sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue~

[Easy]

00:25:556 (2) - Clap << I don't want clap at all in this section because .I'll use clap only in chorus and it felt Chorus is Special.

01:30:008 (4) - Same as 01:27:491 (5)? <<< you want this slider Same as 5 you mean Shape ? I think it's ok but I notice 4 is a bit offscreen so i fix this thanks

[Normal]

00:55:362 (9) - Remove NC and 00:55:750 (10) NC < Well I'm not NC base on Lyrics I NC every 8 Beats and Maybe Every 4 beats If Difficult or Section has alot of clustering.


[Insane]

01:43:750 (2) - stack it < You mean stack with this 01:41:814 (1) - ? if yes fix.

02:24:588 (7) - Stack it < You mean stack with this 02:22:653 (3) - ? if yes fix.

02:50:717 (8) - NC < I think 14 combos Insane diff is ok For me.

Don't give kudosu if it's useless. And star!

• 00:18:201 (1) - remove whistle on end
  00:53:814 (3,1) - blanket
  01:08:330 (1) - move to (304,296) for triangle
  01:20:524 (2,3) - blanket
  01:33:104 (3) - opposite slider. maybe it look like better
  
  
  [Normal]
  
  • I think AR is fast. AR -1 or OD -1
    It feels like Hard diff. remove some circle on red tick
    01:06:008 (4,5,6) - maybe this pattern is hard for beginner
    01:33:104 (4) - NC
    
    
    [merchat7's Hard]
    
    • Nice :3, but i think it is too hard ;w;
      
      
      [Insane]
      
      • Nice :3
        

-Srui- wrote:

Hi ~ :3

[Easy]

• 00:18:201 (1) - remove whistle on end < i think it's match perfect.
  00:53:814 (3,1) - blanket < the perfect curve make the distance wrong so not.
  01:08:330 (1) - move to (304,296) for triangle < seem nice
  01:20:524 (2,3) - blanket < this can fix thanks
  01:33:104 (3) - opposite slider. maybe it look like better < re arrange
  
  
  [Normal]
  
  • I think AR is fast. AR -1 or OD -1
    It feels like Hard diff. remove some circle on red tick[/color]
    01:06:008 (4,5,6) - maybe this pattern is hard for beginner < stack it
    01:33:104 (4) - NC < I've NC every 8 beats and it's already correct.
    
    
    [merchat7's Hard]
    
    • Nice :3, but i think it is too hard ;w;
      
      
      [Insane]
      
      • Nice :3
        

frost-b-spec wrote:

thanks m4m~

[Insane]
00:08:911 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
00:12:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:23:040 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:39:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:55:750 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing and try symmetry
00:58:459 (1) - x238 y291
01:01:943 (3) - x45 y84
01:18:685 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing
01:21:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:26:717 (3,4,5) - ^
01:27:879 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
01:32:137 (3,4,1,2,3) - ^
01:34:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:44:137 (4) - ^
02:02:137 (2) - ^
02:09:104 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:34:459 (1,2,3) - ^
02:42:975 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:47:427 (4) - ^
02:47:814 (7) - ^
02:52:653 (4) - ^

[merchat7]
01:06:782 (3) - spacing

[Normal]
01:54:975 (6) - spacing

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi~

Replying the M4M :3

[General]
Looks clean.
You may want to add "eroge" "galgame" to tags (as you added "hentai" lol)

[Easy]
00:01:750 (1) - Remove NC, this still fits being a single combo with the next one.
00:25:943 (1) - Maybe try a blanket?
00:32:137 (1,2) - ^
00:38:330 (1,2,3) - ^
00:47:233 (3) - You're following vocals for previous parts and this looks a bit random as it isn't fitting for vocals and considering you're not too strict in your clap hitsounding, you should try this rhythm <:

00:59:620 (3) - Something similar as above.
01:09:685 (3) - How about making this a 1/1 beat slider with one repeat and putting a circle in 01:10:846, this way it'll match better the music.
01:24:782 (1) - Maybe soften this curve a bit or making a blanket for next slider?
01:49:362 (1) - How about moving this 1/2 beat forward and making it a 1/1 slider, it'll fit better as it'll be following vocals as you're doing since this part.
01:51:491 (1) - You can arrange this slider in a similar way like in the screen, this allow a smoother flow, being more beginner friendly.

