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[General:]
• I would like to give you another
normal-slidertick.wav file. Your file it is ok, but it doesn't sound suitable at all since it only has the Normal Hit-clap sound. In return,
this one it is a combined file with the Normal hit-clap + the Normal sampleset, so I think that sounds better than yours. If you add this one in your folder, you should reduce the volume by 10% in the sections where you use is because it sounds a bit high. Anyways, I highly suggest you to use this one
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California 37 here, since you don't have anything related to the song in the tags.
[Fine:]
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Settings:--> I'd increase the Circle Size in 1 tick to make the diff. a bit more enjoyable. It is a difficulty full of long Sliders, with these big notes the diff. will be pretty simple even to Beginners. In addition, will make the gap between Fine and Superior more correct (CS+1)
--> I'd increase the Overall difficulty in 1 tick, for a better diff. spread as well (OD+1)
• 00:17:241 (1) - *Nazi* I'm pretty sure you can re-arrange this Slider, looks kinda weird to me actually
• 00:27:077
(x) - Cover better the singer vocal if you remove the Note (4) in 00:27:568 and instead of that you add a Slider. That Slider have to start in 00:27:077 and have to finish in 00:27:568
• 00:30:519
(x) - I suggest you at least to follow vocals in this easy, it is pretty simple as I said before. So, try adding a Note here please
• 00:37:896 (2) - Hmm.. Add a New Combo here to emphasize the Kiai/chorus beginning
• 00:39:864 (1,2) - The New Combo in (1) doesn't feel really important and necessary, instead I think that it is more interesting if you add the New Combo in (2). So, would be better if you remove the New Combo in (1) and add it in (2) instead
• 00:53:634 (2) - Fits better with the vocal, if you add a New Combo here.
• 00:55:109 (4) - After that, remove this New Combo, and add it in 00:57:568 (2)
• 00:58:552 (3) - *A bit Nazi* - For a better transition, I'd make this Slider curvy. A simple curvy like this one is ok:
• 01:47:732 (4) - (^)
• 02:21:667 (1) - This pattern flows much better if you do Reverse Selection (Ctrl+G) in this Slider. Don't forget to fix the spacing after to do that
• 02:33:470 (3) - Add a New Combo here, it follows pretty good your comboing in general, and makes sense due to the vocal changes
• 02:37:896 (2) - Add a New Combo here to emphasize the Kiai/chorus beginning
- Nice map in general. Your comboing looks weird sometimes, for that reason my mod is Combo suggestions in general [Superior:]
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Settings: --> Looks more suitable for a Normal if you increase the Overall difficulty and the HP Drain Rate in 1 Tick (OD, HP+1)
• 00:16:749 (2,3) - Bad overlap, I didn't like it at all when I was playing the map. I highly suggest you to change that, anyways you don't need to do a lot of changes, contact me if you need a code or something
• 00:19:946 (1) - After the constant Whistle pattern, that sound kinda empty, add a Whistle at the Slider beginning to follow the guitar at least
• 00:20:437 (2) - For the same reason as above, add a Whistle in this Note
• 00:20:683 (3) - And.. A whistle in this reverse arrow, should be great too
• 00:42:814 (3) - Remember that this is a simple Normal, the constant usage of 1/2 is not really good, and in this case is not necessary. Remove this 1/2 Slider and add a Single note in 00:42:814 instead
• 00:55:847 (2) - Move this Slider up of (1,3) for a better flow. With that, I mean you should move this Note to
x:144 y:216• 01:00:028 (3,4) - Useless 1/2 usage for this difficulty. Try to simplify this pattern adding a 1/1 Slider instead of these 1/2s, I think you should try something like this.
• 01:01:011 (5,1) - Swap these combos, to emphasize the vocal change and that flash kiai.
• 01:10:847 - At least in this Normal, I suggest you at least a break, looking that the song is pretty long. I think an average player need a rest moment, you can add a break here (as Helldawn's did in his diff.) or you can take naraku's suggest if you want. But.. I highly suggest you to make that change
• 02:01:257 (3) - This note feels unnecesary in this diff. I'd personally remove it to make the diff. simpler
• 02:11:339 (3) - Replace this 1/2 Slider with a simple note in 02:11:339 as I said you in 00:42:814
• 02:39:372 (4) - This note is unnecesary too, in a similar part you didn't add a Note, you can see that in 00:41:339 - so, would be better if you delete that Note.
- I personally dislike the constant 1/2 usage as I mentioned in the mod. You could fix a bit the diff. spread if you fix those points mentioned in my mod, hope you can understand all of them.[Exquisite:]
• 00:24:126 (2) - That note is almost out of screen, and it plays kinda bad for this. I'd re-arrange this pattern a bit, you could try something like this (Code with (1,2):
Screenshoot + Code24,184,23880,5,2,0:0:0:0:
68,284,24126,2,0,P|84:336|64:388,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
• 01:47:732 (3,4) - I'd compressed this pattern a bit more, as you did in the rest of the map. I mean, reduce the spacing between these objects till 0.1x
- A lot of 3/4 Sliders.. Meh.. I don't have anything in front them [Epic:]
• Yeah, enjoyable diff. but..
I had to do that xD. Anyways, as I said you in Epic, I don't have problem with themWell, that's all for now.
Good mapset in general, but the changes in Superior and Fine are pretty necessary imo
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