Pokie wrote:

:D 美里

Gundam wrote:

Done

Diff: http://puu.sh/1FOck

BG: http://puu.sh/1FOc2

edit:
顺便说说我觉得不太妥的地方

[Shore]
00:12:015 - (1) 不知道你这个对的什么节奏 建议取缔 你开25%听听背景音

[Hard]
00:50:917 - (1,2,3) 这么看实在有点不美观 不如用一个折返slider代替 我觉得还好，用滑条会破坏flow,有梗再说吧


就这两个地方 good luck star 十感

ps.如果我的diff实在拖后腿可以del 反对

1. Integrate NC color of all dif.

1. 00:04:088 (5) - add NC
2. 00:04:576 (1) - remove NC
3. 00:33:356 (1) - remove NC? Interval of NC is a little short, I feel. Just a suggestion.
4. 00:37:259 (1) - ^
5. 00:41:161 (1) - ^
6. 00:45:064 (1) - ^
7. 00:53:600 (3,4,1) - equalize value of Y
8. 01:20:185 (1) - remove NC? same as from 00:33:356 (1)
9. 01:24:088 (1) - ^
10. 01:27:990 (1) - ^

1. 00:17:746 (1) - remove "finish" sound. I feel it's a little loud.
2. 00:19:698 (1) - ^
3. 00:21:649 (1) - ^
4. 00:25:551 (1) - ^
5. 01:04:576 (1) - ^
6. 01:06:527 (1) - ^
7. 01:08:478 (1) - ^
8. 01:10:429 (1) - ^
9. 01:12:381 (1) - ^

1. 01:02:625 (1) - add "finish" at start of the slider.
2. 01:14:332 (1) - ^
3. 01:16:527 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I think 00:58:722 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) is good. But necessity is not felt here.
4. from 01:18:234 - Why is sampleset "drum"? I prefer if it's "soft".
5. 01:18:234 (1) - add soft-finish at start of slider.

1. 00:23:355 (1) - remove this?
2. 00:30:428 (3) - remove finish
3. 00:37:744 (1) - remove NC
4. 00:38:233 (2) - add NC
5. 00:41:892 (1) - remove NC
6. 00:42:136 (2) - add NC
7. from 01:20:672 - I don't feel necessity of frequent changing volume.
   I recommend removing these.
8. 01:32:380 (1) - end at 01:33:843

1. 00:17:746 (1) - remove "finish" at start of the slider.
2. 00:19:698 (3) - ^
3. 00:21:649 (1) - ^
4. 00:25:551 (1) - ^
5. 00:45:307 (2,3,4,5) - I feel this 1/6 beat is too suddenly and I can't feel necessity. I suggest 1/4 beat.
6. 00:54:088 (3,4,5,6) - ^
7. 01:06:527 (1) - remove "finish" at start of the slider.

Cah-m wrote:

Hello~ from #modreqs
I'm a newbie modder, so you can ignore my opinions if you don't like it.

[General]

1. Integrate NC color of all dif.

Done

[Normal]

1. 00:04:088 (5) - add NC fix
2. 00:04:576 (1) - remove NC fix
3. 00:33:356 (1) - remove NC? Interval of NC is a little short, I feel. Just a suggestion. fix
4. 00:37:259 (1) - ^ fix
5. 00:41:161 (1) - ^ fix
6. 00:45:064 (1) - ^ fix
7. 00:53:600 (3,4,1) - equalize value of Y fix
8. 01:20:185 (1) - remove NC? same as from 00:33:356 (1) fix
9. 01:24:088 (1) - ^ fix
10. 01:27:990 (1) - ^fix

[Hard]

1. 00:17:746 (1) - remove "finish" sound. I feel it's a little loud. fix
2. 00:19:698 (1) - ^ fix
3. 00:21:649 (1) - ^ fix
4. 00:25:551 (1) - ^ fix
5. 01:04:576 (1) - ^ fix
6. 01:06:527 (1) - ^ retention
7. 01:08:478 (1) - ^fix
8. 01:10:429 (1) - ^retention
9. 01:12:381 (1) - ^fix