SPOILER

01:54:201 (1,2) - I also don't like how this part flows, maybe flipping vertically (2) (Ctrl+J) and fixing the placement would improve it nicely, you may need to rearrange next circles.
02:18:975 (2,1,2) - You could improve this blanketting.

[Normal]
00:00:588 (1) - Maybe soften the curve a bit for this slider?
00:03:491 (3) - You can remove the repeat here and put a circle in 00:04:266, which will fit better with the downbeat there.
00:48:395 (6,1) - I highly suggest you to arrange this in other way, the overlapping looks bad and may be confusing for some players.
01:17:814 (2) - I can think your intention here, but you may want to reverse (Ctrl+G) this and fix the spacing, the way it is now it flows a bit weird.
01:49:556 (1) - Maybe rotate it 180°? The flow will not be that sharpy and better imo.
02:07:362 (4) - Maybe move the beginning around x:4 y:176? This looks a bit odd as it isn't following nicely the curve given by the previous slider.
02:25:169 (4,5) - This overlap looks bad imo, you may want to avoid it.


[Insane]
Well, I'll only give a general feedback from my feelings about this, I felt some streams really overload the song, you may lower the volume of the hitsounds or use the soft sampleset for them, specially in the part before the first break (00:07:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16)). Also I felt the diff quite jumpy and somehow random, I'll just point a few stuff as I don't want to mess too much with this.
00:00:588 (1,2,3) - A regular spacing here would be nice followed by a jump to the next circle.
00:22:846 - A stream would really fit better than just sliders here.
00:31:556 (1) - Remove NC?
00:49:266 (2) - Remove this, fits better as a circle + triple.
01:34:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't recommend to begin slider-streams in a blue tick when the song is strong in white and red ones. But in my opinion, this doesn't even fit with this part, as the music has more emphasis in the beats I put in the screen, maybe you could make something like 00:33:685 (1,2,3,4,5).

01:46:459 (1,2,3,4) - Similar as above.
02:05:620 (4,5) - I was expecting a jump here as the vocals increase the intensity.

Well, that'd be all from my part, I hope it helps, good luck c:

mercury2004 wrote:

เนื่องจากฮาดดิสใหม้ mod outline ก็ละลายหายไป
จะดูเน่าๆหน่อย

Orange : Suggestion
Blue : Great if you fix
Red : Unrankable

General
ไม่มีอะไรแปลกๆ
Easy
มายก็อด ยากไปใหมเนี่ยพี่บอม คนที่บ้านเล่นไม่ได้เลย ลด เดรนเลือดอีกซัก 2 กับ od ซัก 1 ดู

Normal
ho drain -1 สไลเดอมันไวมาก พลาดแถบเดียวแทบเฟล
01:21:685 (5,6,7) - ลองวางให้มันเป๊ะๆดู

Expert
00:07:362 - 00:12:975 ใช้เสียง 55-65 กำลังดี
00:24:782 (2,3,4,5) - ใช้เป็นสไล 1/4 โดดๆมันแจ่มกว่า
00:31:943 (2) - เหมือนจะขาดนกหวีด
00:36:782 (1) - นี่ด้วย
00:58:459 (1,2) - สลับที่กันเล่นดีกว่า
01:01:750 (2,3) - วางแบบนี้ดูมะ

SPOILER

01:06:201 - 01:07:556 ลองลดเสียงซัก 10
01:34:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - รัวเพียวๆไปเลยมันเล่นแล้วไม่ขัด
01:52:653 (1,2,3,4) - โอ้ว Combo breaker เม้นเฉยๆไม่มีอะไร

As always have a kudo lol

Tsukuyomi wrote:

Hi~hi~from my queue
reply to m4m req

General
turn off the letterbox

Easy
00:10:846 (1) - remove this not,put a 1/1 slider at 00:10:459 < sudden note after 1/2 beat is too much for easiest diff.
00:44:717 (4) - flow is strange here,use a straight one? < ok

SPOILER

01:29:233 (2) - add whistle < must keep a whistle to make it a consist and easy has few note and hard too make it good.
01:41:620 (2) - ^
02:53:427 (1) - use soft hitsound at the end,same in other diffs < I prefer N sorry.

