- Inconsistent preview point in Rotte fix 可我这看是一致的orz
- many unsnapped inherited sections in 3 Insane diffs.. i think you'd better fixed them at least the kiai time.
Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない
- Tag:Delete "DJMAX" since it's in Source;Add "misato" who is the singer.
- 00:27:500 (1) - Delete the whistle of start point and add finish instead?Since the clearly finish sound here. ok
00:27:500 (1) - (the end point)How about add whistle here?i think is ok.-.
01:13:841 (3,1,2) - Sooo crowded.Move 2 to make them clearer:http://puu.sh/2mXd5 good,fix
- AR-1 would be better imo fix
00:28:963 (1) - Remove NC,the combo is too short fix
00:47:012 (1) - Why dont add clap at the end point...? fix,i leak it ;w;
00:50:670 (1) - ^ is ok.-.
00:52:378 (4) - ^ fix
00:53:353 (2) - ^but start point fix
00:57:743 (3) - ^end point fix
00:48:719 (1) - Remove NC.Some of the combo is too short and they can be longer. fix
00:55:792 (1) - Remove NC.Same reason. fix
01:08:475 (1) - ^ fix
Patterns are fine
- 00:07:256 (5,6) - A suggestion here: To correspond to(1,2,3,4),Make like this: http://puu.sh/2mXzi ...? change some
00:13:841 (1,1) - Suggestion.Shorten the spinner to 00:14:817 - ,and add a circle at 00:15:061 - which cover (2),maybe like this:http://puu.sh/2mXMt .It would be more fit~.If you change this,dont forget add a clap at (1,2) change,but i don't use your suggestion
00:34:573 (4,5,6) - To correspond to 00:38:231 (1,2,3,4) - ,Add new combo. ok,fix
00:37:256 (1) - Remove new combo.I cant see any reason to add new combo here.Anyway the combo is too short fix
00:41:158 (1) - ^fix
- 00:07:987 (1) - It is so strange to let clap and finish sound together...Delete clap...? same like 00:06:036 (3) - ,no change
00:13:841 (1) - ^ ^
00:09:817 (2) - Delete clap...?Too strong here imo. no change
Nice difficultly. Thank you:3
Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない
- AR-1.Since the bpm isnt fast,and the spacing of this difficultly aren't big,AR8 is too fast for this difficultly imo. no
- CS-1...?Big circle in high difficultly looks so...stupid. no
00:13:841 (1) - For me,whistle would be more fit than finish.Finish is too strong here.
00:15:061 (1,2) - ehh what dont add clap...?
00:23:597 (1) - A finish is missing.
00:27:256 (1) - ^at end point
00:38:231 (4) - Add whistle sounds better.
00:42:134 (6) - Add whistle at the end point.Since you have add at the same place before...
00:45:792 (3) - ^
00:47:012 (1) - A finish is missing.
00:58:719 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ...A dont think it's a good way to do this.
01:31:890 (1) - A finish....
01:33:841 (1) - Add whistle...?
few months passed.. let's see what can we improve.
- Kiai points must be snapped on Gundam's Insane, Rotte and Shore diffs.
- 00:06:036 (1) - for the rhythm from the song, the new combo should be removed here and add another one at 00:07:987 (2). fix
- 00:08:963 (1) - same as above, remove the new combo here. fix
- 00:11:890 (1,2) - looks so crowded with the previous slider on the last combo (3). maybe you can try to move them onto x.368 y.256 for a better looking. ok,fix
- 00:17:743 (2) - i'd like to make the blanket perfect. like this -> http://puu.sh/2z2aF ok,change
- 00:23:597 (1,2) - looks really forced for the following slider (1) on the next combo. try this slider shape? would be a much better effection imo. :3 --> http://puu.sh/2z2ef nice,change
- 00:29:451 (2) - the present rhythm follows nothing. why not this? (if you did this, consider to silence the hitsound of sliderticks by inherited points for the 3/2 repeat.. http://puu.sh/2z2fF ok,change.-.
