Tsukasa - In My Heart

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lkx_Shore

Eggache0 wrote:

你确定easy没有忘记加BG?
你确定你重新下载图了?
Gundam

mintong89 wrote:

Mod as request~

[刚大木]

00:16:524 (3) - 感觉可以 Ctrl+G - done
01:04:207 (7) - 建议删这个......放这个有点乱 - done 改成slider了
谢谢米桶神麻婆mod>.<

http://puu.sh/22sYc edit:http://puu.sh/22t43
Rotte
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore
ok,upload
Strawberry
  1. Inconsistent preview point in Rotte
  2. many unsnapped inherited sections in 3 Insane diffs.. i think you'd better fixed them at least the kiai time.


edit: previewpoint那里感觉是貌似改offset遗留的. 有几ms的误差 unsnapped指没有对齐到线上. 感觉也是因为改了offset然后没调
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Strawberry wrote:

  1. Inconsistent preview point in Rotte fix 可我这看是一致的orz
  2. many unsnapped inherited sections in 3 Insane diffs.. i think you'd better fixed them at least the kiai time.
kiai time都一致吧...unsnapped是什么真的看不懂;-;

英语看不懂

edit:all fix
Kotone
Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない
[General]
  1. Tag:Delete "DJMAX" since it's in Source;Add "misato" who is the singer.


[Easy]
  • 00:27:500 (1) - Delete the whistle of start point and add finish instead?Since the clearly finish sound here.
    00:27:500 (1) - (the end point)How about add whistle here?
    01:13:841 (3,1,2) - Sooo crowded.Move 2 to make them clearer:http://puu.sh/2mXd5


[Normal]
  1. AR-1 would be better imo
    00:28:963 (1) - Remove NC,the combo is too short
    00:47:012 (1) - Why dont add clap at the end point...?
    00:50:670 (1) - ^
    00:52:378 (4) - ^
    00:53:353 (2) - ^but start point
    00:57:743 (3) - ^end point
    00:48:719 (1) - Remove NC.Some of the combo is too short and they can be longer.
    00:55:792 (1) - Remove NC.Same reason.
    01:08:475 (1) - ^
    Patterns are fine


[Hard]
  • 00:07:256 (5,6) - A suggestion here: To correspond to(1,2,3,4),Make like this: http://puu.sh/2mXzi ...?
    00:13:841 (1,1) - Suggestion.Shorten the spinner to 00:14:817 - ,and add a circle at 00:15:061 - which cover (2),maybe like this:http://puu.sh/2mXMt .It would be more fit~.If you change this,dont forget add a clap at (1,2)
    00:34:573 (4,5,6) - To correspond to 00:38:231 (1,2,3,4) - ,Add new combo.
    00:37:256 (1) - Remove new combo.I cant see any reason to add new combo here.Anyway the combo is too short
    00:41:158 (1) - ^


[Gundam's Insane]
  1. AR-1.Since the bpm isnt fast,and the spacing of this difficultly aren't big,AR8 is too fast for this difficultly imo.
  2. CS-1...?Big circle in high difficultly looks so...stupid.
    00:13:841 (1) - For me,whistle would be more fit than finish.Finish is too strong here.
    00:15:061 (1,2) - ehh what dont add clap...?
    00:23:597 (1) - A finish is missing.
    00:27:256 (1) - ^at end point
    00:38:231 (4) - Add whistle sounds better.
    00:42:134 (6) - Add whistle at the end point.Since you have add at the same place before...
    00:45:792 (3) - ^
    00:47:012 (1) - A finish is missing.
    00:58:719 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ...A dont think it's a good way to do this.
    01:31:890 (1) - A finish....
    01:33:841 (1) - Add whistle...?


[Rotte]
很用心做可是。。。你認為這么可愛的歌適合這種有點偏奇葩的擺法么。。。至少我認為不太合適。
還有n-whistle也不適合吧。。
最後一個slider怎么聽也是白線停才對

[Shore]
  • 00:07:987 (1) - It is so strange to let clap and finish sound together...Delete clap...?
    00:13:841 (1) - ^
    00:09:817 (2) - Delete clap...?Too strong here imo.
    Nice difficultly.


