Hi, from M4M
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All are just suggestions

[General]
Is this the full version of the song? Judging from the length I'd say it's a cut . You might have to add "Game Edit" or something similar to the title.

[Insane]
This is way too hard for me!!! But I'll try to mod it anyway...
00:28:315 (6,1) - let spinner start at 00:28:315 - ?
01:12:415 (1,2,3) - rotate this so it looks like an upright triangle?
01:39:415 (1,2,3,4) - make this into a regular diamond?
01:46:465 (6,1) - let spinner start at 01:46:465 (6) - ?


[ERT's Hard]
Another hard map...
Suggestion: with this kind of difficulty, why not change the difficulty name to "ERT's Insane" instead?
00:28:315 - let spinner start here
00:49:015 - ^
01:09:415 (1) - remove NC maybe?
01:29:665 - let spinner start here
01:32:515 - let spinner start here, change 01:32:065 (3) - to circle, or stop it at 01:32:365 -
01:37:315 (2) - remove
01:37:465 (3,4) - insert a circle in between, make it a 3 circle-stack
01:37:690 (1) - I think this part can be map with other than a spinner, follow the drums maybe?
01:39:265 - add a circle here if followed the previous one


[Normal]
00:18:565 (3) - rotate so it creats a flow, (↑)
00:21:115 (1) - maybe it should start at 00:21:265 - ?
00:25:765 (4) - split this into a circle and a slider that starts at 00:26:065 - instead?
00:27:415 (3) - remove reverse, let spinner start at 00:28:315 -



[Easy]
00:21:115 (4) - maybe it should start at 00:21:265 - ?
00:25:915 (2) - "" 00:26:065 - ?





That's all I can find,pretty awesome map, sorry if my mod din't help
And, Good luck for rank

update http://puu.sh/2MA6x.osu

Aunxfb wrote:

Hi, from M4M
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All are just suggestions

[General]
Is this the full version of the song? Judging from the length I'd say it's a cut . You might have to add "Game Edit" or something similar to the title. This is game opening,the title I think OK.

[Insane]
This is way too hard for me!!! But I'll try to mod it anyway... That's OK :>
00:28:315 (6,1) - let spinner start at 00:28:315 - ? I want this have a hit,so no change.
01:12:415 (1,2,3) - rotate this so it looks like an upright triangle? It's arrange according to the front.
01:39:415 (1,2,3,4) - make this into a regular diamond? I don't want to arrange rigid mapset,and this also arrange according to the front part. 0.0
01:46:465 (6,1) - let spinner start at 01:46:465 (6) - ? Same with first point.



[Normal]
00:18:565 (3) - rotate so it creats a flow, (↑) This is OK.
00:21:115 (1) - maybe it should start at 00:21:265 - ? Same with Insane
00:25:765 (4) - split this into a circle and a slider that starts at 00:26:065 - instead? yeah,Fixed.
00:27:415 (3) - remove reverse, let spinner start at 00:28:315 - ^



[Easy]
00:21:115 (4) - maybe it should start at 00:21:265 - ? I follow the music not vocal,and put this is easily.
00:25:915 (2) - "" 00:26:065 - ? ^





That's all I can find,pretty awesome map, sorry if my mod din't help
And, Good luck for rank

Thanks for your mod.

from my m4m queue .

[General]

1. Should be the title is Kiseki no Melodia ? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sHZfyqZN9sw
2. add to Title 奇跡のメロディアand romanised title as above.

[Easy]

1. 01:28:615 (1)- : NC should be at 01:27:715 (4) because of music change

[Normal]

1. 00:11:215 (5)- : last slider point 1 grid down?
2. 00:20:215 (4)- : NC here, because music change
3. 00:22:615- : If you do as above then add NC here
4. 00:23:665 (5)- : remove finish from the head
5. 00:26:065 (5)- : make the slider long until 00:26:515

[ERT's Hard]

1. 01:04:465 (5)- : add finish on the head
2. 01:05:815 (1)- : add finish
3. 01:07:015 (5)- : ^
4. 01:16:465 (3)- : add finish on the head
5. 01:20:215 (1)- : ^
6. 01:40:915 - : unused green line
7. 01:48:715 - : 4 unused green line

[Insane]

1. 00:09:715 (2)- : put this to x364 y224?
2. Very beautiful diff xD

2stars should be help, I can't wait to see this map ranked! good luck! >_<

All Fixed

http://puu.sh/2PQhy.osu

- t e n n y a - wrote:

from my m4m queue .

[General]

1. Should be the title is Kiseki no Melodia ? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sHZfyqZN9sw
2. add to Title 奇跡のメロディアand romanised title as above.
   
   I don't known can use the Japanese title XD.
   All add.

[Easy]

1. 01:28:615 (1)- : NC should be at 01:27:715 (4) because of music change Fixed.

[Normal]

1. 00:11:215 (5)- : last slider point 1 grid down? Fixed.
2. 00:20:215 (4)- : NC here, because music change If do this,I think this part have more NC. Anyway I retain this.
3. 00:22:615- : If you do as above then add NC here
4. 00:23:665 (5)- : remove finish from the head OK.
5. 00:26:065 (5)- : make the slider long until 00:26:515 There have no drum hit in music.

