Blue Stahli - Shotgun Senorita (Zardonic Remix) · forum

quiz-chan_DELETED

quiz-chan_DELETED 2012-12-25T13:06:59+00:00

Well, hey thear~
This is a pretty interesting ~~mod~~ you know. *sorry, did I say "mod"? I meant "map".

Only thing missing would be a fail-background.png which says "You just got shot by Shotgun Senorita"... lol, just kidding. xP

[General]

~SB~
Just mentioning that..... nevermind.

[Easy]
00:30:197 (2,3) - Spacing is inconsistent, but since this is so far away in time, you don't need to change this.
00:34:311 (1) - I don't quite like this slider. I can't explain why but try to "relax" it a bit, which means: not so sharp curves, maybe?
01:44:254 (2,4) - These sliders absolutely don't fit to the rhythm. Please, Aleks, change them ;_;
02:03:454 (3) - This one doesn't fit either.
02:10:311 (3) - Remove Clap hitsound on repeat (and on slider end maybe)?

[Niva's Normal]
Since this diff's slider velocity is quite high I would strongly recommend renaming this to "Normal+".
==> I confirm phaZ's suggestion to raise AR by one. Then renaming to "Normal+" would be even more appropriate/necessary.

00:30:540 (2) - Move end node to x:112;y:168 to make it look less linear?
00:39:797 (4) - I highly recommend making a new combo here.
00:54:883 (1,2,3) - These notes are almost offscreen heer.~ I would recommend re-arranging this pattern.
00:58:997 (5) - Same about this guy.
01:59:340 (4,5) - I would rather not combine these sliders because of their shape. They don't make a great pattern.

[Hard]
01:10:997 (3) - Y U make last node a red one? Makes arc look ugly.

Yes, that's all for this diff! Hehehe...

[Insane]
01:45:626 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Using Ctrl+H on them doesn't look bad... at all!

That's all! I hope I was helpful though

Wonderful, adorable,...

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awesomesuperbunbelievablenicegreat...

...map! Keep up the awesome work!

Aleks719

osu! Alumni

2,436 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

Aleks719 2012-12-26T11:21:24+00:00

Quiz-chan wrote:
[Easy]
00:30:197 (2,3) - Spacing is inconsistent, but since this is so far away in time, you don't need to change this. yes, think same, didn't change
00:34:311 (1) - I don't quite like this slider. I can't explain why but try to "relax" it a bit, which means: not so sharp curves, maybe? kay
01:44:254 (2,4) - These sliders absolutely don't fit to the rhythm. Please, Aleks, change them ;_; turned sliders into notes
02:03:454 (3) - This one doesn't fit either. kay,done
02:10:311 (3) - Remove Clap hitsound on repeat (and on slider end maybe)? removed

[Hard]
01:10:997 (3) - Y U make last node a red one? Makes arc look ugly. but it brings symmetry in your life!

Yes, that's all for this diff! Hehehe...

[Insane]
01:45:626 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Using Ctrl+H on them doesn't look bad... at all! hm. i've made "crtl+>". so, kinda fixed

That's all! I hope I was helpful though

Hah, thank you for feedback ^^"
and for useful mod too!

Niva

Global Moderator

3,187 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2012-12-26T14:39:43+00:00

Quiz-chan wrote:
[Niva's Normal]
Since this diff's slider velocity is quite high I would strongly recommend renaming this to "Normal+".
==> I confirm phaZ's suggestion to raise AR by one. Then renaming to "Normal+" would be even more appropriate/necessary. Umm I don't really like + difficulty names... Plus AR6 for Normal is too much imo (especially for players who enjoyed playing Normals with HD+HR)

00:30:540 (2) - Move end node to x:112;y:168 to make it look less linear? It's linear on purpose, I moved (3,4,5) a bit though
00:39:797 (4) - I highly recommend making a new combo here. Yep
00:54:883 (1,2,3) - These notes are almost offscreen heer.~ I would recommend re-arranging this pattern.
00:58:997 (5) - Same about this guy. It's off the grid actually, not offscreen in play mode (:
01:59:340 (4,5) - I would rather not combine these sliders because of their shape. They don't make a great pattern. Oh, I liked it personally... ._.

