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Jamie Kaleth - GOLDEN CHALLENGE [Osu|Taiko]

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Jikson[m9]
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mliencheng wrote:

Taiko Mod from queue request'

[ Nardo's Muzukashii]

  1. 01:01:978 may consider removing this , it's more suitable like this with a ddk following
  2. 01:08:545 ^
  3. 01:10:187 ^
  4. 01:19:627 ^
  5. 01:47:948 ^
  6. 01:49:590 ^
  7. 01:54:516 ^
  8. 01:56:157 ^
  9. 02:01:083 ^
  10. 02:02:725 ^
[ Jik's Oni]

  1. 00:31:091 d personally i would prefer don here (also applies to same patterns in the map)
  2. 00:56:026 - 00:57:668 - 01:01:362 - 01:03:004 etc ... may remove these kind of notes for more breaks. Even though the bpm is quite slow, it would still be hard with doubletime :p
  3. 01:08:340 - 01:08:442 - 01:08:545 can be change to kkk to prevent being too monotone (applies to same patterns later)

對不起來晚了點，
最近開始對osu漸漸失去興趣，要AFK一陣子了 :D


香港加油 :) !
http://puu.sh/bXp3A/5cbe45eb0d.osu


I know that feel T.T
謝謝你的支持!
Rizia
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al2e10
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FROM sammy711

00:14:057 (6) - 这种地方听起来很刺耳 - 我聽起來沒有
01:46:717 (4,1) - 挪远一点 - 跟distance
01:55:747 (1) - drum clap...?这里没音啊 - 自定義音效
02:10:318 (3,4,5) - 间距不好看 摆成相等好一点、- 跟distance放 x1.0

from smallboat

00:02:667 (2,3) - Use ctrl+g change the rhythm will be good better? fixed
00:23:087 (6,7) - Unnecessary whistle. (Souns like have a bit not consistent)
00:56:950 (4) - ^ - likely in all the 1/4 patten
00:59:925 (8) - The head has no downbeat,why add finish here? - remove from the head
01:08:647 (5) - Unnecessary whistle. ^

from F D Flourite

No kiai? still ok tho. - 等MAP主自定義
00:05:951 (4,5) - This rhythm is really weird. It's not a good idea to do that on a red tick. - no comment, but style
00:25:242 (5,6) - Make these two a bit closer to make 00:24:626 (4,5,6) - have the same space for better looking. - Fixed for distance
00:33:246 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这样加距离也太夸张了吧……一次0.4x的加>.< 然后又突然慢下来，flow简直不要更难受。而且节奏上并没有变化，只是音调增高了。Changing the pattern will be great. - Will fix it if BAT comment on this
01:02:388 (4,5,6,7) - These three sliders are rotated from one. But they are not made good and not blanket well. - Fix it when BAT comment on this
01:54:310 - Why set clap on this and miss the clap here? It makes 01:54:310 (3) - noisy and an obvious sound at 01:54:105 - almost missed. - What are you talking about LOL
02:07:855 (1,4) - Ctrl+G to improve the flow? - It make it more messy
02:18:117 (2,1) - Too close. Try to Ctrl+H the whole flollowing part. They are symmetric whatever. ;) - FIXED

NCs are messy in this diff >.< They are mainly following the pattern. But NCs are used to cut music into sections instead of cut patterns into sections. For example, 01:48:769 (5,6,7,1) - We can easily see that it is a whole part in music, but NC at 01:50:001 (1) - cut it into halves. Really weird.
00:56:847 (3,4,5) - 这个mapper似乎是afk了，所以我把这一点留到最后作为建议。倒不是说weird，主要是节奏要consistent，或者说至少要有规律。比如每两个长白线出一个这种节奏。不是自己觉得爽了就放，觉得不爽就1/2。这样很难让别人理解。不过要改肯定是要大改，所以仅仅是吐吐槽了=v=
- 倒不如說是某種拍子上的STYLE吧

https://app.box.com/s/s65n20wip3oxnr8sv8yw
qoot8123
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Hi :)


