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[General]
Tag:Wham!

[扶老二]
...为什么前面有clap后面那kiai没有
建议SC1-clap用响指然后kiai可以用Ndef-hit做clap 好讨厌Sdef-clap

00:12:584 (1) - 难度控制应该没关系不过感觉这里感觉要挪后1/2然后原位+circle
like this 01:30:876 (2)
00:24:291 (1,2,3) - 三角形nazi
00:55:023 (4,5,1) - ^
01:30:633 (1,2) - 重叠

[基片鸭]
00:03:803 (3,4) - 可以缩小点距离 ; 00:04:291 (4,1) - 更小 建议1.2 - 1.0 - 0.8
00:11:120 (2,3,4) - ^
00:27:950 (3,1,2) - clap->fin后同
01:03:316 - 其实不用break..?
01:22:584 (3) - remove clap 响指连用好奇怪
01:26:486 (3) - 这个vol -10

[moemoePo]
00:08:194 - vol 30%差不多了 ; 00:08:437 - 23%
00:16:242 - vol+5 后面维持40%
01:15:998 (2) - vol+5 ; 01:16:730 (2) - +10
01:25:998 - normal-hit , vol-5

You should use Pokie ver. as mp3 of this diff

[Flower]
00:00:877 (1,2) - 节奏略奇怪 作为最低难度实在是不好、、

00:08:681 (1,2) - 这里同 我觉得实在是没必要把第二个note下在红线上 要么我这的mp3不对要么这个实在不好抓

00:23:803 - BGM里有明显的hit音 加一个note把

00:52:584 (2,3) - 很难看的overlap 建议把2的形状下拉

01:02:340 (4) - 建议这个不拉马桶垫 圆滑一点好 比如这样？


01:09:169 (1) - (nazi)第二个tick往右下一格

01:16:730 (5) - 折返去掉finish？

[Duck]
00:11:120 (2) - 也换成1/2slider？感觉会舒服一点
啥的

00:15:998 (3) - 不Ctrl+G？

00:18:437 (1) - 蓝线结束？

00:21:730 (3) - 头去clap？

01:39:779 (3) - ^

[Pokie]
00:07:706 (1) - (nazi)往右一格

00:25:267 (3) - prev 0.02x

00:58:194 (4) - 间距突然变得好小感觉有点奇怪啊 往左一点？

Thanks to all modders <3

Hello. :3
Modding via M4M with JauiPlaY.
I'll post in your queue after I post this.

[General]

Please rename the bg image to something that isn't just a bunch of numbers.

Isn't this a remix of the song by "Wham"? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Uk_Fu8_UaQ
Maybe add "Wham" to tags.
Maybe add "Christmas" to tags?

That spinner makes me dizzy.

[Flower]

00:00:877 (1,2) - This rhythm is not working... When I played this I didn't know how to hit these notes. We should try and follow the vocals as best as we can here. I suggest this:
01:18:925 (1,2) - ^

00:16:242 - You should add a circle here next to the 00:16:486 (1) just like you did at 00:12:584 (1,2). It will make syncopation better.

00:23:803 - Consider adding a circle leading to the 00:24:291 (1)? Feels nice with the bass rhythms.

00:52:584 (2,3) - I don't think you should have the sliders overlapping like this in an easy difficulty. You should just move the 00:53:559 (3) so that it blankets the 2 like everywhere else in the beatmap. It will look much neater for a new player.

01:03:316 - Consider silencing this slider end?

01:07:218 (3) - NC
01:09:169 (1) - Remove NC
01:11:120 (3) - NC
01:13:559 (1) - Remove NC
This just makes more sense lyrically. At 01:07:218 (3) there is a new vocal idea starting. 01:09:169 (1) is part of that same idea still so it's strange for it to be a NC. 01:11:120 (3) we have a new vocal verse. 01:13:559 (1) is that same verse.

01:14:535 - This section is sort of strange. I feel like we should be starting the repeating slider at 01:15:267 when those clashes hit. And we could have a NC at 01:15:267. Try this rhythm here:


01:18:925 - Rhythm bad again. Do this:

01:34:535 (1) - You should extend this so that it ends at 01:35:998 for better syncopation. It feels really strange that 1 one ends on a red tick and the 2 is one and a half beats later. And it should be blanketing 01:36:486 (2).

[Me]


Maybe name it JauiPlaY?

00:21:730 (3) - Why is this starting on the blue tick? That's bad polarity and it feels awful. Just move it to 00:21:608 and make it end at 00:22:096.