Thanks for mod~

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osu file format v11

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 21968
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Shotgun Senorita (Zardonic Remix)
TitleUnicode:Shotgun Senorita (Zardonic Remix)
Artist:Blue Stahli
ArtistUnicode:Blue Stahli
Creator:Aleks719
Version:Niva's Normal
Source:
Tags:niva electro
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BeatmapSetID:65853

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:3
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[Luanny]

8,248 posts

Joined April 2011

[Luanny] 2012-12-26T14:58:54+00:00

awesome <3
starrrr

Roxas

osu! Alumni

1,354 posts

Joined August 2011

Roxas 2012-12-27T22:26:27+00:00

Lol Noctowl avatar

Don't hate me if some of my things will be nazi :c

[General]

~~Tickrate 1?~~ lol me noob
OD+1 or HPdrain+1

The map is ok ovo

[Niva's Normal]

AR-1?

00:10:997 (1) - I don't like this NC... Remove :/
00:17:854 (2) - Move in x:393
00:47:340 (2) - 00:50:083 (3) - I think you can remove them... This is a normal diff
00:55:568 (2) - ^
00:58:311 (3) - ^ and the others...
01:40:140 (4) - I don't like this slider here... One like this?

SPOILER

193,58,100140,2,0,P|227:48|227:48|272:80|339:64|339:64|348:30,2,187.5

01:49:397 (1) - Remove NC and put NC in next object

[Hard]

00:15:626 (5) - Remove the 2nd point?

SPOILER

01:02:597 (3) - Move in position of 01:02:083 (1) - ?
01:16:483 (3) - Why don't you copypaste from 01:15:454 (1) - here? obh ctrl + j

[Insane]

00:41:168 (1) - Why here orange?
01:05:511 (3) - ctrl+g?
01:52:997 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same distance for everyone? lol

Lol starred o/

Niva

Global Moderator

3,187 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2012-12-28T04:35:58+00:00

Roxas wrote:
[Niva's Normal]

AR-1? I feel best with 5 xD

00:10:997 (1) - I don't like this NC... Remove :/ Okay...
00:17:854 (2) - Move in x:393 orz 1 grid, done~
00:47:340 (2) - 00:50:083 (3) - I think you can remove them... This is a normal diff
00:55:568 (2) - ^
00:58:311 (3) - ^ and the others... Umm, it's perfectly fine imo...
01:40:140 (4) - I don't like this slider here... One like this?
SPOILER
orz, but I liked it >_< - made it more symmetrical though
193,58,100140,2,0,P|227:48|227:48|272:80|339:64|339:64|348:30,2,187.5
01:49:397 (1) - Remove NC and put NC in next object Hmm, I want to make the comboing consistent with 01:05:511

Thank you Roxas (:

SPOILER

osu file format v11

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 21968
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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TitleUnicode:Shotgun Senorita (Zardonic Remix)
Artist:Blue Stahli
ArtistUnicode:Blue Stahli
Creator:Aleks719
Version:Niva's Normal
Source:
Tags:niva nivalis electronic drum and bass dnb d'n'b Federico Augusto Agreda Alvarez minimal
BeatmapID:203060
BeatmapSetID:65853

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.25
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Aleks719

osu! Alumni

2,436 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

Aleks719 2012-12-28T19:14:07+00:00

Roxas wrote:
Lol Noctowl avatar
Don't hate me if some of my things will be nazi :c

[General]

~~Tickrate 1?~~ lol me noob
OD+1 or HPdrain+1 eh, already od,ar2. enough for easy

The map is ok ovo ovo

[Hard]

00:15:626 (5) - Remove the 2nd point?
SPOILER
mmm, yes, look better
01:02:597 (3) - Move in position of 01:02:083 (1) - ? nah, it gives antijump
01:16:483 (3) - Why don't you copypaste from 01:15:454 (1) - here? obh ctrl + j uh, something happened with 3, it was better. fixed

[Insane]

00:41:168 (1) - Why here orange? fix'd
01:05:511 (3) - ctrl+g? mm, okaaay
01:52:997 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same distance for everyone? lol noooo, no need to

Lol starred o/

thank you for mod!

Roxas

osu! Alumni

1,354 posts

Joined August 2011

Roxas 2012-12-28T20:33:26+00:00

Mmmh I forgot to write [Easy] LOL

@Niva:

Roxas wrote:
Don't hate me if some of my things will be nazi :c

when maps are perfect are perfect :c

JustF

54 posts

Joined March 2010

JustF 2013-01-01T11:48:37+00:00

General :
I just love your map! It is really great and the difficulty is just perfect. Many jumps, nice hitsounds, some streams, just the way I like it. But okay, I'll try to mod your map!

- Suggestions
- Maybe add a custom sound like this one http://www.2shared.com/file/b6ol6giU/sounds.html .

