1. Grounded (3.23 stars, 293 notes)
2. I'm dead, I'm done (5 stars, 703 notes)
3. Picked off the family tree (4.6 stars, 454 notes)
4. Vash's In trouble (1.99 stars, 199 notes)

Behonkiss wrote:

Try this out:

Behonkiss wrote:

There were other pictures on Google Image Search when I looked, and he's either staring or a lot older in them (or both). Try Googling his name and looking for an image that you feel fits better.

I like the actual beatmap, though. Have a star.

Vash wrote:

This is done pretty well, but I think there were some things that you could fix.

[Grounded]
Found no errors here.

[Picked off the family tree]
1:41:812(1,2,3,4,5) - The normal sound doesn't seem to fit this part. Try replacing it with the whistle.
2:20:530(3,4,5,6) - The whistle doesn't really fit this part, either. It sounds better without it.

Other than that, I couldn't find anything.

Vash wrote:

I also noticed that the picture and the video didn't show up at all when I played through the beatmap. Why this happens, I do not know.

And also, I made an easy difficulty for this beatmap. Hopefully, this is easy enough to play. It's a 1.99 star difficulty. Max score is just over 875 thousand (878,666, to be exact).

Vash wrote:

Try zipping all of the files in that folder, then drag the zip file onto the game, like you would normally. (I did this when osu! crashed and I lost the difficulty, and it worked just fine)

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

Just a friendly reminder that what I say is mostly *suggestion* on how to possibly improve your map and not a *command* that you change your map!

[Vash's in trouble]
00:09:50 (3) - spacing?
00:16:68 (1) - line this up with 4
00:18:73 (1) - line this up with 5
00:20:78 (1) - line this up with 3
00:31:04 (1) - ^
00:37:19 (1) - line this up with 2
00:39:24 (1) - line this up with 3
00:45:40 (1) - ^
00:48:47 (2) - partly hidden under 1
00:49:50 (1) - line this up with 2
00:55:14 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - spacing consistancy much?
01:24:37 (1) - line this up with 2
01:25:40 (3) - is there a reason this is slanted?
01:29:50 (2) - line this up with previous note
01:30:53 (1) - ^
01:36:68 (1) - partly hidden under prev. note
01:38:73 (1) - line this up with prev. note
01:44:88 (2) - ^
01:45:91 (4) - ^
01:54:12 (2) - ^
02:10:78 (2) - ^
02:24:88 (3) - is there a reason this is slanted?
02:28:99 (2) - can you move this to minimize overlap with 1?
02:52:58 (1) - line this up with prev. note
02:54:24 (1) - start this 1/4 earlier
03:02:32 (2) - spacing is too close
03:12:06 (1) - line this up with prev. note


[Grounded]
00:18:73 (1) - line this up with prev. note
00:31:04 (1) - ^
01:04:88 (2) - ^
01:34:63 (1) - make this symmetrical
02:10:78 (2) - line this up with prev. note
map is kinda boring and repetitive, you can either make it more stimulating or delete part of it


[Picked off the family tree]
00:14:63 (1,2,3) - can you move this around so it doesnt overlap?
00:23:35 (1) - line this up with prev. note
00:49:37 (1) - start this 1/4 later
01:09:63 (5) - delete and replace break
01:23:22 (3) - move this 1/4 later
01:58:86 (5) - delete and replace break
02:23:60 (1) - line this up with prev. note
02:35:14 (2) - stack on fading 4
02:43:86 (3) - line this stack up with prev. note
again map is boring and repetitive


[I'm dead, I'm done]
00:21:17 (4) - spacing?
00:36:17 (10) - new combo
01:18:22 (1,2,3) - put these in a nice line
01:28:73 (3) - spacing?
01:38:22 (8) - line this up with 7
01:44:88 (1,2,3,4) - 3 is kinda out of place on this curve
02:25:78 (1,2,3,4,5) - put these on the same line