1. Easy (1,75 stars, 73 notes)
2. Hard (4,74 stars, 142 notes)
3. Insane (4,99 stars, 192 notes)
4. Normal (3,05 stars, 87 notes)

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280,348,53079,2,0,P|176:335|175:172|258:196|328:217|327:43|223:31,1,400,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,116,55261,6,0,P|400:56,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

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156,132,2897,2,0,P|94:24,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
44,88,3443,2,0,P|130:94|177:22,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

Gero wrote:

EDIT: Second, Yeah! XD!
Hi Hi Blue Dragon!, I will try this mod x.x

[General]

(*) Add Kia time u.u really is a bit boring without kia time why is it boring?
(*) Add preview time please c: k

[Easy]

(*) 00:09:079 (2,1) - are not well stacked, I think you could do this: done
(*) 00:28:352 (5) - This note does not have the correct distance, you break the snap distance here so I recommend accommodate this note symmetry
(*) 00:27:988 - I think you add a note here would be great. there's no place to put the note..
(*) 00:43:988 (3,4) - Here you could make a nice blanket, this: nah, I like the current placement
(*) 01:03:988 (4) - move this note to X: 140 Y: 260 to form a perfect triangle did something else
(*) 00:05:806 (1) - Here you could add a finish sounds good, uhm... no?
(*) 00:36:352 (1,3) - one thing you added claps here, but not in the other diffs, this which is inconsistent recommend removing these claps sound very bad done

[Normal]

(*) 00:16:716 (6) - You break the distance snap here D: :< please check this. symmetry
(*) 00:53:079 (5,1) - Nazi (*) why not try this, it looks better that way I like it the way it is now
(*) 01:04:534 (3) - add finish here, is best heard :3 done

[Hard]

AR +1 done

(*) 00:02:897 (1,2) - you're not doing a perfect blanket, try this that wasn't supposed to be a blanket...
(*) 00:09:988 (2,4) - are not perfectly stacked, 00:10:897 (4) - move this slider a x: 421 Y: 278 fixed
(*) 00:22:534 (1) - I think this should be the end spinner here: 00:23:988 , For where now not need a whistle, is uncomfortable. I like it the way it is
(*) 01:04:534 (5) - consider removing whistle by finish done

[Insane]

(*) 01:04:352 (4) - Add finish, in the end of the slider done

Nice Diff *_*!

Good Map And Nice Song :3

Good Lucky Blue Dragon nwn!

1. why there no kiai time D:
2. use soft-sliderslide without voice？

1. 00:44:352(4)remove finish or reduce volume

1. 00:12:352(1)x:270 y:124 then fix the position of 00:13:443(2)
2. 00:20:352(5)off-screen?

1. 00:13:352(1)make the second point at x:38 y:73
   
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Melt wrote:

Hi :3
request from queue

[General]

1. why there no kiai time D:
2. use soft-sliderslide without voice？

[Easy]

1. 00:44:352(4)remove finish or reduce volume

reduced

[Normal]

1. 00:12:352(1)x:270 y:124 then fix the position of 00:13:443(2) uhm.. no o.o
2. 00:20:352(5)off-screen?

fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:13:352(1)make the second point at x:38 y:73 fixed

Your map seems perfect to me
sorry for not come up with some useful suggestions
good luck :3

Natteke wrote:

[Hard]

00:46:534 (5) - try shortening this slider and adding another one to keep the flow FLOWING, I'm jussayin https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/619408 although my example kind of breaks the "no jump" rule that you've set in this diff, but that's just an example. done something here, hope that's what you meant


[Easy]

00:25:806 (2) - spacing here is broken by a notch, it's closer to (1) but farther away from (3) sadfghjdsakf grid inconsistencies, fixed
00:44:352 (4) - new combo pls dolan well it's just one note but sure
00:46:534 (1) - and remove it from here oh I see
00:47:625 (1) - and add here, you know what I mean wow gg


That's about it. I was looking hard to pick on something but there's nothing much to mod.

