,288,154230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,288,154430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,252,154530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,216,154630,1,4,0:0:0:0:

thank mod !
Makar
osu! Alumni
2,258 posts
Joined February 2011
Makar
k lets do this - general/taiko mod for now. Call me back after you get some more mods on the collab diff and maybe I can mod that too.

Bolded suggestions are ones that have something to do with ranking criteria and must be changed.

[General]
  1. The bg in the standard diff is not appropriate (nudity and such) so please change it. Confirmed with some other staff members as well.
  2. Inconsistency in countdown. Disable countdown in Unity.
  3. Inconsistent uninherited timing sections. Please copy the red points form Unity to Luanny's Taiko.
  4. Delete Thumbs.db from the c folder.
  5. Add Ezek and LuannyPhoenyx to the tags. Ezek is a guest and LuannyPheonyx is a past username.

[Luanny's Taiko]
  1. Rename to Luanny's Oni or Luanny's Taiko Oni?
  2. 01:36:814 (237) - d for stream playability?
  3. 02:44:830 (636,637,638) - speed change + triple on the offbeat = confusion! I suggest deleting 02:44:830 (636,637) so it's easier to hit this timing.
  4. 02:45:820 - This stream flows fairly poor (changes on awkward beats that don't support the music). I suggest http://puu.sh/2ub4P
  5. 02:49:620 - d if you did this at 01:36:814.
  6. 02:58:820 - Another awkward stream x: try this http://puu.sh/2ub7T
  7. 04:03:426 - The 1/6 here plays really badly with the 1/4, and there is not even 1/6 in the music so it is overmap. Just change to dkk 1/4 instead of dkkk 1/6.
  8. 04:53:012 - Another 1/6 overmap. Change to kkd 1/4 instead of kkkd 1/6
  9. 06:00:025 - Please remove these two slow downs. It doesn't fit the music and it's awkward to read :v.
  10. 06:24:414 - More 1/6 overmap. Though, I can see why you might want to include it here to prepare the player for the 1/6 spam after here, but you know the drill if you decide to change o/
  11. 07:18:814 - d if you did this at 01:36:814.
  12. 07:54:714 - Delete this note so there is a break between streams? Since this phrase ends here, it's a bit weird to extend a pattern to cover the transitions between phrases imo.

That's all for now, goodluck~
If you have questions about anything just PM me in game
HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
HellDawn
Gonna be graveyard or i will delete something.
HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
HellDawn

Makar wrote:

k lets do this - general/taiko mod for now. Call me back after you get some more mods on the collab diff and maybe I can mod that too.

Bolded suggestions are ones that have something to do with ranking criteria and must be changed.

[General]
  1. The bg in the standard diff is not appropriate (nudity and such) so please change it. Confirmed with some other staff members as well. Why is that? It is not even a view from his back, it just a side-view. Like a one of those anime pictures most of the mappers choose for japanese songs and it is a just side view of a guy, we dont even see his-nudity parts of his body
  2. Inconsistency in countdown. Disable countdown in Unity. Done
  3. Delete Thumbs.db from the c folder. Deleted
  4. Add Ezek and LuannyPhoenyx to the tags. Ezek is a guest and LuannyPheonyx is a past username. Okey
MoodyRPG
2,754 posts
Joined August 2010
MoodyRPG
Sorry for the huge delay :(

http://puu.sh/2HAco.osu
reisende
37 posts
Joined February 2012
reisende

Makar wrote:

[General]
  1. The bg in the standard diff is not appropriate (nudity and such) so please change it. Confirmed with some other staff members as well.
All of these are from ranked maps


I am by no means saying these ones contain nudity (if we use the same standards, they would), but are by far more explicit than the bg in this guy's map. And i just pressed f2 ~20 times.
Get your shit together.
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UnderminE
osu! Alumni
4,011 posts
Joined August 2010
UnderminE
Instead of changing the whole bg (if that's the case), just let the mapper write a warning in description of the map and everything is done.

