Hi ~ scanter ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions
OK ~ That's all ~ Not bad for your 1st map and nice song ~
Call me back ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions
[General]
- Add 'opening' in tags,and remove Anime,it's unneed.
- 01:23:139 - #2 kiai time end to here is better.
- 02:38:775 - #4 kiai time end to here is better.
- 03:34:048 - #5 kiai time end to here is better.
[Insane]
- 00:19:866 (6) - Make more blanket to here,here is code.
276,332,19866,2,0,P|372:320|408:244,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,180,20411,1,0,0:0:0:0: - 00:47:866 (1,2,3,4,5) - I guess here is overmapped.
- 03:23:502 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
- 01:26:048 - Add clap with 40% volume,sound much better.
- 03:36:593 - ^
- 02:33:957 (6) - Remove circle,sound better to me.
- 03:09:139 (2) - Move to X:440 Y:240,03:08:775 (1) - symmetrical.
- 03:10:411 (2) - Move 2 grid right,03:10:048 (1) - symmetrical.
[Hard]
- 01:26:048 - Same as Insane.
- 03:36:593 - ^
- 01:55:502 (2,3,5) - You'd better to make the circle here symmetrical.
- 02:50:775 (1,3) - Same as above.
- 03:07:139 (1,2) - ^
- 03:10:048 (1,2) - ^
- 03:31:139 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
- 03:08:775 (1) - Move 1 grid right to center.
[HabiHolic's Normal]
- AR+1 for better diff spread.
- 01:46:411 (1,2,3) - You'd better to make these notes symmetrical.
- 02:58:411 (1) - Remove short new combo.
- 02:59:139 (1) - The spinner should end to 03:00:957,and add clap with 40% volume.
- 03:52:957 - Remove doubled green line.
[-iCo-'s Easy]
- 01:06:957 (2) - Shorten to 01:07:866 - ,sound much better.
- 02:32:957 (1) - Shorten to 02:35:139 - and remove clap.
OK ~ That's all ~ Not bad for your 1st map and nice song ~
Call me back ~