Frostmourne wrote:

Recheck

-iCo-'s Easy
timing is wrong , red section must start consistently with other diffs, so you must move the first red line from 00:00:235 to 00:00:230
don't forget to move other green lines with red line too and resnap all notes properly
02:12:598 (1) - add new combo
03:15:507 (2) - clap
03:15:871 (3) - clap tail
03:42:053 (3) - clap tail
03:44:962 (3) - clap both head tail

HabiHolic's Normal
02:22:229 (2) - move to x:212 y:320 to fit the spacing
02:58:411 (1) - clap head
03:23:866 (3) - clap the end of this slider (last point)
03:31:866 (2) - clap on repeat point
03:40:411 (2) - clap end of this slider
03:45:684 (4) - clap end of this slider

Hard
02:58:775 (10) - remove whistle only head here
03:38:957 (8) - move to x:256 y:340 to fit this spacing

Insane
00:27:775 (11) - add note here , to correspond with 00:24:866 (2) - , it's kind of overmapping but it's ok
00:28:593 (3,5) - remove finish from both 2 notes, their volumes are too low to have these finishes
00:30:957 (2) - remove whistle
00:32:775 (9) - remove whistle only head
00:33:502 (11) - remove whistle
00:33:866 (2) - remove whistle
00:35:684 (9) - remove whistle only tail
00:36:411 (11) - remove whistle
00:36:775 (2) - remove whistle
00:45:139 (5) - remove finish
00:56:320 (2) - change to whistle
00:56:411 (3) - change to whistle
01:46:775 (3) - only clap on the head (remove whistle only)
01:48:411 (2) - remove whistle on the head
01:50:593 (2) - remove whistle on the tail
01:51:320 (2) - remove whistle on the tail
01:52:593 (3) - remove whistle only from the head
02:01:320 (3) - remove whistle from the head
snap this green line 123784 to 123775 because it affects game play
02:24:229 (1) - move right 1 grid for better curve
02:27:139 (6) - remove whistle on the tail
03:36:957 (1) - add new combo
02:53:320 (3) - add whistle
03:26:048 (6) - add whistle
03:30:411 (1,5) - add clap for these 2 notes
03:46:411 (6,7) - remove both whistle and add note at 03:46:502 on x:136 y:144 and add clap at 03:46:593 (8) -

I'm really glad that UnitedWeSin,HelloSCV and Hinsvar helped improve for the hitsounds really really well

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ scanter ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Add 'opening' in tags,and remove Anime,it's unneed.
2. 01:23:139 - #2 kiai time end to here is better.
3. 02:38:775 - #4 kiai time end to here is better.
4. 03:34:048 - #5 kiai time end to here is better.

[Insane]

1. 00:19:866 (6) - Make more blanket to here,here is code.
   

   276,332,19866,2,0,P|372:320|408:244,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   476,180,20411,1,0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:47:866 (1,2,3,4,5) - I guess here is overmapped.
3. 03:23:502 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
4. 01:26:048 - Add clap with 40% volume,sound much better.
5. 03:36:593 - ^
6. 02:33:957 (6) - Remove circle,sound better to me.
7. 03:09:139 (2) - Move to X:440 Y:240,03:08:775 (1) - symmetrical.
8. 03:10:411 (2) - Move 2 grid right,03:10:048 (1) - symmetrical.

[Hard]

1. 01:26:048 - Same as Insane.
2. 03:36:593 - ^
3. 01:55:502 (2,3,5) - You'd better to make the circle here symmetrical.
4. 02:50:775 (1,3) - Same as above.
5. 03:07:139 (1,2) - ^
6. 03:10:048 (1,2) - ^
7. 03:31:139 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
8. 03:08:775 (1) - Move 1 grid right to center.

[HabiHolic's Normal]

1. AR+1 for better diff spread.
2. 01:46:411 (1,2,3) - You'd better to make these notes symmetrical.
3. 02:58:411 (1) - Remove short new combo.
4. 02:59:139 (1) - The spinner should end to 03:00:957,and add clap with 40% volume.
5. 03:52:957 - Remove doubled green line.

[-iCo-'s Easy]

1. 01:06:957 (2) - Shorten to 01:07:866 - ,sound much better.
2. 02:32:957 (1) - Shorten to 02:35:139 - and remove clap.

OK ~ That's all ~ Not bad for your 1st map and nice song ~

Call me back ~

Frostmourne wrote:

congratz for the first ranked map : )