Oh also, since this song is so quiet, the soft-sliderslide becomes really annoying halfway through the map. or it's just me. try using a blank sample instead and see if it's better. I think this isn't rankable or something like that, I asked and people said silencing sliderslide is boohoounrank

ThoomyyxD wrote:

hii!
Black: Need Change
Blue: Idea
Red: Unrankeable
[Easy]
00:02:897 (3) Prefer this to the other side, something like http://puu.sh/25ONE done
00:10:170 (4) Add Whistle And Delete 00:10:897 (5) done
00:21:079 (5) Finish in the top of the slider to set the new pace doesn't sound good D:

[Normal]
00:11:261 (4) x:144 y:144 done
00:43:625 (1) Delete NC done
00:44:352 (3) NC ^
01:01:806 (3) NC added to 01:01:079 (1) instead
01:03:261 (3) NC why? o.o

[Hard]
00:41:443 (1) Would be good around the slider until you start the slider, so you add a small degree of difficulty nah D: i like it this way
00:46:352 (4) x:172 y:220 nah
01:03:988 (2) Idea http://puu.sh/25P9k did something else

[Insane]
Gooood

good Luck!!

1. AudioLeadIn 1000 is enough here, but if you want, you can use 1500. (2000 is too long here :/)
2. disable letterbox during breaks? (No breaks = no letterbox)
3. Disable countdown? It doesn't works properly, anyway.
4. I'd recommend you to use slider tick rate 2 here. Sounds better, imo.

1. Try Approach Rate +1 it will help players to read your patterns. Ar2 will fit with your slider velocity.
2. 00:02:897 (3) - nazi - NC here for music? (same for 00:20:352 (4) and 00:58:170 (4) - ) because big combos will stress beginners and because it fits here
3. 00:14:534 (4,1) - nazi - swap new combos here? If I understand your pattern properly, you should do it. also it will fit with music MUCH better, imo
4. 00:26:170 (3,4) - how about using one 2/1 reversed slider here? It will fit with music and also helps you to keep consistent and relaxing flow.

1. 00:02:897 (4,1,2,3) - I quite don't like rhythm here (mostly 00:03:988 (1,2,3) - these beats). It sounds kinda weird to me, try to use something like this you have similar pattern at 00:08:716 (1,2,3) - and it sounds the way better.
2. 00:23:170 - try ONE long slider with reverse instead? I feel like it fits with rhythm here much better. example (you have similar pattern at 00:39:988 (3) )
3. 00:34:170 (2,3,4) - ultr-nazi - (4) is too close to (2) and it kinda breaks your flow. How about softer angle? o3o triangle /soft-flow
   
   nazi-guide: what's wrong with current pattern

   Some players will not understand your flow, and click (4) first.
   
   just a nazi-suggestion, anyway

1. 00:04:170 (3) - nazi - overlapped with default-skin hp-bar. It's kinda bad and I recommend you to avoid this kind of overlaps.
2. 00:53:443 (5,8) - ultra-nazi - why don't you use straight sliders here? It'll make your pattern even better + easier to read see?

1. 00:40:534 (6) - use reversed 1/4 slider here. stream starts at 00:40:716, actually. example

-Bakari- wrote:

HAI HAI (probably m4m)

[General]

1. AudioLeadIn 1000 is enough here, but if you want, you can use 1500. (2000 is too long here :/) imo 2000 is fine, but if anyone else complains, I'll change it
2. disable letterbox during breaks? (No breaks = no letterbox) uhh dunno why change this, but ok
3. Disable countdown? It doesn't works properly, anyway. same as ^
4. I'd recommend you to use slider tick rate 2 here. Sounds better, imo. it may sound a bit spammish but I liked it. changed

[Easy]