[Shore]

1. 00:17:746 (1) - remove "finish" at start of the slider. fix
2. 00:19:698 (3) - ^ retention
3. 00:21:649 (1) - ^ fix
4. 00:25:551 (1) - ^ fix
5. 00:45:307 (2,3,4,5) - I feel this 1/6 beat is too suddenly and I can't feel necessity. I suggest 1/4 beat. fix
6. 00:54:088 (3,4,5,6) - ^ fix
7. 01:06:527 (1) - remove "finish" at start of the slider.no._.

Good Luck

Cah-m wrote:

Hello~ from #modreqs
I'm a newbie modder, so you can ignore my opinions if you don't like it.

[General]

1. Integrate NC color of all dif.

[Rotte]

1. 00:23:355 (1) - remove this? no
2. 00:30:428 (3) - remove finish fixed
3. 00:37:744 (1) - remove NC ok
4. 00:38:233 (2) - add NC ok
5. 00:41:892 (1) - remove NC not good
6. 00:42:136 (2) - add NC not good
7. from 01:20:672 - I don't feel necessity of frequent changing volume.
   I recommend removing these. It's bass
8. 01:32:380 (1) - end at 01:33:843 no

Good Luck

Natsu wrote:

Hi from M4M



Rotte:

SPOILER

00:42:624 remove NC ok~
Awesome work ( i was playing this one <3 )

Wow i love your map that is all i can suggest

Natsu wrote:

Hi from M4M

Normal:

SPOILER

00:19:698 Distance snap plz (So hard for new players) fix
00:21:649 ^ fix
00:26:039 ^ fix
00:53:844 I think this reverse slider is so complicate for new players fix
01:06:527 Distance snap fix

Really good diff just fix problems with distance remember this the esy diff on your map new player cant read some notes

Hard:

SPOILER

AR to 6 no,too hard
00:16:283 i think u should remove this one and make this 00:15:795 a little bigger fix
01:01:649 (2,3) - convert it in just one? i think is ok

that are just suggestions wow nice work

Shore:

SPOILER

00:08:844 (5,6) - i think u need to remove 6 and snap the slider in 00:08:970 no

Wow i love your map that is all i can suggest

Banana wrote:

Banana Here From 百度pending吧

[Shore]

为了鬼畜洗白用了和hard一样的减速梗呐..减速梗是指哪个...

00:02:868 (4) - 感觉ctrl+g绕圈圈更顺一点 不过看在洗白的面子上我只是提一下 fix,flow好就换了吧
00:18:722 (3) - 尾巴stack的都是clap 感觉尾巴的clap打不到有点不爽 交给我处理的话会note开头 跳接两个clap stack fix
00:36:283 (4) - 弯曲的程度有点大 另外似乎可以向下弯？fix
00:47:746 (2) - (1)的尾巴没包起来（似乎不好处理我也只是提一下.. fix
00:57:259 (4) - 向上弯 现在这样的话，接到下一个滑条会顺手点,虽然我不清楚你要我弯到多少度@_@

[Hard]

和Gundam商量下是他的改叫hard还是这个cs加一 I难度用大号圈感觉会被挑 应该不会

[Easy]

不会挑ez毛病于是没找到

喵

angelfix wrote:

[shore]
01:17:868 6,7,8 whistle fix
01:27:990 1,2,3 这里虽然是你特意摆的，但打上去不舒服 稍微改了点，但还是保持原样

[hard]
00:13:600 这个音还是放上去比较好 fix

[Normal]
fine

Cah-m wrote:

[Gundam's Insane]

1. 01:02:625 (1) - add "finish" at start of the slider. done
2. 01:14:332 (1) - ^ done
3. 01:16:527 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I think 00:58:722 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) is good. But necessity is not felt here. done
4. from 01:18:234 - Why is sampleset "drum"? I prefer if it's "soft". done
5. 01:18:234 (1) - add soft-finish at start of slider.

