raririn wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:07:127 (2) - 感觉尾不要有clap好点o.o抱歉觉得留着更好233

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BakaHuang wrote:

\猫酱/

Hard

00:03:002(2,3)-我觉得whistle加在(3)上比较合适done

mapset和音效都很不错lol [/color]

Flask wrote:

好像很神 留個位置改天mod好了

幹麻放wip

raririn wrote:

好久没mod了orz
random mod here._.

1. Normal = Just Suggestions for reference ovo
2. Blue = Strongly suggest you do this
3. Red = Unrankable stuff 0.0..

都是nazi /w\

[General]

1. http://puu.sh/1EHud[/img:8022c][/color] 这个故意的
   好像没别的问题了 神SB (・∀・)
   
   
   [Insane]
   
   1. 00:04:127 (3) - 看起来折得不够啊，红点往右点吧！ 弄了弄
      
      
   2. 00:07:315 (3) - 加note？虽然曲子这里确实没有音但是后面有长串突然一下子开始打长串很不舒服orz
   先空着吧
   
   
2. 00:23:346 (5) - 总感觉这里应该有个note的样子 这个先保留
   
3. 00:30:190 (3) - x=124,y=356？ 嗯好
   
   
4. 00:37:502 (3,4,5) - 其实我觉得这梗真不怎么样/_\ 这里最后大改了._.
   
5. 00:41:065 (4) - x=26,y=147 和前一个滑条可以叠好点 这个真麻烦
   
   
6. 00:54:752 (3) - 删？感觉不太合曲 还好
   
7. 01:19:315 (2) - 往左一点？ ok
   
8. 02:07:690 (2) - Ctrl+G?flow好点而且离后面的也不太远 嗯好
   
   
9. 02:23:065 (4) - 试试这样？感觉舒服点;w;
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10. 02:33:096 (4) - 不知怎么感觉很违和 把4还是弄成正常slider吧、、、? 得，还是先留着
    
11. 03:06:002 (4) - NC? 嗯
    
12. 03:30:002 (8) - 不好看orzorzorzorz 红点往上或者往下一点都好啊/_\ 弄了下

懒了 还要做作业 N和H就随便挑一点点吧/_\



(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)好歌好图好SB ☆~

Curisu wrote:

.....改完ID记得StoryBoard的自己ID改掉lol

[Insane]
00:27:940 - remove whis 嗯..
00:29:252 (6) - imo ^ 音效苦手lol
00:35:158 - remove clap ^
00:54:190 (2,3) - circle放最前..? slider可以刚好对vocal
00:59:440 - vol+5照应storyboard?[/color] 弄了
01:05:440 (1) - 微曲线对应01:04:690 (3,4) 这个暂时保留
01:04:690 (3,4) - vol-5~7 ; 01:16:502 (1,2,3) - < 改了
01:44:440 (1,3,4) - 首端一直线上 改了改
01:51:940 - ...whis有点形影单只 直接删了
02:06:940 (1,2) - 这半节vocal , 02:08:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这半节跟渐强鼓声 统一一下比较好 要和后面的0.75x造成反差建议全部渐强鼓声单circle渐增处理
02:12:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - 像摆图形不怎么flow[/color] 保留
02:27:002 (4) - +NC 嗯
02:33:940 - 恩这段和01:04:690 (3,4)一样音量有点大 确实
02:45:940 - break半节怪不舒服...整个间奏break反而会好点 不知道什么意思，不过改了改
03:03:940 (2) - remove NC ; 03:05:065 (2) - +NC 嗯
03:22:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 小建议 三组object两两间微间隔 好
03:25:690 (1,2,3,4) - 正方形nazi >_>



SB碉堡
良图+2star

L_P wrote:

忙补

L_P 吐槽太可怕

[Insane]
00:47:440 (1) - 这里放个finish 嗯
00:48:002 (4) - 尾巴^ 嗯好
00:48:940 (3) - 头^ 好
00:50:440 (1) - 这里开始是觉得该换一套音效了，音乐里每一拍都有一钢琴声放了不做可惜，用了normal这里会稍显粗糙 已经成这样了，太麻烦
01:08:440 (1) - 知道这里我才发现你有两soft custom音效，而没弄错的话差别应该就是hitsoft 一个较大声吧orz 我是觉得这里降低hit soft的话打的时候怪怪的，毕竟是kiai啊 降低声量不大恰当 （而且我发现SC1与SC2之间的交替有种不顺畅的感觉，03:45:940 (1) - 这边也一样）绿线删了
02:03:190 (1) - 声量莫名降低？这儿没管，换那个hitsoft音会怪怪的
02:14:346 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - kickslider 有点乱放的感觉，要不老老实实的前面kick后面stream之类的 暂时保留
02:16:315 (2,3,4) - 这三个总感觉太挤 暂时保留
02:45:940 (6) - finish added
03:15:190 (4) - 间距太近，且03:12:940 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个下来也不好看 不好弄啊
03:47:065 (2) - clap added
04:03:940 (1,2,3) - 这3条放在一起间距不一样看起来不漂亮 搞了搞
整个diff给我的感觉是好像赶出来的样子，很多地方的跳意义不明确，间距变化也是一样，没有贯穿全图的精神在，感觉好像这边是A做的，那边是B做的。
排列方面感觉还是没进步，常常放着就会挤在一起...orz
很多地方只是纯粹拉slider填note (如这里02:39:940 (1) - ) 没仔细想梗 铺梗 ，即使没梗最少排列要看起来好像有梗这样
只有03:31:315 (1) - 这里觉得还不错

