Hi! From your forum NM/M4M taiko queue.
I am pretty thorough, so don't be annoyed if I point out a lot of issues. A lot of times they are just my opinions, so feel free to object to them. :3
After looking through my mod, would you mind taking the time to check out
my taiko set? <3
d = don
k = katsu
D = big don
K = big katsu
[General]
I've noticed you used both whistle and clap sounds for your k... They both sound the same when played. Try to think of k as a clap instead of a whistle.
[Muzukashii]
00:13:881 (4) - move to 00:13:660 , match synth
00:14:433 (6) - move to 00:14:653 , ^
00:23:587 (4,5,6) - change to d d d, match previous pattern
00:30:646 (18,19) - change to k k, no need for K since there's no particular emphasis in the music
00:32:852 (6,7) - change to d k, match melody pitch
00:35:940 (18) - change to d, match melody pitch
00:40:793 (1) - change to k, match melody pitch
00:40:793 (1,2,3) , 00:42:557 (1,2,3) , 00:44:322 (8,9,10) , 00:47:852 (7,8,9) , 00:49:616 (1,2,3) , 00:51:381 (8,9,10) - these should all be kdd/dkk, matching vocal pitch
00:52:705 (1) - move to 00:53:146 , and add d at original position
01:03:293 (25) - change to k, match synth
01:09:249 (2) - remove, no matching note in music
01:16:528 (3,3) - consider changing to k, match synth
01:22:484 (5) - change to k, match previous pattern
01:31:969 (11) - change to k, match vocal pitch
01:34:837 (7) - change to d, ^
01:35:719 and 01:36:160 - add d, match vocals and synth
01:50:940 (17,18,19) - change to either kdk or kdd, match vocals
01:51:381 (1) - I would prefer changing it from this
to this
to match synth rhythm
01:58:440 (15) - similar to above
02:02:852 (11) - move to 02:03:072 , match rhythm
02:03:293 (12) - move to 02:03:293 , ^
02:03:734 (13) - move to 02:03:955 , ^
[Oni]
00:13:219 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - run can be changed to ddd kdd, to better match synth
00:14:984 (18) - move to 00:14:874 , match synth rhythm
00:16:749 - add d, match synth
00:18:513 - add d, ^
00:19:396 - add d, ^
00:30:646 - this gap is kinda awkward, I would recommend adding some 1/2 notes
00:35:719 (117,118,119) - change to ddd, match 00:33:955 (108,109)
00:39:028 (130,131,132) - move to 00:38:807 to match vocal rhythm
00:42:337 - add d, match vocals
00:52:705 (1) - see Muzukashii
01:03:293 (50) - change to k, match vocals pitch and synth note
01:08:587 (1) to 01:17:410 (41) - bit of a monotonous run, try removing some notes and adding some 1/4 patterns in
01:18:734 (46,47,48,49) - I would prefer this to be d ddk, to match previous pattern
01:21:602 (61,69) - change to k, match synth
01:22:705 (71) - move to 01:22:925 to match synth
01:31:528 (124,126) - change to d, match previous pattern
01:50:940 (246,247) - change to k d, match vocal pitch
01:58:881 (286,289) - remove these note, match synth rhythm
02:02:852 - I would prefer changing it from this
to this
to match synth offbeat rhythm.
There you go! Not a bad taiko map, there's definitely room for improvement though. Hope you find this mod helpful, and good luck beatmapping!