1. Easy (1,84 stars, 79 notes)
2. Fields (4,99 stars, 243 notes)
3. Lies Channel (4,97 stars, 217 notes)
4. Wolf's Normal (4,1 stars, 128 notes)

Beautiful Lies wrote:

Buena cancion (: pero aqui unos pequeños problemas que te pueden ayudar
[00:03:910] La nota está en un lugar de poca precision ( linea azul en 1/4 ) Arreglado
[00:04:413] El slider termina en una linea azul y suena mal Arreglado un poco
[00:09:608] El slider empieza un poco tarde Arreglado
[00:11:368] Slider empieza antes de que empieze a cantar y suena un poco raro Arreglado, lo remplacé con circles
[00:18:994]-[00:20:502] notas descordinadas Arreglado
[00:31:061] empieza retrasado el slider ( lo mismo con [0:31:731] y [00:32:569] ) Arreglado

Bueno esos son algunos errores pero se arreglan facilmente pero tambien quedan más, trata de sacarlos de las lineas azules y colocarlos en lineas blancas y/o rojas y tambien donde terminan los sliders ojo con eso.

Casi termino la diff. porsiacaso (: si hay más errores ayuden porfavor

XinCrin wrote:

Para mostrar mi apoyo a los mappers latinoamericanos ahi te dejo una estrella

L-Len wrote:

I'm not good at english. So maybe you can't understand these..
No problem! i understand anyway


[Easy]

00:32:653 (2) - how about start at 00:32:988 and add a note at 00:32:653 ? Fixed

00:36:675 - how about add a note here? Fixed

00:39:022 (4) - how about use reverse one more and end 00:40:027 ? Fixed

01:21:424 (2) - I think end at 01:23:770 Fixed

[Normar]

00:13:547 (1) - slider end at 00:13:882 Fixed

00:21:675 (5) - start at 00:21:592 Fixed

01:11:201 (2) - move at 01:11:033 Fixed

[Lies Channel]

00:26:787 (1) - remove this and add a note at 00:26:955 Fixed

00:40:027 (6,7,8) - Ctrl + G Fixed, but im not sure

00:46:396 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - only slider? It's so boring I think Lies needs to fix it

01:02:821 (9) - New combo~ Fixed

01:04:999 (16) - New combo~ Fixed

01:10:195 (5) - how about move at 01:10:027 ? Fixed

01:16:899 (1) - New combo is better I think Fixed

01:21:424 (5) - New combo~

[Fields]

00:08:016 (6,7,8,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move 00:08:016 (6) at 00:08:184 and 00:08:351 (7,8,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) is same with 00:08:016 (6) | like this -http://puu.sh/1B7mn -| and add a note at 00:08:016 Yup

00:09:023 (1) - remove New combo Yes

00:13:379 (1) - remove New combo Yes

00:25:279 (1) - remove New combo Yes

00:30:307 , 00:30:642 - how about add a note? Added

00:33:323 (1) - slider end at 00:33:659 Fixed

00:35:670 (1,2,3) - how about this? - http://puu.sh/1B7t3 I'm not sure

00:43:379 (1) - start at 00:43:044 Fixed

00:44:050 (1) - remove New combo and start at 00:43:715 Fixed, thanks!

00:44:553 (2) - start at 00:44:385. use reverse and slider end at 00:45:055 Fixed, useful

01:11:201 (8) - remove No

01:11:536 - add a note and remove 01:11:703 (2) Fixed

01:12:541 - add a note Fixed

-Cloudchaser wrote:

L-Len wrote:

I'm not good at english. So maybe you can't understand these..
No problem! i understand anyway


[Easy]

00:32:653 (2) - how about start at 00:32:988 and add a note at 00:32:653 ? Fixed

00:36:675 - how about add a note here? Fixed

00:39:022 (4) - how about use reverse one more and end 00:40:027 ? Fixed

01:21:424 (2) - I think end at 01:23:770 Fixed

[Normar]

