Thank you for reminding meNanika133 wrote:
I think that you have to move it to the Work In Progress Section because it's not finished yet.
Thank you for reminding meNanika133 wrote:
I think that you have to move it to the Work In Progress Section because it's not finished yet.
qkenan wrote:
In red which refers to not matching the rule.Must be fixed
红色表示不符合规则,必须修正
In purple which refers to it deserving to be modified.Hope you seriously consider about them
紫色表示这值得修改,希望你好好想一下
In blue which refers to my optional advice.Feel free to ignore them
蓝色表示纯个人意见,不爽可无视
[Gereral]
[Hard]
00:15:306 (2) - 此处是个加速的Slider,建议之后的一号Slider略偏往左偏一点,交个1/2这样 fix,想了想还是加个连打合适
00:32:380 (4) - 到 00:44:331 (4) - 为止十几秒,基本都在中心x轴及以下,往上面摆摆吧 其实这些无所谓的,不需要太在意
00:50:916 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ 同上
也就一点点感觉上的提议,做的很棒的 承蒙夸奖
[Shore]
同Hard,目测7成的Note都在水平线以下,偶尔才有几个上去,Ctrl+A之后尤为明显 同上
00:05:548 (5) - Ctrl+G 改成这样会不顺手
01:27:500 (6) - 如果是特意做的,那么就保留 当然是特意做的其实是没梗了
做的真的好棒的魂淡
[Other]
特此前来学习~lol
话说这是哪一代djmax里的,似乎没听过 我只玩过酷赖之味和黑色广场,这两作里面都有
[Over]
Thank you very much!Mr Color wrote:
Hey, that's a pretty nice map.
[Shore]
00:20:673 (5) - Move this away from 00:19:698 (3) - so that they don't overlap. fix
00:25:551 (1,2,3) - This isn't very readable or very fun; try these coordinates (for circles 2 and 3): x:460 y:264 and x:292 y:184 nice!
00:34:332 (3,4,5,6) - A cool idea with these would be to have very low spacing; like this: (You actually did this at 00:46:039 (1,2,3,4) - in the Hard difficulty and it was very cool) ok
00:38:234 (3,4,5,6) - Same as above, of course ^
00:42:137 (3,4,5,6) - And again ^
00:46:039 (6,7,8,9) - And once more. ^
00:49:942 (2,3,4,1) - This is pretty awkward to play, you can redo it like this fix,but i use other
composing
00:54:088 (5,6,7,8) - I can't really hear the 1/6 in the music here, do they really fit? If not, remove them. i think is ok,http://osu.ppy.sh/b/39401←djpop's insane same like add it
01:32:381 (1) - I know how sliderart can be difficult, especially for hearts. Try to find somebody that can help you make this look better. ok,i will
[Hard]
00:27:015 (3) - Instead of putting a circle here, you could just add a repeat to the previous slider. fix
00:27:990 (2) - Make the 1/4 spacing more obvious. This is a Hard, so you have to be really careful with that.emmm,sorry poor english,you mean is "make spacing shorter?" fix
01:30:917 (4) - I really think this would flow better if you reversed this slider. ok
[Normal]
00:23:112 (3) - I think stacked circles are better here (Normal players don't like short sliders) fix
00:34:820 - I think you could add a circle here, it's a bit empty otherwise fix
01:20:185 (1) - Why not make this symmetrical? There's a long time between this and the previous slider, so the player has time to catch it. fix
01:24:088 (1) - ^ i think is ok
01:27:990 (1,1) - These sliders are pretty ugly, you should change them ok
Very good map in general. I really like the flow. Good luck!
Thank you for your mod.a3272509123 wrote:
Hi~Requested in-game~~~~~
[General]有吗?...另外重下只是换了bg
- 懒得重新下一遍于是就没法看了D:
感觉timing略诡异?
[Normal]
- 总体没多大问题...但是有些地方节奏不是太准而且有些单调 这样改...感觉normal player会抓不好节奏.
- 00:00:186 (1,2,3) - 可以做成这样
- 00:30:917 (4) - 这个note不必要233 fix
- 00:46:527 (2) - clap fix
[Hard]
- 01:02:625 (1) - 头clap去掉
- 01:31:649 (5) - delete 会空出一个音...我跟的就是这个轨...
[Shore]
- 00:07:381 (5) - 这个note略多余 这里放三连不够合适 感觉还好,留着了
- 00:28:478 (3) - slider尾漏了个clap fix
- 00:46:527 (8) - add clap?会比较突然
- 00:52:868 (1,2,3) - 做成这样? fix
- 01:01:649 (1,3,4) - delete clap?