Because that bg fits to this song more than perfectly.
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
From Modding Portal

Insane

  1. i think there need some re-arranging on NCs
01:50:214 (1) - delete NC , 01:50:614 (5) - NC
01:53:014 (1,2,1,2,3) - try this NC pattern http://puu.sh/2HObA.jpg ( for consistence )
02:46:020 (2) - need clap ( to fit with song )
03:08:020 (1) - touhcing HP bar
03:13:020 (1) - this slider's arrow is little bit hidden, considering other shape
04:38:730 (5,12) - DS error? why use 1.3x here?
05:10:724 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - since this part feels like downbeat, this stream isn't fit well imo
05:18:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - ^
06:52:814 (1,2,1) - sliders with out claps are pupsed?
06:57:214 (3) - finish
07:43:024 (3,1) - isn't this too hard? ( uncorfortable for play )
07:55:824 (3,1) - ^

Good luck xD
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
hi, btw where is taiko diff?

timing:

436624 → 436616

others are fine, no KD for this post
HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
HellDawn

LKs wrote:

hi, btw where is taiko diff? She is leaved :/

timing:

436624 → 436616 Finally true timing thank you

others are fine, no KD for this post
Makar
osu! Alumni
2,258 posts
Joined February 2011
Makar
I talked with other staff about the BG and it is not appropriate. Maps that were ranked in the past can not be used to justify this either.
UnderminE
osu! Alumni
4,011 posts
Joined August 2010
UnderminE
Even if it's in the past, everyone knows that that thing will happen in the future as well. "Let's just put a cute anime butt here, it's okay it is cute it is anime after all."

Not even past, just check first page of Ranked Beatmaps recently, full of inappropriate backgrounds. it should not be that hard to say "change the bg" before ranking those maps.
HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
HellDawn
it is not even past, that kind of thing happens with japanese-anime-backgrounds every single time. As a mapper, i would like to see those "other staff members", or at least give me a valid reason why it is not appropriate and why a warning can't do the thing.
Xakyrie
667 posts
Joined February 2011
Xakyrie
I guess you might want to remove Luanny's tags as well then, HellDawn. :<
HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
HellDawn
true :/
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
I support opinion that this BG is ok. I can't get why there so much rage on this... And I don't see a reason why this is considered as NSFW. 12A maximum or even PG
Kyshiro
Elite Mapper
1,642 posts
Joined January 2011
Kyshiro
...Hi there

Sorry i'm late, been inactive as you probably noticed >: I see that you've fixed most of the things listed for my parts, thanks for that, I've made a few adjustments though, nothing big: http://puu.sh/2KfAo.txt

I should be 100% back at Osu! now.
Makyu
424 posts
Joined April 2012
Makyu
The NSFW is not because the half nude, the problem is the meaning of the image, some things like that are.... a bad example for kids.

As I say on the PM I think is better find another background, is way easy to solve, if you wish you can made another version of the map with the original BG, in another link, that will be fine, I think.

Edit: Here are some nice BG from that group, if you wish I can fix the image to make them rankeable.
http://www.imgbase.info/images/safe-wal ... lpaper.jpg
http://www.wallsave.com/wallpapers/1280 ... 780441.jpg
http://www.epica.nl/assets/media/wallpapers/juli_a.jpg

