ok for me, the high sv with small space make me confuse........
so is cause me hard to explain my mind in my mod.....
first, try to use like jump to stress the point on rhythm
like
00:38:584 (1,2) -
00:40:384 (3,4) -
I think make a jump between those slider will be really helpful
00:56:884 (1,2,3) - the space between 2 and 3 should be large to the 1 and 2 if you follow the vocal
01:00:634 (5) - already touch hp bar, move down litter bit
01:13:534 (x) - here should have rhythm
01:19:384 (5) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3060347because actually you are following vocal so should use this rhythm^
01:36:784 (1,2,3) - space issue
01:38:434 (8,2,4) - overlap?
your and Rikih_ part still make me confuse.......because small space with high SV........and the main suggest to you two, from me, is unified the space to 1.1x except the batter part like
03:26:584 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
06:01:384 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -
well it should be a really big change for your map, so think about it and then decide
03:54:184 (1,2,1,2) - eh.....for me the arrow for 03:54:784 (1,2) - was get hidden so I dont suggest to do that
04:33:784 (1,2) - use circle to replace those slider the feeling will me more stronger I think
04:39:484 (7,1) - too hidden I think
and then timing still has problem I think, better go ask someone like Charles445 or ziin
the old style map not really acceptable for BN and Qat now actually...........
another suggest for this map is try to contact all the mapper back and let them decide what should them do for this map now.
It's two years ago already, should be something new.