圖不錯可是gd不太行。還有Gundam的patterns有點太單一了。

EDIT:忘了說Shore leadin不一樣。
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Kotone wrote:

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない
[General]
  1. Tag:Delete "DJMAX" since it's in Source;Add "misato" who is the singer.
tag删了djmax,misato是这个版本的演唱者,tsukasa是原版唱者.一开始我是在artist里用misato的,后来Curisu告诉我aitist用tsukasa比较合理(就像mf版本一样)所以我就用了在线的tag和aitist edit:在线→现在

[Easy]
  • 00:27:500 (1) - Delete the whistle of start point and add finish instead?Since the clearly finish sound here. ok
    00:27:500 (1) - (the end point)How about add whistle here?i think is ok.-.
    01:13:841 (3,1,2) - Sooo crowded.Move 2 to make them clearer:http://puu.sh/2mXd5 good,fix


[Normal]
  1. AR-1 would be better imo fix
    00:28:963 (1) - Remove NC,the combo is too short fix
    00:47:012 (1) - Why dont add clap at the end point...? fix,i leak it ;w;
    00:50:670 (1) - ^ is ok.-.
    00:52:378 (4) - ^ fix
    00:53:353 (2) - ^but start point fix
    00:57:743 (3) - ^end point fix
    00:48:719 (1) - Remove NC.Some of the combo is too short and they can be longer. fix
    00:55:792 (1) - Remove NC.Same reason. fix
    01:08:475 (1) - ^ fix
    Patterns are fine


[Hard]
  • 00:07:256 (5,6) - A suggestion here: To correspond to(1,2,3,4),Make like this: http://puu.sh/2mXzi ...? change some
    00:13:841 (1,1) - Suggestion.Shorten the spinner to 00:14:817 - ,and add a circle at 00:15:061 - which cover (2),maybe like this:http://puu.sh/2mXMt .It would be more fit~.If you change this,dont forget add a clap at (1,2) change,but i don't use your suggestion
    00:34:573 (4,5,6) - To correspond to 00:38:231 (1,2,3,4) - ,Add new combo. ok,fix
    00:37:256 (1) - Remove new combo.I cant see any reason to add new combo here.Anyway the combo is too short fix
    00:41:158 (1) - ^fix


[Shore]
  • 00:07:987 (1) - It is so strange to let clap and finish sound together...Delete clap...? same like 00:06:036 (3) - ,no change
    00:13:841 (1) - ^ ^
    00:09:817 (2) - Delete clap...?Too strong here imo. no change
    Nice difficultly. Thank you:3


圖不錯可是gd不太行。還有Gundam的patterns有點太單一了。

EDIT:忘了說Shore leadin不一樣。fix
Kotone
首先你要搞清楚一件事:Tsukasa是arranger而不是歌手,原版的歌手還是Misato,用Tsukasa做Artist的原因不是因為他是Singer,而是因為他是Arrganer,這點很重要。不是說要迫你改Artist,我只是想你搞清楚。Misato始終是歌手,加一個tag是很正常的,一點都不過分。
下次請你先查清楚歌曲的Singer/Arranger是誰,這兩個也是可以當作Artist的,但也不要搞混了,說Tsukasa是演唱者真的有點搞笑。
EDIT:誒那是我看漏了w
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Kotone wrote:

首先你要搞清楚一件事:Tsukasa是arranger而不是歌手,原版的歌手還是Misato,用Tsukasa做Artist的原因不是因為他是Singer,而是因為他是Arrganer,這點很重要。不是說要迫你改Artist,我只是想你搞清楚。Misato始終是歌手,加一個tag是很正常的,一點都不過分。
下次請你先查清楚歌曲的Singer/Arranger是誰,這兩個也是可以當作Artist的,但也不要搞混了,說Tsukasa是演唱者真的有點搞笑。
好吧我的确弄混了,但tag一直都有misato.
Gundam

Kotone wrote:

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない
[Gundam's Insane]
  1. AR-1.Since the bpm isnt fast,and the spacing of this difficultly aren't big,AR8 is too fast for this difficultly imo. no
  2. CS-1...?Big circle in high difficultly looks so...stupid. no
    00:13:841 (1) - For me,whistle would be more fit than finish.Finish is too strong here.
    00:15:061 (1,2) - ehh what dont add clap...?
    00:23:597 (1) - A finish is missing.
    00:27:256 (1) - ^at end point
    00:38:231 (4) - Add whistle sounds better.
    00:42:134 (6) - Add whistle at the end point.Since you have add at the same place before...
    00:45:792 (3) - ^
    00:47:012 (1) - A finish is missing.
    00:58:719 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ...A dont think it's a good way to do this.
    01:31:890 (1) - A finish....
    01:33:841 (1) - Add whistle...?

all fix
Rotte

Kotone wrote:

[Rotte]
很用心做可是。。。你認為這么可愛的歌適合這種有點偏奇葩的擺法么。。。至少我認為不太合適。
還有n-whistle也不適合吧。。
最後一個slider怎么聽也是白線停才對
最后一个slider,我绝对不会认为我的slider在节奏上有任何问题,
a32
拉姥爷fight~再来颗star ww
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

a3272509123 wrote:

拉姥爷fight~再来颗star ww
hao
Zero__wind

Rotte wrote:

Kotone wrote:

[Rotte]
很用心做可是。。。你認為這么可愛的歌適合這種有點偏奇葩的擺法么。。。至少我認為不太合適。
還有n-whistle也不適合吧。。
最後一個slider怎么聽也是白線停才對
最后一个slider,我绝对不会认为我的slider在节奏上有任何问题,
小猫大人神diff好么!
Strawberry
no kd.
few months passed.. let's see what can we improve.
[]
 
  1. Kiai points must be snapped on Gundam's Insane, Rotte and Shore diffs.
 
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  1. 00:06:036 (1) - for the rhythm from the song, the new combo should be removed here and add another one at 00:07:987 (2).
  2. 00:08:963 (1) - same as above, remove the new combo here.
  3. 00:11:890 (1,2) - looks so crowded with the previous slider on the last combo (3). maybe you can try to move them onto x.368 y.256 for a better looking.
  4. 00:17:743 (2) - i'd like to make the blanket perfect. like this -> http://puu.sh/2z2aF
  5. 00:23:597 (1,2) - looks really forced for the following slider (1) on the next combo. try this slider shape? would be a much better effection imo. :3 --> http://puu.sh/2z2ef
  6. 00:29:451 (2) - the present rhythm follows nothing. why not this? (if you did this, consider to silence the hitsound of sliderticks by inherited points for the 3/2 repeat.. http://puu.sh/2z2fF
  7. 01:16:280 (1) to 01:33:841 - tons of issues about new combos as well.. that one should be removed here and 01:20:182, then add a new one at 01:19:207.. (notice that the downbeats should be on the first beat on each two bars. yea the present are totally out of positions and you should bring that new combos one bar ahead or later. just keep them consistent.
  8. 01:31:890 (1) - such confused for beginners and it's really not allowed on easy diff. change it to a normal way. :3
 
[]
  1. 00:26:036 (2) - i'd like to try avoiding that overlap with the previous slider (2). just re-arrange them as circles like this? --> http://puu.sh/2z2KA
  2. 00:31:402 (1) - that whistle on the head of slider sounds really noisy.. the peaceful part should be started by a peaceful way. :3
  3. 00:35:304 (1) - same as above ^ (also at 00:39:207 (1) - and 00:43:109 (1) -
  4. 01:00:670 (2) - why not make them symmetrical? move onto x.176 y.288 and make adjustment for spacings of following notes.
  5. 01:16:280 (3) - you should make the pattern here neater.. --> http://puu.sh/2z2SE
  6. 01:23:597 (2) - bad blanket with previous slider (1).. ;w; --> http://puu.sh/2z2TR
  7. 01:27:987 (3,4,5) - also forced pattern here.. maybe it could be better if you would improving the shape of sliders. personally i prefer this. --> http://puu.sh/2z2Wq
  8. 01:31:890 (1) - same problem as easy diff.
 