[Insane]

1. 00:09:715 (2)- : put this to x364 y224? I known your mean,I have already changed the next part place ><
2. Very beautiful diff xD

2stars should be help, I can't wait to see this map ranked! good luck! >_<

Thanks for your mod and star*2 ><

完全無解狀態。mod不動。。。only suggestion。。。
[i]

1. 01:03:415 (1) - slider後面試試彎一下？orz。。
2. 01:46:465 (6) - 試試短一點間距？。。。1.4左右？或者直接放到正中間。。。

[e]

1. 00:22:615 (1) - 滑調後面。。再彎下/w\
2. 00:27:415 (5) - 彎的平柔點？~(弧度不要太大0.0)
3. 01:37:015 (1) - 換個形狀0.0？~我在骨頭裏挑刺。orz

我來湊SP。。。。快rank。。。orz

Good lucy and Star~~~

@Athena Tennos

fix some!! thanks for your mod and star >w<

[General]

nothing

[Easy]

00:53:815 (5) - 頭finish
00:58:615 (1) - ^

[Normal]

01:15:415 (1) - finish


[Insane]

00:13:915 (6) - 沒疊好5的尾巴 (X:438 Y360)

00:41:215 (1,2,3,4) - 這樣擺?

96,192,41215,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,312,41365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,352,41515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,232,41665,1,0,0:0:0:0:

nice map,找不太到甚麼大問題
good luck

Azathozkula wrote:

[General]

nothing

[Easy]

00:53:815 (5) - 頭finish 沒感覺很強的重音0.0
00:58:615 (1) - ^ ^

[Normal]

01:15:415 (1) - finish Done


[Insane]

00:13:915 (6) - 沒疊好5的尾巴 (X:438 Y360) Done

00:41:215 (1,2,3,4) - 這樣擺? 關於這個容許我保留一下

96,192,41215,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,312,41365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,352,41515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,232,41665,1,0,0:0:0:0:

nice map,找不太到甚麼大問題
good luck

謝謝您的mod!!

收到PM便過來了 , 感謝mod req w
(我想選m4m的 w)

[General]

1. Nothing

[Easy]

1. 最少要有一個3星以下的難度 , 雖然3.15不是超過太多, 但也建議能降低的話盡量降(?
2. 00:20:215 (3) - NC?
3. 00:53:215 (3) - 跟00:52:015 (2) 有點點overlapped, 放在 x:296 y:104 看看
4. 01:23:365 (2) - x:192 y:48 可以排得更整齊w

[Normal]

1. 00:28:315 (3) - 尾巴的Control point放在x:348 y:140 可以做個nice blanket w
2. 01:05:815 (3) - 這樣放同樣nice blanket
   SPOILER

   216,160,65815,2,0,P|136:104|48:144,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[ERT's Hard]

1. 00:28:390 (1) - 放在00:28:465開始?
2. 00:39:715 (2,3,1,2,1) - Hard來說好像有點難讀
3. 01:07:015 (5) - NC?
4. 01:14:365 - 沒用處的綠線

[Insane]

1. 00:27:865 (5) - Ctrl+G?

就這樣w
mod不到太多問題
好圖啊QAQQQQ Star ~✧
可以的話便mod吧w
加油!

[General] 原本是想建議作個 SB，不過我發現你有放 Video 了。

[Easy] 看起來沒什麼大問題

[Normal] 看起來也沒什麼大問題

[Hard]
00:23:965 (1) - 後面 2 疊圈，顯得這點有點不協調的感覺
01:29:740 (1) - 01:32:590 (1) - 01:37:690 (1) - 建議這起始點往後一小格放在紅線上

[Insane]
00:48:715 (3,4) - 感覺 move 起來方向有點不順。
01:00:265 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 感覺這裡的 move 是不是轉太急了
00:52:915 (4) - 建議把這點的間距調成跟 00:53:065 (5,6,7,8,9) - 一樣。 把 note 4 改為這裡 (202,332) 如何?
01:03:415 (1,2) - 建議把這點的間距調成跟 01:03:865 (2,3,4) - 一樣

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新手 mod。 還請多多包涵我。 :3

happy623 wrote:

收到PM便過來了 , 感謝mod req w :>
(我想選m4m的 w)

[General]

1. Nothing

[Easy]

1. 最少要有一個3星以下的難度 , 雖然3.15不是超過太多, 但也建議能降低的話盡量降(? 我怎記得是3.5以下!?? 還是我記錯了!? 我再問問 XD
2. 00:20:215 (3) - NC? no
3. 00:53:215 (3) - 跟00:52:015 (2) 有點點overlapped, 放在 x:296 y:104 看看 有點壓到 移了一點
4. 01:23:365 (2) - x:192 y:48 可以排得更整齊w 嗯..x:192 y:48 是我下一個slider的位置吧 總之(2)我移了一點

[Normal]

1. 00:28:315 (3) - 尾巴的Control point放在x:348 y:140 可以做個nice blanket w Done 移了一點
2. 01:05:815 (3) - 這樣放同樣nice blanket Done
   SPOILER

   216,160,65815,2,0,P|136:104|48:144,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Insane]

1. 00:27:865 (5) - Ctrl+G? 有點不順 0.0

就這樣w
mod不到太多問題
好圖啊QAQQQQ Star ~✧ Thx :>
可以的話便mod吧w 我明天有事 假日我有空就幫您看看吧
加油!