距离好mapper的目标还要加油哦 你如果变成量产mapper的话
嘛
干掉你 lol

• 00:04:315 这里空着会不会有点别扭
  
  开头和结尾whistle
  00:06:565 (3) - 这么放比较好看
  
  00:08:065 (2) - 结尾的clap去掉，加上finish
  00:23:065 (3) - clap
  00:24:377 (3) - 复制00:25:877 (2) - 再ctrl+G放在（152,160）
  00:25:877 (2) - 结尾clap
  00:28:877 (1) - 结尾clap
  00:49:502 (2) - 这里最好保持前后的空隙一样大,因为这里算是比较明显的地方，空隙不一样不太美观
  00:50:440 Sampleset-Auto
  00:58:315 (2) - 保持前后的空隙一样大
  01:14:252 (5) - 结尾clap
  01:23:065 (2) - 和01:22:502 (1) - 不在一条直线上啊，关掉grid snap调整一下
  01:26:440 Sampleset-Auto
  02:18:940 加个note
  02:21:940 ^
  02:45:752 (5) - 最好别和02:44:440 (3) - 碰到
  03:06:283 貌似无用的绿线
  03:30:940 加个note
  03:44:065 (3) - （462,233）
  04:05:627 (3,5) - 复制一下然后ctrl+H吧

thou bad wrote:

[Normal]

• 00:04:315 这里空着会不会有点别扭 挪了好多东西
  
  开头和结尾whistle
  00:06:565 (3) - 这么放比较好看 嗯..
  
  00:08:065 (2) - 结尾的clap去掉，加上finish 嗯
  00:23:065 (3) - clap 嗯
  00:24:377 (3) - 复制00:25:877 (2) - 再ctrl+G放在（152,160） 改了改
  00:25:877 (2) - 结尾clap 嗯好
  00:28:877 (1) - 结尾clap 嗯好
  00:49:502 (2) - 这里最好保持前后的空隙一样大,因为这里算是比较明显的地方，空隙不一样不太美观 >_>
  00:50:440 Sampleset-Auto ok
  00:58:315 (2) - 保持前后的空隙一样大 >_>
  01:14:252 (5) - 结尾clap 嗯
  01:23:065 (2) - 和01:22:502 (1) - 不在一条直线上啊，关掉grid snap调整一下 好了
  01:26:440 Sampleset-Auto ok
  02:18:940 加个note 完全vocal
  02:21:940 ^ ^
  02:45:752 (5) - 最好别和02:44:440 (3) - 碰到 弄了弄
  03:06:283 貌似无用的绿线 嗯...
  03:30:940 加个note 嗯好
  03:44:065 (3) - （462,233）这里我手长，没弄好
  04:05:627 (3,5) - 复制一下然后ctrl+H吧

调整了下

alacat wrote:

[Easy]
●00:02:440 (1) - add soft whistle at the head.
●00:05:440 (1) - ^
●01:26:440 (1) - try to move to spinner end ? as the synth's phrase should begin here.01:29:440 -
●02:01:690 (1) - put another pattern ? because it is hidden by 押忍!.
●02:58:971 - hmm ... move to here ? 03:02:440 -

I think it is better to put more whistle sound at kiai time :3 !

alacat wrote:

Hi:3 As requested.

