Good Luck Kyshiro
Thanks lolThoomyyxD wrote:
Good Luck Kyshiro
Fixed everything, Sorry again >:wcx19911123 wrote:
[Fine]
02:21:667 (1) - this slider is nearly out of the screen, hope you can change the shape to avoid this
02:43:307 (1) - how about make these claps sound like 01:06:913 (1) - ? would be much better
[Exquisite]
OD4 and HD4 is too low as a Hard diff, I suggest to set them both to 6
00:12:692 (2) - this slider is vocal off, how about to cancel the repeat on this slider, and then add a slider from 00:13:060 - to 00:13:306 - ?
[Epic]
03:06:421 (6) - this slider is out of the screen(if your computer's resolution is 4:3), this must to be fixed
call me back then
Thanks :3wcx19911123 wrote:
fine now
rebubbled
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Thanksmancusojuanmattos wrote:
I'm here!
[Fine:]
• Settings:
--> I'd increase the Circle Size in 1 tick to make the diff. a bit more enjoyable. It is a difficulty full of long Sliders, with these big notes the diff. will be pretty simple even to Beginners. In addition, will make the gap between Fine and Superior more correct (CS+1) Allright
--> I'd increase the Overall difficulty in 1 tick, for a better diff. spread as well (OD+1) ^
• 00:17:241 (1) - *Nazi* I'm pretty sure you can re-arrange this Slider, looks kinda weird to me actually No thats not for me
• 00:27:077 (x) - Cover better the singer vocal if you remove the Note (4) in 00:27:568 and instead of that you add a Slider. That Slider have to start in 00:27:077 and have to finish in 00:27:568 ^ I want to keep it
• 00:30:519 (x) - I suggest you at least to follow vocals in this easy, it is pretty simple as I said before. So, try adding a Note here please Same rhythm gonna be weird so ''no'' thanks
• 00:37:896 (2) - Hmm.. Add a New Combo here to emphasize the Kiai/chorus beginning Okey.
• 00:39:864 (1,2) - The New Combo in (1) doesn't feel really important and necessary, instead I think that it is more interesting if you add the New Combo in (2). So, would be better if you remove the New Combo in (1) and add it in (2) instead Okey.
• 00:53:634 (2) - Fits better with the vocal, if you add a New Combo here. Okey.
• 00:55:109 (4) - After that, remove this New Combo, and add it in 00:57:568 (2) Okey.
• 00:58:552 (3) - *A bit Nazi* - For a better transition, I'd make this Slider curvy. A simple curvy like this one is ok: Okey.
• 01:47:732 (4) - (^) No ; You have to reckon with hp bar for this slider.
• 02:21:667 (1) - This pattern flows much better if you do Reverse Selection (Ctrl+G) in this Slider. Don't forget to fix the spacing after to do that Its okay
• 02:33:470 (3) - Add a New Combo here, it follows pretty good your comboing in general, and makes sense due to the vocal changes key
• 02:37:896 (2) - Add a New Combo here to emphasize the Kiai/chorus beginning K
- Nice map in general. Your comboing looks weird sometimes, for that reason my mod is Combo suggestions in general ((:P))
Thanks :3 everything's updated/fixedmancusojuanmattos wrote:
I'm here!
[General:]
• I would like to give you another normal-slidertick.wav file. Your file it is ok, but it doesn't sound suitable at all since it only has the Normal Hit-clap sound. In return, this one it is a combined file with the Normal hit-clap + the Normal sampleset, so I think that sounds better than yours. If you add this one in your folder, you should reduce the volume by 10% in the sections where you use is because it sounds a bit high. Anyways, I highly suggest you to use this one Applied
• Tags: Add California 37 here, since you don't have anything related to the song in the tags. Added
[Superior:]
• 01:10:847 - At least in this Normal, I suggest you at least a break, looking that the song is pretty long. I think an average player need a rest moment, you can add a break here (as Helldawn's did in his diff.) or you can take naraku's suggest if you want. But.. I highly suggest you to make that change It really hurts my ass to remove parts of my map lololol, but yeah you're right, I've put a break after the first kiai now
Rest fixed too
- I personally dislike the constant 1/2 usage as I mentioned in the mod. You could fix a bit the diff. spread if you fix those points mentioned in my mod, hope you can understand all of them.