- 01:16:280 (1) to 01:33:841 - tons of issues about new combos as well.. that one should be removed here and 01:20:182, then add a new one at 01:19:207.. (notice that the downbeats should be on the first beat on each two bars. yea the present are totally out of positions and you should bring that new combos one bar ahead or later. just keep them consistent. emm,change (有点不太懂这英语，意思是不是这样的节奏下错了，顿和击打没把握好？
- 01:31:890 (1) - such confused for beginners and it's really not allowed on easy diff. change it to a normal way. :3 orz...这个不太想改，不过新人的确不容易读清，fix
- 00:26:036 (2) - i'd like to try avoiding that overlap with the previous slider (2). just re-arrange them as circles like this? --> http://puu.sh/2z2KA change
- 00:31:402 (1) - that whistle on the head of slider sounds really noisy.. the peaceful part should be started by a peaceful way. :3 ok,remove
- 00:35:304 (1) - same as above ^ (also at 00:39:207 (1) - and 00:43:109 (1) - ok,all fix
- 01:00:670 (2) - why not make them symmetrical? move onto x.176 y.288 and make adjustment for spacings of following notes. ok,fix
- 01:16:280 (3) - you should make the pattern here neater.. --> http://puu.sh/2z2SE ok,fix
- 01:23:597 (2) - bad blanket with previous slider (1).. ;w; --> http://puu.sh/2z2TR ok,fix
- 01:27:987 (3,4,5) - also forced pattern here.. maybe it could be better if you would improving the shape of sliders. personally i prefer this. --> http://puu.sh/2z2Wq fix
- 01:31:890 (1) - same problem as easy diff. change
- 00:07:012 (4) - try avoiding the overlap here? you can just make the slider straight. fix
- 00:15:548 (2) - um.. how about moving to x.332 y.252 for a better looking since they could be a symmetrical triangle shape.. would be a better aspect imo. fix
- 00:19:695 (1) - just remove the noisy whistle on that repeat. (same thing at 00:23:597 (1) fix
- 00:34:329 (1,2,3,4) - just arrange them as a straight line plz.. looks really messy.. orz (same thing at 00:42:134 (1,2,3,4) --> http://puu.sh/2z37i fix
- 01:13:109 (3) - ... -> http://puu.sh/2z39l change
- 01:17:012 (2) - move that slider onto x.360 y.200 so that the tail of previous slider could be on (2)'s sliderslide? http://puu.sh/2z39R
i think is ok~
- 01:18:231 - the whistles on this part sounds a bit loud and not really suitable.. i guess it could be decreased some volume or remove some whistls from them.. depends on you.ok,change some
- 00:00:183 - strongly recommend reducing the volume to 45~55% since you have used many whistles on this part, they are sound a bit noisy.. ok,i use 55%
- 00:09:451 (1) - as we heard from the song, the new combo should be on the following short slider (2) rather than that (1).. ok,fix
- 00:25:061 (9) - sounds like the whistle on that tail is really suitable. ok,add
- 00:25:548 (1) - and i'd like to move the whistle onto the following circle (2), then you'll find a better effect. change,but use other program
- 00:49:695 (3) - the rhythm on that ending is not so strong that really need whistle on it.. ok,remove
- 00:50:914 (1) - maybe a leftward curve would make the pattern looks better? just like this. --> http://puu.sh/2z4C8 change,but use other program
- 00:52:378 (5) - remove the whistle here since whistle+clap always make bad effection. fix
- 00:56:280 (9) - um i'd like to remove the whistle on that tail as well. fix
- 01:12:865 (2) - ^ fix
- 01:32:378 (1) - looks confused.. maybe you can withdraw the anchor which on that tail for readable.. for instance --> http://puu.sh/2z4K4 emm..ok
That's all. Good luck then~