update

I'm still not finish after so long The main reaosn why is that to keep difficulty spread, I need to map this like an Insane (I have slow mapping speed for Insane) and some parts, it's difficult to come up with a simple rhythm.

I'll finish this tonight for sure though, no sleeping until I finish it!

Edit: Finished last night, but internet crashed on me. I was really tired at the end so I hope the mapping quality didn't drop too much.

http://puu.sh/1WTa4
I hope you like it, really sorry for delay.

About the Insane you ask me for this beatmap http://osu.ppy.sh/s/69493. As you can see, I have really slow mapping speed for Insane and I need a lot of motivation so I don't think I can make you one in a reasonable amount of time. Sorry about this as well.

thankyou don't worry about kibou no uta.

update your diff. and fix tags also.

bump

Hi ~
m4m from my queue~

[General]
unconsistency preview time
Insane : 43361
Hard : 43365
Normal :43381
Easy : 43381
Need at least 2 taiko diff.. rules changed 29 July 2012 that said one mapset at least need 2 taiko diff. One of that must easier than Oni

[Easy]
00:06:591 (2) - try this ?
00:10:849 (1,2,3) - try this ?
00:12:011 (1) - give whistle too? i think it's fit
00:25:559 (2) - 1 grid left and 1 grid up
00:39:882 (3) - i think branket better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/740462
00:44:720 (4) - try this ?
00:46:849 (2) - 1 grid right better imo
01:10:849 - give whistle too?
01:27:494 (5,1) - hmm maybe swap NC?
01:32:140 (2) - make it curved?
02:08:914 (2) - ctrl+J seems better flow imo
02:27:107 (1) - x:404 y:180?
02:29:430 (5) - 1 grid right
02:31:365 (3) - 1 grid up for avoid little overlap with 02:29:817 (1) -
02:57:688 - how about volume 5% in here?

[Normal]
00:00:591 (1) - make like this better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/740555
00:08:527 (2) - 1 grid right?
00:23:817 (3) - 1 grid up?
00:30:978 (5) - ctrl+J for better flow?
00:44:140 (3) - spacing issue 1,16x .. move x:336 y:160 for avoid that
01:30:011 (5) - x:276 y:356 for avoid little overlap with 01:29:236 (3) - ? if yes fix spacing after this
01:36:204 (4) - spacing issue 1,06x
01:42:011 (4) - x:216 y:196 and then 01:42:398 (5,6) - x:272 y:64 better imo. if yes, fix spacing after this
01:49:559 (1) - ctrl+J and then ctrl+G. move x:320 y:236?
02:25:172 (4,5) - hard to read imo.. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/740581
02:33:301 (1) - x:268 y:28 for avoid spacing issue


[merchat7's Hard]
00:01:172 (5) - NC
00:06:011 (4) - ctrl+J better imo (maybe rotate -15 degree)
00:12:011 (1) - finish?
00:33:688 (1) - end in 00:34:849 -
00:42:978 (2) - need NC imo
00:44:720 (1) - try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/740603
01:04:075 (3) - ctrl+G?
01:18:011 (5) - spacing 1,27 is it itentional? if no 01:18:011 (5,1) - x:164 y:152
01:42:591 (2) - ctrl+G for make jump too?
01:46:656 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - use spacing 1,00 same as 01:41:430 (1,2,3) - ?
02:03:301 (5) - spacing issue 1,14x
02:26:527 (1,2,3) - 1 grid up for avoid spacing 1,26x too?

[Insane]
can't mod insane orz. just little mod
02:50:720 (8) - NC because you change spacing
02:32:914 - remove green point

Fortune Arterial ~ ♥
Good Luck ~ (:

Xinely wrote:

Hi ~
m4m from my queue~

[General]
unconsistency preview time
Insane : 43361
Hard : 43365
Normal :43381
Easy : 43381
Need at least 2 taiko diff.. rules changed 29 July 2012 that said one mapset at least need 2 taiko diff. One of that must easier than Oni

Done Fix

[Easy]
00:06:591 (2) - try this ?
00:10:849 (1,2,3) - try this ?
00:12:011 (1) - give whistle too? i think it's fit
00:25:559 (2) - 1 grid left and 1 grid up
00:39:882 (3) - i think branket better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/740462
00:44:720 (4) - try this ?
00:46:849 (2) - 1 grid right better imo < FIX
01:10:849 - give whistle too?
01:27:494 (5,1) - hmm maybe swap NC?
01:32:140 (2) - make it curved?
02:08:914 (2) - ctrl+J seems better flow imo < Fix
02:27:107 (1) - x:404 y:180?
02:29:430 (5) - 1 grid right
02:31:365 (3) - 1 grid up for avoid little overlap with 02:29:817 (1) - < It's not show while playing the time between both notes is too far.
02:57:688 - how about volume 5% in here?

