jonathanlfj wrote:

first~
and star \o/
and can i take normal then? seems ur soloing insane

HabiHolic wrote:

[jonathanlfj's Normal]

00:31:746 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1120608 sure
00:35:579 (3) - add whistle
00:40:913 (4) - ^ dont feel whistles fit in these places since the music is rather quiet
01:28:746 (3) - How about this Rhythm ? i tried to avoid having connected 1/2 rhythms in this diff, wound want to keep this for the sake of difficulty control


02:37:579 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1120620 did something similar
03:02:913 (1) - delete note? ok
03:18:246 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1120621
03:20:913 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1120622 kinda breaks spacing here, i'd just sacrifice the symmetry
all suggestion~ good luck~

jonathanlfj wrote:

eggrolls are delicious

EDIT: STARRRR

Rush_FTK wrote:

Seemed a well-listening songs.Thank you to bring this songs to us.

Here are some suggestion.
[box=Mod]I'm sorry for my poor English at first..
Sorry if my mod is terrible... I hope my mod can help you.


[General]
Warning(You must fix it):
- Green line is not snapped.(02:24:249→02:24:246) i did not seem to find a green line here?

[lfj's Normal]
Warning(You must fix it):
- Object is not snapped.(04:19:911/04:31:911) Fixed


[Hard]
Suggestion:
- 02:52:329 (1) Let the spinner end up at 02:54:579,add a note in 02:54:746,add a spinner at 02:54:913 ~ 02:57:079.

My Opinion:
- 00:22:913 (1,1) there is no any stress note in 00:22:996.Why not let Spinner begin at 00:22:913? i'll keep this because i wanted to emphasize the cymbal in the music
- 00:42:913 (4) Played a little uncomfortable. Fixed
- 02:06:579 (7) turnover it? should be ok imo

[Insane]
Suggestion:
- 03:48:246 add a note. theres a note~

My Opinion:
- 00:22:913 (1,1) Same as hard.
- 01:02:246 (7,8) swap?
- 01:02:246 (7,8) mobe to x=20 y=92? fixed a bit differently
- 04:25:079 ~ 04:38:579 not finished? just finished =v=


A awesome beatmap!
Good luck!

apaffy wrote:

lunarlfj

time to return the favor<3 <3

[General]
uwaaaaa, there's nothing wrong here...

[Insane]

1. 00:45:413 (6) - ctrl+G? movement between 5 + 6 currently is a bit odd i think i'll keep this for now, the pulling back motion seemed ok and i wanted to keep the spacing a bit conservative here
2. 00:59:413 (4) - you could have done something cool with the 1/4 drums here i guess ;_; Fixed~
3. 01:29:079 (3,4,5,1) - You could make a square with these! It would kinda look cool asthetic wise... i made like a rhombus lmao
4. 01:50:913 (2) - if you're doing a whistle every two measures, shouldn't there be one here? or are the whistles attached to something else? Fixed. yeah i was basing it mainly off what i heard rip
5. 03:13:746 - aww, I was kind of hoping you'd map this part like jonny did - the piano has some really nice stuff in there im debating this lol..ghufajkdseds

fantastic

[Hard]

1. 00:49:079 (7) - later on, you handle this as two circles (specifically here 02:09:079 (7,8) - ) - why can't the same be done here, i think it would fit better and put the correct emphasis on 00:49:246 - ! There are a few more instances of that drum stop that could be done the same way too, up to you though ww fixed
2. 03:07:579 (5,6,7) - t-this might be a bit confusing for hard players, not sure though changed to illuminati triangle
3. 03:25:579 (5) - why didn't you ctrl - g this? it would look so prettttyyy! same with 03:28:246 (5) - ;w; i wanted to keep a wavy motion with the cursor orz
4. 03:40:246 (1,2,3) - omg aaaaaaaa hngggngngnghgngf gnhnghnhgnhg
5. 04:09:079 - some of the gaps in this whole section were a bit confusing - there are a couple places where I was expecting a note due to vocals or bass, but there wasn't one there (like right here for instane) fixed i hope

wow, i'm totally copying this hard for any hard diffs i'm making in the future

[Mama Jonny's Normal]

1. www circles too big www wwwwwwww

This map is too pro for my modding skills. Hope this helps even slightly, and good luck~! (frankly this shouldn't really be kd-able ww) no you are kd-able w

smallboat wrote:

HI,Sakuya. o/

1. Red words: Should be fixed.
2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]

1.Seems can add sliderslide mute the sliderslide sound? i think it'll be ok =v=
2.Add 'ghost' tag? huh?