Normal
00:10:266 (4) - ...i think this rhythm is sudden and hard,use a 1/2 slider here,and you can cover the finish at 00:10:459 < I think it's fine coz I've already guide player with 2 x slider already and this is normal diff.
00:23:040 (1,2,3,4) - adding whistle is better < I think put whistle here make the whistle in other part not feel special anymore.
00:34:266 (4,1,2) - these 3 slider's flow is very bad,try a better one like this < fix

SPOILER

00:37:556 (4) - and this one I think it's ok and it's my intention.

SPOILER

00:44:330 (4) - clap on head < same reason as insane.
01:55:750 (1) - blanket < done
02:31:362 (3) - ^also

SPOILER

02:49:169 (3,4,5) - sound not good,use this rhythm here <done

SPOILER

Insane
00:08:911 (1,2,3,4) - music here doesn't have any change..they dosen't fit.. < depend what music you are listen there are least 2 music overlap here. and I just follow the stream
try this rhythm?

SPOILER

00:22:943 (13,1,2,3,4) - since you use 00:22:943 (13) - and 00:23:040 (1) -
i think it is better to use same pattern instead of 4 even repeat sliders,or don't use this pattern < I think it's make the pattern harder

SPOILER

00:32:137 (1) - remove nc,this even stream is not hard to read < thanks I guess this is accident hit "q" button .
00:57:879 (3) - clap on tail < this not fit I 'll usual put clap only 2nd and 4th beats of measure.
01:48:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - increase each triplet's spacing gradually < use reverse direction instead

SPOILER

02:03:104 (5) - clap on reverse <same as 00:57:879 (3)
02:40:266 (7) - use a 1/4 slider to replace it < I think this 's good.
02:42:588 (2) - make it a repeat slider< ok
02:45:782 i think you shouldn't miss this drum < ok
02:51:491 (1,2,3,4,5) -doesn't fit the music again, try this? < same reason as above

SPOILER

that's all
good luck!

Datzuke-Oni wrote:

In the 4 levels did not find any problem you'll do just 2 recommendations

1 - If it is a melody of some Anime agragale video or Storyboard

2 - with respect to the drums, and applause using the SOFT mode Finish

1. You'd better make slider put the 'end of dot' on the middle of 'end of slider' (Example : http://puu.sh/6Z7MK.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/6Z7Q7.jpg )
   This will help you making your map's quality higher

1. 00:27:491 (3) - http://puu.sh/6Z85h.jpg this one is better

1. 00:13:750 - better put some notes in break time
2. 00:52:072 (4,1) - 4(put NC), 1(remove NC)
3. 00:55:362 (1,2) - 1(remove NC), 2(put NC)
4. 01:04:459 (6,1) - 6(put NC), 1(remove NC)
5. 01:10:846 - better put some notes in break time
6. 01:52:653 (1,2,3,4) - better make square
7. 02:04:846 (5,1) - 5(put NC), 1(remove NC)
8. 02:17:233 (6,1) - 6(put NC), 1(remove NC)
9. 02:23:427 (8,1) - 8(put NC), 1(remove NC)

1. It's like some insane diff
2. 00:39:879 (1,2,3,4) - Be consistent with your spacing
3. 02:31:362 (1) - little shorter spinner will be good http://puu.sh/6Z9lL.jpg
4. 02:37:556 (1) - ^
5. 02:43:750 (1) - ^

1. I can't find something Weird
   
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