[Normal]
00:00:591 (1) - make like this better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/740555 < Fix
00:08:527 (2) - 1 grid right? < Fix
00:23:817 (3) - 1 grid up? < Fix
00:30:978 (5) - ctrl+J for better flow? < Fix
00:44:140 (3) - spacing issue 1,16x .. move x:336 y:160 for avoid that < Fix
01:30:011 (5) - x:276 y:356 for avoid little overlap with 01:29:236 (3) - ? if yes fix spacing after this
01:36:204 (4) - spacing issue 1,06x < Fix
01:42:011 (4) - x:216 y:196 and then 01:42:398 (5,6) - x:272 y:64 better imo. if yes, fix spacing after this < Fix
01:49:559 (1) - ctrl+J and then ctrl+G. move x:320 y:236?
02:25:172 (4,5) - hard to read imo.. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/740581
02:33:301 (1) - x:268 y:28 for avoid spacing issue

[Insane]
can't mod insane orz. just little mod
02:50:720 (8) - NC because you change spacing
02:32:914 - remove green point < Fix

Fortune Arterial ~ ♥
Good Luck ~ (:

thanks for mod ,sorry for very late, really busy.

Hi! From my queue~

[Easy]

00:25:556 (2) - Clap

01:30:008 (4) - Same as 01:27:491 (5)?

[Normal]

00:55:362 (9) - Remove NC and 00:55:750 (10) NC

[merchat7's Hard]

00:39:298 (5) - Stack it

[Insane]

01:43:750 (2) - stack it

02:24:588 (7) - Stack it

02:50:717 (8) - NC

Don't give kudosu if it's useless. And star!

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue~

[Easy]

00:25:556 (2) - Clap << I don't want clap at all in this section because .I'll use clap only in chorus and it felt Chorus is Special.

01:30:008 (4) - Same as 01:27:491 (5)? <<< you want this slider Same as 5 you mean Shape ? I think it's ok but I notice 4 is a bit offscreen so i fix this thanks

[Normal]

00:55:362 (9) - Remove NC and 00:55:750 (10) NC < Well I'm not NC base on Lyrics I NC every 8 Beats and Maybe Every 4 beats If Difficult or Section has alot of clustering.


[Insane]

01:43:750 (2) - stack it < You mean stack with this 01:41:814 (1) - ? if yes fix.

02:24:588 (7) - Stack it < You mean stack with this 02:22:653 (3) - ? if yes fix.

02:50:717 (8) - NC < I think 14 combos Insane diff is ok For me.

Don't give kudosu if it's useless. And star!

Thanks For mod. But Please Do a better explain. next times.

I hope my reply Can give you better in a mod skills.

and thanks for star.

Ok. I'll try to be more detailed.

bump

Hi ~ :3

[Easy]

• 00:18:201 (1) - remove whistle on end
  00:53:814 (3,1) - blanket
  01:08:330 (1) - move to (304,296) for triangle
  01:20:524 (2,3) - blanket
  01:33:104 (3) - opposite slider. maybe it look like better
  
  
  [Normal]
  
  • I think AR is fast. AR -1 or OD -1
    It feels like Hard diff. remove some circle on red tick
    01:06:008 (4,5,6) - maybe this pattern is hard for beginner
    01:33:104 (4) - NC
    
    
    [merchat7's Hard]
    
    • Nice :3, but i think it is too hard ;w;
      
      
      [Insane]
      
      • Nice :3
        

-Srui- wrote:

Hi ~ :3

[Easy]

• 00:18:201 (1) - remove whistle on end < i think it's match perfect.
  00:53:814 (3,1) - blanket < the perfect curve make the distance wrong so not.
  01:08:330 (1) - move to (304,296) for triangle < seem nice
  01:20:524 (2,3) - blanket < this can fix thanks
  01:33:104 (3) - opposite slider. maybe it look like better < re arrange
  
  
  [Normal]
  
  • I think AR is fast. AR -1 or OD -1
    It feels like Hard diff. remove some circle on red tick[/color]
    01:06:008 (4,5,6) - maybe this pattern is hard for beginner < stack it
    01:33:104 (4) - NC < I've NC every 8 beats and it's already correct.
    