going to sleep, let me know what you will do.
HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
HellDawn
Changed bg Thank you.
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
ok b#1
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
IRC mod log
2013-05-01 18:44 HellDawn: hey
2013-05-01 18:45 spboxer3: hey
2013-05-01 18:45 HellDawn: Can i want something again
2013-05-01 18:45 spboxer3: :o?
2013-05-01 18:46 HellDawn: 1 month aga you checked my map 
2013-05-01 18:46 HellDawn: for taiko
2013-05-01 18:47 HellDawn: so for now Could you check my map without taiko  because taiko is leaved ( I got bubble bat and mat so i need 2#bub)
2013-05-01 18:47 spboxer3: oh, you remove Taiko diff?
2013-05-01 18:47 HellDawn: she is leaved so i should removed
2013-05-01 18:48 HellDawn: but i put it
2013-05-01 18:48 HellDawn: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/69369
2013-05-01 18:48 spboxer3: Oh... sadly :<
2013-05-01 18:48 spboxer3: I know~
2013-05-01 18:49 HellDawn: omg are you checking ? O.O
2013-05-01 18:49 spboxer3: nope, just watching it xD
2013-05-01 18:49 HellDawn: ;_;
2013-05-01 18:51 spboxer3: 00:28:620 (8) - o.O should make it symmetrical?
2013-05-01 18:51 HellDawn: sure
2013-05-01 18:53 spboxer3: if you want, I can give you code to fix it
2013-05-01 18:53 HellDawn: http://puu.sh/2KEUA.jpg
2013-05-01 18:53 HellDawn: is it ok ?
2013-05-01 18:53 spboxer3: okay
2013-05-01 18:55 spboxer3: 01:58:414 (15,16) - remove and extend 01:58:614 (1) - slider at 01:58:414 - ?
2013-05-01 18:57 HellDawn: and also
2013-05-01 18:57 HellDawn: i added circle
2013-05-01 18:57 HellDawn: from here 01:58:814 (2) - 
2013-05-01 18:58 spboxer3: Umm? what's your first sentence? http://puu.sh/2KF23.jpg
2013-05-01 18:58 HellDawn: i think some rhytm gonna weird
2013-05-01 18:58 HellDawn: from here 01:58:814 (2) - 
2013-05-01 19:00 HellDawn: okey done
2013-05-01 19:05 spboxer3: 04:02:426 (1) - kinda confust click time when player was playing, because it's different with other pervious part.
2013-05-01 19:06 HellDawn: no its not for me why i added it because of there re lot of combos so i must add slider with soft
2013-05-01 19:10 HellDawn: also its fit and not confuse for me ;_;
2013-05-01 19:11 spboxer3: it's not a powerful reason for this case. Actually, I'd rather used note at 04:02:626 -  because it's have 1 section to take a break. your pattern only have 1/2 section can do it... also 04:02:626 - here is a stress beat and you only used slider end (It's not a click time here).
2013-05-01 19:12 HellDawn: if its confuse
2013-05-01 19:13 HellDawn: better then them
2013-05-01 19:13 HellDawn: 04:04:230 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 
2013-05-01 19:15 spboxer3: well, I'm not force you must change it, just give you my reason :)
2013-05-01 19:15 HellDawn: thank you but I want to keep it if you want ? ;_;
2013-05-01 19:15 spboxer3: yep, you can keep it
2013-05-01 19:20 spboxer3: 04:14:630 (7,8,9) - and 04:19:030 (4,5,6) -  sound a bit like freestyle? I cann't find those relevance (for section/sentence) since they're similar pattern...
2013-05-01 19:21 HellDawn: 04:19:030 (4,5,6) - its true
2013-05-01 19:21 HellDawn: but first one no
2013-05-01 19:22 HellDawn: but what can i do :D
2013-05-01 19:24 spboxer3: 04:19:030 (4,5,6) - and 04:20:630 (4,5,6,7) -  rhythm sound should be exchange :/