00:31:120 (2) - This slider is ok but it's just not following anything in the music and feels awkward to play. I think you shorten it to end at 00:31:608 and add a circle at 00:31:852. That would fit better.

00:47:950 (2,3) - Isn't this unrankable? I thought stacking a circle on a slider track was for insane only.

01:30:633 (1,2,3) - This is confusing IMO. You're following the hits in the background with the 1 and 2, and then the 3 switches back to the vocals suddenly. It's better to stay consistent here. Delete the 3 and add another 1/2 beat slider at 01:32:096 leading into the 01:32:584 (1).

01:36:486 (2) - Does this slider have to curve like this? The repeat arrow is pointed away from the origin. It just makes it difficult to tell how long the slider will last.

01:39:779 (3) - On the blue tick again. :O Please don't do this. Either extend the slider like before or delete it and put a circle/slider at 01:39:901 leading into the 01:40:389 (1). It fits and is good polarity and will make your beatmap very fluid to play.
01:41:730 (3) - ^

01:49:169 (3) - I think you should shorten this to end at 01:49:657 and then add a circle at 01:49:901 and at 01:50:145 and move the spinner to 01:50:389. It feels nice to kick start the stream with a circle on that accent at 01:50:145. And Pokie does it.

[Pokie]

Pokie <3

The offset is different in this difficulty that the others, I don't know if that matters to you.

00:31:619 (3,1,2,3) - I don't think you should overlap like this. Just move these notes somewhere else.
00:31:619 (3) - I think you should replace the 3 with two circles. It's easier to read and play that way. The small sliders work best in groups of two or four, even numbers. When we just have three here and the rest of the stream in single circles it's really confusing.

00:55:522 (2) - Whistle on end is noisy to me.

01:05:156 - This green line isn't changing anything. Please check to make sure they all have a purpose.

01:21:375 (3,4) - Rhythm is weird here. Please switch the spots of the 3 and the 4. That is, extend the 3 to end at 01:21:741 -, move the 4 to 01:21:863 -, and shorten the 4 to end at 01:22:107. It fits much better.

01:37:229 (3,4) - Here you're using a different pattern than you did at 01:21:375 (3,4). Why? That played great. I suggest using the same pattern here:


Anyways. I think that's all. Great maps.
I'll leave star <3.

Hi there~~ mod for request~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. Remove "flower" from your tags since it is a diff name of your mapset...

[Flower]

1. How about to use silent sliderslide sample since it has been included in your map folder already? head better imo
2. 00:09:657 (2) - move it 1/2 tick prev? the current beat is weird and if you accept, add a note at 00:11:608 - is also necessary i think~
3. 00:32:096 (3) - stack it to the end of 00:30:633 (2) - ? i suppose a stack here could make better sense than a 1.0x spacing placement. hmm.. perhaps, a NC here also a good idea.
4. 00:52:584 (2,3) - hmm... an ugly overlap i think... try other placement? eg..
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:02:340 (4) - add a finish at end? head empty now
6. 01:16:730 (5) - stack to prev (4)? and also, i'd like to adjust the shape of this slider to make it more curved~
7. 01:18:925 - from here, i think add some claps to the following kiai time could be a good choice :>
8. 01:26:730 (1) - add a finish to slider head?
9. 01:41:852 - highly recommend to add a note here for consistent beat :>
10. 01:42:340 (1) - add a finish to slider head? if you accept prev one

[Me]

1. 01:03:316 - remove break here? i suppose it's unnecessary
2. 01:26:730 (1) - add a finish to slider head?
3. 01:37:950 (3) - perhaps a 1/2 repeat slider here is better than only a note? like this:
   
4. 01:42:340 (1) - same as above, add a finish to head?

[Pokie]

1. 00:06:497 (2) - move NC to here for vocal?
2. 00:07:717 (1) - if you accept above, remove NC here also :>
3. 00:59:424 (1) - how about move to 240:332? i think a jump here is better than stack because of the jumps following
4. 01:30:156 (3,1,2,3) - the flow here is ... weird a bit.. i may choose another square pattern here but not a sudden reverse direction~
   
   SPOILER

   

that's all~~ give me a call when you're ready :>

Thanks both of you
http://puu.sh/1zjUI

@jpy: tags決定要加的話幫我加一下

00:53:559 (3) It looks kinda ugly

Me:
00:21:386 (2,4) Maybe this? http://puu.sh/1zmGs
01:39:779 (2,4) ^

Pokie:

Well, i cant find anything weird here


Ok, i love your mapstyle, go and rank it, and sorry for this little mod, im not so good at it.