    
    [merchat7's Hard]
    
    • Nice :3, but i think it is too hard ;w;
      
      
      [Insane]
      
      • Nice :3
        

Thanks for mod.

Support!

thank for star

thanks m4m~

[Insane]
00:08:911 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
00:12:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:23:040 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:39:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:55:750 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing and try symmetry
00:58:459 (1) - x238 y291
01:01:943 (3) - x45 y84
01:18:685 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing
01:21:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:26:717 (3,4,5) - ^
01:27:879 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
01:32:137 (3,4,1,2,3) - ^
01:34:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:44:137 (4) - ^
02:02:137 (2) - ^
02:09:104 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:34:459 (1,2,3) - ^
02:42:975 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:47:427 (4) - ^
02:47:814 (7) - ^
02:52:653 (4) - ^

[merchat7]
01:06:782 (3) - spacing

[Normal]
01:54:975 (6) - spacing

frost-b-spec wrote:

thanks m4m~

[Insane]
00:08:911 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
00:12:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:23:040 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:39:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:55:750 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing and try symmetry
00:58:459 (1) - x238 y291
01:01:943 (3) - x45 y84
01:18:685 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing
01:21:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:26:717 (3,4,5) - ^
01:27:879 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
01:32:137 (3,4,1,2,3) - ^
01:34:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:44:137 (4) - ^
02:02:137 (2) - ^
02:09:104 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:34:459 (1,2,3) - ^
02:42:975 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:47:427 (4) - ^
02:47:814 (7) - ^
02:52:653 (4) - ^

[merchat7]
01:06:782 (3) - spacing

[Normal]
01:54:975 (6) - spacing

fix spacing errors in normal and one position behind slider in insane diff
I 've intention to make it wrong space. ( it's call jumping ) thanks for mod.

Hi~

Replying the M4M :3

[General]
Looks clean.
You may want to add "eroge" "galgame" to tags (as you added "hentai" lol)

[Easy]
00:01:750 (1) - Remove NC, this still fits being a single combo with the next one.
00:25:943 (1) - Maybe try a blanket?
00:32:137 (1,2) - ^
00:38:330 (1,2,3) - ^
00:47:233 (3) - You're following vocals for previous parts and this looks a bit random as it isn't fitting for vocals and considering you're not too strict in your clap hitsounding, you should try this rhythm <:

00:59:620 (3) - Something similar as above.
01:09:685 (3) - How about making this a 1/1 beat slider with one repeat and putting a circle in 01:10:846, this way it'll match better the music.
01:24:782 (1) - Maybe soften this curve a bit or making a blanket for next slider?
01:49:362 (1) - How about moving this 1/2 beat forward and making it a 1/1 slider, it'll fit better as it'll be following vocals as you're doing since this part.
01:51:491 (1) - You can arrange this slider in a similar way like in the screen, this allow a smoother flow, being more beginner friendly.
01:54:201 (1,2) - I also don't like how this part flows, maybe flipping vertically (2) (Ctrl+J) and fixing the placement would improve it nicely, you may need to rearrange next circles.
02:18:975 (2,1,2) - You could improve this blanketting.

[Normal]
00:00:588 (1) - Maybe soften the curve a bit for this slider?
00:03:491 (3) - You can remove the repeat here and put a circle in 00:04:266, which will fit better with the downbeat there.
00:48:395 (6,1) - I highly suggest you to arrange this in other way, the overlapping looks bad and may be confusing for some players.
01:17:814 (2) - I can think your intention here, but you may want to reverse (Ctrl+G) this and fix the spacing, the way it is now it flows a bit weird.
01:49:556 (1) - Maybe rotate it 180°? The flow will not be that sharpy and better imo.
02:07:362 (4) - Maybe move the beginning around x:4 y:176? This looks a bit odd as it isn't following nicely the curve given by the previous slider.
02:25:169 (4,5) - This overlap looks bad imo, you may want to avoid it.

[merchat7's Hard]
00:01:169 (5) - NC like regenz did in Normal and Insane? I think this combo is quite long.
00:20:911 (2,3) - I'd look out for jumps like these, the intensity in the music is quite simlar for all these part to justify big jumps, making them shorter would be nice.
00:24:588 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd suggest to use a cleaner rhythm here, actual one is too noisy and even if the sliders begin on the instrument I think you tried to follow, I can't find it nice to play. If you do the last, you can split it in circles or sliders, that was just as a reference.


