Tsukasa - In My Heart

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lkx_Shore

Eggache0 wrote:

[Gumd?m](忘了

00:27:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 三角梗……放弃1的尾巴从2开始摆这样刚好摆到8?算了摆梗啥的我都不会 稍微改动了下
00:46:280 (4,5) - 怀疑摆歪了 没呢
帮Gundam发
YakumoYukari
感觉良好

要是有0108的滑条,加上DT有奇效 括弧笑
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lkx_Shore

YakumoYukari wrote:

感觉良好

要是有0108的滑条,加上DT有奇效 括弧笑
no:|
wantuole
~
[General]
  1. 小猫的bg size
  2. djmax已经写在source 不知道要不要写tag(去问专业人士

[Easy]
安全 不过那么多1/1滑条看着好水
[Normal]
00:47:012 (1,2) - 换点造型
01:12:378 (1,2,3,4) - 转的太勉强了
kiai感觉好多压白线 简易调整些节奏分布
[Hard]
00:33:353 (3,4,5,6) -长slider之后突然小ds 感觉卡壳
00:40:182 (2,3,4,5,6) - 不follow唱歌会更佳

00:55:304 (1,2,3,4) - NC的位子怪怪的 意见是3NC 前面1取消NC 2不堆叠
kiai依旧没亮点 滑水般的白线slider
[Rotte]
00:15:792 和
00:19:695 无用的绿线

01:11:890 (1) - 读图有点障碍 1pc很难发现这个1和之前是1/4间距
01:14:817 (2) - ctrl+g?
01:24:573 (1) - 长白结束就可以了 01:26:036 +1 note
01:32:378 (1) - ?为什么不是白线结束
[Shore]
safe
00:04:817 (3) - 遮好更佳
00:12:500 (3) - ctrl+g 不像小猫难度一样当一个摆设梗用的话 还是把持ds为好 (还在前奏阶段 不要暴露你的鬼畜之心
00:54:085 (3) - remove whistle
01:04:451 (8) - remove8 明显的空节奏 加8多余了
[Gundam's Insane]
:roll: 很干净 更希望用中圈哦 多用点


就这些 good luck ;)
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

wantuole wrote:

~
[General]
  1. 小猫的bg size
  2. djmax已经写在source 不知道要不要写tag(去问专业人士 我觉得去掉比较好

[Easy]
安全 不过那么多1/1滑条看着好水 in以下都不会弄;-;
[Normal]
00:47:012 (1,2) - 换点造型 fix
01:12:378 (1,2,3,4) - 转的太勉强了 fix
kiai感觉好多压白线 简易调整些节奏分布 我觉得还好吧
[Hard]
00:33:353 (3,4,5,6) -长slider之后突然小ds 感觉卡壳 感觉没问题
00:40:182 (2,3,4,5,6) - 不follow唱歌会更佳 改了,然后图变成4.51了真是忧伤

00:55:304 (1,2,3,4) - NC的位子怪怪的 意见是3NC 前面1取消NC 2不堆叠 fix
kiai依旧没亮点 滑水般的白线slider 其实这个难度在4.5的边缘,不敢大改动了
[Shore]
safe
00:04:817 (3) - 遮好更佳
00:12:500 (3) - ctrl+g 不像小猫难度一样当一个摆设梗用的话 还是把持ds为好 (还在前奏阶段 不要暴露你的鬼畜之心
00:54:085 (3) - remove whistle
01:04:451 (8) - remove8 明显的空节奏 加8多余了
all fix

就这些 good luck ;)
Rotte

wantuole wrote:

~
[General]
[list]
[*]小猫的bg size 弄了

[Rotte]
00:15:792 和
00:19:695 无用的绿线
添加了梗ww
01:11:890 (1) - 读图有点障碍 1pc很难发现这个1和之前是1/4间距 g回去了
01:14:817 (2) - ctrl+g?换了梗
01:24:573 (1) - 长白结束就可以了 01:26:036 +1 note bass音不变
01:32:378 (1) - ?为什么不是白线结束 仔细听听啦

增加了其他一些地方,修改了一小部分,加了一点音效
http://puu.sh/1WjXQ
多加了个文件。
mintong89
Mod as request~

[General]
有个无用的SB (Arrow.png) 还是我没下载完整?

[Shore]

00:11:768 (1) - 建议换note, 因为这里 00:11:890 - 要放个note来放hitsound. 不然感觉空空的.
00:26:524 (5,6,7,8,9) - 这种 56 在一个stack 然后 789 一个stack 感觉不好, 不然 56789 全部stack住或者 56 分开?