謝謝您的mod!!

kutark wrote:

[General] 原本是想建議作個 SB，不過我發現你有放 Video 了。 你想做我就把影片刪了 哈哈

[Easy] 看起來沒什麼大問題

[Normal] 看起來也沒什麼大問題

[Insane]
00:48:715 (3,4) - 感覺 move 起來方向有點不順。 我也覺得不順...改了
01:00:265 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 感覺這裡的 move 是不是轉太急了 完全不會耶..
00:52:915 (4) - 建議把這點的間距調成跟 00:53:065 (5,6,7,8,9) - 一樣。 把 note 4 改為這裡 (202,332) 如何? 這還好吧..但我有移一下了
01:03:415 (1,2) - 建議把這點的間距調成跟 01:03:865 (2,3,4) - 一樣 這樣會讓(2)感覺有跳 總之不會判斷誤讀 我就不改了

============================================
新手 mod。 還請多多包涵我。 :3 我完全不知道要說什麼了..= =

謝謝您的mod!!

hi~

[General]
try japanese title?
Mizuki Nana→

水樹奈々

[Insane]
00:23:065 (2) - remove finish I think doesn't fit
00:32:215 (1) - remove finish and add whistle is better
01:00:265 (3,4) - change 3→4　4→3 is good
01:15:415 - kiai time volume10%up?
01:41:365 (2) - remove slider and add circle fit?

01:45:865 (1) - add Nc

[ERT's Hard]
HP-1 (HP6 is same insane change Fix plz)
00:25:765 - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.

00:26:065 (4) - You covered the melody? If so, 00:26:515 - Here would be the last place

00:32:815 (1) - first clap is mistake?
00:34:465 (5) - add whistle?
00:51:265 (2) - end point add finish? try this.
00:59:665 (1) - why nc? I think remove nc
01:00:865 (5) - 00:51:265 (2) - same ^
01:02:065 (7) - Nc?
01:07:015 (5) - ^
01:17:665 (6) - add whistle? try this.
01:37:465 (2,3) - try this rhythm.


I weak in early bpm
I'm sorry, so I'm not see the difficulty of other...

and ugly english. If you have any questions. ask me plz.

really nice map and nice song!!! xD good luck~

Satellite wrote:

hi~

[General]
try japanese title? OK! Add in all diff.
Mizuki Nana→

水樹奈々

[Insane]
00:23:065 (2) - remove finish I think doesn't fit Fixed
00:32:215 (1) - remove finish and add whistle is better I feel finish is better o.o
01:00:265 (3,4) - change 3→4　4→3 is good Fixed

01:15:415 - kiai time volume10%up? I think 60% is enough,anyway I reserve this.
01:41:365 (2) - remove slider and add circle fit? Follow the vocal glissandi.

01:45:865 (1) - add Nc The distance and melody are not change,so no NC there.

I weak in early bpm
I'm sorry, so I'm not see the difficulty of other...

and ugly english. If you have any questions. ask me plz.

really nice map and nice song!!! xD good luck~

Thanks for your mod , Satellite. :>

Hello, from OEvil's mod queue

• [General]
  
  seems fine
  
  
  [Normal]
  
  OD+1?
  
  00:26:065 (5) - this slider ends too soon, i think, because the previous sliders follow the vocal and this one suddenly follow the drums. I suggest to end this slider at 00:26:515 - or simply add a circle here 00:26:515 -
  00:58:615 (3) - a bit nazi, but you can move the slider's tail points to 48|272 for a slightly better blanket
  01:10:315 - only suggestions, add a note here, i hear a drum
  01:19:015 (4,1) - only suggestion, these two sliders can interact better i'm not really good at this
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:28:615 (1) - only a mere suggestion though, add finish at the slider's head to accent the sudden change of vocal rhythm
  
  
  [ERT's Hard]
  
  00:11:815 (1,2) - adjust the overlaps more?
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:13:465 (2) - should be 312|260 if you want better overlap
  00:21:265 (1) - remove nc, same combo pattern with 00:25:015 (1,2,3,4) -
  00:39:715 (2,3,1,2,1) - this is too hard for Hard diff, imo, after all you use AR-8
  00:40:015 (3) - remove clap at slider's head? doesn't fit imo
  00:41:365 (4) - add clap at slider's head
  00:41:665 (5,1) - i prefer to unstack because the movement is limited and 00:41:815 (1) - is the beginning of new pattern
  00:51:265 (2,3) - stack with slider's tail?
  00:59:665 (1) - remove nc, no need to accent this
  01:00:865 (5) - nc? because the vocal
  01:16:465 (3,4) - only suggestion, how about deleting this circle 01:16:915 (4) - and then this slider 01:16:465 (3) - can end here 01:16:915 (4) -
  01:37:465 (2,3) - prefer if you change these into a triplet, fits the vocal more
  