00:13:547 (1) - slider end at 00:13:882 Fixed

00:21:675 (5) - start at 00:21:592 Fixed

01:11:201 (2) - move at 01:11:033 Fixed - not fixed..check it please

[Lies Channel]

00:26:787 (1) - remove this and add a note at 00:26:955 Fixed

00:40:027 (6,7,8) - Ctrl + G Fixed, but im not sure - ah,,I mean this - http://puu.sh/1Bc9H

00:46:396 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - only slider? It's so boring I think Lies needs to fix it

01:02:821 (9) - New combo~ Fixed

01:04:999 (16) - New combo~ Fixed

01:10:195 (5) - how about move at 01:10:027 ? Fixed

01:16:899 (1) - New combo is better I think Fixed

01:21:424 (5) - New combo~

[Fields]

00:08:016 (6,7,8,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move 00:08:016 (6) at 00:08:184 and 00:08:351 (7,8,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) is same with 00:08:016 (6) | like this -http://puu.sh/1B7mn -| and add a note at 00:08:016 Yup - I mean this.. (http://puu.sh/1Bckk → http://puu.sh/1Bclu)

00:09:023 (1) - remove New combo Yes

00:13:379 (1) - remove New combo Yes

00:25:279 (1) - remove New combo Yes

00:30:307 , 00:30:642 - how about add a note? Added - Not Added..check it please

00:33:323 (1) - slider end at 00:33:659 Fixed

00:35:670 (1,2,3) - how about this? - http://puu.sh/1B7t3 I'm not sure

00:43:379 (1) - start at 00:43:044 Fixed

00:44:050 (1) - remove New combo and start at 00:43:715 Fixed, thanks!

00:44:553 (2) - start at 00:44:385. use reverse and slider end at 00:45:055 Fixed, useful

01:11:201 (8) - remove No

01:11:536 - add a note and remove 01:11:703 (2) Fixed

01:12:541 - add a note Fixed

Thanks you!! very useful
take ur kudos

kajiyatta wrote:

from PM
General
the artist is not LiSa but LiSA. you should fix it.
this hit sounds hears a bit weird. you can put something at back beat (like 2,4 in below picture)

SPOILER

...sorry I give up this map... maybe I only pick up Unrankble stuffs.
Easy
Easy diff should be same spacing for newbie. this mean you shouldn't change Distant snap in this diff.
and don't change the speed of slider.
so I suppose this diff needs remapping.
Placement
00:02:150(2) if you aim to make blanket, you can make more beautiful.

SPOILER

00:18:575(5,6,7) stack isn't good in this diff for newbie. maybe you can avoid and replace better.
Rythem
00:10:865 unnecessary green line
00:46:731 too soon after a spinner for the easiest diff.
01:08:519^

Normal
same as Easy. you shouldn't change spacing rapidly and don't change the speed of slider.
Placement
00:17:234(2,3,4) this overlapped doesn't seem good and difficult for newbie.
Rythem
00:30:642 not good. you should change another rythem

Lies Channel
please use distant snap positively. so weird I played.
Placement
00:18:910(3) this slider isn't visiable, you should replace it.
00:45:726(6) weird spacing
01:12:541(5) unexpected slider.
Rythem
00:30:977(1) ×0.50 doesn't fit to music.
Hit Sonud
00:05:167(3) delete finish

please patient my careless modding. but I don't keep my potensial. maybe you can see mny Ranked maps in this song and it's helpful for your map.

-Kirito wrote:

Hi~ my chat mod time
sorry, I'm late a lot.

[General]
Green lines to fit on the line.

