M4M
[
General]
- Hmm, I expected kiai time from 01:26:924 - 01:46:617.
- I think spinner 01:51:693 (1) - should end at 01:55:847 or 01:56:155. There is no music at 01:56:463.
[
Easy]
- Diff name is not in cap (EASY) like the other diff names?
00:04:626 (3) - No whistle at end? Piano is pretty quiet here compare to 00:07:703.
00:08:319 (2) - This piano isn't really accented (the place where whistle should be is 00:08:626) so perhaps no whistle here?
00:16:986 (1,2) - Really prefer a slider here because it's the first note after spinner so it's difficult to keep into rhythm and then remove new combo from 00:19:447 (1) - since they all follow the same sound and new combo on 00:20:678 (5) - instead.
00:25:601 (2) - I feel if you place like this
http://puu.sh/22PGQ, the kick slider would be a bit more intuitive to play.
00:36:678 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe this
http://puu.sh/22PK1 or this
http://puu.sh/22PKx, but some people may not like the kick slider. I prefer for you to follow the piano sound here.
00:41:601 (1,2,1,2) - Really prefer if you can follow the cymbal at 00:41:909 so give this rhythm a try?
http://puu.sh/22POk00:47:755 (2) - I think whistle at begin is better. Remove from repeat.
00:50:217 (2) - ^
00:51:447 (1,2) - I think it's better to do slider here so that these hit circle have more of an impact 00:53:909 (1,2) - . What i mean is, there is no cymbal on 00:52:063, but there is one on 00:54:524 so to represent the music better, I think you should do this.
00:55:140 (3) - To keep consistent with my hitsound suggestion, if you follow the previous suggestions, remove the whistle from repeat.
01:19:540 (3,4) - Finish instead of whistle perhaps on these two hit circles?
01:22:001 (1,2) - Since there is no cymbal at end of these sliders, but one white tick after the end. I think it's best to do whistle at end instead.
01:35:539 (2) - Hmm, I'm not too fond of this kick slider, I think it sound fine if you remove a repeat from this. If not, could you adjust the placement to make the kick slider a bit more oblivious? E.g. like this
http://puu.sh/22PYd01:46:617 (1) - You may want to reduce the volume of the slider ticks.
Maybe a bit long mod, but I think this diff is quite nice overall. Just minor details.
[
Novice]
- Please +1 hp & od, pretty big difficulty jump to Advance
00:17:294 (2,1,2) - I think it's better to have slider on the stanza, adjust the rhythm to like this?
http://puu.sh/22Q2K00:46:217 - Since you didn't have any 1/1 break here, I think you should put hit circle here, it feel like a weird pause considering how you map this.
00:47:755 (3) - Same as Easy, I think whistle on begin is better then on repeat. If you fix, be sure to adjust for 00:50:217 (3,4) - 00:55:140 (4) - etc.
01:07:232 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part is mapped exactly the same as Easy, are you sure you don't want to do a more difficult rhythm? E.g. from 01:07:232 (1) - this rhythm
http://puu.sh/22Q9w then add hit circle on 01:13:078 and 01:14:309.
01:17:078 (1) - You can do a similar rhythm to above, e.g.
http://puu.sh/22Q9w slider>hitcircle>slider if you want to here.
01:25:693 (3) - Whistle at end
01:46:617 (1) - Same as I mention for Easy, maybe you want to reduce the volume of slider tick here.
Main concern is difficulty setting, too low for a diff of this difficulty and big gap from Hard (Advance).
[
Advance]
- Perhaps it would be better to do ar 8 here. Insane/Exhaust is ar 9 so I think diff spread would still be fine and i think this diff would play much better if you do this.
00:20:678 (5,6,1) - You sure about these sliders? I feel they break the speedy flow of the song and don't really think they fit well for a Hard. Shorten by 1 white tick and add a hit circle instead?
http://puu.sh/22Qk600:23:140 (5,6,1) - ^
00:37:140 (2) - I'm not too fond of this jump, I prefer if this is reduce, maybe place at x:348 y:180 and move (3) a bit more to the right, something like x:152 y:120? I think this flow better.
01:12:155 (1) - Do a jump and more down toward the left corner? I'm not fond of the low 0.8x spacing to 01:13:232 (2). Try placing this slider at x:88 y:296. If you don't like this, try to place 01:13:232 (2,3,1) - more up to the right so that the spacing is a bit higher. I feel this would be nice here.
01:26:309 (3) - Whistle at begin? Same as Novice, I didn't mention in Easy because there are less note there so I don't think it fits as well.
01:30:155 (4) - I think it's better to do hit circle > slider here
http://puu.sh/22QrD01:30:617 (6,7,1) - Same as 00:20:678.
01:33:078 (4,5,1) - ^
01:40:001 (4) - Same as 01:30:155. Also apply to 00:20:217 (4) - and 00:30:063 (4) -
01:50:309 (7) - I think it's better not to have whistle on begin to keep with your whistle pattern of whistle every 4 white tick.
Some parts feel weird to me because of ar7. I try playing with ar 8 and they don't bother me anymore, so I highly recommend changing the ar.
[
Exhaust]
00:03:703 (8) - Hmm, I prefer not doing jump here yet, ctrl+g?
00:08:319 (6) - I really expect to see another repeat here, add a repeat?
00:50:370 (7) - Expected a bigger jump for this, maybe x:200 y:348.
01:38:771 (8,9,10) - I prefer 2.0x spacing over 2.3x.
01:41:386 (6) - Feel like there should be jump here, maybe place where 01:42:309 (3) - is
I can't mod streamy map well.sorry.
Exhaust a bit difficult to play for me to judge the diff correctly, but overall, I think the mapset is nice.
Deserve a star, good luck!
you need more NC
I strongly recommend you add some new combo...