[ Oni]

  1. SV一定要界在1.4~1.6之間
  2. 00:02:051 (1,2,3) - 都改成大圓跟Muzu做區別會比較好
  3. 00:05:335 (4,5,6) - ^
  4. 00:19:393 (58) - 建議刪掉,節奏會變得比較清楚
  5. 00:32:322 (121) - ^
  6. 01:01:054 (267) - ^
  7. 01:07:416 (302,304) - ^

Muzu 沒甚麼問題,但是oni還需要一些Mod,有些串的使用有點太超過了,這樣會節奏會變得不清楚
IamKwaN
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metadata check as requested
Reference: http://www.focusmusic.com/music.php

Title: GOLDEN CHALLENGE
Artist: Jamie Kaleth
Tags: 'The Champions', 'Focus Music (Publishing) Ltd', 'FCD105'
Rizia
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IamKwaN wrote:

metadata check as requested
Reference: http://www.focusmusic.com/music.php

Title: GOLDEN CHALLENGE
Artist: Jamie Kaleth
Tags: 'The Champions', 'Focus Music (Publishing) Ltd', 'FCD105'
god

i will update then
Nardoxyribonucleic
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Due to the fact that Jikson did not reply the mod in the last 4 months, I'm going to respond with his permission.

qoot8123 wrote:

Hi :)


[ Oni]

  1. SV一定要界在1.4~1.6之間 changed SV to 1.4
  2. 00:02:051 (1,2,3) - 都改成大圓跟Muzu做區別會比較好 fixed
  3. 00:05:335 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
  4. 00:19:393 (58) - 建議刪掉,節奏會變得比較清楚 Retained for cohering with 00:17:751 (48) -
  5. 00:32:322 (121) - ^ fixed
  6. 01:01:054 (267) - ^ ^
  7. 01:07:416 (302,304) - ^ deleted the note at 01:07:621 -

Muzu 沒甚麼問題,但是oni還需要一些Mod,有些串的使用有點太超過了,這樣會節奏會變得不清楚
Update: http://puu.sh/g2gTk.rar
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Raiden
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Hello o/ summoned by Nardo

The Muzu is pretty solid already, nothing stood out of my eyes

[Oni]
01:17:883 (336,337) - I'd CTRL+G this; despite it being mapped somewhat to the melody, it feels odd to ignore this snare considering you've followed every single one up until that point.
01:33:275 (406) - would flow better with the melody if you moved to 01:33:480 - , due to the repeating percussion at 01:33:377 (407,408,410) -
01:39:945 (441) - kat? Certainly doesn't have the same sound as the surrounding notes
02:07:240 (108,109) - CTRL+G for the same reasons as 01:17:883 (336,337) -
02:10:421 (126,127) - ^
02:14:423 (142,143) - ^
02:16:988 (160,161) - ^
02:22:837 (179) - kat, it's a really prominent snare
02:24:479 (185,186) - make them both kats? kkkdd would be a bit awkard and kkddd does not fit the percussion too well

That's all, call me back !
Nardoxyribonucleic
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As Jikson is quite inactive now, I'm checking on behalf of him upon getting his permission.

Raiden wrote:

Hello o/ summoned by Nardo

The Muzu is pretty solid already, nothing stood out of my eyes I'm glad to hear that :3

[Oni]
01:17:883 (336,337) - I'd CTRL+G this; despite it being mapped somewhat to the melody, it feels odd to ignore this snare considering you've followed every single one up until that point. I guess this is not the only note that does not follow the snare. 00:38:582 (151) - also maps to the melody.
01:33:275 (406) - would flow better with the melody if you moved to 01:33:480 - , due to the repeating percussion at 01:33:377 (407,408,410) - I see your point, but it seems to be more consistent to continue the use of quadruplets here.
01:39:945 (441) - kat? Certainly doesn't have the same sound as the surrounding notes fixed
02:07:240 (108,109) - CTRL+G for the same reasons as 01:17:883 (336,337) - fixed
02:10:421 (126,127) - ^ no change here.
02:14:423 (142,143) - ^ fixed
02:16:988 (160,161) - ^ no change here.
02:22:837 (179) - kat, it's a really prominent snare fixed
02:24:479 (185,186) - make them both kats? kkkdd would be a bit awkard and kkddd does not fit the percussion too well changed to kdkkd instead.