  
  [Insane]
  
  i'm not good at modding insane diff, can't even play this, i'm sorry x.x
  
  00:27:115 (2,3) - prefer to unstack, if you want
  00:32:665 - add a note here? there's a drum and same pattern with 00:42:265 (1,2) -
  00:52:315 (2,3) - these two can be more..... blankety

Nice song~
Good luck

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Hello, from OEvil's mod queue

• [General]
  
  seems fine
  
  
  [Normal]
  
  OD+1? OK.
  
  00:26:065 (5) - this slider ends too soon, i think, because the previous sliders follow the vocal and this one suddenly follow the drums. I suggest to end this slider at 00:26:515 - or simply add a circle here 00:26:515 - Extend slider.
  00:58:615 (3) - a bit nazi, but you can move the slider's tail points to 48|272 for a slightly better blanket Fixed
  01:10:315 - only suggestions, add a note here, i hear a drum I want to follow the Vocal only. o.o
  01:19:015 (4,1) - only suggestion, these two sliders can interact better i'm not really good at this Fixed
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:28:615 (1) - only a mere suggestion though, add finish at the slider's head to accent the sudden change of vocal rhythm nope~
  
  
  
  [Insane]
  
  i'm not good at modding insane diff, can't even play this, i'm sorry x.x
  
  00:27:115 (2,3) - prefer to unstack, if you want nope~
  00:32:665 - add a note here? there's a drum and same pattern with 00:42:265 (1,2) - I added a note here in the past,but not good with play.Therefore,I delete the note,so I don't want to add note here now.
  00:52:315 (2,3) - these two can be more..... blankety Done

Nice song~
Good luck

Thanks for your mod,AlpacaCokelat.

update http://puu.sh/30Gpq.osu

Hi~ m4m as promised~

[General]
Hard和Normal的差距太近了感觉……是不是另做个简单点的Hard？
其他感觉看不出什么来……以下皆为建议
00:20:215 - 00:28:615 - 的clap太稀疏了，感觉2、4白线下满clap更能体现出“燃”的感觉
可以试着在kiai部分的红线上较密集的加上soft whistle（整个kiai而不是仅仅衔接部分），会有意想不到的效果

[Insane]
00:06:565 - 改成normal sample？
00:21:265 (1) - 好奇怪的节奏 最好去掉折返 然后在00:21:715 - 00:21:865 - 加note
00:29:815 (1) - 感觉这里没有音 似乎应该从下一个note开始这个连续单点 如果修改的话请顺序调节NC等
00:35:515 (4,5) - 改成这样看看？

00:51:415 (5) - NC？
00:52:915 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 本来不是很tension up的地方，缩小一点跳的间距吧
01:04:765 (5) - 改成一个圈+一个slider可能更符合音乐的节奏
01:08:965 (4) - 要么删掉，要么在01:09:265 - 加个note，总感觉在这里分断不是很舒服
01:12:415 (1,2,3) - 改成一个正三角形或者往返跳或者anti jump？这里很容易被人看成1/1或者1/2
01:13:615 (1,2) - 改成一个滑条然后降速，将音效改成soft，会更有感觉
01:18:940 - 加个note？有些感觉
01:23:665 (6) - 改成3/4，或者改成1/1并删除后面的note，对长音的体现更好
01:41:365 (2) - 可选：改成一个单独的note并大跳，后续的note叠在这个下面当成anti jump

[ERT's Hard]
00:26:065 (4) - 缩短1/2或1/1并在00:26:515 - 加个note，现在感觉有点怪怪的
01:01:615 (1) - 箭头被遮挡
01:09:415 (1) - 逆时针旋转一点以防止太枯燥的重复

[Normal]
00:08:215 (1,2) - 避免这个遮挡
00:27:115 (2,3) - 包的更完美些
00:34:015 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 用ctrl+shft+D重新做一遍形状吧

[Easy]
00:25:915 (2,3) - 包的更完美些

Good luck~

Flower wrote:

Hi~ m4m as promised~

[General]
Hard和Normal的差距太近了感觉……是不是另做个简单点的Hard？意思是Hard跟Normal難度差太大? 總之再討論看看
其他感觉看不出什么来……以下皆为建议
00:20:215 - 00:28:615 - 的clap太稀疏了，感觉2、4白线下满clap更能体现出“燃”的感觉 在Insane有加了些許 (E,N加上去有點怪異..)
可以试着在kiai部分的红线上较密集的加上soft whistle（整个kiai而不是仅仅衔接部分），会有意想不到的效果 這點我再嘗試看看