done

Natsu wrote:

Gundam's Insane:

00:52:137 this reverse slider look ugly (suggestion)
00:58:722 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - why alot of 1 x_x? I changed the distance spacing.
01:09:698 this slider look better in this position:

done

01:16:527 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - again why all the new combos done

Zero__wind wrote:

滚蛋's insane
开头一段没鼓点的部分 每个NC的地方加whistle……我知道你是跟了重音 不过总感觉whistle用这种加法有点奇怪……好吧 这个关系不大
00:02:868 (3,4) - 貌似没包好 done
00:12:381 (3,4) - ^ done
00:15:307 (1) - 头尾都加soft whistle done
00:15:795 (1) - 加soft finish done
00:20:429 (3,1) - 没stack好 done
00:36:283 (6,7) - 没包好 done
00:39:942 (3,4) - ^ 真心不太好看感觉 或许是要和前面的滑条保持弧度一致？…… 这里我也没啥梗改了_(:з」∠)_
01:02:625 (1) - 头上不加finishi？ done
嘛 目测这个diff开HD会好难 _(:з」∠)_多打几PC还是很简单的啦

Banana wrote:

Banana Here From 百度pending吧

[Gundam's Insane]

也许叫hard比较合适.. 我也这么觉得
00:00:429 (2) - 向下弯
00:45:795 (3) - 为了blanket的效果 这个滑条得稍微直一点
00:57:259 (4) - 这节两个是漏clap还是有意的
01:01:161 (2) - 向上弯
01:19:698 (4) - blanket

all done.

Strawberry wrote:

i'm worried about that this mapset isn't rankable because there are three Insanes..

Zero__wind wrote:

我又回来了 给不kd都随意了
夜里神智不太清楚 说错了的话就轻喷吧

改了名的小猫's diff 乐天猫都比这个好>_>
00:15:550 (3) - 建议去掉clap 这样留下哐哐两声比较像起拍 感觉还好
00:35:550 (2) - 或许把这个blanket的方向反过来变成）？ 改动较多
01:00:672 (1) - 歪了吧？右移1grid和下方的note对齐 没仔细看？这是个等腰三角形
01:08:233 - 加一个note吧 比如在(296,226)这个位置 这个是和前半段相配合
01:11:404 (4,5,1) - 好触0.0 <_<
最后一段的滑条画得很赞 小猫赛高 ww

Banana wrote:

Banana Here From 百度pending吧

[Rotte]

00:03:843 (2) - 声音有点大 考虑加个40或50的绿线 后面的红线clap类似 先保留
00:35:550 (2) - nazi 和下一个滑条靠太近了 考虑转个角度 改过在刚才的mod


喵 喵

Curisu wrote:

Yes we need more DJMAX


[小猫]
00:46:526 (3,4) - ...这里可以用低音量normal hitsounds做承接 嗯好
01:20:672 (6) - ...这个节奏是跟哪里? slider首拆分一下好些但是好像还是长了点 bass音

Curisu wrote:

Yes we need more DJMAX Yes

[General]
Artist: Tsukasa
我知道album ver.写的是美里但是最少CE和DMT都是写Tsukasa来着?
因为这不是长版所以这个应该跟游戏走..? 这个争议有点乱...我还是从了你好了

tag里也有Misato但是甚至没Tsukasa...? 已换

如果上面这条没改那么非罗马化的artist也不应该写成罗马音

[Shore]
Shoreline 我这id和那个图完全没任何关系...
01:05:795 (6) - 前挪1/4...? fix
01:14:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 节奏略奇怪...这里感觉1/2足够 就算不改节奏按照原key音更应该只摆1/2clap 我感觉还行...
01:16:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - finish overusing 部分降点vol fix
01:32:381 (1) - ...有点难读 感觉还好

qkenan wrote:

