Okay here comes my mod as a player mostly, and also as a mapper.00:16:684 (x) - There is a clear drum beat there, dunno why you didn't map it.
Also this whole intro section... it fails to follow the music. You spammed sliders and notes in a 1/2 fashion without actually listening to the music - that's why you change the pattern over and over again, which you shouldn't do, since the music is exactly the same the whole time. Try to find a rhythm pattern that fits the music and repeat it in this part. (what I mean is, for example, 2 notes and a slider, over and over again. You can change the shapes of course)
00:19:234 (x) - Again
00:22:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Shape could be better, like this
http://puu.sh/i8PTF/18b271c20d.jpg00:26:434 (x) - Again
00:28:834 (x) - Again. Try to listen to the music and remap this whole intro
00:37:984 (3) - Blanket. Also kinda random slider shapes?
00:48:634 (2,3,4) - This triplet feels uncomfy to play because it doesn't really follow anything music-wise and starts on a red tick
00:49:834 (2) - Same
I'd like you to listen a bit more to the music and add some jumps maybe.
00:56:284 (6) - Why is it so close to (5) lol?
00:57:034 (x) - There should be a note here too
00:58:684 (6) - Why so close, feels like it's 1/4 when it's not
00:59:284 (1,2) - I hear more than 1/1's here... listen to the vocals, music, etc
01:13:984 (3) - Should be a 1/2 slider with a repeat or something
01:15:034 (6) - REALLY anticlimatic. You are expecting streams, jumps, adrenaline, and suddenly there's a huge ass S shaped slider for no reason, when the music has some streams that YOU MAPPED before at 01:07:384 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - , so there's no reason to not do it here.
01:19:384 (5,6) - Listen to the music, this doesn't fit at all, specially the note
01:21:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Uhh look at that "U" shape the pink notes make
http://puu.sh/i8QjL/f46d219dc8.jpg. It should be a bit better, its kinda messy at the moment.
01:32:584 (1) - Kevincela's part is the most... "well thought" so far. I don't see any random shapes, patterns or notes, which is a good thing. However, I feel like he/she was afraid to go a little bit crazy, I mean, some more streams or jumps wouldn't hurt, specially in the build-up for the chorus. What I mean is, for instance, that the break at 01:34:234 (x) - is a little bit unfitting. DF maps are all about the adrenaline and momentum, no need for these breaks.
02:00:109 (2) - This is extremely anticlimatic imo. Feels really bad when playing. You expect some crazy stream to kick in here to finish the first line of the chorus but instead we got some big ass slider followed by a big ass break, kinda hurts the feel of the song. Specially since the drums play a huge stream here.
02:09:784 (1,2,3,4) - While having a 1/4 jump is perfectly playable an reasonable here, I kinda feel like you should reduce the spacing of the jump a bit less because you have no others like this one so far in the map, so it could be confusing.
02:12:484 (5,6,7) - Errr.. messy and touchy and unnecessary. I'd think of something else.
02:13:534 (1,2) - Same, why do they touch like that D:
02:18:634 (2) - Listen to the music please, this long slider is unfitting.
02:31:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I dislike the DJPop stream shapes in a map where the rest of the stream's shapes were circular.
02:48:184 (1) - Again, this is unfitting and anticlimatic AS HELL.
I can't stress this enough. It's just horrible to play. The player is expecting a stream, and THE DRUMS HAVE A HUGE STREAM HERE, but instead, this sliders break that adrenaline feel and are just dull and lazy and have no reason to be there. Also the shape is ugly :/
02:56:584 (1,2,3) - I don't think these should be SO close to each other
04:18:184 (1) - Listen to the music. Should be a 1/2 slider followed by a note or something.
04:19:384 (1) - Same
04:33:709 (10,1,2,3,4) - Missed here every time. Uncomfortable jump shape :S
05:12:484 (5) - New combo
Okay, after watching and playing the solo a couple of times I gotta say it feels kinda boring because the stream's shapes are ALWAYS the same, the same spacing, same repetitive pattern. Try to be a little more creative and crazy. Nothing too serious though.
06:07:384 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really like the zigzag here
06:11:397 (2) - Should be a red line here to move this note a little bit backwards, listen at .25
06:30:242 (4,1,2) - I hear streams here
06:38:068 (1) - The stream actually starts in the previous blue tick in the music
06:45:351 (x) - I'd add a note here
06:49:807 (1) - Should be a 1/2 slider and I leave the rest to you
06:51:438 (x) - Add note
06:55:786 (x) - Add note
07:02:742 (x) - Add note
Nothing else to say, I feel like ALL of you guys should take a moment to actually listen to the music and reconsider some of your mapping choices.
Good luck, viva DragonForce!