[猫喵]
hitsound (clap) 感觉有点大声..建议小声点

[刚大木]

00:16:524 (3) - 感觉可以 Ctrl+G
01:04:207 (7) - 建议删这个......放这个有点乱

other is no problem

nazi mod..orz
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

mintong89 wrote:

Mod as request~

[General]
有个无用的SB (Arrow.png) 还是我没下载完整? 本来打算做sb来着,不过后来还是放弃了.我重下了次,没有发现这个文件.上次应该删了

[Shore]

00:11:768 (1) - 建议换note, 因为这里 00:11:890 - 要放个note来放hitsound. 不然感觉空空的. 有点不清楚换了note以后要怎么改...
00:26:524 (5,6,7,8,9) - 这种 56 在一个stack 然后 789 一个stack 感觉不好, 不然 56789 全部stack住或者 56 分开? 稍微改了改

other is no problem

nazi mod..orz
Fushimi Rio
你确定easy没有忘记加BG?
edit:哦
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Eggache0 wrote:

你确定easy没有忘记加BG?
你确定你重新下载图了?
Gundam

mintong89 wrote:

Mod as request~

[刚大木]

00:16:524 (3) - 感觉可以 Ctrl+G - done
01:04:207 (7) - 建议删这个......放这个有点乱 - done 改成slider了
谢谢米桶神麻婆mod>.<

http://puu.sh/22sYc edit:http://puu.sh/22t43
Rotte
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore
ok,upload
Strawberry
  1. Inconsistent preview point in Rotte
  2. many unsnapped inherited sections in 3 Insane diffs.. i think you'd better fixed them at least the kiai time.


edit: previewpoint那里感觉是貌似改offset遗留的. 有几ms的误差 unsnapped指没有对齐到线上. 感觉也是因为改了offset然后没调
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Strawberry wrote:

  1. Inconsistent preview point in Rotte fix 可我这看是一致的orz
  2. many unsnapped inherited sections in 3 Insane diffs.. i think you'd better fixed them at least the kiai time.
kiai time都一致吧...unsnapped是什么真的看不懂;-;

英语看不懂

edit:all fix
Kotone
Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない
[General]
  1. Tag:Delete "DJMAX" since it's in Source;Add "misato" who is the singer.


[Easy]
  • 00:27:500 (1) - Delete the whistle of start point and add finish instead?Since the clearly finish sound here.
    00:27:500 (1) - (the end point)How about add whistle here?
    01:13:841 (3,1,2) - Sooo crowded.Move 2 to make them clearer:http://puu.sh/2mXd5


[Normal]
  1. AR-1 would be better imo
    00:28:963 (1) - Remove NC,the combo is too short
    00:47:012 (1) - Why dont add clap at the end point...?
    00:50:670 (1) - ^
    00:52:378 (4) - ^
    00:53:353 (2) - ^but start point
    00:57:743 (3) - ^end point
    00:48:719 (1) - Remove NC.Some of the combo is too short and they can be longer.
    00:55:792 (1) - Remove NC.Same reason.
    01:08:475 (1) - ^
    Patterns are fine


[Hard]
  • 00:07:256 (5,6) - A suggestion here: To correspond to(1,2,3,4),Make like this: http://puu.sh/2mXzi ...?
    00:13:841 (1,1) - Suggestion.Shorten the spinner to 00:14:817 - ,and add a circle at 00:15:061 - which cover (2),maybe like this:http://puu.sh/2mXMt .It would be more fit~.If you change this,dont forget add a clap at (1,2)
    00:34:573 (4,5,6) - To correspond to 00:38:231 (1,2,3,4) - ,Add new combo.
    00:37:256 (1) - Remove new combo.I cant see any reason to add new combo here.Anyway the combo is too short
    00:41:158 (1) - ^


[Gundam's Insane]
  1. AR-1.Since the bpm isnt fast,and the spacing of this difficultly aren't big,AR8 is too fast for this difficultly imo.
  2. CS-1...?Big circle in high difficultly looks so...stupid.
    00:13:841 (1) - For me,whistle would be more fit than finish.Finish is too strong here.
    00:15:061 (1,2) - ehh what dont add clap...?
    00:23:597 (1) - A finish is missing.
    00:27:256 (1) - ^at end point
    00:38:231 (4) - Add whistle sounds better.
    00:42:134 (6) - Add whistle at the end point.Since you have add at the same place before...
    00:45:792 (3) - ^
    00:47:012 (1) - A finish is missing.
    00:58:719 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ...A dont think it's a good way to do this.
    01:31:890 (1) - A finish....
    01:33:841 (1) - Add whistle...?


[Rotte]
很用心做可是。。。你認為這么可愛的歌適合這種有點偏奇葩的擺法么。。。至少我認為不太合適。
還有n-whistle也不適合吧。。
最後一個slider怎么聽也是白線停才對

[Shore]
  • 00:07:987 (1) - It is so strange to let clap and finish sound together...Delete clap...?
    00:13:841 (1) - ^
    00:09:817 (2) - Delete clap...?Too strong here imo.
    Nice difficultly.


