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FamiRockP - Oni Kanojo [OsuMania]

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Sorarei
[General]
- Volume too loud , make it to 50%
- Background need to change, quality seems bad
- i didn't like Chiptune ._.
- seriously some pattern position are monotone (pressing at same column again and again)

[Hard]
00:02:307 (2307|2) - move to 2nd
00:11:218 (11218|5,11367|5) - mirror
00:14:188 (14188|2) - move to 4th
00:55:847 (55847|1) - move to 5th
00:57:406 (57406|3) - move to 3rd
01:06:020 (66020|2) - move to 2nd
01:13:297 (73297|2) - move to 2nd
01:15:079 (75079|4) - move to 6th
01:16:268 (76268|2) - move to 6th
01:24:584 - 01:24:733 - 01:24:881 - add note
01:45:376 (105376|0) - move to 5th
01:54:733 (114733|1) - move 1st
02:05:055 (125055|3) - i don't recommend to put this note because the beat sound is little (some people didn't notice due this little sound) , as i see you're making chart following main beat
02:08:396 - when i play at this time, i didn't notice if this section following beat, instead feel kinda like vocal so "add note" will be enjoyable
SPOILER
02:09:436 - add note
02:10:624 - add note
02:11:812 - add note
02:14:040 - add note
02:15:228 - add note
02:16:119 - add note
02:18:050 - add note
02:19:238 - add note
02:20:426 - add note
02:23:545 - add note
02:24:733 - add note
02:49:238 (169238|5) - move to 3rd
02:55:995 (175995|0) - move to 6th
02:56:589 (176589|6) - move to 2nd
03:05:129 (185129|6) - delete
- supporting off-beat (1/2)
04:02:901 - add note
04:04:089 - add note
04:05:277 - add note
04:07:208 - add note in 1/1 with clap ?
04:09:584 - re-arrange some, why at same column ?
04:11:812 (251812|2) - change to LN ?

[Insane]
00:16:713 - re-arrange some note ?
00:22:802 - 00:31:565 - 2nd , 4th , 6th note is gone x_x
00:44:040 (44040|2) - release and press again 00:44:411 (44411|2) - is not good idea i think (i mean too fast if release then press again)
00:47:010 (47010|3,47456|3) - ^
00:52:951 (52951|4,53173|4) - ^
00:55:253 (55253|0) - move to somewhere that can be more easy to press
00:55:921 - 01:00:079 - where's 1st , 3rd , 5th , 7th ?
01:25:698 (85698|0) - move
01:28:074 (88074|1) - move
01:49:386 - 01:58:743 - 2nd , 4th , 6th note is gone x_x
02:27:258 - 02:29:634 - spread them x_x
Topic Starter
Entozer

Reikosaka wrote:

[General]
- Volume too loud , make it to 50%
- Background need to change, quality seems bad
- i didn't like Chiptune ._.
- seriously some pattern position are monotone (pressing at same column again and again)

[Hard]
00:02:307 (2307|2) - move to 2nd
00:11:218 (11218|5,11367|5) - mirror ! Changed. Thanks
00:14:188 (14188|2) - move to 4th
00:55:847 (55847|1) - move to 5th
00:57:406 (57406|3) - move to 3rd No change in some of the notes, sorry. The pattern will become inconsistent.
01:06:020 (66020|2) - move to 2nd
01:13:297 (73297|2) - move to 2nd
01:15:079 (75079|4) - move to 6th
01:16:268 (76268|2) - move to 6th
01:24:584 - 01:24:733 - 01:24:881 - add note I added something, but not exactly what you suggested. Thank you for pointing that part out.
01:45:376 (105376|0) - move to 5th
01:54:733 (114733|1) - move 1st
02:05:055 (125055|3) - i don't recommend to put this note because the beat sound is little (some people didn't notice due this little sound) , as i see you're making chart following main beat B-but I can hear it clearly... no change for now.
02:08:396 - when i play at this time, i didn't notice if this section following beat, instead feel kinda like vocal so "add note" will be enjoyable
SPOILER
02:09:436 - add note
02:10:624 - add note
02:11:812 - add note
02:14:040 - add note
02:15:228 - add note
02:16:119 - add note
02:18:050 - add note
02:19:238 - add note
02:20:426 - add note
02:23:545 - add note
02:24:733 - add note
Did not add, I'm very sorry x_x I was only following the synth here.
02:49:238 (169238|5) - move to 3rd Changed. Thank you. It was the only note like that in this section.
02:55:995 (175995|0) - move to 6th
02:56:589 (176589|6) - move to 2nd
03:05:129 (185129|6) - delete Deleted one note. thank you.
- supporting off-beat (1/2)
04:02:901 - add note
04:04:089 - add note
04:05:277 - add note
04:07:208 - add note in 1/1 with clap ?
04:09:584 - re-arrange some, why at same column ?
04:11:812 (251812|2) - change to LN ? Changed, Thank you.