In red which refers to not matching the rule.Must be fixed
红色表示不符合规则，必须修正

In purple which refers to it deserving to be modified.Hope you seriously consider about them
紫色表示这值得修改，希望你能考虑一下

In blue which refers to my optional advice.Feel free to ignore them
蓝色表示纯个人意见，请随意

Mod Again~

[Gereral]
Rotte和Shore的BG一样呢……是有基情吗？ 不是,钢弹自己找了bg，当时小猫还没找bg而已

[Normal]
01:14:332 (1,1) - 唔，考虑到鼓点放个4/1的Spinner，然后从01:16:771 放3个1/1 ？想放5个1/2似乎难了些 没必要
00:58:722 ^ ^

[Hard]
00:40:429 (4,1) - Slider>Ctrl+G，之后的一个Circle放到现在的Slider尾部。觉得这样会圆滑一些 破坏flow
01:06:527 (1) - 做成向右边突的弧？有些连续的3、4个Slider弧如果能大体保持同样的时针顺序会舒服些，但是不强求 向右很不顺手啊...

[Shore]
00:13:844 (1) - 固然是为了做包Circle的形状，不过真不怎么好看 改动了下
00:45:064 (1,2) - NC从第二个开始。之前很长一段都是单点，这里出现3连还是用NC提醒下吧 没必要,都能读的
01:32:137 (7) - 不建议做遮挡，由于Slider一闪而现，却被之前的Circle挡住了头尾，无从判断转的方向…… fix

[Other]
没了……又能搞到几个CustomSE啥的我才不会说
[Over]

qkenan wrote:

In red which refers to not matching the rule.Must be fixed
红色表示不符合规则，必须修正

In purple which refers to it deserving to be modified.Hope you seriously consider about them
紫色表示这值得修改，希望你能考虑一下

In blue which refers to my optional advice.Feel free to ignore them
蓝色表示纯个人意见，请随意

Mod Again~

[Gereral]
Rotte和Shore的BG一样呢……是有基情吗？ 打死你>_>

[Rotte]
滑条很有想法
00:02:624 (2) - 这折了3次的Slider，比较突兀。还是折一下+1/2 Circle吧 嗯，这个不错
Nice Diff，属于1pc断几个，2pc能99%+FC的感觉，Jump很赞！

[Over]

S h i o n wrote:

差点忘记了...



[Rotte]
00:37:987 (6) - 感觉不应该跳的，参照00:33:841 (7,8,1,2) -
00:41:890 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ 建议和第一次出现的00:33:841 (7,8,1,2) - 摆成类似间距 nc上也是
01:04:329 (4) - 有点随即的空出一拍？ vocal可以跟 而且后面相同的位置01:06:280 (6) - 没空出来
01:08:231 (x) - ^
01:12:378 (2) - 这里不跳反而感觉奇怪 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/556745
01:17:987 (x) - 加note 和01:18:231 (1) - 叠一起
01:20:670 (1) - 这里到最后的音量忽上忽下的.. 没必要为了那个啥乐器特地降低到30%的音量吧 只有这一个我觉得不用ww其他全改了

S h i o n wrote:

差点忘记了...

[Shore]
00:13:475 (6) - 尾巴whistle 我这看是有whistle的...
nice diff ~

[Hard]
00:07:256 (6,7) - 这两个用 x1.0 spacing感觉flow更好 fix
00:15:304 (1) - 虽然是Hard 但转完圈的时间有点少 因为离中心远了点 考虑摆个和00:15:792 (1) - 有点联系的形状 然后放近点= =? fix
00:23:597 (1,2) - 00:19:695 (1,2) - 00:15:792 (1,2,3,4) - 这几组音效不同么..有的clap 有的whistle 我觉得没什么问题
01:32:378 (1) - 求心形 我找ar3商量下

[Normal]
00:22:622 (2,3,4) - 最低难度diff慎用.. 去掉(4)? fix
01:16:280 (1) - RNC. 顺便和前面的slider来个对称? fix
01:18:231 (1) - 头finish? fix
01:31:890 (1) - 求心形

S h i o n wrote:

[Gundam's Insane]
00:15:061 (x) - 不抓那个音? fix,add note
00:34:329 (6) - whistle? 尾或头都不错感觉.. fix,头尾都加了
others good

Strawberry wrote:

modded in-game

1. Preview Time is not same between diffs. You must fix it.

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi
found a issue. you must fix.

