thanks for mod ,sorry for very late, really busy.
Xinely wrote:Hi ~
m4m from my queue~
unconsistency preview time
Insane : 43361
Hard : 43365
Easy : 43381
Need at least 2 taiko diff.. rules changed 29 July 2012 that said one mapset at least need 2 taiko diff. One of that must easier than Oni
00:06:591 (2) - try this ?
00:10:849 (1,2,3) - try this ?
00:12:011 (1) - give whistle too? i think it's fit
00:25:559 (2) - 1 grid left and 1 grid up
00:39:882 (3) - i think branket better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/740462
00:44:720 (4) - try this ?
00:46:849 (2) - 1 grid right better imo < FIX
01:10:849 - give whistle too?
01:27:494 (5,1) - hmm maybe swap NC?
01:32:140 (2) - make it curved?
02:08:914 (2) - ctrl+J seems better flow imo < Fix
02:27:107 (1) - x:404 y:180?
02:29:430 (5) - 1 grid right
02:31:365 (3) - 1 grid up for avoid little overlap with 02:29:817 (1) - < It's not show while playing the time between both notes is too far.
02:57:688 - how about volume 5% in here?
00:00:591 (1) - make like this better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/740555 < Fix
00:08:527 (2) - 1 grid right? < Fix
00:23:817 (3) - 1 grid up? < Fix
00:30:978 (5) - ctrl+J for better flow? < Fix
00:44:140 (3) - spacing issue 1,16x .. move x:336 y:160 for avoid that < Fix
01:30:011 (5) - x:276 y:356 for avoid little overlap with 01:29:236 (3) - ? if yes fix spacing after this
01:36:204 (4) - spacing issue 1,06x < Fix
01:42:011 (4) - x:216 y:196 and then 01:42:398 (5,6) - x:272 y:64 better imo. if yes, fix spacing after this < Fix
01:49:559 (1) - ctrl+J and then ctrl+G. move x:320 y:236?
02:25:172 (4,5) - hard to read imo.. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/740581
02:33:301 (1) - x:268 y:28 for avoid spacing issue
can't mod insane orz. just little mod
02:50:720 (8) - NC because you change spacing
02:32:914 - remove green point < Fix
Fortune Arterial ~ ♥
Good Luck ~ (:
Thanks For mod. But Please Do a better explain. next times.
sheela901 wrote:Hi! From my queue~
00:25:556 (2) - Clap << I don't want clap at all in this section because .I'll use clap only in chorus and it felt Chorus is Special.
01:30:008 (4) - Same as 01:27:491 (5)? <<< you want this slider Same as 5 you mean Shape ? I think it's ok but I notice 4 is a bit offscreen so i fix this thanks
00:55:362 (9) - Remove NC and 00:55:750 (10) NC < Well I'm not NC base on Lyrics I NC every 8 Beats and Maybe Every 4 beats If Difficult or Section has alot of clustering.
01:43:750 (2) - stack it < You mean stack with this 01:41:814 (1) - ? if yes fix.
02:24:588 (7) - Stack it < You mean stack with this 02:22:653 (3) - ? if yes fix.
02:50:717 (8) - NC < I think 14 combos Insane diff is ok For me.
Don't give kudosu if it's useless. And star!
Thanks for mod.
-Srui- wrote:Hi ~ :3
- 00:18:201 (1) - remove whistle on end < i think it's match perfect.
00:53:814 (3,1) - blanket < the perfect curve make the distance wrong so not.
01:08:330 (1) - move to (304,296) for triangle < seem nice
01:20:524 (2,3) - blanket < this can fix thanks
01:33:104 (3) - opposite slider. maybe it look like better < re arrange
- I think AR is fast. AR -1 or OD -1
It feels like Hard diff. remove some circle on red tick[/color]
01:06:008 (4,5,6) - maybe this pattern is hard for beginner < stack it
01:33:104 (4) - NC < I've NC every 8 beats and it's already correct.
- Nice :3, but i think it is too hard ;w;
- Nice :3
fix spacing errors in normal and one position behind slider in insane diff
frost-b-spec wrote:thanks m4m~
00:08:911 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
00:12:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:23:040 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:39:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:55:750 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing and try symmetry
00:58:459 (1) - x238 y291
01:01:943 (3) - x45 y84
01:18:685 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing
01:21:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:26:717 (3,4,5) - ^
01:27:879 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
01:32:137 (3,4,1,2,3) - ^
01:34:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:44:137 (4) - ^
02:02:137 (2) - ^
02:09:104 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:34:459 (1,2,3) - ^
02:42:975 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:47:427 (4) - ^
02:47:814 (7) - ^
02:52:653 (4) - ^
01:06:782 (3) - spacing
01:54:975 (6) - spacing
fix most except in red highlight . because I think the current is suit better than your suggestion sorry.