That's all, call me back !
Thanks for your mod Raiden~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/nKX6S.rar
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要摸嗎
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要摸嗎
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How is it going? :D
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al2e10 wrote:

How is it going? :D
waiting bn
Chaoslitz
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lol 好耐冇聽過隻歌

[General]
  2. imo preview time set係 01:43:844 好似好d
[Normal]
  1. 00:27:705 (3) - 將slider尾放高d, 我驚新手打讀錯圖
  2. 00:29:141 (2,3,1,2) - 呢個位stack得有d多
  3. 00:31:604 (1,2) - 00:33:246 (1,2) - 兩個調轉跟返(1,2,1,2)
  4. 01:12:649 (1,2) - 不如你同一個位全部跟呢個節奏
  5. 01:17:985 (2,3) - 避免stack
  6. 01:22:090 - Note?
  7. 01:27:426 (1,2,3) - 依家個節奏skip左好多音
  8. 01:40:560 (1,2,3,4) - 不如成個放低d, 01:41:792 (3,4) - 個flow有d怪
  9. 02:21:605 - downbeat放折返聽落唔舒服
  10. 02:22:837 (1) - try this?
  11. 成個diff兩個downbeat先NC, 依家個combo數好細 : o
[Hard]
  1. 01:11:008 (1,2) - 做咩用3/4 :/
  2. 02:16:680 (1) - FInish
[AL2's Insane]
  1. 00:03:282 (3,4) - 個重音係00:03:282 (3), 00:03:488 (4) - 呢個放太遠嘅跳唔係幾好
  2. 00:16:417 (6,1) - 個跳太遠
  3. 00:36:530 (7) - 00:59:515 (6) - NC
  4. 01:02:799 - 重音唔適宜放滑條尾, 01:02:388 (4,5) - 兩個調轉然後01:02:799 (5) - NC
  5. 01:03:825 (1) - del NC 01:04:440 (3) - NC
  6. 01:05:876 (7) - 同01:02:799一樣, 01:06:082 - 要note + NC
  7. 01:09:161 (1,2) - switch NC
  8. 01:10:392 (1,4) - ^
  9. 後面仲有d NC問題, 我都係建議每個downbeat先NC
  10. 01:46:717 (4,1) - 放得太近, 擺跳?
  11. tbh我知道係舊map,我唔知呢種overmap依家仲會唔會接受(eg: 00:15:186 (1,2,3,4,5) - ), 我就唔建議咁做...
al2e10
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Chaoslitz wrote:

lol 好耐冇聽過隻歌


[AL2's Insane]
  1. 00:03:282 (3,4) - 個重音係00:03:282 (3), 00:03:488 (4) - 呢個放太遠嘅跳唔係幾好
    fixed
  2. 00:16:417 (6,1) - 個跳太遠
    try to closer them
  3. 00:36:530 (7) - 00:59:515 (6) - NC
    same patten for this combo, so i dont want to change it.
  4. 01:02:799 - 重音唔適宜放滑條尾, 01:02:388 (4,5) - 兩個調轉然後01:02:799 (5) - NC
    Nice suggest
  5. 01:03:825 (1) - del NC 01:04:440 (3) - NC
    tried another way to fix it
  6. 01:05:876 (7) - 同01:02:799一樣, 01:06:082 - 要note + NC
    呢個有D難做, 所以我唔改住, 因為個MOVEMENT係咁樣去。
  7. 01:09:161 (1,2) - switch NC
    FIXED
  8. 01:10:392 (1,4) - ^
    changed pattern
  9. 後面仲有d NC問題, 我都係建議每個downbeat先NC
  10. 01:46:717 (4,1) - 放得太近, 擺跳?
    前4NOTE 係試緊漸近, 所以放會近左。
  11. tbh我知道係舊map,我唔知呢種overmap依家仲會唔會接受(eg: 00:15:186 (1,2,3,4,5) - ), 我就唔建議咁做...
    如果以前OK 而家反而唔OK, 係呢隻GAME既問題而唔係MAP既人既問題。
    有邊個BAT指出有問題, 我用年資大返佢 :/
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Rizia
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Chaoslitz wrote:

lol 好耐冇聽過隻歌

[notice][General]
  2. imo preview time set係 01:43:844 好似好d e家既preview我覺得幾好
[Normal]
  1. 00:27:705 (3) - 將slider尾放高d, 我驚新手打讀錯圖
  2. 00:29:141 (2,3,1,2) - 呢個位stack得有d多
  3. 00:31:604 (1,2) - 00:33:246 (1,2) - 兩個調轉跟返(1,2,1,2)
  4. 01:12:649 (1,2) - 不如你同一個位全部跟呢個節奏
  5. 01:17:985 (2,3) - 避免stack 呢個stack我覺得ok
  6. 01:22:090 - Note?
  7. 01:27:426 (1,2,3) - 依家個節奏skip左好多音
  8. 01:40:560 (1,2,3,4) - 不如成個放低d, 01:41:792 (3,4) - 個flow有d怪
  9. 02:21:605 - downbeat放折返聽落唔舒服
  10. 02:22:837 (1) - try this?
  11. 成個diff兩個downbeat先NC, 依家個combo數好細 : o
[Hard]
  1. 01:11:008 (1,2) - 做咩用3/4 :/
  2. 02:16:680 (1) - FInish
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ZZHBOY
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好
[Normal]
00:11:902 (1) - 好像和后面的时间间隔有点短 考虑把转盘去了然后放几个滑条上去呗
00:16:623 (3) - 这里没清楚的音 这个圈感觉有点奇怪 把去了吧
00:51:306 (1) - 跟前面一样
01:32:351 (1) - 这个nc去掉?
01:43:023 - 和01:41:381 (2) - 音差不多 感觉不用空啊 低难度一个跟一个不跟感觉不太好
01:52:053 (5,6) - 这两个节奏感觉可以换下 01:52:258 - 这里也有旋律的
02:11:755 (1) - 感觉放这种转盘感觉并不好 可以像00:26:679 (3,4,5) - 这个节奏差不多放点note啊
[Hard]
01:04:440 (1,2) - 感觉可以包好看点
01:15:523 (3) - 这可以换成1/2然后01:15:933 - 放个圈感觉好点
01:33:993 - 这后面空的好奇怪啊 感觉可以map上
02:13:396 (1,3) - 感觉遮挡的太多了 而且不是很喜欢这种节奏 考虑02:14:628 - 放1/2滑条然后02:15:038 - 放圈?
[AL2]
00:05:951 (4,5) - 这里用3/4感觉很违和 感觉是强行加上去的 音乐也没有音 建议就用1/1的滑条就可
00:08:208 (4,5) - 这两个节奏可以换一下 00:08:619 - 这个音放滑条尾上感觉并不合适
00:11:902 (3,4) - 00:13:031 (1,2) - 00:13:955 (5,6,7) - ...我觉得这些有点overmap 音乐主要就是那些1/2的音 这样强行放1/4自创节奏的话不仅不会让图更有趣反而让节奏看起来很乱 所以建议考虑一下把换成正常的节奏去跟一下音乐
[Insane]
01:31:017 (2) - 可以去掉?

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