[Rotte]

1. Preview Time is not same between diffs. You must fix it.

gl

Eggache0 wrote:

感觉需要赶快先写个mod 不然寒假快到了贵阳人属性要爆发

[Easy]

00:11:890 (3) - NC ——Edit: 写错了 fix
好图！（炸

[Normal]

00:52:134 - 这弄个note
00:55:792 (3) - 后面的nc挪到这
01:13:109 - 这弄个note
all fix

[Hard]

00:03:109 - 这保持和前面节奏一样空下怎么样 这个你看看后面..就是一套节奏
00:19:695 (1) - 独立的一个3/4效果好像不太好 no
00:53:597 (2,3) - 这里的节奏似乎没必要吞掉00:54:805的音？把这俩都往后拖1/2 感觉还行

[Shore]

01:04:451 (8) - 去掉 把两段分开 善良点（炸 no~


综上 shiit map,give me kd
qishiwobudongzhongwen，shangmiandoushiwobiande，wobianbuxiaqule...

Eggache0 wrote:

[Gumd?m]（忘了

00:27:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 三角梗……放弃1的尾巴从2开始摆这样刚好摆到8？算了摆梗啥的我都不会 稍微改动了下
00:46:280 (4,5) - 怀疑摆歪了 没呢

YakumoYukari wrote:

感觉良好

要是有0108的滑条，加上DT有奇效 括弧笑

1. 小猫的bg size
2. djmax已经写在source 不知道要不要写tag（去问专业人士

wantuole wrote:

~
[General]

1. 小猫的bg size
2. djmax已经写在source 不知道要不要写tag（去问专业人士 我觉得去掉比较好

[Easy]
安全 不过那么多1/1滑条看着好水 in以下都不会弄;-;
[Normal]
00:47:012 (1,2) - 换点造型 fix
01:12:378 (1,2,3,4) - 转的太勉强了 fix
kiai感觉好多压白线 简易调整些节奏分布 我觉得还好吧
[Hard]
00:33:353 (3,4,5,6) -长slider之后突然小ds 感觉卡壳 感觉没问题
00:40:182 (2,3,4,5,6) - 不follow唱歌会更佳 改了，然后图变成4.51了真是忧伤

00:55:304 (1,2,3,4) - NC的位子怪怪的 意见是3NC 前面1取消NC 2不堆叠 fix
kiai依旧没亮点 滑水般的白线slider 其实这个难度在4.5的边缘，不敢大改动了
[Shore]
safe
00:04:817 (3) - 遮好更佳
00:12:500 (3) - ctrl+g 不像小猫难度一样当一个摆设梗用的话 还是把持ds为好 （还在前奏阶段 不要暴露你的鬼畜之心
00:54:085 (3) - remove whistle
01:04:451 (8) - remove8 明显的空节奏 加8多余了
all fix

就这些 good luck

wantuole wrote:

~
[General]
[list]
[*]小猫的bg size 弄了

[Rotte]
00:15:792 和
00:19:695 无用的绿线 添加了梗ww
01:11:890 (1) - 读图有点障碍 1pc很难发现这个1和之前是1/4间距 g回去了
01:14:817 (2) - ctrl+g？换了梗
01:24:573 (1) - 长白结束就可以了 01:26:036 +1 note bass音不变
01:32:378 (1) - ?为什么不是白线结束 仔细听听啦

增加了其他一些地方，修改了一小部分，加了一点音效