[Insane]
00:06:565 - 改成normal sample？有點奇怪 o.o
00:21:265 (1) - 好奇怪的节奏 最好去掉折返 然后在00:21:715 - 00:21:865 - 加note 我也覺得有點怪,當初因滑音才用成這樣,反轉拿掉後面改用slider代替了
00:29:815 (1) - 感觉这里没有音 似乎应该从下一个note开始这个连续单点 如果修改的话请顺序调节NC等 這邊確實有音o.o
00:35:515 (4,5) - 改成这样看看？nope~

00:51:415 (5) - NC？Fixed
00:52:915 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 本来不是很tension up的地方，缩小一点跳的间距吧 這我有想過,但覺得其實間距也不是很大,暫時先保留吧
01:04:765 (5) - 改成一个圈+一个slider可能更符合音乐的节奏 覺得一組slider比較好
01:08:965 (4) - 要么删掉，要么在01:09:265 - 加个note，总感觉在这里分断不是很舒服 跟著Vocal斷的,覺得還好
01:12:415 (1,2,3) - 改成一个正三角形或者往返跳或者anti jump？这里很容易被人看成1/1或者1/2 一直有人說這邊XD 改了
01:13:615 (1,2) - 改成一个滑条然后降速，将音效改成soft，会更有感觉 後面有跳,想保持連續性
01:18:940 - 加个note？有些感觉 嗯..感覺有點難接上去QAQ
01:23:665 (6) - 改成3/4，或者改成1/1并删除后面的note，对长音的体现更好 會用短的slider是想讓後面更緊湊,暫時先保留一下
01:41:365 (2) - 可选：改成一个单独的note并大跳，后续的note叠在这个下面当成anti jump OK.

[Normal]
00:08:215 (1,2) - 避免这个遮挡 前一個slider擋的? 我覺得沒擋到非常多,保留
00:27:115 (2,3) - 包的更完美些 Fixed
00:34:015 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 用ctrl+shft+D重新做一遍形状吧 Fixed 原來有這功能...學到一課了 =口=

[Easy]
00:25:915 (2,3) - 包的更完美些 Fixed

Good luck~

Thanks for your mod !!

http://puu.sh/33MFd.osu

都改了

難度方面當初其實是擔心跟Insane的難度相差太遠 才會做現在的難度

而且Normal我看都4.23星了@@

不過有需要的話，我可以將整個Hard調整到4.75星以下

01:09:415 (1) - 這兩個長滑條尾巴我好像都忘了放Clap，Jess幫我放一下:3

updates :>

@ERT:
clap你第一條尾巴有上啊 o.o 第二條幫你弄好了

我覺得星數是還好啦~

我給人試是說單點多了點而已 會比較難(因為BPM很高)其他還好

[General]
红色：必须遵守
蓝色：只是建议
·you can tag シャイニング・アーク since it can be used to facilitate search, though the song is the opening of Shining Ark actually.
·虽然这的确是光明之舟的OP不过现在TAGS里可以加入日文了，那也把シャイニング・アーク加进去吧

·Tag add compose:上松范康 （Elements Garden）藤间 仁（Elements Garden）
·尝试把作曲编曲：上松范康 （Elements Garden）和编曲藤间 仁（Elements Garden）也加进去？

[Easy]
00:08:215 (3) - 头上的clap去掉？
00:09:415 (1) - 这里的滑条头clap？
01:29:515 (3,4) - 这两个整体往右去点？01:29:515 (3) - x：312 y:300为基础，01:29:815 (4) - 跟着做相应的调整
01:32:215 (3) - 移到x:164 y:76？


[Normal]
00:07:165 (2,3,4) - 直接简化成一个滑条？
00:23:665 (5) - 滑条头finish？
00:32:215 (1) - finish？
00:39:415 (1) - 再拉长1/2吧。。。


[ERT's Hard]
00:08:665 (2) - 滑条头finish
00:19:165 - add circle
00:28:390 (1) - 转盘不finish？
00:39:265 - add circle
00:40:915 (1,2,4) - 我觉得4应该放在1,2的位置然后1,2放在4的位置
00:42:265 (2,3,1) - 我建议这样处理，1去掉，2拉长1/2，最后3放到长白线00:43:015 - 的位置
00:47:815 (1,2,3) - 2和3往前挪1/2然后1放在3的滑条尾的位置
01:08:215 (1) - 滑条头finish？
01:10:315 (3) - finish
01:24:415 (1,2) - 音量响一点？
01:29:665 (2) - 去掉，转盘直接从这开始


[Insane]
00:14:815 (1,2,3,4) - 不是很喜欢这样排，其实3,4复制1,2然后重新排下更好
00:17:665 (6,7,1) - 这里感觉不适合3连，把00:17:740 (7) - 去掉
01:18:415 (3,4) - 这两个不要重叠吧
01:19:615 (1,2,3,4) - 两个whistle换到2和4上或者remove



good luck

http://puu.sh/3bFld.osu Update

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

[General]
红色：必须遵守
蓝色：只是建议
·you can tag シャイニング・アーク since it can be used to facilitate search, though the song is the opening of Shining Ark actually.
·虽然这的确是光明之舟的OP不过现在TAGS里可以加入日文了，那也把シャイニング・アーク加进去吧
Add
·Tag add compose:上松范康 （Elements Garden）藤间 仁（Elements Garden）
·尝试把作曲编曲：上松范康 （Elements Garden）和编曲藤间 仁（Elements Garden）也加进去？ 這個就不加了吧 o.o