圖不錯可是gd不太行。還有Gundam的patterns有點太單一了。

EDIT:忘了說Shore leadin不一樣。
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Kotone wrote:

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない
[General]
  1. Tag:Delete "DJMAX" since it's in Source;Add "misato" who is the singer.
tag删了djmax,misato是这个版本的演唱者,tsukasa是原版唱者.一开始我是在artist里用misato的,后来Curisu告诉我aitist用tsukasa比较合理(就像mf版本一样)所以我就用了在线的tag和aitist edit:在线→现在

[Easy]
  • 00:27:500 (1) - Delete the whistle of start point and add finish instead?Since the clearly finish sound here. ok
    00:27:500 (1) - (the end point)How about add whistle here?i think is ok.-.
    01:13:841 (3,1,2) - Sooo crowded.Move 2 to make them clearer:http://puu.sh/2mXd5 good,fix


[Normal]
  1. AR-1 would be better imo fix
    00:28:963 (1) - Remove NC,the combo is too short fix
    00:47:012 (1) - Why dont add clap at the end point...? fix,i leak it ;w;
    00:50:670 (1) - ^ is ok.-.
    00:52:378 (4) - ^ fix
    00:53:353 (2) - ^but start point fix
    00:57:743 (3) - ^end point fix
    00:48:719 (1) - Remove NC.Some of the combo is too short and they can be longer. fix
    00:55:792 (1) - Remove NC.Same reason. fix
    01:08:475 (1) - ^ fix
    Patterns are fine


[Hard]
  • 00:07:256 (5,6) - A suggestion here: To correspond to(1,2,3,4),Make like this: http://puu.sh/2mXzi ...? change some
    00:13:841 (1,1) - Suggestion.Shorten the spinner to 00:14:817 - ,and add a circle at 00:15:061 - which cover (2),maybe like this:http://puu.sh/2mXMt .It would be more fit~.If you change this,dont forget add a clap at (1,2) change,but i don't use your suggestion
    00:34:573 (4,5,6) - To correspond to 00:38:231 (1,2,3,4) - ,Add new combo. ok,fix
    00:37:256 (1) - Remove new combo.I cant see any reason to add new combo here.Anyway the combo is too short fix
    00:41:158 (1) - ^fix


[Shore]
  • 00:07:987 (1) - It is so strange to let clap and finish sound together...Delete clap...? same like 00:06:036 (3) - ,no change
    00:13:841 (1) - ^ ^
    00:09:817 (2) - Delete clap...?Too strong here imo. no change
    Nice difficultly. Thank you:3


圖不錯可是gd不太行。還有Gundam的patterns有點太單一了。

EDIT:忘了說Shore leadin不一樣。fix
Kotone
首先你要搞清楚一件事:Tsukasa是arranger而不是歌手,原版的歌手還是Misato,用Tsukasa做Artist的原因不是因為他是Singer,而是因為他是Arrganer,這點很重要。不是說要迫你改Artist,我只是想你搞清楚。Misato始終是歌手,加一個tag是很正常的,一點都不過分。
下次請你先查清楚歌曲的Singer/Arranger是誰,這兩個也是可以當作Artist的,但也不要搞混了,說Tsukasa是演唱者真的有點搞笑。
EDIT:誒那是我看漏了w
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Kotone wrote:

首先你要搞清楚一件事:Tsukasa是arranger而不是歌手,原版的歌手還是Misato,用Tsukasa做Artist的原因不是因為他是Singer,而是因為他是Arrganer,這點很重要。不是說要迫你改Artist,我只是想你搞清楚。Misato始終是歌手,加一個tag是很正常的,一點都不過分。
下次請你先查清楚歌曲的Singer/Arranger是誰,這兩個也是可以當作Artist的,但也不要搞混了,說Tsukasa是演唱者真的有點搞笑。
好吧我的确弄混了,但tag一直都有misato.
Gundam

Kotone wrote:

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない
[Gundam's Insane]
  1. AR-1.Since the bpm isnt fast,and the spacing of this difficultly aren't big,AR8 is too fast for this difficultly imo. no
  2. CS-1...?Big circle in high difficultly looks so...stupid. no
    00:13:841 (1) - For me,whistle would be more fit than finish.Finish is too strong here.
    00:15:061 (1,2) - ehh what dont add clap...?
    00:23:597 (1) - A finish is missing.
    00:27:256 (1) - ^at end point
    00:38:231 (4) - Add whistle sounds better.
    00:42:134 (6) - Add whistle at the end point.Since you have add at the same place before...
    00:45:792 (3) - ^
    00:47:012 (1) - A finish is missing.
    00:58:719 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ...A dont think it's a good way to do this.
    01:31:890 (1) - A finish....
    01:33:841 (1) - Add whistle...?

all fix
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