卧槽这效果有点厉害,考虑一下- 01:09:210 (1) - 这个NC有点莫名其妙233 fix
为了补血- 01:11:893 (1,2,3) - 节奏不太贴合音乐... 感觉还行
- 01:15:064 (7) - delete clap? 这clap的声音不适合放这种节奏
- 01:28:722 (4,5) - 直接换成1个1/1的slider吧 fix
- 01:31:649 (4) - unnecessary note 同hard
不错ww给个星~ 十感
瞎了果然好好看.[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
话说要调成什么样o.o
256,308,92381,6,0,P|328:276|380:188|344:128|276:132|256:176|256:176|236:132|172:128|128:196|168:276|280:324,1,540,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
waPokie wrote:
:D 美里
Gundam wrote:
Done
Diff: http://puu.sh/1FOck
BG: http://puu.sh/1FOc2
edit:
顺便说说我觉得不太妥的地方
[Shore]
00:12:015 - (1) 不知道你这个对的什么节奏 建议取缔 你开25%听听背景音
[Hard]
00:50:917 - (1,2,3) 这么看实在有点不美观 不如用一个折返slider代替 我觉得还好,用滑条会破坏flow,有梗再说吧
就这两个地方 good luck star 十感
ps.如果我的diff实在拖后腿可以del 反对
Thank you for your modCah-m wrote:
Hello~ from #modreqs
I'm a newbie modder, so you can ignore my opinions if you don't like it.
[General]Done
- Integrate NC color of all dif.
[Normal][Hard]
- 00:04:088 (5) - add NC fix
- 00:04:576 (1) - remove NC fix
- 00:33:356 (1) - remove NC? Interval of NC is a little short, I feel. Just a suggestion. fix
- 00:37:259 (1) - ^ fix
- 00:41:161 (1) - ^ fix
- 00:45:064 (1) - ^ fix
- 00:53:600 (3,4,1) - equalize value of Y fix
- 01:20:185 (1) - remove NC? same as from 00:33:356 (1) fix
- 01:24:088 (1) - ^ fix
- 01:27:990 (1) - ^fix
[Shore]
- 00:17:746 (1) - remove "finish" sound. I feel it's a little loud. fix
- 00:19:698 (1) - ^ fix
- 00:21:649 (1) - ^ fix
- 00:25:551 (1) - ^ fix
- 01:04:576 (1) - ^ fix
- 01:06:527 (1) - ^ retention
- 01:08:478 (1) - ^fix
- 01:10:429 (1) - ^retention
- 01:12:381 (1) - ^fix
- 00:17:746 (1) - remove "finish" at start of the slider. fix
- 00:19:698 (3) - ^ retention
- 00:21:649 (1) - ^ fix
- 00:25:551 (1) - ^ fix
- 00:45:307 (2,3,4,5) - I feel this 1/6 beat is too suddenly and I can't feel necessity. I suggest 1/4 beat. fix
- 00:54:088 (3,4,5,6) - ^ fix
- 01:06:527 (1) - remove "finish" at start of the slider.no._.
Good Luck
Cah-m wrote:
Hello~ from #modreqs
I'm a newbie modder, so you can ignore my opinions if you don't like it.
[General][Rotte]
- Integrate NC color of all dif.
- 00:23:355 (1) - remove this? no
- 00:30:428 (3) - remove finish fixed
- 00:37:744 (1) - remove NC ok
- 00:38:233 (2) - add NC ok
- 00:41:892 (1) - remove NC not good
- 00:42:136 (2) - add NC not good
- from 01:20:672 - I don't feel necessity of frequent changing volume.
I recommend removing these. It's bass- 01:32:380 (1) - end at 01:33:843 no
Good Luck
Natsu wrote:
Hi from M4M
Rotte:SPOILER00:42:624 remove NC ok~
Awesome work ( i was playing this one <3 )
Wow i love your map that is all i can suggest
Thank you for your modNatsu wrote:
Hi from M4M
Normal:SPOILER00:19:698 Distance snap plz (So hard for new players) fix
00:21:649 ^ fix
00:26:039 ^ fix
00:53:844 I think this reverse slider is so complicate for new players fix
01:06:527 Distance snap fix
Really good diff just fix problems with distance remember this the esy diff on your map new player cant read some notes
Hard:SPOILERAR to 6 no,too hard
00:16:283 i think u should remove this one and make this 00:15:795 a little bigger fix
01:01:649 (2,3) - convert it in just one? i think is ok
that are just suggestions wow nice work
Shore:SPOILER00:08:844 (5,6) - i think u need to remove 6 and snap the slider in 00:08:970 no
Wow i love your map that is all i can suggest
Thank you for your modBanana wrote:
Banana Here From 百度pending吧
[Shore]
为了鬼畜洗白用了和hard一样的减速梗呐..减速梗是指哪个...