[Easy]
00:08:215 (3) - 头上的clap去掉？覺得還好
00:09:415 (1) - 这里的滑条头clap？有finish感覺夠了
01:29:515 (3,4) - 这两个整体往右去点？01:29:515 (3) - x：312 y:300为基础，01:29:815 (4) - 跟着做相应的调整 fixed
01:32:215 (3) - 移到x:164 y:76？fixed


[Normal]
00:07:165 (2,3,4) - 直接简化成一个滑条？感覺還好,先保留吧
00:23:665 (5) - 滑条头finish？以前有上被modder刪掉過了= ="
00:32:215 (1) - finish？fixed
00:39:415 (1) - 再拉长1/2吧。。。 這節奏很好啊 o.o


[Insane]
00:14:815 (1,2,3,4) - 不是很喜欢这样排，其实3,4复制1,2然后重新排下更好 喜歡漸遠的感覺,很合音樂
00:17:665 (6,7,1) - 这里感觉不适合3连，把00:17:740 (7) - 去掉 感覺很順的說
01:18:415 (3,4) - 这两个不要重叠吧 因為在同個音裡才用重疊的
01:19:615 (1,2,3,4) - 两个whistle换到2和4上或者remove 1 3我覺得比較好的說 QAQ



good luck

謝謝您的mod!!

#modreq，很少看到台灣的麻婆呢，無聊看一下。

Hope you reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.


[General]

Clear.

[Easy] 我感覺似乎有漏一些音效，試試看這些可不可以。

00:18:565 (5) - 我覺得前頭加的whistle似乎跟音樂搭不上，我建議whistle加尾比較有感覺。
00:24:415 (3) - Clap加錯位置了，遵循24clap比較好。
00:26:815 (3,4) - Clap加錯位置了，應該是加到4上。
00:47:815 (2) - 前頭忘了whistle?
00:49:015 (1) - 這個尾端可以finish，是唱出來的vocal。
00:53:815 (5) - 開頭whistle不錯，還有我建議下面那一行也可以試試
00:54:565 (6) - 尾端whistle。
01:00:415 (4) - 開頭有點近。
01:15:415 (1,3) - 我會想把1跟3對稱。
01:17:815 (2) - 大白線不加finish嗎，這個我覺得你是忘了加。
01:27:715 (1,2,3,4) - 試試24clap? 大白線加clap似乎怪怪。
01:39:415 (1,2) - whistle加1尾，2尾試試?

[Normal]

00:17:815 (1) - 大白線不加finish嗎，這個我覺得你是忘了加。
00:20:815 (5) - 忘了clap?
00:32:815 (1,2) - 其他都有照Blanket，這個怎沒有? 快包住了呢。
00:46:615 (1) - Nazi,可以逆時針轉一下別碰00:45:115 (1) 。
01:00:865 (2) - 前端應該能加finish雖然聽不太出來。
01:08:215 (1) - 第二個折返加finish?
01:15:415 (1) - 音量提升個10~20%，這裡的clap聲有點小呢，沒什麼感覺。
01:17:515 (1) - 尾端忘了finish?
01:19:015 (4) - 前端finish忘了?
01:25:015 (1,2) - 尾端好像包的不太好。

[ERT's Hard]

00:16:615 (1,2,3,4) - 全選，使2疊到 00:16:015 (5) 上比較整齊。
00:25:615 (3) - 尾端疊00:24:565 (5) ?
00:27:415 (2,3,4) - 成個三角? 4有點遠。
00:36:115 (2) - 照這樣聽照這樣聽感覺開頭少了whistle。
00:44:215 (6) - ^
00:45:715 (3) - ^
01:14:215 (1) - 感覺開頭少了finish。
01:17:065 (5,1) - 尾端跟開頭疊到了不太好看。
01:30:715 (3) - 感覺開頭少了finish。
01:33:115 (3) - ^

[Insane]

00:19:165 (1) - 照這樣聽應該尾端也要加whistle?
00:48:565 (2,4) - Ctrl+g一下比較有感覺。
01:03:415 (1) - 感覺開頭少了finish。
01:39:640 (2) - 似乎可疊 01:37:465 (1) 上。
01:40:165 (4) - 尾端是不是忘了finish。
01:45:265 (3) - 疊01:44:065 (4) 還比較flow。

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

smallboat wrote:

#modreq，很少看到台灣的麻婆呢，無聊看一下。我神隱了一年多了吧...這張圖也是一年前的XD

Hope you reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

Clear.