[Exquisite:]
• 00:24:126 (2) - That note is almost out of screen, and it plays kinda bad for this. I'd re-arrange this pattern a bit, you could try something like this (Code with (1,2): Fixed, but a bit differentScreenshoot + Code• 01:47:732 (3,4) - I'd compressed this pattern a bit more, as you did in the rest of the map. I mean, reduce the spacing between these objects till 0.1x Fixed24,184,23880,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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- A lot of 3/4 Sliders.. Meh.. I don't have anything in front them
[Epic:]
• Yeah, enjoyable diff. but..
LOL'd, yeah, I got inspired by a map which used a lot of 3/4
I had to do that xD. Anyways, as I said you in Epic, I don't have problem with them
Well, that's all for now.
Good mapset in general, but the changes in Superior and Fine are pretty necessary imo
Call me back then
20:17 mancusojuanmattos: Hi (?
20:25 Kyshiro: hai
20:26 mancusojuanmattos: I have some little things to say you, can I talk it them here?
20:26 Kyshiro: oh yeah sure
20:27 mancusojuanmattos: in Epic
20:28 mancusojuanmattos: 00:12:077 (2,3,4,5) - Flows awkwardly to me, looking the jump i think that plays better 1/4 sliders
20:28 mancusojuanmattos: instead of single notes
20:28 Kyshiro: hm yeah, that works too
20:29 Kyshiro: fixed
20:30 mancusojuanmattos: 00:18:224 (3) - looks better if you move this 1 grid down (yeah, nazi xD)
20:30 Kyshiro: naziiii
20:30 Kyshiro: but yeah, you're right lol
20:30 Kyshiro: fixed
20:31 mancusojuanmattos: 01:28:060 (4) - Reduce the slider length in 1/4, and add a note in 01:28:429 -
20:32 mancusojuanmattos: I think the beat in 01:28:306 needs a note
20:32 Kyshiro: yeah it does
20:33 mancusojuanmattos: done?
20:33 Kyshiro: fixed yeah
20:34 mancusojuanmattos: 01:30:519 (5) - This should be a single note instead of a 1/4 Slider, I listened the music in 25% and I couldn't percive any sound in 01:30:642-
20:34 mancusojuanmattos: 01:30:519 (5) - This should be a single note instead of a 1/4 Slider, I listened the music in 25% and I couldn't percive any sound in 01:30:642-
20:35 Kyshiro: okay fixed
20:35 mancusojuanmattos: 01:38:388 (1) - Same thing here, there is no sound in 01:38:511 -
20:36 mancusojuanmattos: so, I'd use 2 Notes over the downbeat and the next red tick
20:36 Kyshiro: meh
20:36 Kyshiro: this kind of works as a tripple though
20:36 mancusojuanmattos: it doesn't to me.. It sounded kinda weird the 1st time that I played the map
20:36 mancusojuanmattos: I thought that it was just me..
20:37 mancusojuanmattos: but listening the music in 25% I could find this bad usage of 1/4 :/
20:37 Kyshiro: well okay, fixed it
20:39 mancusojuanmattos: 01:54:126 (1,2) - Just wondering if this overlap is intentional, because looks a bit weird.
20:39 Kyshiro: wtf
20:39 Kyshiro: idk what happened there, not intentional
20:39 mancusojuanmattos: I thought so xD
20:40 Kyshiro: alright fixed
20:41 mancusojuanmattos: that's should be all in this diff.
20:41 mancusojuanmattos: I rechecked the other diffs, and they looks in order too
20:41 mancusojuanmattos: so, you can update
20:41 Kyshiro: alright :3
20:42 Kyshiro: updated
damnit.. Why not just rank it? The map is obviously ready and definitely good.mancusojuanmattos wrote:
IRC Recheck in Epic20:17 mancusojuanmattos: Hi (?
20:25 Kyshiro: hai
20:26 mancusojuanmattos: I have some little things to say you, can I talk it them here?