[Easy]
00:03:156 (1) - 00:03:491 - move
00:28:463 - Spinner add? (00:30:307 - End)
00:32:988 (2) - 00:33:994 Slider end
00:40:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - confusing.
01:15:893 (1,2,3) - very hard (Difficult than Easy. )
01:18:575 (1,2,1) - arrangement code

SPOILER

120,240,78575,6,0,P|264:360|392:224,2,399.999961853028,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,208,81592,2,0,P|112:144|112:48|208:0|256:64|256:64|304:0|400:48|400:144|256:208,1,599.999942779541,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,83938,12,0,88631,0:0:0

01:23:938 (1) - Spinner is the same for all difficulty

[Normal]
CS -1
SV -0.2 fast
00:01:480 (2) - Slider head clap add
00:02:821 (4) - clap add
00:06:173 (1) - Slider head finishi add
00:30:642 - ~ 00:34:999 -

SPOILER

00:42:709 - circle add
00:49:413 (1) - Slider head clap
00:51:424 (5) - Slide the tail section Clap remove
00:52:094 (1) - clap add
00:53:435 (4) - clap
00:56:787 (5) - Slide the tail section Finishi
00:57:458 (1) - clap
00:58:798 (1) - ^
00:59:804 (2) - Slide the tail section Clap
01:00:474 (3) - ^
01:01:145 (4) - Clap remove
01:15:893 (1,2,3,4) -

SPOILER

01:17:904 - circle add and clap
01:18:240 - circle add
01:23:268 (1) - Easy with the same

[Lies Channel]
00:42:120 - Object isn't Snapped
00:14:217 (3) - Slider head clap remove and Slide the tail section Clap add
00:15:893 - ~ 00:21:592 - x1.0 chenge
00:38:351 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fit on the line.
00:41:396 (8) - ^
00:43:044 (1,2,3) - Slider Arrow add?
00:45:391 (5) - Clap add
00:45:726 (6) - NC and clap remove
00:45:894 (7) - clap remove
00:49:078 (9) - NC
00:51:424 - circle add
00:51:592 (1) - 00:51:759 - move
00:54:776 (7,8) - distance
00:57:122 (4) - NC
00:58:463 (10) - ^
00:59:804 (1) - Remove, Spinner is too short. (1/1 slider Arrow add)
01:02:485 (8) - finishi add
01:03:659 (4,6) - clap remove
01:14:553 (1) - ^
01:17:234 (1) - remove and 01:17:904 - circle add
01:23:938 (1) - Easy with the same

[Fields]
00:01:480 (2) - clap add
00:02:318 - circle and clap add
00:02:485 (5) - Slide the tail section clap
00:03:240 (8) - 00:03:407 - move
00:09:022 (1) - Slider head clap remove
00:12:206 (5) - Please set the white lines.
00:30:307 - 1/1 Slidr add
00:37:849 (6,7,8) - distance x0.7
00:32:318 (4) - Stream chenge
00:45:391 (1) - remove and 1/2 slider add?
00:45:726 - , 00:45:893 - , 00:46:061 - want to use the contents of the above
00:46:085 - Green line is deleted
00:48:910 (3,4) - distance
00:49:078 - circle
00:52:765 (1) - clap
00:53:435 (1) - Slide the tail section clap remove
00:54:776 (6) - clap
00:54:273 (3) - clap remove
01:15:893 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - distance
01:17:904 - circle add
01:22:765 (4) - ^
01:23:351 (1) - Easy with the same


good lucky~ ranked hope!

P o M u T a wrote:

tag vocaloid Hatsune Miku Sword Art Online Opening add.
so Source removed vocaloid.
rule:Vocaloid names must never go in Artist or Source instead use the composer of said song with Vocaloid as Artist, the Vocaloid name can go in the tags, more info: p/1767683

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi ! M4M

General

Delete these ones, they are not needed, so delete them

PLUS the applause-sample

Also "ranking-D-small.png" doesnt fit the skin, try to find the one which was already part of the skin.
Here are unnecessary timing points, delete them if not in use
You have a lot of spacing mistakes, try to fix them!
Due to the speed of the song, all diffs are too hard imo, reduce the difficultie spread by making the distance spacing lower.
AudioLeadIn: 993 is not right, make it 1000, you change that on every map in the .osu file almost at the top

Easy

General
The speed of the sliders is a bit too fast imo. Maybe reduce it?