[Easy] 我感覺似乎有漏一些音效，試試看這些可不可以。

00:18:565 (5) - 我覺得前頭加的whistle似乎跟音樂搭不上，我建議whistle加尾比較有感覺。 Yeah. 讓後面空一音效的確不好
00:24:415 (3) - Clap加錯位置了，遵循24clap比較好。 我覺得照著音樂走比較好，我音效幾乎是以音樂為主以及我以前玩樂團的概念去弄的，所以基本很少固定拍 XD
00:26:815 (3,4) - Clap加錯位置了，應該是加到4上。 ^
00:47:815 (2) - 前頭忘了whistle? 改了 這邊空掉的確不好
00:49:015 (1) - 這個尾端可以finish，是唱出來的vocal。 我懂您的意思，但後面finish就不太能凸顯了，況且下個circle還是給玩家打擊的地方XD
00:53:815 (5) - 開頭whistle不錯，還有我建議下面那一行也可以試試OK
00:54:565 (6) - 尾端whistle。 ^
01:00:415 (4) - 開頭有點近。 改了點距離
01:15:415 (1,3) - 我會想把1跟3對稱。 這也不是特別不好看，就不改囉
01:17:815 (2) - 大白線不加finish嗎，這個我覺得你是忘了加。 沒要加
01:27:715 (1,2,3,4) - 試試24clap? 大白線加clap似乎怪怪。 我覺得下在Vocal上感覺比較好吧
01:39:415 (1,2) - whistle加1尾，2尾試試? OK

[Normal]

00:17:815 (1) - 大白線不加finish嗎，這個我覺得你是忘了加。 Normal這邊算緊湊，的確忘記加了 Thx
00:20:815 (5) - 忘了clap? 沒要加的打算
00:32:815 (1,2) - 其他都有照Blanket，這個怎沒有? 快包住了呢。 調了一下
00:46:615 (1) - Nazi,可以逆時針轉一下別碰00:45:115 (1) 。改了點形狀
01:00:865 (2) - 前端應該能加finish雖然聽不太出來。 保留
01:08:215 (1) - 第二個折返加finish? 嗯..感覺這樣就可以了
01:15:415 (1) - 音量提升個10~20%，這裡的clap聲有點小呢，沒什麼感覺。 我音量每個難度都一樣的說
01:17:515 (1) - 尾端忘了finish? 沒要加的打算
01:19:015 (4) - 前端finish忘了? ^
01:25:015 (1,2) - 尾端好像包的不太好。 OK

[Insane]

00:19:165 (1) - 照這樣聽應該尾端也要加whistle? 保留
00:48:565 (2,4) - Ctrl+g一下比較有感覺。 我要做個上下的打法 換的話我自己打起來也有點不順 @@ 先保留
01:03:415 (1) - 感覺開頭少了finish。 這就不加了
01:39:640 (2) - 似乎可疊 01:37:465 (1) 上。 有點遙遠的一個點 這樣後面要整個重弄 先保留吧
01:40:165 (4) - 尾端是不是忘了finish。 這邊是停頓點，加finish沒有頓點的感覺反而有餘音
01:45:265 (3) - 疊01:44:065 (4) 還比較flow。 先保留

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

感謝smallboat的Mod!!

From my queue~

[General]

1. tags suggetion:
   ROCKBOUND NEIGHBORS

[Easy]

1. 00:10:615 (3) - x:422 y:180
2. 00:20:215 (3) - end at 00:20:665
3. 00:43:615 (3) - I suggest to move to x:256 y:160 for smoother cursor moving
4. 01:21:265 (2,3,4) - a little difficult for easy, imo. how about this?
   

[Normal]

1. 00:46:615 (1) - blanket 00:45:115 (1) - correctly
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:40:165 (3) - I prefer the slider toward left

[Insane]

1. 00:59:965 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - how about symmetric pyramid pattern?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   419,116,59965,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   303,219,60115,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   332,135,60265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   364,287,60415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   244,153,60565,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   244,153,60640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   244,153,60715,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   390,199,60865,1,0,0:0:0:0:

2. 01:09:265- add a note

[ERT's Hard]

1. 00:51:265 (2) - stack slider's end on 00:52:315 (3) - ?
2. 01:00:115 (2) - I prefer xl:319 y:238
3. 01:12:415 (1,2,3) - how about increasing DS a little? (make jump pattern)

Mizuki Nana is the one of greatest singer~
~Good Luck~

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. tags suggetion:
   ROCKBOUND NEIGHBORS Add.

[Easy]

1. 00:10:615 (3) - x:422 y:180 Fixed.
2. 00:20:215 (3) - end at 00:20:665 Fixed.
3. 00:43:615 (3) - I suggest to move to x:256 y:160 for smoother cursor moving OK
4. 01:21:265 (2,3,4) - a little difficult for easy, imo. how about this? I think this two circles are not difficult, and this rhythm is good for clicking.
   

[Normal]

1. 00:46:615 (1) - blanket 00:45:115 (1) - correctly Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:40:165 (3) - I prefer the slider toward left OK.

[Insane]

1. 00:59:965 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - how about symmetric pyramid pattern? OK.~~~
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   419,116,59965,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   303,219,60115,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   332,135,60265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   364,287,60415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   244,153,60565,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   244,153,60640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   244,153,60715,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   390,199,60865,1,0,0:0:0:0:

2. 01:09:265- add a note Keep this proposal.