[Hard] (Seems missed many whistle?) yes fixed lol

00:36:246 (5) - Forget to add a NC here? oops
00:52:246 (1) - Perhaps can stack better. Fixed
00:57:579 (3) - Forget to add a NC here? (Like 00:41:579 (1).) Fixed
01:48:246 (1) - Add a whistle? (Because you have add this in ins diff) Fixed
01:53:579 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:58:913 (1) - Seems missed a whistle again.(Because you have add this in ins diff) Fixed
02:01:579 (1) - ^ Fixed
02:04:246 (1) - Missed drum hs? ?
02:00:579 (5) - Perhaps can use ctrl+g. Fixed
02:18:913 (8) - Try to set a NC here? i kept to maintain consistency
02:40:246 (4) - Set a NC and remove clap,change whistle? (Look 02:40:246 (1) in ins diff) Fixed
03:53:579 (4) - NC? Fixed
04:17:413 (1,2) - Swap NC? (Check 04:17:579 (1) in ins diff.) Fixed
04:21:579 (6) - Add a NC? kept this
04:26:913 (4) - ^ Fixed

[Insane]

00:50:079 (2) - Perhaps can stack better. Fixed
01:18:746 (5) - Move to (312|212) make anti-jump? Fixed
02:12:746 (2) - Stack 02:10:913 (1) head? i'll keep the pinwheel w
02:41:079 (8) - Perhaps can use ctrl+g? Fixed
03:27:579 (3,4) - Feel add whistle at head is good better.(Like 03:24:913 (3,4).) Fixed
03:33:246 (3) - Perhaps can stack better. Fixed
04:10:913 (4) - DS changed(jump),so I suggest can set a NC here. Fixed

Good luck ~

jonathanlfj wrote:

apaffy wrote:

i have taught you well, but you forgot to FIRE IN THE HOLE
wow apaffy you missed

LunarSakuya wrote:

jonathanlfj wrote:

i have taught you well, but you forgot to FIRE IN THE HOLE
wow apaffy you missed

Yauxo wrote:

Hi there, random mod passing by :3
Please take note that I mod your map for mostly unrankable or "stupid" stuff. I try to avoid style related issues, as I cant really judge these.

Unrankable
Suggestion

Other than that, colours yellow to red indicate how important changes would be in my opinion

[General]
■ It wouldve been amazing if the outro wouldve been mapped, it's still pretty strong and having it not mapped like this feels like a waste :c

hmm I'll consider it. It's strong but the beat wasn't as obvious as the other parts? Didn't wanna drag out the drain time either

[Hard]
Map looks completely fine to me, so have some overlap pixel beauty treatment (sorry ;w;)

■ How about AR 7,5? As Normal has AR5, I think the transition to AR7 or 7,5 would be more enjoyable. (Ive modded this with AR7,5 and I think it's fine) yeah i found both to be not too bad imo. I decided to keep 8 for now mainly bc of the higher bpm and note density
■ 01:10:746 (8) - Pixel Mafia, move to y327 Fixed
■ 01:21:246 (5) - How about adding low volume whistles and raising the volume up on every repeat? Adds a nice little effect imo just added whistle on head xD
■ 02:06:246 (6) - More Pixel Mafia, move to x473 and 02:07:579 (3) - +1 on each coord
■ 02:23:246 (2) - +1x Fixed
■ 02:37:579 (4) - +1y Fixed
■ 02:40:746 (3) - Maybe ctrl h this one? Would feel better imo tried to make this transition a bit more interesting
■ 03:04:246 (1) - Have (1) and the previous (2) + (3) be a nice triangle. Also Try to adjust 03:04:246 (1,2,3,4) - so that 03:04:246 (1,2,1) - is just the same as 03:03:246 (2,3,1) - Fixed, was slightly confused with the latter suggestion
■ 03:51:913 (3) - +1y Fixed
■ 04:14:246 (3) - +1 each coord Fixed
■ 04:17:413 (2) - Should be an overlap with 04:17:579 (1) - imo. It's similar to 04:20:079 (7,1) - 's vocal line and an overlap makes this feel more impressive and strong .. or something ._. yea it's a good observation lol but I wanted a jump for these kinds of parts like at 02:30:746 (7,1) -