20:26 Kyshiro: oh yeah sure
20:27 mancusojuanmattos: in Epic
20:28 mancusojuanmattos: 00:12:077 (2,3,4,5) - Flows awkwardly to me, looking the jump i think that plays better 1/4 sliders
20:28 mancusojuanmattos: instead of single notes
20:28 Kyshiro: hm yeah, that works too
20:29 Kyshiro: fixed
20:30 mancusojuanmattos: 00:18:224 (3) - looks better if you move this 1 grid down (yeah, nazi xD)
20:30 Kyshiro: naziiii
20:30 Kyshiro: but yeah, you're right lol
20:30 Kyshiro: fixed
20:31 mancusojuanmattos: 01:28:060 (4) - Reduce the slider length in 1/4, and add a note in 01:28:429 -
20:32 mancusojuanmattos: I think the beat in 01:28:306 needs a note
20:32 Kyshiro: yeah it does
20:33 mancusojuanmattos: done?
20:33 Kyshiro: fixed yeah
20:34 mancusojuanmattos: 01:30:519 (5) - This should be a single note instead of a 1/4 Slider, I listened the music in 25% and I couldn't percive any sound in 01:30:642-
20:34 mancusojuanmattos: 01:30:519 (5) - This should be a single note instead of a 1/4 Slider, I listened the music in 25% and I couldn't percive any sound in 01:30:642-
20:35 Kyshiro: okay fixed
20:35 mancusojuanmattos: 01:38:388 (1) - Same thing here, there is no sound in 01:38:511 -
20:36 mancusojuanmattos: so, I'd use 2 Notes over the downbeat and the next red tick
20:36 Kyshiro: meh
20:36 Kyshiro: this kind of works as a tripple though
20:36 mancusojuanmattos: it doesn't to me.. It sounded kinda weird the 1st time that I played the map
20:36 mancusojuanmattos: I thought that it was just me..
20:37 mancusojuanmattos: but listening the music in 25% I could find this bad usage of 1/4 :/
20:37 Kyshiro: well okay, fixed it
20:39 mancusojuanmattos: 01:54:126 (1,2) - Just wondering if this overlap is intentional, because looks a bit weird.
20:39 Kyshiro: wtf
20:39 Kyshiro: idk what happened there, not intentional
20:39 mancusojuanmattos: I thought so xD
20:40 Kyshiro: alright fixed
20:41 mancusojuanmattos: that's should be all in this diff.
20:41 mancusojuanmattos: I rechecked the other diffs, and they looks in order too
20:41 mancusojuanmattos: so, you can update
20:41 Kyshiro: alright :3
20:42 Kyshiro: updated
I really want to rank this map, but I think we had to make important changes especially in 'Superior' (and some in Epic too).
So, here is your Bubbled restored!
Hope to see this map ranked soon!
idk but i'll stop asking bats, they'll just pop for the lulz and rebubbleAyu wrote:
damnit.. Why not just rank it? The map is obviously ready and definitely good.mancusojuanmattos wrote:
IRC Recheck in Epic20:17 mancusojuanmattos: Hi (?
20:25 Kyshiro: hai
20:26 mancusojuanmattos: I have some little things to say you, can I talk it them here?
20:26 Kyshiro: oh yeah sure
20:27 mancusojuanmattos: in Epic
20:28 mancusojuanmattos: 00:12:077 (2,3,4,5) - Flows awkwardly to me, looking the jump i think that plays better 1/4 sliders
20:28 mancusojuanmattos: instead of single notes
20:28 Kyshiro: hm yeah, that works too
20:29 Kyshiro: fixed
20:30 mancusojuanmattos: 00:18:224 (3) - looks better if you move this 1 grid down (yeah, nazi xD)
20:30 Kyshiro: naziiii
20:30 Kyshiro: but yeah, you're right lol
20:30 Kyshiro: fixed
20:31 mancusojuanmattos: 01:28:060 (4) - Reduce the slider length in 1/4, and add a note in 01:28:429 -
20:32 mancusojuanmattos: I think the beat in 01:28:306 needs a note
20:32 Kyshiro: yeah it does
20:33 mancusojuanmattos: done?