Replying the M4M :3
You may want to add "eroge" "galgame" to tags (as you added "hentai" lol)
00:01:750 (1) - Remove NC, this still fits being a single combo with the next one.
00:25:943 (1) - Maybe try a blanket?
00:32:137 (1,2) - ^
00:38:330 (1,2,3) - ^
00:47:233 (3) - You're following vocals for previous parts and this looks a bit random as it isn't fitting for vocals and considering you're not too strict in your clap hitsounding, you should try this rhythm <:
00:59:620 (3) - Something similar as above.
01:09:685 (3) - How about making this a 1/1 beat slider with one repeat and putting a circle in 01:10:846, this way it'll match better the music.
01:24:782 (1) - Maybe soften this curve a bit or making a blanket for next slider?
01:49:362 (1) - How about moving this 1/2 beat forward and making it a 1/1 slider, it'll fit better as it'll be following vocals as you're doing since this part.
01:51:491 (1) - You can arrange this slider in a similar way like in the screen, this allow a smoother flow, being more beginner friendly.01:54:201 (1,2) - I also don't like how this part flows, maybe flipping vertically (2) (Ctrl+J) and fixing the placement would improve it nicely, you may need to rearrange next circles.
02:18:975 (2,1,2) - You could improve this blanketting.
00:00:588 (1) - Maybe soften the curve a bit for this slider?
00:03:491 (3) - You can remove the repeat here and put a circle in 00:04:266, which will fit better with the downbeat there.
00:48:395 (6,1) - I highly suggest you to arrange this in other way, the overlapping looks bad and may be confusing for some players.
01:17:814 (2) - I can think your intention here, but you may want to reverse (Ctrl+G) this and fix the spacing, the way it is now it flows a bit weird.
01:49:556 (1) - Maybe rotate it 180°? The flow will not be that sharpy and better imo.
02:07:362 (4) - Maybe move the beginning around x:4 y:176? This looks a bit odd as it isn't following nicely the curve given by the previous slider.
02:25:169 (4,5) - This overlap looks bad imo, you may want to avoid it.
Well, I'll only give a general feedback from my feelings about this, I felt some streams really overload the song, you may lower the volume of the hitsounds or use the soft sampleset for them, specially in the part before the first break (00:07:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16)). Also I felt the diff quite jumpy and somehow random, I'll just point a few stuff as I don't want to mess too much with this.
00:00:588 (1,2,3) - A regular spacing here would be nice followed by a jump to the next circle.
00:22:846 - A stream would really fit better than just sliders here.
00:31:556 (1) - Remove NC?
00:49:266 (2) - Remove this, fits better as a circle + triple.
01:34:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't recommend to begin slider-streams in a blue tick when the song is strong in white and red ones. But in my opinion, this doesn't even fit with this part, as the music has more emphasis in the beats I put in the screen, maybe you could make something like 00:33:685 (1,2,3,4,5).
01:46:459 (1,2,3,4) - Similar as above.
02:05:620 (4,5) - I was expecting a jump here as the vocals increase the intensity.
Well, that'd be all from my part, I hope it helps, good luck c:
mercury2004 wrote:เนื่องจากฮาดดิสใหม้ mod outline ก็ละลายหายไป
Orange : Suggestion
Blue : Great if you fix
Red : Unrankable
มายก็อด ยากไปใหมเนี่ยพี่บอม คนที่บ้านเล่นไม่ได้เลย ลด เดรนเลือดอีกซัก 2 กับ od ซัก 1 ดู
ho drain -1 สไลเดอมันไวมาก พลาดแถบเดียวแทบเฟล
01:21:685 (5,6,7) - ลองวางให้มันเป๊ะๆดู
00:07:362 - 00:12:975 ใช้เสียง 55-65 กำลังดี
00:24:782 (2,3,4,5) - ใช้เป็นสไล 1/4 โดดๆมันแจ่มกว่า
00:31:943 (2) - เหมือนจะขาดนกหวีด
00:36:782 (1) - นี่ด้วย
00:58:459 (1,2) - สลับที่กันเล่นดีกว่า
01:01:750 (2,3) - วางแบบนี้ดูมะ01:06:201 - 01:07:556 ลองลดเสียงซัก 10
01:34:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - รัวเพียวๆไปเลยมันเล่นแล้วไม่ขัด
01:52:653 (1,2,3,4) - โอ้ว Combo breaker เม้นเฉยๆไม่มีอะไร
As always have a kudo lol