[Insane]
00:16:713 - re-arrange some note ?
00:22:802 - 00:31:565 - 2nd , 4th , 6th note is gone x_x
00:44:040 (44040|2) - release and press again 00:44:411 (44411|2) - is not good idea i think (i mean too fast if release then press again)
00:47:010 (47010|3,47456|3) - ^
00:52:951 (52951|4,53173|4) - ^
00:55:253 (55253|0) - move to somewhere that can be more easy to press
00:55:921 - 01:00:079 - where's 1st , 3rd , 5th , 7th ?
01:25:698 (85698|0) - move
01:28:074 (88074|1) - move
01:49:386 - 01:58:743 - 2nd , 4th , 6th note is gone x_x I'm not sure if if I should change it yet. Still thinking of something.
02:27:258 - 02:29:634 - spread them x_x

No change in Insane, but thank you for modding it.
Evening
No kd I think you should have a consistent naming system

EZ | NM | HD | MX | SHD
or
Easy | Normal | Hard | Insane | Extra

GL o/
QQQK
[Hard]
  1. 02:08:396 - I'm having a really hard time determining which instrument these LNs are supposed to follow. I've repeated the part at least a dozen times now, and I'm still coming up with nothing. I'm probably missing something completely obvious, but in the case I'm not, keep in mind that players shouldn't be playing detective just to figure out your patterns and which notes correspond to which instruments.
[Extra]
  1. 00:11:961 - Missing a note here.
  2. 00:11:961 and 00:14:337 should have symmetrical patterns.
  3. 00:16:713 - The patterns here look pretty loaded on each hand. Might look and play better if it was spread out to both hands.
  4. 00:29:040 - Missing an LN here.
  5. 00:41:664 - Are the 1/4 gaps between LNs there on purpose? Just looks... bad IMO.
  6. 00:48:495 - Overmapped...? Some of these notes don't even have hitsounds. I can kinda hear the instrument behind these notes, but is it really necessary to layer stairs and percussion notes?
Also, I don't find [Shi-Ra]'s Fuman difficulty "easy" at all. It's at least a Normal. That is, in order to properly play it, the player should be pretty familiar with the finger-note coordination, as well as some basic patterns - skills I would not expect from a newcomer in osu!mania. I suggest you either scale this difficulty up, or add a new Beginner difficulty.
Topic Starter
Entozer

QQQK wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 02:08:396 - I'm having a really hard time determining which instrument these LNs are supposed to follow. I've repeated the part at least a dozen times now, and I'm still coming up with nothing. I'm probably missing something completely obvious, but in the case I'm not, keep in mind that players shouldn't be playing detective just to figure out your patterns and which notes correspond to which instruments.
I can hear what it follows pretty well though. I'll have to see more feedback about this I guess.