20:33 Kyshiro: fixed yeah
20:34 mancusojuanmattos: 01:30:519 (5) - This should be a single note instead of a 1/4 Slider, I listened the music in 25% and I couldn't percive any sound in 01:30:642-
20:34 mancusojuanmattos: 01:30:519 (5) - This should be a single note instead of a 1/4 Slider, I listened the music in 25% and I couldn't percive any sound in 01:30:642-
20:35 Kyshiro: okay fixed
20:35 mancusojuanmattos: 01:38:388 (1) - Same thing here, there is no sound in 01:38:511 -
20:36 mancusojuanmattos: so, I'd use 2 Notes over the downbeat and the next red tick
20:36 Kyshiro: meh
20:36 Kyshiro: this kind of works as a tripple though
20:36 mancusojuanmattos: it doesn't to me.. It sounded kinda weird the 1st time that I played the map
20:36 mancusojuanmattos: I thought that it was just me..
20:37 mancusojuanmattos: but listening the music in 25% I could find this bad usage of 1/4 :/
20:37 Kyshiro: well okay, fixed it
20:39 mancusojuanmattos: 01:54:126 (1,2) - Just wondering if this overlap is intentional, because looks a bit weird.
20:39 Kyshiro: wtf
20:39 Kyshiro: idk what happened there, not intentional
20:39 mancusojuanmattos: I thought so xD
20:40 Kyshiro: alright fixed
20:41 mancusojuanmattos: that's should be all in this diff.
20:41 mancusojuanmattos: I rechecked the other diffs, and they looks in order too
20:41 mancusojuanmattos: so, you can update
20:41 Kyshiro: alright :3
20:42 Kyshiro: updated
I really want to rank this map, but I think we had to make important changes especially in 'Superior' (and some in Epic too).
So, here is your Bubbled restored!
Hope to see this map ranked soon!
o3oKyshiro wrote:
idk but i'll stop asking bats, they'll just pop for the lulz and rebubble
Audio sounds fine to me. o.oMashley wrote:
Audio quality sounds really low. It's technically 192kbps but it sounds a lot lower to me and the mp3 filename suggests to me that it was ripped from a youtube video. It's not up to standard and you should find a better one.
The audio really sounds fine to me with headphones as well as speakers, I'll try and look for a better quality and see if there's any difference though.Mashley wrote:
Audio quality sounds really low. It's technically 192kbps but it sounds a lot lower to me and the mp3 filename suggests to me that it was ripped from a youtube video. It's not up to standard and you should find a better one.
As for the mapping, I'm not doing a proper mod but your spacing on [Epic] is frustratingly inconsistent; for example, why is 01:30:519 (5) - different from the usual pattern of putting the 1/4s closer?
No the audio really needs to be replaced. You might not be as sensitive to it as I am but I could tell immediately as I heard it that the mp3 wasn't up to scratch. Obviously I can't force you to change it since I'm not a BAT but if someone does rank this with the current mp3 I will, uh, yell at them I guess lol.Kyshiro wrote:
The audio really sounds fine to me with headphones as well as speakers, I'll try and look for a better quality and see if there's any difference though.Mashley wrote:
Audio quality sounds really low. It's technically 192kbps but it sounds a lot lower to me and the mp3 filename suggests to me that it was ripped from a youtube video. It's not up to standard and you should find a better one.
As for the mapping, I'm not doing a proper mod but your spacing on [Epic] is frustratingly inconsistent; for example, why is 01:30:519 (5) - different from the usual pattern of putting the 1/4s closer?
At the spacing: This one is a bit different indeed although I don't see how it'll cause any problems, however the rest is put the way it is on purpose, and I repeatedly used the same spacing for the same pattern the notes are put in.
Thanks for the reply
Thanks, I'll replace the mp3, where's the file though?Gonzvlo wrote:
For some reason I couldn't analize the mp3, which is not a good indicator. Just in case, I'm leaving a 192kbps iTunes encoded version of the 320 kbps single
About the map, I actually like this song that's why I was looking forward to checking this map, sadly I'm not fond of many of those 3/4 sliders, that's why I'll pass this time.