00:02:868 (4) - 感觉ctrl+g绕圈圈更顺一点 不过看在洗白的面子上我只是提一下 fix,flow好就换了吧
00:18:722 (3) - 尾巴stack的都是clap 感觉尾巴的clap打不到有点不爽 交给我处理的话会note开头 跳接两个clap stack fix
00:36:283 (4) - 弯曲的程度有点大 另外似乎可以向下弯?fix
00:47:746 (2) - (1)的尾巴没包起来(似乎不好处理我也只是提一下.. fix
00:57:259 (4) - 向上弯 现在这样的话,接到下一个滑条会顺手点,虽然我不清楚你要我弯到多少度@_@
[Hard]
和Gundam商量下是他的改叫hard还是这个cs加一 I难度用大号圈感觉会被挑 应该不会
[Easy]
不会挑ez毛病于是没找到
喵
Thank you for your modangelfix wrote:
[shore]
01:17:868 6,7,8 whistle fix
01:27:990 1,2,3 这里虽然是你特意摆的,但打上去不舒服 稍微改了点,但还是保持原样
[hard]
00:13:600 这个音还是放上去比较好 fix
[Normal]
fine
Cah-m wrote:
[Gundam's Insane]done
- 01:02:625 (1) - add "finish" at start of the slider. done
- 01:14:332 (1) - ^ done
- 01:16:527 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I think 00:58:722 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) is good. But necessity is not felt here. done
- from 01:18:234 - Why is sampleset "drum"? I prefer if it's "soft". done
- 01:18:234 (1) - add soft-finish at start of slider.
Natsu wrote:
Gundam's Insane:
00:52:137 this reverse slider look ugly (suggestion)
00:58:722 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - why alot of 1 x_x? I changed the distance spacing.
01:09:698 this slider look better in this position:
done
01:16:527 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - again why all the new combos done
Zero__wind wrote:
滚蛋's insane
开头一段没鼓点的部分 每个NC的地方加whistle……我知道你是跟了重音 不过总感觉whistle用这种加法有点奇怪……好吧 这个关系不大
00:02:868 (3,4) - 貌似没包好 done
00:12:381 (3,4) - ^ done
00:15:307 (1) - 头尾都加soft whistle done
00:15:795 (1) - 加soft finish done
00:20:429 (3,1) - 没stack好 done
00:36:283 (6,7) - 没包好 done
00:39:942 (3,4) - ^ 真心不太好看感觉 或许是要和前面的滑条保持弧度一致?…… 这里我也没啥梗改了_(:з」∠)_
01:02:625 (1) - 头上不加finishi? done
嘛 目测这个diff开HD会好难 _(:з」∠)_多打几PC还是很简单的啦
Banana wrote:
Banana Here From 百度pending吧
[Gundam's Insane]
也许叫hard比较合适.. 我也这么觉得
00:00:429 (2) - 向下弯
00:45:795 (3) - 为了blanket的效果 这个滑条得稍微直一点
00:57:259 (4) - 这节两个是漏clap还是有意的
01:01:161 (2) - 向上弯
01:19:698 (4) - blanket
all done.
现在不是可以最多3个insane么Strawberry wrote:
i'm worried about that this mapset isn't rankable because there are three Insanes..
Zero__wind wrote:
我又回来了 给不kd都随意了
夜里神智不太清楚 说错了的话就轻喷吧
改了名的小猫's diff 乐天猫都比这个好>_>
00:15:550 (3) - 建议去掉clap 这样留下哐哐两声比较像起拍 感觉还好
00:35:550 (2) - 或许把这个blanket的方向反过来变成)? 改动较多
01:00:672 (1) - 歪了吧?右移1grid和下方的note对齐 没仔细看?这是个等腰三角形
01:08:233 - 加一个note吧 比如在(296,226)这个位置 这个是和前半段相配合
01:11:404 (4,5,1) - 好触0.0 <_<
最后一段的滑条画得很赞 小猫赛高 ww
Banana wrote:
Banana Here From 百度pending吧
[Rotte]
00:03:843 (2) - 声音有点大 考虑加个40或50的绿线 后面的红线clap类似 先保留
00:35:550 (2) - nazi 和下一个滑条靠太近了 考虑转个角度 改过在刚才的mod
喵 喵
Curisu wrote:
Yes we need more DJMAX
[小猫]
00:46:526 (3,4) - ...这里可以用低音量normal hitsounds做承接 嗯好
01:20:672 (6) - ...这个节奏是跟哪里? slider首拆分一下好些但是好像还是长了点 bass音
Curisu wrote:
Yes we need more DJMAX Yes
[General]
Artist: Tsukasa
我知道album ver.写的是美里但是最少CE和DMT都是写Tsukasa来着?
因为这不是长版所以这个应该跟游戏走..? 这个争议有点乱...我还是从了你好了
tag里也有Misato但是甚至没Tsukasa...? 已换
如果上面这条没改那么非罗马化的artist也不应该写成罗马音
[Shore]Shoreline我这id和那个图完全没任何关系...