[Extra]
  1. 00:11:961 - Missing a note here. Added
  2. 00:11:961 and 00:14:337 should have symmetrical patterns. Done~ Hopefully that's what you mean.
  3. 00:16:713 - The patterns here look pretty loaded on each hand. Might look and play better if it was spread out to both hands.
  4. 00:29:040 - Missing an LN here.
  5. 00:41:664 - Are the 1/4 gaps between LNs there on purpose? Just looks... bad IMO. I was faithfully following the instrument.
  6. 00:48:495 - Overmapped...? Some of these notes don't even have hitsounds. I can kinda hear the instrument behind these notes, but is it really necessary to layer stairs and percussion notes?
Also, I don't find [Shi-Ra]'s Fuman difficulty "easy" at all. It's at least a Normal. That is, in order to properly play it, the player should be pretty familiar with the finger-note coordination, as well as some basic patterns - skills I would not expect from a newcomer in osu!mania. I suggest you either scale this difficulty up, or add a new Beginner difficulty.
Added a Beginner.
Thank you very much, and sorry for the trouble making you post here.

lZenxl wrote:

No kd I think you should have a consistent naming system

EZ | NM | HD | MX | SHD
or
Easy | Normal | Hard | Insane | Extra

GL o/
I should have done this before. Will change soon. Thank you!~
FGSky
good luck with this map !
QQQK
Hey. Just a few more things. No kds.

According to the general ranking criteria for metadata:
Only use the Source field if the song comes from or was made famous by a video game, movie, or series. Website names are not an acceptable Artist nor Source.
No need to put "Vocaloid" as the source. Put it in tags instead.

Also, all the sites I've seen list the composer as "Famirock-P".
Topic Starter
Entozer

ZXCV wrote:

Hey. Just a few more things. No kds.

According to the general ranking criteria for metadata:
Only use the Source field if the song comes from or was made famous by a video game, movie, or series. Website names are not an acceptable Artist nor Source.
No need to put "Vocaloid" as the source. Put it in tags instead.

Also, all the sites I've seen list the composer as "Famirock-P".
Noted.

Changed~

I also changed the difficulty names to be more consistent.

(EZ NM -> Easy Normal)
ljqandylee
Hi Ento~ Here's my suggestion~
[General]
- The HP and OD of Shi-Ra's diffs are very low, while your Beginner diff has a higher HP and OD than them. You'd better change either side to make all diffs seem reasonable XD
- Put off the useless greenlines in Shi-Ra's Easy and Normal diffs that are after their mapped time.
- Move preview time to 01:00:079 would be better, since Beginner diff isn't mapped so faraway.
[Extra]
00:45:005 and 00:45:079 - The sound you're following also exists here, add notes?
01:00:079 ~ 01:00:673 - The hitsound is too loud imo, it totally robs the place of song itself. Put down a bit would be better.
01:47:381 - 01:47:456 - 01:47:530 - Add notes like this? 01:48:421 - Add note
02:36:837 - Add note, missing the sound
04:09:584 ~ 04:11:812 - Put down hitsound volume, the song is very weak here and the soft hitsound is quite strange. This suggestion applys to all diffs.

[Insane]
04:07:134 - Missing note

[Hard]
02:36:614 ~ 02:36:837 - Add a stair here?
02:45:970 - Add a note would be better, or also add at 02:46:045.

[Beginner]
00:34:832 - Add a note and let the LN start from 00:35:129 to fit the sound.
01:19:535 - Add note(s) as finish, it's not proper to end your chart at 01:17:159 imo. Also you may also add a note at 01:19:386.
Topic Starter
Entozer

ljqandylee wrote:

Hi Ento~ Here's my suggestion~
[General]
- The HP and OD of Shi-Ra's diffs are very low, while your Beginner diff has a higher HP and OD than them. You'd better change either side to make all diffs seem reasonable XD I will change Beginner's OD/HP xD Thank you.

- Put off the useless greenlines in Shi-Ra's Easy and Normal diffs that are after their mapped time. Removed~

- Move preview time to 01:00:079 would be better, since Beginner diff isn't mapped so faraway. Changed~

[Extra]
00:45:005 and 00:45:079 - The sound you're following also exists here, add notes?
The synths...? But I cannot hear anything... I'm not sure what you mean >< I did not add anything yet.

