From my modding queue
oh its this song again ><
Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommendedRed is unrankable[General]
The white combo colour is too hard to see with the video and very flashy during the kiai, give it a shade of grey to tone it down a bit
[Easy]
sv a bit fast for Easy, but not a big problem
00:09:811 (1) - whistle on start
00:13:054 (3) - NC
00:29:271 (1) - maybe a finish on the start?
00:35:757 (1) - whistle on start
00:43:460 (2) - feels more comfortable if you shorten this to 00:43:663 to follow the vocals
00:51:973 (1,2) - arrange this so 00:53:190 (2) overlaps 00:50:352 (2)
01:16:298 (1,3) - the curves on these are overdone, make them flatter so the blanket on 01:17:109 (2) looks more natural
[Normal]
00:03:325 (6) - NC
00:18:730 (6) - place this here for a better flow:
00:31:298 (1) - take off NC
00:37:379 (3) - take off the finish on the start, the finish plays at 00:37:176 in the music which makes this finish sound weird
00:43:460 (3) - clap
00:45:487 - add a 5% volume inherited section here to mute the spinner spin sound, since the music halts here (you can restore the volume at 00:46:298 (1))00:58:460 (1) - curve this so it blankets 00:59:676 (2)
01:08:190 (2) - use finish instead?
01:22:176 (1,2) - how bout a repeat slider instead? the flow is a bit difficult to grasp here since its closer to the end of 01:21:365 (3) which is a repeat slider
[Sora]
i would go with AR7 here, but up to you
00:03:325 (1) - up to 00:09:406 (7), the clap sounds you put on the 2/4 white ticks are not very fitting to the violin solo, i would say just remove them and use just whistles here
00:17:919 (9) - spacing, try overlap with 00:16:095 (5)
00:19:541 (2) - whistle sounds better than finish on the start here
00:27:446 (4) - ctrl+g gives a better flow here imo
00:29:271 (5) - add finish on start
00:38:291 (4) - try stacking this on 00:38:392 (5)
00:42:041 (1) - take off NC here and place it at 00:43:663 (5) instead
00:59:980 - add a note here to cover for the drums
01:02:919 (1,2,3) - these 3 should look the same (use ctrl+cv and then rotation by 120 degrees)
01:17:311 (4) - the flow here is disturbed by the pause on the overlap, try something like this:
01:20:352 (1) - take off the finish on start, sounds a bit unfitting here
Thats all, good luck on ranking~