2013-05-01 19:27 spboxer3: 04:40:630 (6) - NC?
2013-05-01 19:27 HellDawn: okey
2013-05-01 19:27 HellDawn: but i cannot make something previous post
2013-05-01 19:33 spboxer3: updata please
2013-05-01 19:33 HellDawn: okey thank you
2013-05-01 19:34 HellDawn: done
2013-05-01 19:44 HellDawn: I have to go now
2013-05-01 19:44 HellDawn: Will you tell something sir ?
2013-05-01 19:44 spboxer3: :o
2013-05-01 19:44 spboxer3: maybe... yes  Orz...
2013-05-01 19:44 HellDawn: tell :/
2013-05-01 19:45 spboxer3: 07:16:624 - unsnap kiai time Orz...
2013-05-01 19:45 spboxer3: this one... I can't help you put #2 bubble, only can give you re-bubble ;w;
2013-05-01 19:46 HellDawn: why ;_;
2013-05-01 19:46 spboxer3: unsnap kiai time is unrankable ;w;
2013-05-01 19:47 spboxer3: the BAT/MAT rules said: if you find unrankable issue from bubble map, you only can give him/her re-bubble ;w;
2013-05-01 19:48 spboxer3: really sorry about that Orz...
2013-05-01 19:49 HellDawn: I cannot make 4/+
2013-05-01 19:49 HellDawn: 4/4
2013-05-01 19:49 HellDawn: np for that How can i make 4/4
2013-05-01 19:49 spboxer3: what's your mean?
2013-05-01 19:49 spboxer3: what 4/4?
2013-05-01 19:49 HellDawn: http://puu.sh/2KG9p.png
2013-05-01 19:50 spboxer3: where?
2013-05-01 19:50 HellDawn: http://puu.sh/2KGaa.png
2013-05-01 19:50 HellDawn: when i add new timing
2013-05-01 19:50 spboxer3: http://puu.sh/2KGaM.png
2013-05-01 19:51 HellDawn: okey i found now
2013-05-01 19:51 spboxer3: :P
2013-05-01 19:51 HellDawn: then
2013-05-01 19:51 HellDawn: dont need rebubble from you
2013-05-01 19:51 HellDawn: lks will rebuble it ?
2013-05-01 19:51 spboxer3: LKs can't rebubble it ;w;
2013-05-01 19:51 spboxer3: because he get a wrong bubble for you :<
2013-05-01 19:52 HellDawn: or mat ?
2013-05-01 19:52 spboxer3: lol where is MAT?
2013-05-01 19:52 HellDawn: frostmourne
2013-05-01 19:52 spboxer3: frosty is BAT now ((runs
2013-05-01 19:52 HellDawn: he was mat when he is gave bubble
2013-05-01 19:54 spboxer3: sorry, frosty was give you bubble right and be popped, right? 
2013-05-01 19:54 spboxer3: then he can't do rebubble your map again :<
2013-05-01 19:54 HellDawn: frosty gave bubble only and lolcubes popped
2013-05-01 19:55 HellDawn: no lks popped it
2013-05-01 19:56 spboxer3: (1)XAT bubble -> be popped by other (2)XAT => (1) XAT can't give you rebubble
2013-05-01 19:56 HellDawn: xat ?
2013-05-01 19:56 spboxer3: XAT=MAT or BAT
2013-05-01 19:57 HellDawn: okey fix bubble please orz
2013-05-01 19:57 spboxer3: ;w; really a sadly news for you... sorry
2013-05-01 19:57 spboxer3: do you updata it?
2013-05-01 19:58 HellDawn: yes
2013-05-01 19:58 HellDawn: I have not luck
2013-05-01 19:58 HellDawn: but my name is ugur (in english lucky)
2013-05-01 19:58 HellDawn: FAK
2013-05-01 19:59 spboxer3: please resnap all note/slider lol
2013-05-01 19:59 spboxer3: you have a lot unsnap after upload your map
2013-05-01 20:00 HellDawn: 08:07:814
2013-05-01 20:00 HellDawn: unsnapped kiai again
2013-05-01 20:01 spboxer3: yes, I said you have unsnap kiai time end too before
2013-05-01 20:03 HellDawn: everything is okey
2013-05-01 20:05 HellDawn: I have to go now ?
2013-05-01 20:05 spboxer3: `okay, 
2013-05-01 20:05 HellDawn: thank you for everything
2013-05-01 20:06 spboxer3: ;w; sry
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