1. Try Approach Rate +1 it will help players to read your patterns. Ar2 will fit with your slider velocity. done
2. 00:02:897 (3) - nazi - NC here for music? (same for 00:20:352 (4) (not here) and 00:58:170 (4) - ) because big combos will stress beginners and because it fits here hmmm, ok
3. 00:14:534 (4,1) - nazi - swap new combos here? If I understand your pattern properly, you should do it. also it will fit with music MUCH better, imo well, here I did a new combo pattern-wise, so not changing
4. 00:26:170 (3,4) - how about using one 2/1 reversed slider here? It will fit with music and also helps you to keep consistent and relaxing flow. nah, I wanted to emphasize the beat at 00:28:352 (4)'s big white tick.

[Normal]

1. 00:02:897 (4,1,2,3) - I quite don't like rhythm here (mostly 00:03:988 (1,2,3) - these beats). It sounds kinda weird to me, try to use something like this you have similar pattern at 00:08:716 (1,2,3) - and it sounds the way better. nah >: I like it, also, it gives some variation to the map
2. 00:23:170 - try ONE long slider with reverse instead? I feel like it fits with rhythm here much better. example (you have similar pattern at 00:39:988 (3) ) nice idea, but I like the flow it currently has
3. 00:34:170 (2,3,4) - ultr-nazi - (4) is too close to (2) and it kinda breaks your flow. How about softer angle? o3o triangle /soft-flow tried to do something in here to fix it

[Hard]

1. 00:04:170 (3) - nazi - overlapped with default-skin hp-bar. It's kinda bad and I recommend you to avoid this kind of overlaps. hp bar overlaps can go die, I have stopped minding them a while ago since players NEVER notice them. This is imo a really useless guideline.
2. 00:53:443 (5,8) - ultra-nazi - why don't you use straight sliders here? It'll make your pattern even better + easier to read see? I'll change it if anyone else complains, but I really like the sliders there D:

[Insane]

1. 00:40:534 (6) - use reversed 1/4 slider here. stream starts at 00:40:716, actually. example

done
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mostly nazi suggestions, nothing really wrong here.

I guess, I have to shoot Star! ~

in case if this mod is helpful, feel free to take a look at this map

• - 00:21:079 (5) - Add a new combo here, it's seems like you did it here 00:44:352 is just for consistency

• - 00:35:625 (4) - Add a new combo here to keep your combo pattern
  - 01:04:170 (x) - In my opinion, you should add a note or add a mini-slider starting here in 01:03:988, you decide

• - 00:48:352 (3) - nazi stuff* Maybe move this slider to not make a overlap with (6)

• - 00:40:534 (6) - This note, you should move in another place because is making a overlap with the next stream

MoodyRPG wrote:

Piano and Renard

Easy

• - 00:21:079 (5) - Add a new combo here, it's seems like you did it here 00:44:352 is just for consistency done

Normal

• - 00:35:625 (4) - Add a new combo here to keep your combo pattern done
  - 01:04:170 (x) - In my opinion, you should add a note or add a mini-slider starting here in 01:03:988, you decide nah, I decide to not use 1/2s in this diff, ending was just a special case, better to not abuse it

Hard

• - 00:48:352 (3) - nazi stuff* Maybe move this slider to not make a overlap with (6) not much that I can do about it D: besides, no problem here

Insane

• - 00:40:534 (6) - This note, you should move in another place because is making a overlap with the next stream there's not much i can do here >: this was the only good-flowing place I found for the note

Good luck :>

1. try offset 711 ( -5 )
2. 00:44:352 - add finish here all of the diffs ( like Easy )

• 
  - 00:35:625 (4) - add NC 00:36:352 (1) - delete NC
  - 00:57:079 (2) - whistle
  - 00:58:170 (1) - delete NC and 00:59:261 (2) - add here
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• 
  - 00:13:443 (2) - try whistle
  - 00:43:988 (5) - ^
  - 01:04:352 (2,3) - change to 1/2 slider?

