Tsusuko wrote:

Done!

That was so much fun.

http://puu.sh/1GBCf

1. 00:07:110 (1,2) - maybe try putting the claps of each slider at the reverse instead? either way works i guess
2. 00:14:100 (3) - NC, to stay consistent with 00:23:420 -
3. 00:46:721 (1) - add finish at the end

1. 00:10:896 (2) - i understand why you made 1/2 slider here but 1/1 slider sounds better to the ears at first glance
2. 00:34:343 (3) - remove note to stay on consistent rhythm
3. 00:56:042 (1,2) - make into 1/2 slider instead?

1. 00:34:780 - think about adding a note here..
2. 00:38:129 (5) - remove the finish at the end of this slider. it sounds out of place . (but if you still want the finish there, soft finish might sound better..but i'd remove it anyway lol)
3. 00:47:304 (3,4) - move further away? i pressed on these too early on first play
4. 00:50:508 (6) - add clap at the beginning of the slider

1. 00:28:954 (4) - ctrl+G? optional though
2. 00:50:799 (4) - this is not perfectly stacked with 00:50:071 (1) -

yanlu wrote:

14:03 yanlu: [easy] 00:04:780 (1,2,3)-
14:04 yanlu: 怎麼都覺得哪裡怪怪的...就這邊而已　She thinks 00:04:780 (1,2,3) - kinda weird
14:04 yanlu: :/

~~以下的不是IRC mod~~~

[Normal]
00:21:673 (3)- 同 00:19:343 (2)- 的建議><　No change
00:24:586 (4,5,6)- 改成這樣呢? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546769　^
00:34:343 (3)- 可以刪掉 三連在這有點趕　Fixed
00:51:819 (2)- ^　Fixed
00:52:692- 倒是這裡可以加ww　Okay, added
00:56:042 (1,2)- 換成slider ?　Changed

[Insane445]
00:17:595 (1)- 跟00:16:430 (1)- 的頭沒有疊好　stack perfectly with 00:16:430 (1)
00:28:954 (4)- 轉向?跟 00:28:081 (1,2)- 一樣是來回的~　ctrl+g, so it would be the same as 00:28:081 (1,2)
00:57:789 (2,3)- 太彎而且...這樣很容易miss在這邊;w;　too curved, therefore it's easy to miss this part
00:41:770 (1)- 放這裡讓移動有點怪怪的我覺得啦>_<　feels weird when putting this note here (her opinion)
00:50:799 (4)- 沒疊好　stack perfectly
就這樣了><翻譯麻煩了>3<

Gina加油~~偷射星星xD

yanlu wrote:

[Insane445]
00:17:595 (1)- 跟00:16:430 (1)- 的頭沒有疊好　stack perfectly with 00:16:430 (1) Not stacked on purpose, easier to read this way.
00:28:954 (4)- 轉向?跟 00:28:081 (1,2)- 一樣是來回的~　ctrl+g, so it would be the same as 00:28:081 (1,2) I want it to be different to the previous sliders.
00:57:789 (2,3)- 太彎而且...這樣很容易miss在這邊;w;　too curved, therefore it's easy to miss this part The slider bounding box is well over the slider. The slider can be held anywhere and still give 300.
00:41:770 (1)- 放這裡讓移動有點怪怪的我覺得啦>_<　feels weird when putting this note here (her opinion) It's to highlight the voice
00:50:799 (4)- 沒疊好　stack perfectly If I stacked perfectly stack leniency would do something stupid

meiikyuu wrote:

Insane445

1. 00:28:954 (4) - ctrl+G? optional though Something about the vocals makes me want to move it forwards and not change direction. IDK what it is O_O
2. 00:50:799 (4) - this is not perfectly stacked with 00:50:071 (1) - Avoiding stack leniency problems

meiikyuu wrote:

LunarSakuya's replacement modder~　Thanks for modding this map for her xD

Normal

1. 00:10:896 (2) - i understand why you made 1/2 slider here but 1/1 slider sounds better to the ears at first glance　Fixed
2. 00:34:343 (3) - remove note to stay on consistent rhythm　No change
3. 00:56:042 (1,2) - make into 1/2 slider instead?　Fixed

Hard

1. 00:34:780 - think about adding a note here..　Sure, added
2. 00:38:129 (5) - remove the finish at the end of this slider. it sounds out of place . (but if you still want the finish there, soft finish might sound better..but i'd remove it anyway lol)　Fixed
3. 00:47:304 (3,4) - move further away? i pressed on these too early on first play　Nope, sorry /:
4. 00:50:508 (6) - add clap at the beginning of the slider　Fixed

nice song , gl (:　Thank you <3

tutuhaha wrote:

Enable countdown and Letterbox during breaks
close them ^　Fixed

[Hard]
00:04:780 (1,2) - 这个真的很容易看成跳哎　No change
00:09:440 (2) - NC从这里开始　Fixed
00:10:314 (7) - 这后面的节奏应该是这样吧...　I'm not following the drum, so no change
00:12:935 (5) - NC　Fixed
00:14:974 (5) - 这个折返手感不好..　No change
一般折返的话我是放在长白线上的Orz...
00:29:974 (7) - delete，前面都空着这里突然密集感觉很奇怪Orz　Fixed
00:30:265 (2) - NC从这里开始　No change
00:53:275 (6) - delete　Nope /:
有些红线起头的slider玩起来手感不好
还有AR+1，看起来太密了　Fixed

[Normal]
00:23:420 (1,2) - 这俩总觉得太近了　Fixed ... not really, I just moved 2 up a little
00:24:440 (3) - delete　Fixed
00:59:974 (1) - 不是在01:02:814 (X) - 结束么？　Fixed
作为normal，间距太宽了-_-......　LOLLLLL

[Easy]
00:59:974 (1) - End on 01:02:814 (X) - 　Fixed this for him since this is an easy fix xD

记得M4M啊亲╭(╯3╰)╮　OK OK LOL

tutuhaha wrote:

[Insane]
00:10:022 (4) - I think there maybe can make a small jump ._. I think it's reasonable how it is, it's shorter than the previous as well
00:17:595 (1) - move to x202 y134 [dont open grid snap] Avoiding full stacking
00:40:751 (4) - maybe delete this note Lyrics
00:47:304 (4) - ctrl+g? That would be awkward to play
00:52:838 (2) - ^ This pattern is meant to be the same but rotated slightly and moved

y u c a wrote:

Insane445
00:11:770 (1) - ahh finish here Nothing in the song is emphasized, so I don't want to put a finish there.
00:58:663 (2) - and 00:59:246 (4) - no sound here. so remove them? sound better for me There are two sounds here, the lyrics and the guitar

y u c a wrote:

combo color:green and blue hard to play x.x try change other color?　I make them darker now, hopefully they look well

normal

00:10:896 (2) - start should be 00:10:751 to follow drum sound　un un, true, demo too hard for beginners I think, so no change
00:46:721 (1) - try kore?　kore mo too hard wwww dakara still no chage orz

SPOILER

hard

00:09:440 (1) ~ better for me try this?　I'm not following the drums, so no change ;w;

SPOILER

00:11:770 (1) - add finish　Fixed
00:58:372 (1) - try this?　I follow vocal there, so no change /:

SPOILER

ganbare~ 　Arigato yuca-chan w

kanpakyin wrote:

臥嘈...這個笑翻了 233

raririn wrote:

kanpakyin wrote:

臥嘈...這個笑翻了 233

EmPao wrote:

GiNa 早安/　六小時前我還在睡覺lol

渣mod來了

[General]
Good.

[Normal]
00:10:751 - 這樣如何: http://puu.sh/1HZJs , follow the drum　Okay, fixed

[Hard]
00:10:314 (6) - 改成這樣如何 看起來不會那麼擠 : http://puu.sh/1I03Y　Fixed
00:30:848 、 00:33:178 - 總覺得這裡應該要加note 跟著歌詞,打起來也比較順　Added

Good Map!
Nice Job~

渣mod結束　觸手必須死

bug sniper wrote:

I'm glad someone is mapping this song, and I like its lyrics. As for my comments, they are below.