01:00:079 ~ 01:00:673 - The hitsound is too loud imo, it totally robs the place of song itself. Put down a bit would be better.
Lowered to 33%, same for the next instance of this.

01:47:381 - 01:47:456 - 01:47:530 - Add notes like this?
Same as above...
01:48:421 - Add note><

02:36:837 - Add note, missing the sound
Added! Thank you.

04:09:584 ~ 04:11:812 - Put down hitsound volume, the song is very weak here and the soft hitsound is quite strange. This suggestion applys to all diffs.
Lowered to 30%

[Insane]
04:07:134 - Missing note
!! Thank you. Added.

[Hard]
02:36:614 ~ 02:36:837 - Add a stair here?
! Added, Thanks.

02:45:970 - Add a note would be better, or also add at 02:46:045.
I added both. Thanks!

[Beginner]
00:34:832 - Add a note and let the LN start from 00:35:129 to fit the sound.
Ohh... This is amazing >< thank you.

01:19:535 - Add note(s) as finish, it's not proper to end your chart at 01:17:159 imo. Also you may also add a note at 01:19:386.
I added them. Thank you!
Roxas
Before ljq will recheck (if he will), you should change the artist with "FamirockP" since it's wrote like this :v
Topic Starter
Entozer
I changed it back to FamiRockP (Since val also used a capital R)~
QQQK

Roxas wrote:

Before ljq will recheck (if he will), you should change the artist with "FamirockP" since it's wrote like this :v
Hmm... Some of the recently ranked maps use "xxxx-P", while others use "xxxxP". Does the format really make that much of a difference?
I looked through the ranking criteria, and I found nothing regarding naming Vocaloid producers, so I assumed either format is acceptable.
Roxas
In most of the sites (like last.fm and others) the artist name is FamirockP (without R capitalized and without the "-")
Sorarei
the right answer is " ファミロックP" romanized "famirockP"
ljqandylee

Entozer wrote:

ljqandylee wrote:

Hi Ento~ Here's my suggestion~
[Insane]
04:07:134 - Missing note
!! Thank you. Added.
This one actually didn't fix? :P
Topic Starter
Entozer

ljqandylee wrote:

This one actually didn't fix? :P

My bad. I have now added it correctly!

About the artist, I have no idea what to do with it now... but until another BAT informs me of what I should really do, I will keep it as FamiRockP

Edit: Still uploading...
Edit2: Now updated!
ljqandylee
I personally don't mind the capital "R" since it's not such an important issue, so leaving it behind and everything's fine to me, bubbled~
Sorarei
Roxas
From this site (thanks to lolcubes) the artist name is ファミロックP (add it in Artist and add FamiRockP in romanised artist) and the title is 鬼彼女 (Oni Kanojo romanised), add them in every diff \o\
Topic Starter
Entozer

Reikosaka wrote:

the right answer is " ファミロックP" romanized "famirockP"
Kudosu'd because of

Roxas wrote:

From this site (thanks to lolcubes) the artist name is ファミロックP (add it in Artist and add FamiRockP in romanised artist) and the title is 鬼彼女 (Oni Kanojo romanised), add them in every diff \o\
Kudosu for title

Updating...

Updated! Thanks Roxas and Reikosaka \o/~
Roxas
Nice map.

Ranked~
Kamikaze
Congratz!~~
REDYUMiKA
Congratz
HanzeR
wwwwwoww finally congrats entozer!!!
UnderminE
come on rate it
Rumia-
ETozer
[Emiria]

- R u m i a - wrote:

ETozer
Sorarei
Congratulation :D
richardfeder

victorica_db wrote:

- R u m i a - wrote:

ETozer
REDYUMiKA

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*EAT ETozer
FGSky
congratzz !!!
Bobbias
:O Ranked! Gratz man.
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