01:05:795 (6) - 前挪1/4...? fix
01:14:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 节奏略奇怪...这里感觉1/2足够 就算不改节奏按照原key音更应该只摆1/2clap 我感觉还行...
01:16:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - finish overusing 部分降点vol fix
01:32:381 (1) - ...有点难读 感觉还好
Thx for mod :3qkenan wrote:
In red which refers to not matching the rule.Must be fixed
红色表示不符合规则,必须修正
In purple which refers to it deserving to be modified.Hope you seriously consider about them
紫色表示这值得修改,希望你能考虑一下
In blue which refers to my optional advice.Feel free to ignore them
蓝色表示纯个人意见,请随意
Mod Again~
[Gereral]
Rotte和Shore的BG一样呢……是有基情吗? 不是,钢弹自己找了bg,当时小猫还没找bg而已
[Normal]
01:14:332 (1,1) - 唔,考虑到鼓点放个4/1的Spinner,然后从01:16:771 放3个1/1 ?想放5个1/2似乎难了些没必要
00:58:722 ^ ^
[Hard]
00:40:429 (4,1) - Slider>Ctrl+G,之后的一个Circle放到现在的Slider尾部。觉得这样会圆滑一些 破坏flow
01:06:527 (1) - 做成向右边突的弧?有些连续的3、4个Slider弧如果能大体保持同样的时针顺序会舒服些,但是不强求 向右很不顺手啊...
[Shore]
00:13:844 (1) - 固然是为了做包Circle的形状,不过真不怎么好看 改动了下
00:45:064 (1,2) - NC从第二个开始。之前很长一段都是单点,这里出现3连还是用NC提醒下吧 没必要,都能读的
01:32:137 (7) - 不建议做遮挡,由于Slider一闪而现,却被之前的Circle挡住了头尾,无从判断转的方向…… fix
[Other]
没了……又能搞到几个CustomSE啥的我才不会说
[Over]
http://puu.sh/1IRXsqkenan wrote:
In red which refers to not matching the rule.Must be fixed
红色表示不符合规则,必须修正
In purple which refers to it deserving to be modified.Hope you seriously consider about them
紫色表示这值得修改,希望你能考虑一下
In blue which refers to my optional advice.Feel free to ignore them
蓝色表示纯个人意见,请随意
Mod Again~
[Gereral]
Rotte和Shore的BG一样呢……是有基情吗? 打死你>_>
[Rotte]滑条很有想法
00:02:624 (2) - 这折了3次的Slider,比较突兀。还是折一下+1/2 Circle吧 嗯,这个不错
Nice Diff,属于1pc断几个,2pc能99%+FC的感觉,Jump很赞!
[Over]
http://puu.sh/1JMd5S h i o n wrote:
差点忘记了...
[Rotte]
00:37:987 (6) - 感觉不应该跳的,参照00:33:841 (7,8,1,2) -
00:41:890 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ 建议和第一次出现的00:33:841 (7,8,1,2) - 摆成类似间距 nc上也是
01:04:329 (4) - 有点随即的空出一拍? vocal可以跟 而且后面相同的位置01:06:280 (6) - 没空出来
01:08:231 (x) - ^
01:12:378 (2) - 这里不跳反而感觉奇怪 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/556745
01:17:987 (x) - 加note 和01:18:231 (1) - 叠一起
01:20:670 (1) - 这里到最后的音量忽上忽下的.. 没必要为了那个啥乐器特地降低到30%的音量吧 只有这一个我觉得不用ww其他全改了
Thank you for your mod~S h i o n wrote:
差点忘记了...
[Shore]
00:13:475 (6) - 尾巴whistle 我这看是有whistle的...
nice diff ~
[Hard]
00:07:256 (6,7) - 这两个用 x1.0 spacing感觉flow更好 fix
00:15:304 (1) - 虽然是Hard 但转完圈的时间有点少 因为离中心远了点 考虑摆个和00:15:792 (1) - 有点联系的形状 然后放近点= =? fix
00:23:597 (1,2) - 00:19:695 (1,2) - 00:15:792 (1,2,3,4) - 这几组音效不同么..有的clap 有的whistle 我觉得没什么问题
01:32:378 (1) - 求心形 我找ar3商量下
[Normal]
00:22:622 (2,3,4) - 最低难度diff慎用.. 去掉(4)? fix
01:16:280 (1) - RNC. 顺便和前面的slider来个对称? fix
01:18:231 (1) - 头finish? fix
01:31:890 (1) - 求心形
帮钢弹代打S h i o n wrote:
[Gundam's Insane]
00:15:061 (x) - 不抓那个音? fix,add note
00:34:329 (6) - whistle? 尾或头都不错感觉.. fix,头尾都加了
others good