00:39:879 (1,2,3) - I'd replace this with two 3/4 beat sliders, they'll match better the music
00:46:653 (3,4) - I'm expecting more a jump here than in 00:46:072 (2,3), vocals are more intense in the slider beginning than in the circle, like you did in 00:52:266 (2,3,4).
00:47:427 (1,2) - ^Similar as above.
01:21:685 (1,2,3) - I'd replace this with two 3/4 beat sliders, they'll match better the music.
01:35:620 (1,2,3,4,5) - As I mentioned above, this is a bit noisy, though here it feels a bit better, still I'd suggest you to make your rhythm cleaner using 3/4 beat sliders.
01:48:395 (2,3,4) - Here I recommend you to not begin sliders in blue ticks, it's very confusing and maybe frustrating, you should keep your building and use 1/4 sliders with one repeat leaving 1/2 beat between them, like 01:48:008 (1,2).
02:46:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, I highly suggest you to clean your rhythm here, you can achieve a nice one shortening (3) to a 1/4 slider and removing the repeat in (4)
02:51:491 (3,4) - Make these 3/4 beat sliders, the rhythm in the music is the same as in 02:49:943 (1,2) -

[Insane]
Well, I'll only give a general feedback from my feelings about this, I felt some streams really overload the song, you may lower the volume of the hitsounds or use the soft sampleset for them, specially in the part before the first break (00:07:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16)). Also I felt the diff quite jumpy and somehow random, I'll just point a few stuff as I don't want to mess too much with this.
00:00:588 (1,2,3) - A regular spacing here would be nice followed by a jump to the next circle.
00:22:846 - A stream would really fit better than just sliders here.
00:31:556 (1) - Remove NC?
00:49:266 (2) - Remove this, fits better as a circle + triple.
01:34:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't recommend to begin slider-streams in a blue tick when the song is strong in white and red ones. But in my opinion, this doesn't even fit with this part, as the music has more emphasis in the beats I put in the screen, maybe you could make something like 00:33:685 (1,2,3,4,5).

01:46:459 (1,2,3,4) - Similar as above.
02:05:620 (4,5) - I was expecting a jump here as the vocals increase the intensity.

Well, that'd be all from my part, I hope it helps, good luck c:

เนื่องจากฮาดดิสใหม้ mod outline ก็ละลายหายไป
จะดูเน่าๆหน่อย

Orange : Suggestion
Blue : Great if you fix
Red : Unrankable

General
ไม่มีอะไรแปลกๆ
Easy
มายก็อด ยากไปใหมเนี่ยพี่บอม คนที่บ้านเล่นไม่ได้เลย ลด เดรนเลือดอีกซัก 2 กับ od ซัก 1 ดู

Normal
ho drain -1 สไลเดอมันไวมาก พลาดแถบเดียวแทบเฟล
01:21:685 (5,6,7) - ลองวางให้มันเป๊ะๆดู

merchat7's Hard
you can skil nazis if you want. nazis will be colour in purple
00:10:266 (1) - stack with 00:08:911 (7) -
00:18:201 (1,1) - a bit sudden * too close
00:22:943 (1) - end this spinner here 00:24:201
01:48:008 (1) - remove nc and 01:48:395 (2) - nc here

Expert
00:07:362 - 00:12:975 ใช้เสียง 55-65 กำลังดี
00:24:782 (2,3,4,5) - ใช้เป็นสไล 1/4 โดดๆมันแจ่มกว่า
00:31:943 (2) - เหมือนจะขาดนกหวีด
00:36:782 (1) - นี่ด้วย
00:58:459 (1,2) - สลับที่กันเล่นดีกว่า
01:01:750 (2,3) - วางแบบนี้ดูมะ
01:06:201 - 01:07:556 ลองลดเสียงซัก 10
01:34:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - รัวเพียวๆไปเลยมันเล่นแล้วไม่ขัด
01:52:653 (1,2,3,4) - โอ้ว Combo breaker เม้นเฉยๆไม่มีอะไร

As always have a kudo lol

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi~

Replying the M4M :3

[General]
Looks clean.
You may want to add "eroge" "galgame" to tags (as you added "hentai" lol)

[Easy]
00:01:750 (1) - Remove NC, this still fits being a single combo with the next one.
00:25:943 (1) - Maybe try a blanket?
00:32:137 (1,2) - ^
00:38:330 (1,2,3) - ^
00:47:233 (3) - You're following vocals for previous parts and this looks a bit random as it isn't fitting for vocals and considering you're not too strict in your clap hitsounding, you should try this rhythm <:

00:59:620 (3) - Something similar as above.
01:09:685 (3) - How about making this a 1/1 beat slider with one repeat and putting a circle in 01:10:846, this way it'll match better the music.
01:24:782 (1) - Maybe soften this curve a bit or making a blanket for next slider?
01:49:362 (1) - How about moving this 1/2 beat forward and making it a 1/1 slider, it'll fit better as it'll be following vocals as you're doing since this part.
01:51:491 (1) - You can arrange this slider in a similar way like in the screen, this allow a smoother flow, being more beginner friendly.

SPOILER

01:54:201 (1,2) - I also don't like how this part flows, maybe flipping vertically (2) (Ctrl+J) and fixing the placement would improve it nicely, you may need to rearrange next circles.
02:18:975 (2,1,2) - You could improve this blanketting.

[Normal]
00:00:588 (1) - Maybe soften the curve a bit for this slider?
00:03:491 (3) - You can remove the repeat here and put a circle in 00:04:266, which will fit better with the downbeat there.
00:48:395 (6,1) - I highly suggest you to arrange this in other way, the overlapping looks bad and may be confusing for some players.
01:17:814 (2) - I can think your intention here, but you may want to reverse (Ctrl+G) this and fix the spacing, the way it is now it flows a bit weird.
01:49:556 (1) - Maybe rotate it 180°? The flow will not be that sharpy and better imo.
02:07:362 (4) - Maybe move the beginning around x:4 y:176? This looks a bit odd as it isn't following nicely the curve given by the previous slider.
02:25:169 (4,5) - This overlap looks bad imo, you may want to avoid it.


[Insane]
Well, I'll only give a general feedback from my feelings about this, I felt some streams really overload the song, you may lower the volume of the hitsounds or use the soft sampleset for them, specially in the part before the first break (00:07:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16)). Also I felt the diff quite jumpy and somehow random, I'll just point a few stuff as I don't want to mess too much with this.
00:00:588 (1,2,3) - A regular spacing here would be nice followed by a jump to the next circle.
00:22:846 - A stream would really fit better than just sliders here.
00:31:556 (1) - Remove NC?
00:49:266 (2) - Remove this, fits better as a circle + triple.
01:34:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't recommend to begin slider-streams in a blue tick when the song is strong in white and red ones. But in my opinion, this doesn't even fit with this part, as the music has more emphasis in the beats I put in the screen, maybe you could make something like 00:33:685 (1,2,3,4,5).

01:46:459 (1,2,3,4) - Similar as above.
02:05:620 (4,5) - I was expecting a jump here as the vocals increase the intensity.

Well, that'd be all from my part, I hope it helps, good luck c:

fix most except in red highlight . because I think the current is suit better than your suggestion sorry.
thanks for m4m it's help.

mercury2004 wrote:

เนื่องจากฮาดดิสใหม้ mod outline ก็ละลายหายไป
จะดูเน่าๆหน่อย

Orange : Suggestion
Blue : Great if you fix
Red : Unrankable

General
ไม่มีอะไรแปลกๆ
Easy
มายก็อด ยากไปใหมเนี่ยพี่บอม คนที่บ้านเล่นไม่ได้เลย ลด เดรนเลือดอีกซัก 2 กับ od ซัก 1 ดู

Normal
ho drain -1 สไลเดอมันไวมาก พลาดแถบเดียวแทบเฟล
01:21:685 (5,6,7) - ลองวางให้มันเป๊ะๆดู

Expert
00:07:362 - 00:12:975 ใช้เสียง 55-65 กำลังดี
00:24:782 (2,3,4,5) - ใช้เป็นสไล 1/4 โดดๆมันแจ่มกว่า
00:31:943 (2) - เหมือนจะขาดนกหวีด
00:36:782 (1) - นี่ด้วย
00:58:459 (1,2) - สลับที่กันเล่นดีกว่า
01:01:750 (2,3) - วางแบบนี้ดูมะ

SPOILER

01:06:201 - 01:07:556 ลองลดเสียงซัก 10
01:34:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - รัวเพียวๆไปเลยมันเล่นแล้วไม่ขัด
01:52:653 (1,2,3,4) - โอ้ว Combo breaker เม้นเฉยๆไม่มีอะไร

As always have a kudo lol

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