00:24:273 (1) - Spacing mistake, place it somewhere further away from the preview element
00:27:290 (4,5,6) - The first circle isnt visible enough, and also its an odd playing, Ctrl + J them and put them under the slider
00:33:994 (1) - Remove NC add on next element
00:43:715 (1) - Spacing mistake, place it next to the preview object to make the beginners not confused as well
00:56:117 (1) - ^ also 00:56:117 (1) - Remove NC add on next element
01:00:809 (1) - ^ (not combo ofc )
01:04:832 (7) - Place this circle under the preview slider and put the next slider (purple) onto the moved circle
01:06:843 (1) - Spinner is too short for beginners, try making more elements instead, also you need to give at least 1 white tick space fot the player to prepare for the next element
01:09:525 (3) - Spacing mistake again, fix it
01:10:195 (4,5) - Breaks the flow and doesnt fit the music, try to make a reserved arrow slider
01:15:893 (1) - Spacing mistake again, fix it
01:21:592 (2) - ^

Normal

00:11:536 (1) - Spacing mistake, put it further away
00:16:564 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest to not overlapp them on Easy or Normal diffs, fix it
00:20:921 (4) - You cant see the slider perfectly due to preview one, move it
00:22:262 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + H them to adjust them to the preview slider, plays better
00:24:273 (1) - Dont do this on Easy or Normal diffs, its too sudden for the beginners and might cause a miss. Also spacing mistake
00:25:614 (1) - Spacing mistake again, move it
00:30:977 (1) - ^
00:27:960 (1,2,3,4) - This breaks the flow of the song and doesnt fit together with the vocal, add a spinner instead
00:38:351 (1) - Spacing mistake
00:41:703 (5) - Breaks the flow and doesnt fit with the vocal, i also suggest to not use these kind of sliders in either Normal or Easy maps
00:44:050 (2) - Spacing mistake
00:45:055 (1) - This spinner is too short again, see the Easy, i explained already
00:48:742 (2) - Dont overlapp these sliders, move this one further away
00:49:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - Dont overlapp again, also they arent perfectly matched on each other
00:56:787 (5) - ^
00:58:798 (1) - Remove NC
01:01:480 (5) - Doesnt fit the vocal, try something else
01:03:491 (3) - Spacing mistake
01:04:832 (1) - I suggest putting a circle at 01:04:832 - and then move the slider a half beat away to 01:05:167 - then delete this slider 01:05:837 (2) - and add a circle at 01:06:508 - suits much better Just try it
01:06:843 (1,2) - Doesnt fit again, try something different?
01:08:184 (1) - Spacing mistake
01:15:893 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is too confusing for player due to spacing and style of pattern, try something else
01:23:268 (1) - Remove NC

Hard

General
Reduce the slider velocity, since the song is already fast and this speed makes it even more harder
Also reduce the diff spread, HP Drain and AR are way too high, lower them to at least 1-2 points less

00:05:502 (1) - This spinner is definately too short, remove it and place a slider
00:11:536 (1) - Spacing mistake, move this slider further away too make it more visible
00:11:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This whole pattern does either suit the map or goes with the song, also its too hard for a Hard diff, try something else
00:15:223 (7) - The vocal starts at 00:15:391 - not at 00:15:223 - fix this
00:17:904 (1,3) - Dont overlapp them, they are not visible and also its not rankable
00:19:580 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - This is an Insane diff pattern, avoid it and dont use it in this map diff
00:22:262 (1) - Spacing mistake
00:30:977 - At this part, map to the vocal, for example make the slider start here 00:33:994 -
00:34:664 (1) - Remove NC
00:38:351 - Sudden speed change is unexpected
00:38:351 (5) - NC
00:41:396 (6) - Dont overlapp
00:45:391 (5,6,7,8) - Spacing mistake, fix this
00:46:396 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:51:592 (1) - ^
00:54:273 (5,6,7,8) - ^
00:56:620 (2) - Dont put this circle under the preview slider, its not visible and unrankable
00:58:463 (10) - NC
00:59:804 (1) - Spinner is too short, replace it with something else
From now on, too many spacing mistakes, try to fixed them!