Medium Mode:
Some of the sliders move very fast and are hard to get 300 on, like #1 at 00:39:731. Perhaps make this one straighter and slower.　I don't get this ;w;

Hard Mode:
This map is as difficult as a typical insane map. Consider reducing the number of notes in this map, or making another difficulty between this and normal.　Mostly are 1/2 only, so I guess this will do, but I still did a little change

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi! Mods are suggestions only, if you disagree please say something besides no.

Normal:
00:04:780 (1,2) - Ctrl + G timeline pattern? It really sounds better like I mentioned above on easy.　Fixed
00:24:586 (3,2) - Overlap here looks funky. Perhaps Ctrl + G pattern at 00:25:751 (1,2,3,4) ? If you do, just space 00:28:081 (1) - and combo after properly.　Fixed
00:30:411 (1,2) - Do a Ctrl + G timeline pattern? Sorry! orz. I just don't like it when slider starts on tick 2 or 4 when tick 1 sounds so much better. T.T　Fixed
00:35:071 (1,2) - ^? 　Not for this one, I kinda want to do a note-slider-note-slider pattern here and it actually plays well
00:41:770 (1,2) - Swap NC. 1 is still same line as 00:39:731 (1,2,3). And consistent NC pattern　No, the NC is to follow the lyrics

Hard:
Perhaps AR7? I see that the jump from AR is quite high from normal to hard.　Fixed, but OD+1
00:08:857 (7,2) - Perhaps moving 2 somewhere else? Overlap looks weird to me. D:　Fixed
00:41:770 (1) - I'm not really sure what's with this anti jump especially since combo before and after this is spaced properly. Maybe move it to
x:404 y:68 and remove NC?　No, I followed the lyrics there
00:45:848 (1) - Remove this NC for consistent NC pattern　^

LunarSakuya wrote:

me　ME

General
is good　xDDDDD

Normal
00:46:721 (1) - Soft Finish sounds better imo　Fixed
00:52:547 (3,4) - Make a slider maybe, stream feels a bit fast for beginners　I think they'll be fine, so no change (I'm so evil LOL)
00:53:712 (1,2) - ^　^
01:00:119 (1) - Lower volume at end (if you do theres the other diffs ofc)　We good with this, no change

Hard
00:06:090 (4,5,6) - Try this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/578856　Fixed
00:11:187 (7) - Move this note to the next white tick, finish fits there imo　Aw, I don't get this ;w;
00:54:003 (2) - Something like this for a circle-ish pattern? lol might be messy though http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/578858　I think this is too confusing, so no change xD

Cute map!! xD Good luck!　Thanks me <3

SkyDevil wrote:

y u no have ranked this yet

Charles445 wrote:

Hooray, updated!

bug sniper wrote:

It's too bad this map had to go into the graveyard. I was really looking forward to it.

Charles445 wrote:

Cool, it;'s revived

Could you put a whistle at 00:46:721 - on my diff please? Thx

InC0nceNtrateD wrote:

Insane

00:28:954 (4,1,2) - Strg+ G to 4, Swap 1,2 in timeline, awesome to play. IIRC this was pointed out before, I still want the 3 and 4 to be moving the same direction to contrast with the 1 and 2 that came before it
00:50:799 (4) - Correct x: 359, y:207 for perfect stack with end of 1. Hmm, not sure if this is worth changing. It might give hidden folk a harder time and could potentially throw off the spacing here, but it would look better. Going to avoid changing it for now.
00:57:789 (2,3) - Make a stream here? Map only has one stream and it's short, I want to keep this diff simple and more focused on movement and aiming.
01:00:119 (1) - Same as in hard. I like the spinner going DONK at the end, it also needs a spinner in the map