• 
  - 00:03:443 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/26id9 you can improve this blanket -nazi
  - 00:06:351 (3) - i think move this note to 00:06:171 (3) - here is better ( and 00:06:534 (4) - stack with it )
  - 00:17:806 (2) - whistle
  - 00:30:352 (3) - change to 1/1 slider and add 00:30:897 (4) - note here , current rhythm is kinda odd for me orz
  - 00:44:352 (1) - add whistle on start
  - 01:01:625 (4) - same issue with 00:06:351 (3) - here ( or 00:17:806 (2) - move this note to 00:17:987 (2) - here )
  - 01:03:988 (2,3,4,5) - stack feels not good try this http://puu.sh/26ion or something else

• 
  - 00:04:534 (4) - whistle on repeat and 00:05:079 (5) - delete Whistle 00:05:261 (6) - add here ( for consistency )
  - 00:19:261 (1) - delete NC and 00:20:352 (4) - add NC
  - 00:25:261 (6) - hmm how about using 1.1x DS? ( 00:25:625 (7) - and also move litte bit up this slider too ) since you tried beautiful mapset, i think it's better ( and playing too )
  - 00:36:897 (5) - delete whistle on start
  - 00:43:988 (8) - whistle? because piano sound is suddenly big

HelloSCV wrote:

Yo

[General]

1. try offset 711 ( -5 ) done
2. 00:44:352 - add finish here all of the diffs ( like Easy ) done

[Easy]

• 
  - 00:35:625 (4) - add NC 00:36:352 (1) - delete NC done
  - 00:57:079 (2) - whistle done
  - 00:58:170 (1) - delete NC and 00:59:261 (2) - add here nah D: pattern-based combo
  -

[Normal]

• 
  - 00:13:443 (2) - try whistle nah, already has before + on repeat
  - 00:43:988 (5) - ^ done
  - 01:04:352 (2,3) - change to 1/2 slider? nah, I wanted this 'impact' at the end

[Hard]

• 
  - 00:03:443 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/26id9 you can improve this blanket -nazi wasn't supposed to be a blanket o.o
  - 00:06:351 (3) - i think move this note to 00:06:171 (3) - here is better ( and 00:06:534 (4) - stack with it ) nah, I like it the way it is
  - 00:17:806 (2) - whistle sounds bad D:
  - 00:30:352 (3) - change to 1/1 slider and add 00:30:897 (4) - note here , current rhythm is kinda odd for me orz nah, flow is perfect here >:
  - 00:44:352 (1) - add whistle on start ok, done
  - 01:01:625 (4) - same issue with 00:06:351 (3) - here ( or 00:17:806 (2) - move this note to 00:17:987 (2) - here ) nah >: I really like the rhythm
  - 01:03:988 (2,3,4,5) - stack feels not good try this http://puu.sh/26ion or something else meh, done

[insane]

• 
  - 00:04:534 (4) - whistle on repeat and 00:05:079 (5) - delete Whistle 00:05:261 (6) - add here ( for consistency ) did something else
  - 00:19:261 (1) - delete NC and 00:20:352 (4) - add NC didn't remove NC from 19:261, however added to 20:352
  - 00:25:261 (6) - hmm how about using 1.1x DS? ( 00:25:625 (7) - and also move litte bit up this slider too ) since you tried beautiful mapset, i think it's better ( and playing too ) no, I wanted the slider to be aligned. If anyone else suggests it, I will move (5) so it has better spacing
  - 00:36:897 (5) - delete whistle on start why? sounds empty
  - 00:43:988 (8) - whistle? because piano sound is suddenly big done

Beautiful LOL well made diffs, good luck for rank!