Mizuki Nana is the one of greatest singer~ Yeah :>
~Good Luck~

Sorry for my slowwwwwww reply.
I'm very busy for my job.
Thanks for your mod. :>

这张图还会更新么
如果会的话我会过来帮忙看看ヾ(´･ω･｀)ﾉ

@Mei : 會唷 沒有要放棄此圖的意思 只是比較忙而已 如果能幫忙看的話就太感謝了 0W0

hihihi




顺便NM HD IN的hp 都+1， In 的od+1，这样每个难度之间的hp，od都是相差2了
很好的图啊，给你一颗小星星><，加油rank哦

Mei wrote:

hihihi

[insane]

1. 00:27:265 (3,4) - blanket修一下 fixed.
   
2. 00:27:415 (4,5) - 这个地方也可以做个blanket fixed.
   
3. 00:49:015 (1,2,3) - 这个地方有点overlap， 把1，2旋转一下可以调整的好些 這感覺還好 先保留
   
   Picture

   
4. 00:52:315 (2) - 移到x244 y216 後面整體Dis.會不太好調
   
5. 00:52:915 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 5,7和2有点重叠，这里我觉得可以做个画圈的flow（实例的图是做成了正六边形这样 額..這邊是我覺得整首排版頗亂的地方 這裡聽起來有點想打來回的Fu 六邊這種flow前面有點類似 先保留 @@"
   
   Picture

   
6. 01:31:165 (2) - remove? 故意給緊湊感的XD

顺便NM HD IN的hp 都+1， In 的od+1，这样每个难度之间的hp，od都是相差2了 依這種BPM下去設的話In會爆難 0.0
很好的图啊，给你一颗小星星><，加油rank哦 謝謝 0w0

感謝您的MOD ><

from my queue

[General]
fine

[Easy]
01:41:665 - add note here and start the spinner later? fit the song better imo
01:46:615 - add the 2nd spinner here?

[Normal]
00:07:165 (2,3) - I suggest change them into a slider, the pattern is too hard for a Normal imo
01:03:865 (4,5) - blanket better?
01:08:215 (1) - x:344 y:148?
01:10:615 - I'd like to put something here and start the spinner later, to fit the song better
01:25:015 (1,2,3) - this pattern is a bit easy imo, song here is really intense.. why not change each one to a 1/1 repeat slider?
01:41:665 - 01:46:615 - same as Easy

[ERT's Hard]
HP+1 please, the current setting is too low
00:08:065 (4,1) - the jump is too huge for a Hard diff imo, I suggest to reduce the spacing a bit(for example, put 00:08:065 (4) - out, or change the 2 notes into a slider)
01:12:415 (1,2,3) - the spacing is a bit confusing, it looks the same as before but the rhythm changed to 3/4.. it's easy to read as they're 1/1 beats with the current spacing. I suggest to reduce the spacing, or add newcombo to every note here
01:25:465 (2,2,2) - this 3 notes are too lonely here imo.. song here is realy intense, I suggest to change them into 1/2 slider for each note(so you can not only fill the rhythm but also follow the drums at 01:26:515 - )
01:36:415 (1,2) - hope you can increase the spacing. though the spacing here is 1.2x as the other pattern, the time gap is huge, so it makes the spacing feel smaller than the truth
01:41:665 - 01:46:615 - same as Easy

[Insane]
HP+1
00:10:165 - you can add some 1/6 notes here imo, fit the song better(don't forget to fix the spacing if you added new notes)
01:12:415 (1,2,3) - increase the spacing a bit?
01:16:765 (2) - try this pattern? the current one's too easy imo, and this one's flow is better: http://puu.sh/7A8hE.jpg

the PSP game is fun to play :3
good luck

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[General]
fine

[Easy]
01:41:665 - add note here and start the spinner later? fit the song better imo Fixed.
01:46:615 - add the 2nd spinner here? I don't want to add two spinner 0.0

[Normal]
00:07:165 (2,3) - I suggest change them into a slider, the pattern is too hard for a Normal imo Fixed.
01:03:865 (4,5) - blanket better? Fixed.
01:08:215 (1) - x:344 y:148? Fixed.
01:10:615 - I'd like to put something here and start the spinner later, to fit the song better Fixed.
01:25:015 (1,2,3) - this pattern is a bit easy imo, song here is really intense.. why not change each one to a 1/1 repeat slider? Fixed.
01:41:665 - 01:46:615 - same as Easy Fixed, but no add spinner at 01:46:615.

[Insane]
HP+1 OK.
00:10:165 - you can add some 1/6 notes here imo, fit the song better(don't forget to fix the spacing if you added new notes) I will try. Reserve this 0.0
01:12:415 (1,2,3) - increase the spacing a bit? I afraid that increase space could make the front part of notes confuse.
01:16:765 (2) - try this pattern? the current one's too easy imo, and this one's flow is better: http://puu.sh/7A8hE.jpg Looks Good.

the PSP game is fun to play :3 Yeah. 雖然我只開了一個結局=口=
good luck

Thanks for wcx's MOD. :>

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