Insane :

- Suggestions
No sugestions

- Fixes
00:14:940 (2) - Looks kinda odd to mee. Place 1 or 2 grid down, although you can just ignore this if you like it.
00:31:568 (1) - I think many people thought they had to stream here, you could add just a little more spacing between the notes.
01:17:168 (1) - ^
01:18:540 (2) - I just can't stop loving the way you stacked those notes, just saying. So maybe you should also do it in the other places where you stack notes.
01:51:111 (9) - PLEASE! Add a clap at the end of this slider, I beg you! Otherwise it feels like you just forgot to put a clap there.
The rest is just, well, kinda hard, but really good!

Hard:
In some sense you could say that this should be the insane difficulty. It is already really hard, good job!

- Suggestions
No sugestions

- Fixes
00:43:397 (2,3,4) - The clap sound on 2/4 sounds really weird, you can keep it, but I do not really like it.
That is pritty much all of hard! Good work!

Normal:
It is a pritty good difficulty! Really. The sliders are unexpectedly fast, but that is good, even normal players and beginners love some speed.

- Suggestions
- Do some more with the hitsounds. The other difficulty's use hitsounds way better.

- Fixes
00:31:226 (3) - Maybe move it a few grids up, or curve it into the other direction.
00:53:168 (3) - A few grids up and to the right makes it look a lot better I think.
01:10:483 (5) - same as 00:31:226 (3), but than down.
01:37:054 (3) - A little up.

Easy:
Okey, I'm an not-so-great insane player, but I'm really bad at making and modding easy difficulty's. But I took a look at it and it looks pritty awsome.

- Suggestions
No suggestions

- Fixes
No fixes

Kyshiro

Elite Mapper

1,642 posts

Joined January 2011

Kyshiro 2013-01-01T21:11:03+00:00

It seems that puush went down after I finished this mod, if there are questions about anything, just pm me in game.

Insane

Hitsound suggestion (Sounds best if both are applied) :
- 00:13:054 (3) - Add whistle on end
- 00:13:740 (4) - Remove whistle on start

00:23:854 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think a rearrangement of this combo could make this a bit harder and more fun to play: First switch (4, 5) then switch (5, 6) http://puu.sh/1I6Rg
00:50:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Would play nicer if the stream was more lined up with the previous pattern: http://puu.sh/1I8Xg
As I was experimenting with this I also applied this to the next 2 sliders to move along with the rest so I'm just pasting the code in here:
code
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01:09:797 (5,1) - Same story as above, however this one might be a bit harder to fix
01:15:111 (4) - Remove whistle?
01:49:397 (1) - This slow down feels a bit unexpected, maybe make a slider like this instead of a slowdown?: http://puu.sh/1I96I
01:57:797 (3,4) - Could be lined up a bit nicer like mentioned before (Don't forget to move 01:57:111 (1) - to the same location as the note if you fix this)

Hard

00:16:311 (1,2) - Can't help but notice how this isn't lined up smoother, same as mentioned in the insane
00:41:168 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps might be a bit too hard for a hard diff, however it might be fine since the insane is pretty hard
01:09:454 (3,4) - Might be a bit nazi, but this feels a bit off, try placing (3) at x:256 y:332 and (4) at x:176 y:276
01:12:197 (3,4) - A bit too hard?
01:20:254 (2,3) - ^
01:41:683 (1) - How about making this a straight slider to fit with the rest of the combo

Niva's Normal

Sliders are pretty fast for a normal, won't say anything about this since I tend to do the same thing lol.

00:22:826 (1) - By adding a small curve to the left you create more flow, and it looks a bit nicer imo: http://puu.sh/1I9FK
00:44:768 (1) - ^ Might have to move the slider a bit to the left too so it points towards slider (2)
01:42:368 (4) - Would look nice if this had a small downwards curve
01:49:226 (8,1) - Part of this is covered underneath the HP bar

Easy

Nothing to say here, nice diff, Some nice sliders over there too.

Not much to say about this map, couldn't find any major issues, in my opinion this is ready to be ranked +Star

Niva

Global Moderator

3,187 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-01-02T03:05:53+00:00

Roxas : It's fine though, I've gotten some VERY useful grid mods in my mapping career (really :3)

flokkie wrote:
Normal:
It is a pritty good difficulty! Really. The sliders are unexpectedly fast, but that is good, even normal players and beginners love some speed.

- Suggestions
- Do some more with the hitsounds. The other difficulty's use hitsounds way better. Umm, it's just a matter of sampleset used I think...

- Fixes
00:31:226 (3) - Maybe move it a few grids up, or curve it into the other direction. Umm nope, it's from previous mod actually
00:53:168 (3) - A few grids up and to the right makes it look a lot better I think. Done
01:10:483 (5) - same as 00:31:226 (3), but than down. Okay, x:512
01:37:054 (3) - A little up. (2,3,4) is meant to encircle (5) xD

Kyshiro wrote:
Niva's Normal

Sliders are pretty fast for a normal, won't say anything about this since I tend to do the same thing lol.

00:22:826 (1) - By adding a small curve to the left you create more flow, and it looks a bit nicer imo: http://puu.sh/1I9FK Oh nice suggestion, added~
00:44:768 (1) - ^ Might have to move the slider a bit to the left too so it points towards slider (2) Hmm, kept this personally...
01:42:368 (4) - Would look nice if this had a small downwards curve Done, but with red waypoint (:
01:49:226 (8,1) - Part of this is covered underneath the HP bar Hmm I know, personally I think it's fine :3

Thank you both~

SPOILER

osu file format v11

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 21968
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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TitleUnicode:Shotgun Senorita (Zardonic Remix)
Artist:Blue Stahli
ArtistUnicode:Blue Stahli
Creator:Aleks719
Version:Niva's Normal
Source:
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CircleSize:4
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Aleks719

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Aleks719 2013-01-02T12:04:32+00:00

flokkie wrote:
General :
I just love your map! It is really great and the difficulty is just perfect. Many jumps, nice hitsounds, some streams, just the way I like it. But okay, I'll try to mod your map! awww, thanks (ovo)/

- Suggestions
- Maybe add a custom sound like this one http://www.2shared.com/file/b6ol6giU/sounds.html . hum, i think hitsounds are fine as is (prefer to use default)

Insane :

- Fixes
00:14:940 (2) - Looks kinda odd to mee. Place 1 or 2 grid down, although you can just ignore this if you like it. ok
00:31:568 (1) - I think many people thought they had to stream here, you could add just a little more spacing between the notes. nah, it gives small rest from jumps, plus it has new combo and diff is Insane,don't see problems :U
01:17:168 (1) - ^^
01:18:540 (2) - I just can't stop loving the way you stacked those notes, just saying. So maybe you should also do it in the other places where you stack notes. aw, thanks, i tried to find some more places for this pattern, but w/o result
01:51:111 (9) - PLEASE! Add a clap at the end of this slider, I beg you! Otherwise it feels like you just forgot to put a clap there.
The rest is just, well, kinda hard, but really good! oops, seems i really missed it! fixed!

Hard:
In some sense you could say that this should be the insane difficulty. It is already really hard, good job! haha, true ^^" thank you!

- Fixes
00:43:397 (2,3,4) - The clap sound on 2/4 sounds really weird, you can keep it, but I do not really like it. mmm, changed
That is pritty much all of hard! Good work!

Easy:
Okey, I'm an not-so-great insane player, but I'm really bad at making and modding easy difficulty's. But I took a look at it and it looks pritty awsome. hah, it's okay

Thank you for mod!

Kyshiro wrote:
It seems that puush went down after I finished this mod, if there are questions about anything, just pm me in game.

Insane

Hitsound suggestion (Sounds best if both are applied) :
- 00:13:054 (3) - Add whistle on end added
- 00:13:740 (4) - Remove whistle on start not added xD

00:23:854 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think a rearrangement of this combo could make this a bit harder and more fun to play: First switch (4, 5) then switch (5, 6) http://puu.sh/1I6Rg hum, i wanted to keep that stage easy, but this jump doesn't make it so hard, applied
00:50:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Would play nicer if the stream was more lined up with the previous pattern: http://puu.sh/1I8Xg rotated on 20 degrees
01:09:797 (5,1) - Same story as above, however this one might be a bit harder to fix mmm, here want to keep as is
01:15:111 (4) - Remove whistle? ok
01:49:397 (1) - This slow down feels a bit unexpected, maybe make a slider like this instead of a slowdown?: http://puu.sh/1I96I nooooo, it's cool!
01:57:797 (3,4) - Could be lined up a bit nicer like mentioned before it's okay as is too!

Hard

00:16:311 (1,2) - Can't help but notice how this isn't lined up smoother, same as mentioned in the insane fixed it
00:41:168 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps might be a bit too hard for a hard diff, however it might be fine since the insane is pretty hard saved as was
01:09:454 (3,4) - Might be a bit nazi, but this feels a bit off, try placing (3) at x:256 y:332 and (4) at x:176 y:276 ok!
01:12:197 (3,4) - A bit too hard? nooo, easy to pass
01:20:254 (2,3) - ^ reduced spacing a bit
01:41:683 (1) - How about making this a straight slider to fit with the rest of the combo wanna have one curve
Easy

Nothing to say here, nice diff, Some nice sliders over there too. :D easy is too easy
Not much to say about this map, couldn't find any major issues, in my opinion this is ready to be ranked +Star thanks!

yay, thank you for star and mod!