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, I'm here /o/

[General]

How about adding a blank soft-sliderslide, the song is very peaceful and the actual sliderslide breaks a bit that. okaaay after many requests, done
1500ms of lead in would be better, I think same as above, okay

Well, all here are merely suggestions, feel free to take it or not :3 well-made map <3

[Easy]
00:17:437 (1) - Remove all the whistles here and put one only in the reverse, the piano emphasizes here :v done
01:01:073 (1) - Switch the placement of the whistle, the piano emphasizes more in the end, if you do, remove the whistle from 01:02:528 (2). done

[Normal]
01:04:346 (2,3) - Maybe joint into a slider, you use 1/1 for all the song and this is suddenly in 1/2, that or unstack, stacked feels a bit weird imo nah, I really like it as it is >: think of it as a grand finale

[Hard]
Aren't the values for HP Drain and OD a bit low, increase it by 1. increased OD by 1
01:01:437 - I felt empty here, maybe begin 01:01:619 (4) here and remove the whistle from the beginning if you do. nah, I like it the way it is

[Insane]
Increase HP Drain at least by 1, too forgiving with HP Drain 6 :C (I could say increase both HP Drain and OD to 8, but that's up to you) HP 7 now
That jumps <3 Nice diff

Sorry for being short :c, but this map is very well-made :3

tutuhaha wrote:

In this map's tag now has two “the”, maybe delete one name of the album, can't delete that D:

[Insane]
00:01:800 (4) - *nazi, move to x432 y100 done
00:12:346 (2) - NC maybe need begin here nah, previous note starts it better
00:15:073 (2) - ^ pattern will be weird >:
00:19:255 (1,2,3) - space, maybe move 00:19:255 (1) - to x212 y180 done
00:23:619 (13) - there rhythm I think still need use 1/4, not 1/2 flows better this way
00:24:528 (4,5,6) - space, try to move 00:25:255 (6) - to x224 y176 fgasfhjsd fixed
00:29:437 (3,4) - look litter bit close than 1,2 ooops, thanks for noticing this
00:41:346 (6,1) - change to slider？rearranged the entire pattern
01:04:346 (4) - too loud finish Orz did something else, but it sounds cool

[Hard]
00:04:164 (3) - already touch HP, maybe try to move down litter bit sorry, I don't change HP bar issues.
00:06:164 (X) - I think there has rhythm, so now just feeling litter bit weird... sounds fine for me D:
00:06:346 (4) - ^If you want you can delete this one ^
00:07:619 (7) - move up one grid ok
01:01:073 (3,4) - ^same rhythm sounds fine for me
01:03:255 (8) - maybe you need low whistle ╮(╯▽╰)╭ why so? D:

[Normal]
00:23:255 (2) - whistle？ added
01:04:346 (2,3) - how about change to sldier？maybe litter bit hard for new player shouldn't be a big problem..

[Easy]
00:47:982 (2) - add whistle done
00:48:709 (3) - ^then delete whistle done

CDFA wrote:

>Renard

How fuk do ppl mud dis like srs

Overall:
01:09:437 - End spinner here so it finishes with the piano pedal. ok

Insane:
00:30:346 (6) - NC? nah, dunno why but it feels unnecessary for me lol
00:33:437 (3) - Would it be possible to angle this so the middle of the endpoint is on the slidertick? probably not, since the endpoint of (3) would overlap with the previous slider and that'd be ugly ):
00:42:710 (5) - ^ It should be easier here than on the other one. yeah, but this one is on purpose

Hard:
Tickrate 1? nah, 2 fits much better
00:11:982 (2) - Add whistle? no, since the pitch is higher in the previous note, it should have a whistle and (2) shouldn't
00:54:528 (8) - Add whistle on end of slider? i added to the reverse instead
01:03:255 (8) - Add whistle? fits better on (7), but thanks

Normal:
Tick Rate 1 ^
00:13:437 (2) - Add whistle done
00:57:437 (1) - Add whistle on beginning of slider the piano is too low >:
01:03:255 (5) - Add whistle nah

Easy:
Tick Rate 1 ^

Good stuff going on here like omg i feel bad since your mod is all big and im like "hurr"