Well what can I say, I can't please everyone with a map, I've also recieved lots of positive feedback on this map, the 3/4 mapping is a one time only, got inspired by a map that used this too.Roddie wrote:
Let me state my opinion about Epic:
At first, knowing that Drive By by Train is being mapped, I was excited over it. I tried out Epic; finished afterwards and to be frank... it's not really a fun difficulty to play because of the rhythm it's put into. Too much use of 3/4. A couple of random rhythm placement that don't seem fitting to the song. I'm not very impressed by this honestly. Consider giving some thought when you're gonna get your map ranked. Well, good luck, man.
Thanks :3mancusojuanmattos wrote:
Changed some things over IRC. He still has a lot of 3/4 but at least most of them sound fitting
Rebubbled
Thanks :3 waiting for HellDawn to do his Easy diff nowMiya wrote:
Hello~
GeneralSuperior
- Clear~
Exquisite
- 00:14:656 (4) - Add a whistle here? Feels empty without it. Okay
- 01:37:526 (3) - You miss a whistle at this circle. Added
- 02:11:460 (1,2,3) - Why not following vocal here? It's a bit weird, since you following vocal on previous combo, but switch to basic beat on this combo. It's a normal diff after all, a simple rhythm every now and then should be fine, this would also increase the star rating drastically
- 02:42:935 (1,2,3,4) - Ugh, same. Please follow vocal on this combo too. ^
- 03:06:542 (1,2,3) - Same ^
Epic
- 00:12:197 (3) - Add a whistle here? Feels too empty without any whistle on this combo. Okay added
I wonder why a lot of people dislike 3/4 o.o
- 00:07:526 (3,4,5) - Use 0.4x spacing here please like you do on almost 90% of your 1/4 spacing. It's feels that just a few 1.1x spacing that you use on entire diff. Better to make all the spacing on 1/4 rhythim same and consistant. I did this because moving from a slider to a note is extremely simple, the spacing differences are consistent depending on the way the notes/sliders are put together, I haven't seen anyone that had a problem playing this either
- 00:13:919 (4,5,6) - ^
- 00:36:296 (3,4,1) - ^
- 00:38:263 (4,5,1) - ^
- 00:56:214 (1,2,3) - ^
- 02:33:099 (3,4,5) - ^
It's fine to me, i can play it well and without any problem.
http://puu.sh/2Zzwj.osuMiya wrote:
Hello~
Fine
- 00:15:886 - Add a circle here. Inconsistant with your next and previous rhythm. No ;_;
- 00:26:213 - Please add a circle here since you miss a clap sounds in this spot. If you want a bit break, do it at 00:25:722 - so it will be consistant with 00:20:803 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:27:197 (1,2,3) - ^
- 00:44:902 (1,2) - Please don't. Shape like this can be extremely confusing to beginner. Changed
- 01:29:656 (5,1) - Switch NC here. The new stanza start at 5 not 1. k
- 02:25:721 (4) - Current combo is too long, there should be a NC here. k
- 03:06:049 (1) - Remove the whistle. It sounds weird, imo. k
Thanks again :3 But I can't give kudosu for a recheck right?Miya wrote:
Recheck~
SuperiorExquisite
- 02:22:280 (4) - I suggest to delete this circle since there is no vocal on the music at this spot. So it's a bit overmapped. Alright
Epic
- 00:48:591 (1,2) - Nazi, but this slider end doesnt stack perfectly.Fixed
That's all. Kd's or No, it's up to you :3
- 00:16:870 (1,2) - According to your NC pattern, the combo should be on 2. Switch NC? Yeah, done
- 00:19:083 (6,1) - Same, switch NC here. Fixed
You can, there is no rule about it :3Kyshiro wrote:
[ But I can't give kudosu for a recheck right?
wooh, thank you :3Miya wrote:
You can, there is no rule about it :3Kyshiro wrote:
[ But I can't give kudosu for a recheck right?
Rechecked again, and i think it's enough.
Enjoy :3