[General]
●fine

[Normal]
●00:07:502 (1) - add clap at the end ok~fixed
●00:48:377 (3) - add repeat ? and add finish at the end. ok~fixed
●01:25:690 (2) - try this ? the flow is good imo ok~fixed
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/553384
●02:12:565 - try to put drum sound ? ok~fixed
●02:45:752 (5) - add finish at the end ok~fixed
●02:54:565 (1) - ^ ok~fixed
●03:02:252 (3) - i want to put finish sound here. >< 03:02:440 - not really,this is bass sound..
I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
●03:33:940 (1) - too loud imo >_< volume down this sound ok~fixed
●04:06:190 (4) - remove note. ok~fixed


[Insane]
●00:04:127 (3) - add whistle at the end not well
●00:35:065 (5) - ctrl + h ? it's a great idea!And I changed some place
●01:03:940 (5,6,7) - gradually add volume? ok~fixed
●01:29:533 (1) - remove whistle . ok~fixed
●02:05:815 (4,5) - switch these notes ? ok~fixed some place
●02:45:940 (6) - add finish ok~fixed
●02:56:252 (3) - ^ ok~fixed
●03:10:315 (2) - add whistle ok~fixed

....._(:3 」∠)_

nice ! ♪

UnderminE wrote:

[Easy]
Looks good

[Normal]
02:28:687 (3) - x: 372 y: 236 not effect
03:30:937 (1) - x: 344 y: 92 fixed
You can use soft-whistle in this and Easy diff like you did in Hard diff. Because it sounds pretty silent.

fixed some green line


[Insane]
01:35:437 - Starting from here it's like there is no sound except some finishes time to time (not counting that hitnormal). Where are my whistles ;_; not really
03:18:187 - this whistle is pretty unncessary here imo removed
03:33:937 (5) - hmm there is no NC on this but 03:36:937 (1) - there is NC on this. Doesn't make sense. convient to read

Good luck!

Curisu wrote:

[Hard]
00:29:440 - normalhit别停用Normal sampleset + Soft additions做做
00:29:815 - ...^
00:30:190 - ^
不过又好像是故意留白所以只是建议嗯...故意的

01:40:596 (1,2) -

SPOILER

这样不会有点难吗> >
01:55:690 (3) - ...咦为啥这里有三连有啥问题吗...
02:33:752 - 这里以后到kiai结束那段soft-fin有点abuse 其实可以试试normal-fin降低音量可能好些 不过最好是N/S混用不会听腻感觉还好233

L_P wrote:

忙补
[Hard]
03:17:190 (2) - 变速太突然而且不适合放在hard里面再说没放NC真的需要三思加了nc
04:05:815 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 可以想想看别的排列，现状不是很漂亮
音效不错但是节奏方面感觉弄得很青涩，而且跟Insane的难度感觉差距太小了这个暂时放着~

alacat wrote:

[Hard]
●00:48:565 (3) - add finish at the endsorry
●01:59:252 (1) - add finish at the headno change
●02:33:752 (1) - maybe.. finish sound is here ~ 02:33:940 - I think it's here~
●02:40:033 (1) - add finish and volume down at the end :3sorry but I think finish isn't nice here~

UnderminE wrote:

[Hard]
OD +1 ?I will keep this because I can't decide yet ;w;
00:20:249 (2) - 1 grid right?that will break the spacing,I think~
00:39:749 (5,1) - how about stacking?no orz
04:08:437 - whistlesorry but I think it's unnecessary~

SapphireGhost wrote:

Busy busy busy
I'm finally here.

General
- The last kiai time in the Taiko difficulty needs to have an ending point. add in 04:06:749 -
- The kiai times in the osu!standard difficulties have many small inconsistencies, and they should be the same in all difficulties. I would advise redoing all of the kiai to make sure you like it and it ends up in the right place (on a downbeat is good). Relevant: The breaks are inconsistent/some are quite long, which is okay but it makes the placement of kiai time strange so you should be careful and/or map all the difficulties to the same point.
- Tick Rate 2 is playable and visible for all difficulties here, not only Insane, so I recommend it.

Insane is fine. :3


Normal
- You can use Tick Rate 2 here for playability and consistency. Some sliderslide's sound effect sounds not well,I'm not mod it.
00:32:812 (2) - Slider is very unfitting with the rest of the map, just use a normal curve here (and again, it's better for ranking). fixed
01:17:999 (2,3) - Really too close to the edge of the screen, move it up some. :o fixed
01:33:937 - Strange break end time, the default one is fine. fixed

Easy Flower is offline,and this diff mods by me

I think this diff use tick 1 is good ，because tick 1 can make the rhythm too cpmpact.

01:32:437 - Break start is much better here. fixed
02:39:937 (1) - Spinner/kiai end time is strange, placing it on a downbeat feels more natural. add some objects
02:45:937 - Similarly, again the break should start here. fixed

The maps are good for the most part, I just think there are some consistency/neatness issues to fix. Let me know when you're done with everything, and thanks for being patient.

Aleks719 wrote:

taiko bg is unrankable now, so...

remove it, set your osu! bg as bg for taiko diffs! update and call me back!

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Fumika wrote:

Oh Gratz

DarknessAngel wrote:

終於啊 ! 恭喜了呢 ~ (: