Strawberry wrote:

Hi~modding here
　　
[ General]
　

1. the combo colour which is red scared me..i'd prefer changing it to 128 255 255 (kinda blue). http://puu.sh/1Bxbz

　
[ Insane]
　

1. [b]Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:20:815 (2) - move the middle archor to x:252 y:212 seems much comfortable and flows better imo~ I think myself arrange is well
   2. 00:30:565 (5,1,2) - weird..maybe you can reference this --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/529052 I think myself arrange is well
   3. 00:33:190 (3,4) - i'd like to ctrl+G them for a better flow~ ok~fixed
   4. 00:34:502 (3) - same as above~^ i'd like previous
   5. 00:43:971 - i'd prefer to set a circle here and stack with (9,10). it is really suitable. I don't think add a circle is a good idea.
   6. 00:45:565 (5) - ctrl+G will be more comfortable(have a flow) to play.~ ok~fixed
   7. 00:49:315 (4,5) - rhythm issue. the correct --> http://puu.sh/1Byie Fixed with other ways
   8. 01:16:877 (3) - how about add a circle here~ Don't like...
   9. 01:57:471 (9) - http://puu.sh/1BymY bring the slider forward 1/4 tick and add a repeat. previous arrange is well
   10. 01:59:252 (6) - such a anti-jump.. maybe you can ctrl+g the slider to make it much more comfortable to play~ on purpose
   11. 02:06:658 (4,5,6) - really hard to read these 1/3 stream during my play. from some suggestions, i'd like to increase the spacing of them or just change them to a repeat slider~ I changed this arrange to 3 stream and 5 stream.
   12. 02:39:846 - add two 1/4 circles here and delay the spinner 1/4 tick? to follow the drum better~ reserved
   13. 02:42:752 (2) - nc for the irregular spacing and more easy to read.. ok
   14. 03:15:940 - same as other diffs.. add a note here and move the spinner 1/4 tick later? reserved
   15. 03:30:846 - add a circle? I don't think this idea is good.
   16. 03:48:846 - ^
   previous arrange is good
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:22:690 (3) - add whistle on that tail? sounds pretty~ try it. :3 This section used 24 whistle,add a whistle can break this rhythm
   2. 00:25:690 (1) - if you followed above, add whistle on that repeat either~ followed bgm much better~ ok
   3. 01:15:940 - same as the other diffs, decrease the volume plz~~

fixed

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Not a long mod huh?///
Good Luck ~

Notice

1. Please reply my mod and tell me which you fix which you don't fix , thanks~
   

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

[Insane]
02:02:440 (1) - Do not make it so flow since a break here on purpose
02:05:252 - hmm...I guess something should be here.. not really
02:15:940 (5) - Try use 1.5x speed xD? 1.5???it's too high...
02:22:315 (2) - It may be better if.. fixed some slider

02:36:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Spacing is too close imo, try enlarging them a bit. Not really
03:59:815 (3,4,5,6,7) - Bend them more. allready Bended
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Excellent Mapset :3
本来想给P的 结果Hard diff写了好多就不想给了> >
那就多送一颗for SB

NewibornCLivee wrote:

Hi, Taiko mod req. from PM >.0~ Hi ~ :3

[Oni]
00:19:127 - k use d
00:19:315 - k ^
03:05:815 - this note is not hard with no instrument, change this three notes to dDd or DDd sorry , no change

[Muzu]
00:30:377 - ddkd ok
03:05:815 - same on oni ^

that's all...nice map but i'll say the oni is really similar to muzu...on the difficulty
You said that the Oni Diff is similar to muzukashi,but I don't think so ...

digiaria wrote:

Hard
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这个难度的音效做得不错。另外这个难度还是有点难，因为连打部分太多了。

00:03:190 add circleok

00:17:346 del circle这个不想删ww

00:53:252 ^为了保持DS..

01:16:877 del normal-hitwhistle减了点volume

01:26:065 用slider来拉一个折返或者直接3连打不改~

01:26:346 del circle^

01:28:502 这里开始的后面最好再加一些吧，突然没了感觉怪怪的mapped

02:15:565 add circle这样note与spinner间距太小了...

02:32:440 这里还是把slider拉到02:32:815吧，把02:32:815的circle删掉现在这个还好吧ww

03:14:815 - 03:15:190 改成slider节奏略作调整ww

03:32:815 - 03:33:190 ^现在这个还好XD

l1106188 wrote:

[Hard]

1. 節奏有些緊湊, 因為有許多的1/4 circles或sliders,外加有些跳過大, 使得這難度有種變成Insane的感覺, 雖說可以使用1/4 , 但盡量避免使用過度 ;w;
   
   舉例來說~

   00:17:065 (3,4) - 00:20:252 (5,1) - 00:22:502 (2,3) - 01:57:002 (2,3,4) - 這些就有點像是insane了 >~<
   
   
   有心理準備再打開這個XD

   因為難度分佈不均, 目前只知道3個方法而已, remap or 在做個Hard or 想辦法讓一些1/4消失 ;w;...
   
   
2. 00:07:127 (2,3) - 這種距離用在Hard..大丈夫 ?!;w;reduced spacing~
3. 00:18:565 (3,1) - 距離可以再縮短一些~ok
4. 01:28:502 ~ 01:29:440 - 空著感覺有些奇怪... mapped this part~

lkx_shore wrote:

[Hard]
****这居然是AR7,叄贰人性何在;_; (AR+1Hard AR8会被喷死吧...目前这样的话还能打
00:04:690 (7) - 不太合适的节奏 (开头这里这么安静这么放好像不太好感觉还好ww
02:27:002 (2) - 加个note在02:26:815,叠在2的上面nice
03:50:815 (4) - 不叠到5上面？nice
03:53:440 (1,2) - 其实我感觉这歌,强调音乐用soft的finish最好这个保留...

Strawberry wrote:

[*]there has a distance between Hard and Normal imo. maybe you(a32) can try to decrease the difficulty a bit of Hard?[/b]this could be solved after some mods~[/list]
　

　
[ Hard]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:09:940 (5) - honestly, it is really hard to read especially on a AR7 diff.for some suggestions, you can put a nc on (5) or add a circle on 00:09:752 - add a NC~
   2. 00:18:565 (3,1) - such a big jump on a hard. well i know why you make a jump,yea that's fine. but why a large jump? you need to decrease it.Yeah I've got it.Reduced the spacing a lot~
   3. 00:21:190 (3) - i'll move the middle archor to x:64 y:308 to make a blanket and flow better(maybe?) :pnice idea~
   4. 01:10:127 (6) - ctrl+G to make a better flow. and move 01:10:690 (1) - to x:212 y:204 (or the place you think is fine :3)sorry but I think the current one flows better~
   5. 01:28:502 - put something.. circle? slider? spinner?..weird atm..add sth lol
   6. 01:37:596 (7) - i'd prefer to change it to a circle and a 1/2 slider, it is kinda hard for a pattern which on the "hard".I love the pattern a lot!Well added NC for better map-reading
   7. 01:40:596 (7) - yea same as above ^^
   8. 01:46:315 (7) - imo, ctrl+G it can make the flow better, however you need to adjust the next circle's place then for the spacing. i suggest that to move the circle to x:288 y:88quite nice~
   9. 01:55:690 (3) - move the anchor which on that tail up 1 grid, to make it on a same line with (2)ok~
   10. 02:12:940 - same suggestion as Easy. add a circle here and delay the spinner 1/2 or 1/4 tick
   11. 02:24:565 (4) - avoid overlapped.fixed~
   12. 02:26:252 - i'd like to put a circle here..maybe at x:336 y:116?nice~
   13. 03:55:690 (3) - how about ctrl+G? flow better.done
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:49:502 (2) - noisy.. remove the clap plz~reduced the volume a lot
   2. 01:15:940 - scared me again..decrease the volume to 60~70% is much better!! it is totally over the bgm for now.fixed
   3. 01:45:940 (6) - add a whistle on that head~ sounds really prettyvery nice XD
   4. 01:57:752 (1) - the transition of clap and whistle sounds angularity. i suggest that to change the whistle on that head to a clap. :3cool~
   5. 02:21:377 (5) - there should be a whistle on that head.added
   6. 02:31:877 (4) - whistle here~ sounds a bit mute..yeah

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Hard]
00:09:565 (4,5) - Try this?I'd like to keep the current one~

00:16:315 (2) - wait...Why you return it at 00:16:596?

(I think this may be proper)
00:30:940 (1) - Try adding storyboard to warn ppl the 0.5x speed?
01:02:440 (1) - ^
02:09:940 (1) - ^
02:18:752 (1) - ^
04:05:252 (1) - ^留给小猫ww
00:43:690 (3) - Why not start at 00:43:502 and add a note at 00:44:065quite cool~
01:00:002 (2) - put it to 01:00:190 plzfixedww
01:28:315 (5) - ..what? Map here plz..done
03:18:565 (5) - spacing!改了:3
03:50:252 (1,2) - imo,ctrl+G to them, then move 03:50:627 (3) to the place of 03:50:440 (2) 这个暂时保留...如果还有吐槽就改一点吧= =
04:02:252 (5) - Ctrl+G plz....spacing is so large这里改了点XD

Fumika wrote:

Can you write in your first post please, This skin was mixed by me.
I just copy some skin from fay and mixed it

l1106188 wrote:

[Normal]

1. 無用的綠線:
   00:59:440
   01:17:815
   
   
   fixed
   
2. mapset對咱來說沒問題:3
   
3. 不過對於Sound...有些whistle建議換成clap 像:00:41:065 (3) -, 太多whistle對咱來說有些單調, 因為每個人觀感不同, 所以請容許咱不對這部分多加說明了>w<(a嘿

尽量地修改了~

Strawberry wrote:

太长不看　

[ Normal]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. kinda hard for a initiative diff..however i think it is rankable.
   2. 00:37:690 (3) - you curved it too much and it is out of the map totally imo.. why not just make it like the previous slider? okhttp://puu.sh/1Bxha
   3. 01:02:440 - for some reasons, i'd like to put a circle here and delay the spinner 1/4 or 1/2 tick. try it? No. I prefer this arrangement. This fits the rhythm, and in taiko/mania mode, it does not confuse players.
   4. 01:17:815 (1) - nc here rather than 01:16:877 (4) - ? to consistent with others. ok
   5. 01:23:815 (1) - i feel just like there should be put a nc..idk. ok... anyway
   6. 01:24:190 (4,6) - try to make them more symmetrical even if they are sideling.. such as(just a example, i believe that you can make them better) made it happen http://puu.sh/1Bxxv
   7. 03:15:940 (1) - same as 01:02:440 - The same. No change imo.
   8. 04:05:440 (1) - the slider should be bring forward to 04:05:252 - for a downbeat here~ idk how to arrange the sliders, but I made the spinner start at that point. hope making it better.
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:06:940 (2) - increase the the volume on that repeat? it is very hardly to heard the clap and i think it's really necessary. ok
   2. 01:05:440 (1) - orz..the whistle sounds weird and completely out of the bgm..i know that you want to stress the note but the finish is heavy enough imo..so i think you'd better to remove it and leave it with only finish. Um... I tried finish only but it does not express the music well. Maybe it is the difference of audio devices? I am not tuhao, so please forgive me.
   3. 01:07:690 (4) - it is reasonable to change the whistle which on that ending to a clap(or N:C1 hitnormal) for the music since there has been a downbeat.
   4. 01:10:690 (4) - ^
   5. 01:13:690 (3) - ^
   6. 01:19:315 (5) - ^ I don't change them because I prefer to add s-whistle on those downbeats and claps are for 2,4-downbeats.
   7. 02:05:440 (2) - whistle on that tail? sounds pretty and reasonable :3 ok
   8. 03:33:002 (3) - i'd like to move the whistle which on that head to that tail~ sounds better imo .~ I feel the opposite. So no change imo.
   9. 03:36:002 (2) - if you changed above, move the whistle which on that repeat to the tail either.
   10. 03:51:940 (4) - how about add a whistle on that head? ok
   11. 03:54:377 (2) - finish only or finish with whistle :3 finish only
   12. 03:56:815 (4) - hmm...same as
   13. 01:07:690 (4) - same reason. no change

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Normal]
01:17:815 (5) - Add newcombo to this not (4) same as Strawberry, fixed
01:26:440 (1) - hmm..why not extend to 01:29:440 and add finish? I think players will concern more about the vocal, so nochange
04:02:252 - Should be something here since the music I think xuemengdaboss must mean 04:02:065 - cause nothing is at 04:02:252 - . But no worries, slider tick does everything.

http://up.ppy.sh/files/suzukikonomi-daysofdash(-[nyan]-)[normal].osu

Fumika wrote:

Fumika wrote:

Can you write in your first post please, This skin was mixed by me.
I just copy some skin from fay and mixed it

Looks like you ignored me ヾ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ

Strawberry wrote:

The hitsounds should not be restricted by what is just regular, but for a better following to the song..
Star-ed anyway~ 神sb ;w;

1. suggest moving the logo on taiko bg in the middle of the light yellow part. and use a hand writing font for the title, same or something like the artist one. also, keep the artist/title same distance with the upper/lower border of that bar.

1. 00:54:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里有点滥用三连的感觉 听着是只有最后三个1/4有鼓点但是被滑条带过了
2. 00:48:190 - 这里建议和00:47:440保持一致 要留空就一起留空
3. 00:57:190 (2,3) - 1/2间隔还是建议小节内保持 不过应该算是个人习惯
4. 01:00:190 - Normal set. 这种消音有点没规律..
5. 01:01:690 (5,6) - 这里相比前面就是消音了 不知道是失误还是.. 等等 我重新把图下一遍..
6. 01:09:190 (3) - 继续用whistle在第三拍铺过去吧.. 本身soft就听不到 副歌部分如果想个人发挥可以再找个自定义音效 其实找两个whistle交替用也是个不错的选择 现在的话的确有点杂 没有头绪的感觉
7. 01:29:252 (5) - 后面加两个note spinner后移1/4 注意调整结束点
8. 01:23:440 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以尝试(3),(5)做微量提速
9. 01:27:752 (7) - 这里先不要萎..
10. 01:29:440 - KIAI这里终止 其他难度就不在絮述
11. 02:03:377 (4) - 真按吉他来这里就去掉repeat. 按鼓点来就02:02:815 (3) - 换note然后02:03:190填上
12. 02:09:190 (3,4,5,6,7) - 绝好的加速段啊..啊..啊..
13. 02:09:940 (1) - 这里用1/1的话最好用偶数次 比如把02:10:690 (3) - 也换成1/1
14. 02:13:690 ~ 1/3这么好的鬼畜骗PC素材居然不用 ;_;
15. 02:16:690 (1,2) - 这类3/4效果感觉不是很好 特别是vocal很明显的1/2的时候 02:15:940 (5,6) - 这种就算是比较好的用法
16. 02:29:065 (3) - 3,6,9 这完全一样的形状和方向有偷懒嫌疑
17. 02:39:940 (1) - 偷懒spinner 删掉填满吧
18. 02:42:565 - 这里也不太该有空的样子 前提是02:42:377前面填满了
19. 02:45:940 - 唯一不重复的部分被留break了 x_x solo part啊啊啊啊啊 我的话会留03:18:940 ~ 03:30:940 当break
20. 02:45:940 - KIAI这里结束 其他难度也统一到这里
21. 04:03:940 (1,2,3) - 整体感. 如下图
    
    SPOILER

    
22. 04:06:752 (7) - 换1/2slider 末尾5% spinner延后
23. 04:06:940 - 这里结束KIAI 其他难度也统一到这里

1. 开头部分直接跟着键盘音摆note吧.. 00:04:690 (8) - 这个很囧
2. 00:28:690 (3,4) - 有点怪.. 1/2铺过去吧
3. 00:30:940 (1) - 减速意义不明啊 ;_; vocal明明没什么感情变化 伴奏也还好好的 停或者变速也是在00:31:502搞的啊
4. 00:32:252 (1) - finish想办法丢00:32:440去
5. 00:36:752 - 在00:36:940留空而不是这里 注意whistle也得加一个
6. 00:38:440 ~ 00:48:940 - whistle频率高到吓人.. 这里和前面一段音乐不一样 要有区别
7. 00:57:940 (1,3,4,1) - stack诡异到爆 建议换个pattern
8. 01:04:690 (7) - new combo放这个上面 去掉后面的
9. 02:35:252 (1) - 萎得有点早
10. 03:17:252 (2) - 这个是1/3
11. 03:17:440 (3) - 可以考虑2/3然后两个repeat. 3/4真心怪
12. 03:29:815 - 加note
13. 03:31:690 (3,4) - 1/2铺过去比较好 3/4在这里没什么依据
14. 03:32:815 (2,3) - ^
15. 03:35:065 - 这一段近似清唱的诀窍就是 不要空重音 尽量跟vocal
16. 03:42:752 (6) - 倾向于丢远点 有点渐强的感觉
17. 03:52:315 (2) - 长度1/2 03:52:690留空
18. 04:06:752 (1) - 取消new combo
19. 04:02:815 - 试试丢个三连吧
20. 04:03:658 (11,12,13) - soft? 是事故么?
21. 04:05:252 (1) - 萎得早了
22. 04:06:846 (1) - 跟insane一样做个音量减弱到5%, no whistle

1. 00:30:940 (1) - move to 00:31:127
2. 00:51:940 (1) - big don
3. 00:53:440 (1) - big don
4. 00:57:940 (1) - big don
5. 01:12:565 - add ka
6. 01:13:315 - ^
7. 01:15:190 (1) - move to 01:15:002
8. 01:29:815 (2) - add don
9. 01:30:002 (3) - ka
10. 01:51:002 - add don
11. 01:57:002 - add don
12. 01:57:190 (2) - move to 01:57:377
13. 02:04:502 (3) - move to 02:04:690
14. 02:07:690 ~ 02:09:940 - keep 'ka don ka don ka....' and final note use big don.
15. 02:13:690 ~ 02:14:440 - use 1/3 snap with lower volume.
16. 02:23:065 - add don
17. 02:25:690 (1) - move to 02:25:502
18. 02:26:252 - don
19. 02:37:127 - don
20. 02:40:315 - don
21. 02:43:127 - don
22. 03:50:065 - don
23. 03:52:690 (1) - move to 03:52:502
24. 03:53:252 - don
25. 04:04:127 - don

1. 00:51:940 (1) - big don
2. 00:53:440 (1) - big don
3. 00:57:940 (1) - big don
4. 02:07:690 ~ 02:09:940 - keep 'ka don ka don ka....' and final note use big don.
5. 02:13:690 ~ 02:14:440 - use 1/3 snap with lower volume.
6. and apply the rhythm change as in Oni if you like them

1. 00:32:252 (1) - 删了 然后00:32:627 (2) - 前移1/2, 00:31:877 (5) - 后移1/2. newcombo和位置按自己意思调整下
2. 01:26:440 (1) - 延长到01:29:440 正常音量finish
3. 02:39:940 (1) - 和Hard统一到02:42:940结束吧
4. 03:08:252 (3) - 取消repeat, 03:09:190 & 03:09:565 用slider/note 填上
5. 03:09:940 (1) - 这个位置坏掉了..
6. 04:01:315 (4) - 删掉 04:01:502 & 04:02:158 想办法填上
7. 04:03:940 (3) - 取消repeat, 04:05:252想办法填上

1. 00:59:440 - 这里18.png的变形很像是出了问题.. 建议直接撞飞 或者至少有点左右的缩放
2. 抖动不要有in的动作 比如00:59:721 这里如图 也就是把' M,0,59721,59815,51,195,51,190'这类直接删了
   
3. KIAI部分可以把字体颜色换了
4. white.png边缘可以羽化一下 类似的也一样
5. 这个樱花笔刷果然大家都有 xsk

Colin Hou wrote:

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1. 00:32:252 (1) - 删了 然后00:32:627 (2) - 前移1/2, 00:31:877 (5) - 后移1/2. newcombo和位置按自己意思调整下 求解释 改了后感觉更二了 所以没改
2. 01:26:440 (1) - 延长到01:29:440 正常音量finish OK
3. 02:39:940 (1) - 和Hard统一到02:42:940结束吧 OK
4. 03:08:252 (3) - 取消repeat, 03:09:190 & 03:09:565 用slider/note 填上 同理感觉更难听
5. 03:09:940 (1) - 这个位置坏掉了.. 求解释
6. 04:01:315 (4) - 删掉 04:01:502 & 04:02:158 想办法填上 1、我认为有slidertick足够了 2、你说到想办法天上 我还是觉得不变比较舒服
7. 04:03:940 (3) - 取消repeat, 04:05:252想办法填上 同上。 但是我在04:05:252 - 加了note，或许更搭些

http://up.ppy.sh/files/suzukikonomi-daysofdash(-[nyan]-)[normal].osu

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]

1. suggest moving the logo on taiko bg in the middle of the light yellow part. and use a hand writing font for the title, same or something like the artist one. also, keep the artist/title same distance with the upper/lower border of that bar.
   sorry , no change .

[Taiko Oni]

1. 00:30:940 (1) - move to 00:31:127 no
2. 00:51:940 (1) - big don no
3. 00:53:440 (1) - big don no
4. 00:57:940 (1) - big don no
5. 01:12:565 - add ka no
6. 01:13:315 - ^ no
7. 01:15:190 (1) - move to 01:15:002 no
8. 01:29:815 (2) - add don ok
9. 01:30:002 (3) - ka no
10. 01:51:002 - add don no
11. 01:57:002 - add don ok
12. 01:57:190 (2) - move to 01:57:377 ok
13. 02:04:502 (3) - move to 02:04:690 no
14. 02:07:690 ~ 02:09:940 - keep 'ka don ka don ka....' and final note use big don. no
15. 02:13:690 ~ 02:14:440 - use 1/3 snap with lower volume. ...why?
16. 02:23:065 - add don no
17. 02:25:690 (1) - move to 02:25:502 no
18. 02:26:252 - don no
19. 02:37:127 - don no
20. 02:40:315 - don ok
21. 02:43:127 - don ok
22. 03:50:065 - don no
23. 03:52:690 (1) - move to 03:52:502 no
24. 03:53:252 - don no
25. 04:04:127 - don no

[Taiko Muzukashii]

1. 00:51:940 (1) - big don no
2. 00:53:440 (1) - big don no
3. 00:57:940 (1) - big don no
4. 02:07:690 ~ 02:09:940 - keep 'ka don ka don ka....' and final note use big don. no
5. 02:13:690 ~ 02:14:440 - use 1/3 snap with lower volume. ^
6. and apply the rhythm change as in Oni if you like them sorry , no change

Colin Hou wrote:

直接中文了

[General]

1. suggest moving the logo on taiko bg in the middle of the light yellow part. and use a hand writing font for the title, same or something like the artist one. also, keep the artist/title same distance with the upper/lower border of that bar.

[Insane]

1. 00:54:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里有点滥用三连的感觉 听着是只有最后三个1/4有鼓点但是被滑条带过了 好
2. 00:48:190 - 这里建议和00:47:440保持一致 要留空就一起留空 改了
3. 00:57:190 (2,3) - 1/2间隔还是建议小节内保持 不过应该算是个人习惯 没弄
4. 01:00:190 - Normal set. 这种消音有点没规律..
5. 01:01:690 (5,6) - 这里相比前面就是消音了 不知道是失误还是.. 等等 我重新把图下一遍..
6. 01:09:190 (3) - 继续用whistle在第三拍铺过去吧.. 本身soft就听不到 副歌部分如果想个人发挥可以再找个自定义音效 其实找两个whistle交替用也是个不错的选择 现在的话的确有点杂 没有头绪的感觉 加了
7. 01:29:252 (5) - 后面加两个note spinner后移1/4 注意调整结束点 改了
8. 01:23:440 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以尝试(3),(5)做微量提速 这个好
9. 01:27:752 (7) - 这里先不要萎... .....
10. 01:29:440 - KIAI这里终止 其他难度就不在絮述 嗯
11. 02:03:377 (4) - 真按吉他来这里就去掉repeat. 按鼓点来就02:02:815 (3) - 换note然后02:03:190填上 哦
12. 02:09:190 (3,4,5,6,7) - 绝好的加速段啊..啊..啊.. >_>
13. 02:09:940 (1) - 这里用1/1的话最好用偶数次 比如把02:10:690 (3) - 也换成1/1 全1/1
14. 02:13:690 ~ 1/3这么好的鬼畜骗PC素材居然不用 ;_; >_>
15. 02:16:690 (1,2) - 这类3/4效果感觉不是很好 特别是vocal很明显的1/2的时候 02:15:940 (5,6) - 这种就算是比较好的用法 改了一堆东东
16. 02:29:065 (3) - 3,6,9 这完全一样的形状和方向有偷懒嫌疑 >_>
17. 02:39:940 (1) - 偷懒spinner 删掉填满吧 >_>
18. 02:42:565 - 这里也不太该有空的样子 前提是02:42:377前面填满了 >_>
19. 02:45:940 - 唯一不重复的部分被留break了 x_x solo part啊啊啊啊啊 我的话会留03:18:940 ~ 03:30:940 当break x.x
20. 02:45:940 - KIAI这里结束 其他难度也统一到这里 嗯
21. 04:03:940 (1,2,3) - 整体感. 如下图 弄了
    
    SPOILER

    
22. 04:06:752 (7) - 换1/2slider 末尾5% spinner延后 哦
23. 04:06:940 - 这里结束KIAI 其他难度也统一到这里 嗯

[Storyboard]

>_>晚点弄吧，都会弄的

1. 00:59:440 - 这里18.png的变形很像是出了问题.. 建议直接撞飞 或者至少有点左右的缩放 故意的 >_>
2. 抖动不要有in的动作 比如00:59:721 这里如图 也就是把' M,0,59721,59815,51,195,51,190'这类直接删了
   
3. KIAI部分可以把字体颜色换了
4. white.png边缘可以羽化一下 类似的也一样
5. 这个樱花笔刷果然大家都有 xsk

高于预期 继续努力

Colin Hou wrote:

[Hard]

1. 开头部分直接跟着键盘音摆note吧.. 00:04:690 (8) - 这个很囧orz前面这段由于听不太清不太好排...
2. 00:28:690 (3,4) - 有点怪.. 1/2铺过去吧改了ww
3. 00:30:940 (1) - 减速意义不明啊 ;_; vocal明明没什么感情变化 伴奏也还好好的 停或者变速也是在00:31:502搞的啊其实是slider太长不好放才减速的...
4. 00:32:252 (1) - finish想办法丢00:32:440去现在这个感觉还好...
5. 00:36:752 - 在00:36:940留空而不是这里 注意whistle也得加一个改了
6. 00:38:440 ~ 00:48:940 - whistle频率高到吓人.. 这里和前面一段音乐不一样 要有区别去了点whistle
7. 00:57:940 (1,3,4,1) - stack诡异到爆 建议换个pattern改了点ww
8. 01:04:690 (7) - new combo放这个上面 去掉后面的fixed
9. 02:35:252 (1) - 萎得有点早这个不想改233
10. 03:17:252 (2) - 这个是1/3fixed
11. 03:17:440 (3) - 可以考虑2/3然后两个repeat. 3/4真心怪这个不太好改233
12. 03:29:815 - 加note加了~
13. 03:31:690 (3,4) - 1/2铺过去比较好 3/4在这里没什么依据全是1/2有点单调了..
14. 03:32:815 (2,3) - ^^
15. 03:35:065 - 这一段近似清唱的诀窍就是 不要空重音 尽量跟vocal改了~
16. 03:42:752 (6) - 倾向于丢远点 有点渐强的感觉nice
17. 03:52:315 (2) - 长度1/2 03:52:690留空这个想保留
18. 04:06:752 (1) - 取消new combo好
19. 04:02:815 - 试试丢个三连吧added
20. 04:03:658 (11,12,13) - soft? 是事故么?之前故意弄得...不过看起来去了更好ww
21. 04:05:252 (1) - 萎得早了感觉还好ww
22. 04:06:846 (1) - 跟insane一样做个音量减弱到5%, no whistledone

DarknessAngel wrote:

Normal和Hard難度落差過大了
強烈建議再加個簡單的4.5星難度

我表示你選對歌了
做好圖、好SB，所以大家都給吐嘈lol (嘛，自行理解這句的意思，不解釋ww)

BakaHuang wrote:

\猫酱/


Insane

00:02:440(1,2)-(1)可用finish (2)可以加whistle
00:03:002(3,4)-兩個slider的頭上可以加whistle
00:04:127(2)-slider头上加个whistle?话说这个slider可以做个音量渐变的效果OwO 就是逐渐变轻那种
00:05:065(3,5)-可加whistle~
00:06:002(2)-slider头上加whistle (3)加whistle (4)的slider头上的whistle可去掉 加在尾上
上面都是我个人意见=A=可能你觉得音效多比较吵 lol 其实原样也可以~
前面用奇怪的方式改了>_>
00:27:940(1)-加whistle? 这个没弄
00:35:440(6)-这里加个NC? 后面(1)取消NC 改了
01:08:252(5,6,1)-这里间距要相等吗? 好了
02:09:190(5,6,7)-不加clap嘛 前面也可以加一点 用其他的办法改了
02:15:940(5)-加个NC? 好
02:45:940(6)-加个finish? 这个争议比较大啊，我是倾向于不加
03:18:940(1)-~03:27:377(7)-我觉得这part不错w www
03:21:940(1,2,3,4)-可以做个jump w 这个地方跳很少的...
03:30:940(9)-NC可以从这里开始 不加了吧...
03:42:940(5)-NC可以从这里开始 加了
04:02:627(1)-首尾位置感觉可以换下w 因为前面正好是个jump >_>反正我打的时候提前按了 嗯好

差不多就这样 没什么建设性的意见Orz good luck/

x847606653 wrote:

写了一些又删掉了，感觉没啥用啊QAQ
GOOD JOB,STAR,XD

1. Normal = Just Suggestions for reference ovo
2. Blue = Strongly suggest you do this
3. Red = Unrankable stuff 0.0..

1. http://puu.sh/1EHud[/img:1d39d][/color]
   好像没别的问题了 神SB (・∀・)
   
   
   [Insane]
   
   1. 00:04:127 (3) - 看起来折得不够啊，红点往右点吧！
      
      
   2. 00:07:315 (3) - 加note？虽然曲子这里确实没有音但是后面有长串突然一下子开始打长串很不舒服orz
   
   
   
2. 00:23:346 (5) - 总感觉这里应该有个note的样子
   
3. 00:30:190 (3) - x=124,y=356？
   
   
4. 00:37:502 (3,4,5) - 其实我觉得这梗真不怎么样/_\
   
5. 00:41:065 (4) - x=26,y=147 和前一个滑条可以叠好点
   
   
6. 00:54:752 (3) - 删？感觉不太合曲
   
7. 01:19:315 (2) - 往左一点？
   
8. 02:07:690 (2) - Ctrl+G?flow好点而且离后面的也不太远
   
   
9. 02:23:065 (4) - 试试这样？感觉舒服点;w;
   
   
10. 02:33:096 (4) - 不知怎么感觉很违和 把4还是弄成正常slider吧、、、?
    
11. 03:06:002 (4) - NC?
    
12. 03:30:002 (8) - 不好看orzorzorzorz 红点往上或者往下一点都好啊/_\

1. 00:03:940 (2) - 第二个tick往右2个点？

1. 00:07:127 (2) - 感觉尾不要有clap好点o.o

raririn wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:07:127 (2) - 感觉尾不要有clap好点o.o抱歉觉得留着更好233

[/list]

BakaHuang wrote:

\猫酱/

Hard

00:03:002(2,3)-我觉得whistle加在(3)上比较合适done

mapset和音效都很不错lol [/color]

Flask wrote:

好像很神 留個位置改天mod好了

幹麻放wip

raririn wrote:

好久没mod了orz
random mod here._.

1. Normal = Just Suggestions for reference ovo
2. Blue = Strongly suggest you do this
3. Red = Unrankable stuff 0.0..

都是nazi /w\

[General]

1. http://puu.sh/1EHud[/img:8022c][/color] 这个故意的
   好像没别的问题了 神SB (・∀・)
   
   
   [Insane]
   
   1. 00:04:127 (3) - 看起来折得不够啊，红点往右点吧！ 弄了弄
      
      
   2. 00:07:315 (3) - 加note？虽然曲子这里确实没有音但是后面有长串突然一下子开始打长串很不舒服orz
   先空着吧
   
   
2. 00:23:346 (5) - 总感觉这里应该有个note的样子 这个先保留
   
3. 00:30:190 (3) - x=124,y=356？ 嗯好
   
   
4. 00:37:502 (3,4,5) - 其实我觉得这梗真不怎么样/_\ 这里最后大改了._.
   
5. 00:41:065 (4) - x=26,y=147 和前一个滑条可以叠好点 这个真麻烦
   
   
6. 00:54:752 (3) - 删？感觉不太合曲 还好
   
7. 01:19:315 (2) - 往左一点？ ok
   
8. 02:07:690 (2) - Ctrl+G?flow好点而且离后面的也不太远 嗯好
   
   
9. 02:23:065 (4) - 试试这样？感觉舒服点;w;
   [/color]
   
10. 02:33:096 (4) - 不知怎么感觉很违和 把4还是弄成正常slider吧、、、? 得，还是先留着
    
11. 03:06:002 (4) - NC? 嗯
    
12. 03:30:002 (8) - 不好看orzorzorzorz 红点往上或者往下一点都好啊/_\ 弄了下

懒了 还要做作业 N和H就随便挑一点点吧/_\



(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)好歌好图好SB ☆~

Curisu wrote:

.....改完ID记得StoryBoard的自己ID改掉lol

[Insane]
00:27:940 - remove whis 嗯..
00:29:252 (6) - imo ^ 音效苦手lol
00:35:158 - remove clap ^
00:54:190 (2,3) - circle放最前..? slider可以刚好对vocal
00:59:440 - vol+5照应storyboard?[/color] 弄了
01:05:440 (1) - 微曲线对应01:04:690 (3,4) 这个暂时保留
01:04:690 (3,4) - vol-5~7 ; 01:16:502 (1,2,3) - < 改了
01:44:440 (1,3,4) - 首端一直线上 改了改
01:51:940 - ...whis有点形影单只 直接删了
02:06:940 (1,2) - 这半节vocal , 02:08:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这半节跟渐强鼓声 统一一下比较好 要和后面的0.75x造成反差建议全部渐强鼓声单circle渐增处理
02:12:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - 像摆图形不怎么flow[/color] 保留
02:27:002 (4) - +NC 嗯
02:33:940 - 恩这段和01:04:690 (3,4)一样音量有点大 确实
02:45:940 - break半节怪不舒服...整个间奏break反而会好点 不知道什么意思，不过改了改
03:03:940 (2) - remove NC ; 03:05:065 (2) - +NC 嗯
03:22:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 小建议 三组object两两间微间隔 好
03:25:690 (1,2,3,4) - 正方形nazi >_>