Kurai

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Kurai 2013-01-04T22:59:54+00:00

[General]

Combo colour 1 blends with the BG, it may become annoying or confusing sometimes. For example in Hard :
00:20:768 (2,3) - it is hard to notice there is a circle stacked on the slider at first sight.
Just make it lighter so it doesn't blend maybe. Or just change the colour.
I don't like the difficulty settings spread, it isn't consistent. Imo something like OD/HPdrain 3 in Easy, 5 in Normal, 7 in hard and 88 in Insane would fit better.

[Easy]

00:28:826 (1) - imo this note is too close from the bottom border. For aesthetic purposes, I would rotate 00:28:826 (1,2,3,4) 6 degrees clockwise.
As this difficulty has been designed for very beginners I would increase the overall hitsound volume by 15~20%
There only are few notes, mainly 1/1; 2/1 and over. It would be easier for the player to understand the mechanic of the game if the hitsounds are clearly audible. At the moment they blend with the music which may feel strange for novices.

[Hard]

01:10:997 (3) - Not symmetrical enough, it actually breaks the feeling of playing a good looking map :/

[Insane]

00:26:768 (3,4,5,6,7) - This stream is going upward and for some reasons it doesn't play correctly. I mean, when I play it it feels awkward. I don't know how to express this sensation with words, it simply doesn't fit to me, like it doesn't flow correctly. Something going downward actually feels better to me.
01:17:168 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think the stack should start with (1) but with (2). Something like this maybe ? http://puu.sh/1JAaA In my opinion it fits the music better.
01:49:397 (1,2,1) - It is a bad idea to have 1/4 just after the slowdown. Some people may think they are 1/2 because of the slowdown. "oh this slider is slower, so are the following notes 1/2 ?" or something like this. It actually disturbed me the first time I tested it. Maybe just remove (2) ? there is no actual need in 1/4 here anyway. It even emphasize the slowdown more imo.

Nice map (and song choice). Beautiful sliders, nice flow, awesome hitsounding. Yeah this is a great map, just some little suggestions. All is up to you (except the combo colour thing

).

~

Aleks719

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Aleks719 2013-01-05T14:33:06+00:00

Kurai wrote:
[General]
Combo colour 1 blends with the BG, it may become annoying or confusing sometimes. For example in Hard :
00:20:768 (2,3) - it is hard to notice there is a circle stacked on the slider at first sight.
Just make it lighter so it doesn't blend maybe. Or just change the colour. made it lighter!
I don't like the difficulty settings spread, it isn't consistent. Imo something like OD/HPdrain 3 in Easy, 5 in Normal, 7 in hard and 88 in Insane would fit better. uh, changed in Normal, now : 2.2/4.4/6.6/8.7 (cuz i'm against od8 you know :S)
[Easy]
00:28:826 (1) - imo this note is too close from the bottom border. For aesthetic purposes, I would rotate 00:28:826 (1,2,3,4) 6 degrees clockwise.
As this difficulty has been designed for very beginners I would increase the overall hitsound volume by 15~20% alright
There only are few notes, mainly 1/1; 2/1 and over. It would be easier for the player to understand the mechanic of the game if the hitsounds are clearly audible. At the moment they blend with the music which may feel strange for novices. done
[Hard]
01:10:997 (3) - Not symmetrical enough, it actually breaks the feeling of playing a good looking map :/ fixed!
[Insane]
00:26:768 (3,4,5,6,7) - This stream is going upward and for some reasons it doesn't play correctly. I mean, when I play it it feels awkward. I don't know how to express this sensation with words, it simply doesn't fit to me, like it doesn't flow correctly. Something going downward actually feels better to me. uh, i tried another patterns, but want to save this
01:17:168 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think the stack should start with (1) but with (2). Something like this maybe ? http://puu.sh/1JAaA In my opinion it fits the music better. okay!
01:49:397 (1,2,1) - It is a bad idea to have 1/4 just after the slowdown. Some people may think they are 1/2 because of the slowdown. "oh this slider is slower, so are the following notes 1/2 ?" or something like this. It actually disturbed me the first time I tested it. Maybe just remove (2) ? there is no actual need in 1/4 here anyway. It even emphasize the slowdown more imo. removed (2)
Nice map (and song choice). Beautiful sliders, nice flow, awesome hitsounding. Yeah this is a great map, just some little suggestions. All is up to you (except the combo colour thing ).

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