[]
  1. 00:07:012 (4) - try avoiding the overlap here? you can just make the slider straight.
  2. 00:15:548 (2) - um.. how about moving to x.332 y.252 for a better looking since they could be a symmetrical triangle shape.. would be a better aspect imo.
  3. 00:19:695 (1) - just remove the noisy whistle on that repeat. (same thing at 00:23:597 (1)
  4. 00:34:329 (1,2,3,4) - just arrange them as a straight line plz.. looks really messy.. orz (same thing at 00:42:134 (1,2,3,4) --> http://puu.sh/2z37i
  5. 01:13:109 (3) - ... -> http://puu.sh/2z39l
  6. 01:17:012 (2) - move that slider onto x.360 y.200 so that the tail of previous slider could be on (2)'s sliderslide? http://puu.sh/2z39R
  7. 01:18:231 - the whistles on this part sounds a bit loud and not really suitable.. i guess it could be decreased some volume or remove some whistls from them.. depends on you.

[]
  1. as kotone said, there have so many strange shapes slider not appropriate or can't express the right things for the song.. and some strange rhythm as well. such as 00:16:768 (3,1) - i heard no any beats on the blue tick and maybe you just want to keep consistent with slider 00:17:743 (1) but it makes no sense.. only awkward feeling.. on the other side, i wish you can consider to improve the hitsounds by curtailling dense whitles and avoiding whistle+clap somewhere such as 00:28:963 (3) - 00:29:939 (2) -..
  2. 00:00:670 (2) - i have no idea about why you'd like to use kick slider on this part.. as i heard from the song it follows nothing.. however if you really want something special try following drums and set the rhythm like this?(same thing at 00:02:622 (2) --> http://puu.sh/2z44Z
  3. 00:03:841 (6) - just remove the clap here.. it's really out of the song. (also same at 00:07:743 (5) and 00:11:402 (5)'s tail and many places including 00:15:548 (3).
  4. 00:26:524 (2) - uesless whistle on that start.
  5. 01:18:231 - why not to keep the volume consistent? sounds really weird for now..

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  1. 00:00:183 - strongly recommend reducing the volume to 45~55% since you have used many whistles on this part, they are sound a bit noisy..
  2. 00:09:451 (1) - as we heard from the song, the new combo should be on the following short slider (2) rather than that (1)..
  3. 00:25:061 (9) - sounds like the whistle on that tail is really suitable.
  4. 00:25:548 (1) - and i'd like to move the whistle onto the following circle (2), then you'll find a better effect.
  5. 00:49:695 (3) - the rhythm on that ending is not so strong that really need whistle on it..
  6. 00:50:914 (1) - maybe a leftward curve would make the pattern looks better? just like this. --> http://puu.sh/2z4C8
  7. 00:52:378 (5) - remove the whistle here since whistle+clap always make bad effection.
  8. 00:56:280 (9) - um i'd like to remove the whistle on that tail as well.
  9. 01:12:865 (2) - ^
  10. 01:32:378 (1) - looks confused.. maybe you can withdraw the anchor which on that tail for readable.. for instance --> http://puu.sh/2z4K4
    Nice diff.
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That's all. Good luck then~
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Strawberry wrote:

no kd.
few months passed.. let's see what can we improve.
[]
 
  1. Kiai points must be snapped on Gundam's Insane, Rotte and Shore diffs.
fix
 
[]
  1. 00:06:036 (1) - for the rhythm from the song, the new combo should be removed here and add another one at 00:07:987 (2). fix
  2. 00:08:963 (1) - same as above, remove the new combo here. fix
  3. 00:11:890 (1,2) - looks so crowded with the previous slider on the last combo (3). maybe you can try to move them onto x.368 y.256 for a better looking. ok,fix
  4. 00:17:743 (2) - i'd like to make the blanket perfect. like this -> http://puu.sh/2z2aF ok,change
  5. 00:23:597 (1,2) - looks really forced for the following slider (1) on the next combo. try this slider shape? would be a much better effection imo. :3 --> http://puu.sh/2z2ef nice,change
  6. 00:29:451 (2) - the present rhythm follows nothing. why not this? (if you did this, consider to silence the hitsound of sliderticks by inherited points for the 3/2 repeat.. http://puu.sh/2z2fF ok,change.-.
  7. 01:16:280 (1) to 01:33:841 - tons of issues about new combos as well.. that one should be removed here and 01:20:182, then add a new one at 01:19:207.. (notice that the downbeats should be on the first beat on each two bars. yea the present are totally out of positions and you should bring that new combos one bar ahead or later. just keep them consistent. emm,change (有点不太懂这英语,意思是不是这样的节奏下错了,顿和击打没把握好?
  8. 01:31:890 (1) - such confused for beginners and it's really not allowed on easy diff. change it to a normal way. :3 orz...这个不太想改,不过新人的确不容易读清,fix
 