SB碉堡
良图+2star

L_P wrote:

忙补

L_P 吐槽太可怕

[Insane]
00:47:440 (1) - 这里放个finish 嗯
00:48:002 (4) - 尾巴^ 嗯好
00:48:940 (3) - 头^ 好
00:50:440 (1) - 这里开始是觉得该换一套音效了，音乐里每一拍都有一钢琴声放了不做可惜，用了normal这里会稍显粗糙 已经成这样了，太麻烦
01:08:440 (1) - 知道这里我才发现你有两soft custom音效，而没弄错的话差别应该就是hitsoft 一个较大声吧orz 我是觉得这里降低hit soft的话打的时候怪怪的，毕竟是kiai啊 降低声量不大恰当 （而且我发现SC1与SC2之间的交替有种不顺畅的感觉，03:45:940 (1) - 这边也一样）绿线删了
02:03:190 (1) - 声量莫名降低？这儿没管，换那个hitsoft音会怪怪的
02:14:346 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - kickslider 有点乱放的感觉，要不老老实实的前面kick后面stream之类的 暂时保留
02:16:315 (2,3,4) - 这三个总感觉太挤 暂时保留
02:45:940 (6) - finish added
03:15:190 (4) - 间距太近，且03:12:940 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个下来也不好看 不好弄啊
03:47:065 (2) - clap added
04:03:940 (1,2,3) - 这3条放在一起间距不一样看起来不漂亮 搞了搞
整个diff给我的感觉是好像赶出来的样子，很多地方的跳意义不明确，间距变化也是一样，没有贯穿全图的精神在，感觉好像这边是A做的，那边是B做的。
排列方面感觉还是没进步，常常放着就会挤在一起...orz
很多地方只是纯粹拉slider填note (如这里02:39:940 (1) - ) 没仔细想梗 铺梗 ，即使没梗最少排列要看起来好像有梗这样
只有03:31:315 (1) - 这里觉得还不错

距离好mapper的目标还要加油哦 你如果变成量产mapper的话
嘛
干掉你 lol

• 00:04:315 这里空着会不会有点别扭
  
  开头和结尾whistle
  00:06:565 (3) - 这么放比较好看
  
  00:08:065 (2) - 结尾的clap去掉，加上finish
  00:23:065 (3) - clap
  00:24:377 (3) - 复制00:25:877 (2) - 再ctrl+G放在（152,160）
  00:25:877 (2) - 结尾clap
  00:28:877 (1) - 结尾clap
  00:49:502 (2) - 这里最好保持前后的空隙一样大,因为这里算是比较明显的地方，空隙不一样不太美观
  00:50:440 Sampleset-Auto
  00:58:315 (2) - 保持前后的空隙一样大
  01:14:252 (5) - 结尾clap
  01:23:065 (2) - 和01:22:502 (1) - 不在一条直线上啊，关掉grid snap调整一下
  01:26:440 Sampleset-Auto
  02:18:940 加个note
  02:21:940 ^
  02:45:752 (5) - 最好别和02:44:440 (3) - 碰到
  03:06:283 貌似无用的绿线
  03:30:940 加个note
  03:44:065 (3) - （462,233）
  04:05:627 (3,5) - 复制一下然后ctrl+H吧

thou bad wrote:

[Normal]

• 00:04:315 这里空着会不会有点别扭 挪了好多东西
  
  开头和结尾whistle
  00:06:565 (3) - 这么放比较好看 嗯..
  
  00:08:065 (2) - 结尾的clap去掉，加上finish 嗯
  00:23:065 (3) - clap 嗯
  00:24:377 (3) - 复制00:25:877 (2) - 再ctrl+G放在（152,160） 改了改
  00:25:877 (2) - 结尾clap 嗯好
  00:28:877 (1) - 结尾clap 嗯好
  00:49:502 (2) - 这里最好保持前后的空隙一样大,因为这里算是比较明显的地方，空隙不一样不太美观 >_>
  00:50:440 Sampleset-Auto ok
  00:58:315 (2) - 保持前后的空隙一样大 >_>
  01:14:252 (5) - 结尾clap 嗯
  01:23:065 (2) - 和01:22:502 (1) - 不在一条直线上啊，关掉grid snap调整一下 好了
  01:26:440 Sampleset-Auto ok
  02:18:940 加个note 完全vocal
  02:21:940 ^ ^
  02:45:752 (5) - 最好别和02:44:440 (3) - 碰到 弄了弄
  03:06:283 貌似无用的绿线 嗯...
  03:30:940 加个note 嗯好
  03:44:065 (3) - （462,233）这里我手长，没弄好
  04:05:627 (3,5) - 复制一下然后ctrl+H吧

调整了下