Insane

General
Too many spacing mistakes, try to fix them
Lower the HP Drain and AR to make it easier and also descrease the Slider Velocity and distance spacing, these are way to high!
I like the SV and i decrease a little the AR and HP drain :3

Try to fix the spacing on this diff, then send me a PM and i will recheck ok? This doesnt make sense if i mod it now

Good luck with fixing!

Keyboard Cat wrote:

mod irc

ya sabes, te seguire modeando tus custiones para que sea tu mapa rankeado y seas una maper coqueta y loca hahah
mi pequeña bitch



sfwc

http://puu.sh/1MafD

18:34 Keyboard Cat: yo te ayudare weona oh
18:34 -Cloudchaser: BASTI GAY
18:34 Keyboard Cat: ahi te modeare
18:34 Keyboard Cat: todos tus hueas

The hunterx wrote:

Aqui te dejo otra estrella para que se rankee luego tu mapa

K i A i wrote:

[skin]
hitcircleselect - this is unnecessary object.. plz remove it ok
sliderb - how about change this sliderball to more natural thing?
hum, ok

[sb]
-objects are unnecessarily too large. if u can cut the size of image, plz cut it to fit the image.. (this is impact for the 'SB Load')
-how about use this object at the start of 'Kiai Time'? => 'ring'
-can't find this object that was used of sb. plz remove it. => BG1aa, 1.1, 2, (SB)3, (SB)4, (SB)5, (SB)6, (SB)7, (SB)8, (SB)9, 1a, 11, 12, 13, 14, (SB)storyboarby, aa-10, white, 10 ill remake the sb :3 cuz i don't like 100%
=> if you changed these object's path(name), plz change your sb's path(name) of 'osb' file..
-these objects are unused objects(standing only on visible objects) => BG3aa(01:19:078) / thanks(01:31:724)
k


u must used 'Distance Snap' when you mapping 'Easy', 'Normal' diff..
i think it's better that remap your 'Easy', and 'Normal' diff..
nevertheless, if you want to save your current mapset, follow my mod.
but, i'll never mention of 'Distance'.. thank you for your your patience.


[easy]
these sliders are has some error.. so adjust it plz
00:00:809 (1) -
00:11:536 (1) -
00:13:212 (1) -
00:14:553 (3) -
00:15:893 (1) -
00:17:234 (3) -
00:32:988 (2) -
00:34:999 (3) -
00:37:011 (6) -
00:39:022 (4) -
01:00:809 (5,1,2,3,4,5) -
01:08:519 (1) -
---
00:02:150 (4) - this slider will be end at this time => 00:02:821
00:17:234 (3) - make this slider more faltly
00:27:625 (3) - ^

[normal]
00:01:480 (1) - remove NC
00:02:485 (1) - ^
00:07:178 (1) - ^
00:08:184 (1) - ^
00:12:206 (1,1,1) - ^
00:15:223 (1,1) - ^
00:17:904 (1,1) - ^
00:20:251 (1,1,1) - ^
00:22:262 (1,1) - how about make these sliders roundly?
00:22:932 (1,1,1) - ^
00:24:944 (3) - NC
00:25:279 (1,1) - remove NC
00:26:620 (1) - ^
00:27:625 (2) - NC
00:39:692 (5,1) - this note has overlapped on snap.. so adjust it plz

[ies channel]
00:17:904 (1,3) - how about change pattern?
00:21:592 (3) - make this slider 1 reverse
00:38:351 ~ 00:45:726 - Kiai Time is unnecessary at this time.. remove it plz
00:41:396 (6) - this slider has some error.. so adjust it plz

[fields]
OD +1
00:34:329 (5) - how about make this slider flatly?
00:52:094 (3,4) - how about make these sliders to symmetry of these notes? => 00:51:424 (1,2) -
00:57:038 (12) - remove finish sound
00:57:122 (13) - add finish sound


GL