What I've fixed:

1. Tags.
2. Many many tiny issues in the Flower diff. Including remove the stacking on 00:53:559 (3). Now the rhythm should be better and more fluent for an easy tier diff.
3. Seems you guys really don't like the sliders on 00:21:730 and 01:39:779 in the Me diff. So, as you wish these 2 sliders have been changed.
4. And many hitsound changing.

Thanks for modding! I'm sorry that I cannot reply on everything you've mentioned. But trust me they have all been read and considered. Some of them are really useful for improving this map.

Also to Scorpiour: I've fixed all the blue things in the diff Flower and Me. I guess Pokie did the same thing in her diff.
And some of those black words are pretty constructive too. However, still I do not change some points like 01:26:730 (1) in the diff Me (to add a finish hitsound), cuz I think if I do so it will be quite noisy. Please understand and respect my choice, thank you very much.

Map uploaded!

irc recheck with mapper, fix a few minor stuffs, comboburst and a difficulty setting error.

bubbled~~~~

Thank you very much, madam!

Why does everyone have to sing and map this damned song D:

[General]
00:32:096 - I can add some colors to the title text if you'd like. Let me know which ones if you want.
01:34:779 - Too much autotune haha

[Skin]
I can't see my cursor at all on that spinner circle. It's also slightly off-center. You should find another one.

[Flower]
00:28:194 (1) - This is so much cooler with this kind of rhythm:

00:52:584 (2,3,4) - Suddenly larger spacing?
01:30:876 (2,3) - AHA you did it here! Anyway, moving along~ q:

[Me]
00:09:657 (2) - I wasn't too happy with the other 1/3 sliders, but at least they have something to follow in the music. This one lacks that excuse and sounds all the worse because of it.
00:47:950 (2,3) - This alignment is pretty poor since the 2 is overlapping the end of 3. You might be better off with a blanket of 2.
00:50:633 (3) - This is similar to that 1/3 in the beginning, but at least the rhythm it creates is a little more interesting in comparison.
01:48:681 (1,2,3) - Move down and right one grid to adjust for stacking

[_(:3 」∠)_]
00:12:828 (2,3,1,2,3) - This part would have been a lot neater if you did jumps with the big bass hits like what you did at 00:28:194 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -
00:59:413 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - New combo spaaaaam

Nom.

Garven wrote:

Why does everyone have to sing and map this damned song D: Hehehehehe

[General]
00:32:096 - I can add some colors to the title text if you'd like. Let me know which ones if you want. This for the artist and this for the title, thank you.
01:34:779 - Too much autotune haha My English is bad can't see what you mean~ xD

[Skin]
I can't see my cursor at all on that spinner circle. It's also slightly off-center. You should find another one. OK.

[Flower]
00:28:194 (1) - This is so much cooler with this kind of rhythm: Fixed.

00:52:584 (2,3,4) - Suddenly larger spacing? Fixed.
01:30:876 (2,3) - AHA you did it here! Anyway, moving along~ q:

[Me]
00:09:657 (2) - I wasn't too happy with the other 1/3 sliders, but at least they have something to follow in the music. This one lacks that excuse and sounds all the worse because of it. Fixed.
00:47:950 (2,3) - This alignment is pretty poor since the 2 is overlapping the end of 3. You might be better off with a blanket of 2. Fixed...maybe.
00:50:633 (3) - This is similar to that 1/3 in the beginning, but at least the rhythm it creates is a little more interesting in comparison. So I'll keep it.
01:48:681 (1,2,3) - Move down and right one grid to adjust for stacking Fixed.

Nom. Ah!

Thanks for modding!

[Flower]
00:52:584 (2,3) - Spacing is still off here.

(´･ω･) I don't know why it's still there, I think I've fixed it...
Anyway fixed and uploaded.

EDIT: Re-uploaded to change the tags.

Happy birthday!

Garven wrote:

Happy birthday!

3 hours passed and none of congrats here D: Wat.
Congratulations anyway!

raririn wrote:

大概因为是鸭子所以没人祝

hahahahahaha(runs

大概因为是鸭子所以没人祝

Garven wrote:

Happy birthday!

To Jesus, yes!

為何沒人祝 lol ?
congrats anyway >_0
(and Merry Christmas \:D/)

JauiPlaY wrote:

鸭子再见