[Insane]
■ 01:10:746 (9) - 355/95. Less of a nazi actually, it's easy to spot while playing and looks meh Fixed
■ 00:49:579 (1) - Resnap this one to 0,10 DS (to be the same as 02:09:579 (1) - (and because it looks better)) Fixed
■ 03:15:579 - Remove that green line Fixed
■ 03:34:579 (3) - Probably just me, but I think a slowdown like 03:28:913 (1) - would fit here as well hmm it's supposed to speed up with the crescendo =v=
■ 03:46:079 - This empty beat feels off as the following beat continues without any breaks like this. Consider adding a circle here for consistency? Maybe also replace 03:46:246 (3,4) - with a slider then Fixed
■ 04:12:746 (2,3,4) - I have to hate you now because I know that I'll not be able to guess these when playing HDHR D: Nothing too wrong with these though orz

Bat mapping too high for my noob modding D: Gj on these and sorry for nazi'ing here and there :3

Tari wrote:

obligatory mod post incoming, I want to see this ranked

Hard

1. 00:34:246 (2) - The flow towards the next note would be better if you made this slider face down http://puu.sh/aCkKJ.jpg also it'll look nice with previous note because your tilting it just slightly so it won't look bad with that note either. Fixed
2. 00:38:913 (1) - This looks really ugly with the previous slider, I'd put it so it's symmetrical to the previous slider like this : http://puu.sh/aClDx.jpg despite the new combo there i would really recommend you do this anyway Fixed i think
3. 00:48:746 (6) - Reverse selection here? the circle jumps would be more readable if you added a slider jump first and give players some time to react to that slider jump since the previous note is holding this jump would be easy and help players see that there is a jump about to come. Fixed
4. 01:10:746 (8) - There is a stacking error here, should be at the same place as the previous note's slider end Fixed
5. 01:17:579 (5) - Add a new combo here so there is consistency with the new combo you added 01:18:913 (1) - or remove the new combo from 01:18:913 (1) - and you don't need to add a new combo at 5 i checked all kiais for inconsistencies but i saw none?
6. 02:37:579 (4) - ^
7. 01:49:913 (5) - Whistle needs to be added, in fact they're alot of missing whistles in this section but I'll mention the places you could add them Fixed
8. 01:52:246 (3) - ^ Fixed
9. 03:31:913 (8) - I'd rather add a new combo here , the symmetry of this pattern ends and is broken completely by this note 03:31:913 (8) - and you want to make sure the symmetry pattern is only 1 combo i see what you mean but i kinda prefer consistency in this case. the note may not be symmetric but it isn't randomly placed either
10. 03:55:413 (7) - I want you to center this, it'll make the map much cleaner :c make sure you adjust the spacing of 03:56:246 (8) - if you decide to move 7 here. Fixed
11. 04:17:413 (2) - I like what you did before at 01:10:746 (8) - you provided a little jump there and I would like you to do it here too , try to place them like this : http://puu.sh/aCpXW.jpg Fixed

Insane

1. 00:42:246 (5,6) - I'd rather you make this part more jumpy, your putting throughout the map I would make them like this : http://puu.sh/aCpOJ.jpg that would flow well. Fixed
2. 01:06:746 (1) - Little issue here, but the stacking here is incredibly noticeable I'd prefer if you stack the end correctly with the start of 01:05:413 (1) - that overlap you can totally see here Fixed lol it was just coincidence but oh well
3. 01:20:746 (7,8,9) - Ahh the normal hits sound really strange here I'd remove the normal hits from the red tick or add them on every beat here , it'll make them sound better to be honest. sounds ok imo =v=
4. 02:22:413 (2) - You should really increase the spacing on this one, that previous slider gives so much room for reaction that practically a jump towards this note wouldn't be as hard to play. Fixed
5. 03:13:579 (9) - I would new combo this note because this beat here is part of the new measure and I'd recommend some more hp recovery after such a long hard combo. Fixed
6. 03:40:246 (1,2,3) - This pattern I wish you could of made 1 and 3 symmetrical it would of been better, alot better and really fits with the way you map sometimes since you did symmetry alot in this diff. Fixed
7. 04:32:246 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Reduce the spacing of each these jumps by a little bit? this part's supposed to be a bit harder since it's the last stretch and all w

So good map D:

EvilElvis wrote:

Hirrou

[Insane]
01:03:246 (2,3) - maybe it's just me, but try to replace them with circles, for strange reason it feels much better Fixed
01:58:913 (1) - make a better blanket with 01:58:246 (6) - Fixed
01:59:579 (3,5) - make them a bit more symmetrical Fixed
02:10:579 (4) - try to move this slider to 47|137 or so Fixed
02:48:246 (1,2) - a better blanket please this is on purpose
04:38:579 (1) - nc ? Fixed
also check hitsounds wich i suggested for jonathanlfj's diff, they might work with yours aswell sure~

rest looks fine for me
Good luck!