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  1. 00:26:036 (2) - i'd like to try avoiding that overlap with the previous slider (2). just re-arrange them as circles like this? --> http://puu.sh/2z2KA change
  2. 00:31:402 (1) - that whistle on the head of slider sounds really noisy.. the peaceful part should be started by a peaceful way. :3 ok,remove
  3. 00:35:304 (1) - same as above ^ (also at 00:39:207 (1) - and 00:43:109 (1) - ok,all fix
  4. 01:00:670 (2) - why not make them symmetrical? move onto x.176 y.288 and make adjustment for spacings of following notes. ok,fix
  5. 01:16:280 (3) - you should make the pattern here neater.. --> http://puu.sh/2z2SE ok,fix
  6. 01:23:597 (2) - bad blanket with previous slider (1).. ;w; --> http://puu.sh/2z2TR ok,fix
  7. 01:27:987 (3,4,5) - also forced pattern here.. maybe it could be better if you would improving the shape of sliders. personally i prefer this. --> http://puu.sh/2z2Wq fix
  8. 01:31:890 (1) - same problem as easy diff. change
 
[]
  1. 00:07:012 (4) - try avoiding the overlap here? you can just make the slider straight. fix
  2. 00:15:548 (2) - um.. how about moving to x.332 y.252 for a better looking since they could be a symmetrical triangle shape.. would be a better aspect imo. fix
  3. 00:19:695 (1) - just remove the noisy whistle on that repeat. (same thing at 00:23:597 (1) fix
  4. 00:34:329 (1,2,3,4) - just arrange them as a straight line plz.. looks really messy.. orz (same thing at 00:42:134 (1,2,3,4) --> http://puu.sh/2z37i fix
  5. 01:13:109 (3) - ... -> http://puu.sh/2z39l change
  6. 01:17:012 (2) - move that slider onto x.360 y.200 so that the tail of previous slider could be on (2)'s sliderslide? http://puu.sh/2z39R
    i think is ok~
  7. 01:18:231 - the whistles on this part sounds a bit loud and not really suitable.. i guess it could be decreased some volume or remove some whistls from them.. depends on you.ok,change some

[]
  1. 00:00:183 - strongly recommend reducing the volume to 45~55% since you have used many whistles on this part, they are sound a bit noisy.. ok,i use 55%
  2. 00:09:451 (1) - as we heard from the song, the new combo should be on the following short slider (2) rather than that (1).. ok,fix
  3. 00:25:061 (9) - sounds like the whistle on that tail is really suitable. ok,add
  4. 00:25:548 (1) - and i'd like to move the whistle onto the following circle (2), then you'll find a better effect. change,but use other program
  5. 00:49:695 (3) - the rhythm on that ending is not so strong that really need whistle on it.. ok,remove
  6. 00:50:914 (1) - maybe a leftward curve would make the pattern looks better? just like this. --> http://puu.sh/2z4C8 change,but use other program
  7. 00:52:378 (5) - remove the whistle here since whistle+clap always make bad effection. fix
  8. 00:56:280 (9) - um i'd like to remove the whistle on that tail as well. fix
  9. 01:12:865 (2) - ^ fix
  10. 01:32:378 (1) - looks confused.. maybe you can withdraw the anchor which on that tail for readable.. for instance --> http://puu.sh/2z4K4 emm..ok
    Nice diff.
  --------------------------------------------------------
That's all. Good luck then~
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore
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Zero__wind
我还以为已经坟了
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Zero__wind wrote:

我还以为已经坟了
别墅奥尔良,我等得好苦
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