From Zenx' Mod Queue
I also noticed you called other modders at the same time, this will cause clash in the mods, you will end up fixing less errors.
- Most of these are suggestions, don't follow them all the way through
Timing Check
Offset
No Problems
BPM
No Problems
Not going to mod hard too much, feeling pretty lazy at this point listening to a 4 minute song
Same thing as the other SV checks, it is OVERKILL, I can barely pass the section on hard. >_> seems like I can't even enjoy the song without trying hard to pass a section that was supposed to be easy for me, raise the SV for both Insane and hard to 0.7 and 0.9 respectively if you want this to be fun but not challenging.
Edit: I think I was a bit too mean on the comments, frustrated I couldn't pass it X_X
I also noticed you called other modders at the same time, this will cause clash in the mods, you will end up fixing less errors.
- Most of these are suggestions, don't follow them all the way through
Timing Check
Offset
No Problems
BPM
No Problems
Extra
Note Placement
No Misplaced Notes
Overmapping
No Overmapping
Note Count
00:49:980 (49980|5,50055|4,50129|2,50129|5,50203|4,50277|0,50277|3,50277|1,50352|4,50426|3,50426|6,50500|5,50500|2,50574|6,50574|3,50649|2,50649|5,50723|4,50723|3,50723|1,50797|2,50797|5,50871|4,50871|1,50946|0,50946|5,51020|1,51020|6,51020|3,51094|5,51094|0,51094|4) - I don't get why the 2nd stream started? If you are mapping toward the 2nd low-pitched instrument, it should start here 00:49:980
00:51:020 (51020|3,51020|6,51020|1,51094|4,51094|0,51094|5) - Why 3 notes? I don't see the need for an extra 2 notes here, change them to 2 note chords
00:55:772 (55772|6,55772|3,55772|2,55847|5,55847|4,55847|1) - If you are using 3 notes for claps, 00:55:624 (55624|6,55624|2) - This should use 3 notes, add one at 00:55:624
01:00:599 - Should have 2 notes, however, due to the odd number of columns, I guess this should be acceptable
01:05:426 - Why the sliders? You are basically using chords for no reason there o_o - I guess it's okay since BATs don't really care about the note count
02:08:099 (128099|3,128248|3) - Remove, I don't get the 3 note emphasis here, removing the space bar also removes the right hand bias ( People who press the space bar with their right hand )
02:08:099 (128099|3,128248|3,133891|3,135079|0) - What are these chords emphasizing?
02:08:396 to 02:24:881 - Sure it's fun to play but, I don't get the usage for the LNs 80% of the time here, I seriously can't find any pattern here, leave it if you think it's okay
Inconsistent note counts on the choruses, weird LN placing that seems to emphasize on drums and claps?
- Awkward appearance of a chord in the middle of LNs
- Still can be ranked though, there's no ranking criteria that says you can't use LNs on drums >_>
Recheck
01:23:842 (83842|4,83990|3,84139|2,84287|0) - 2 note chords aren't really needed for the emphasis there
01:02:753 (62753|3,83842|2,83990|2,84139|4,84287|4) - If you are emphasizing the background electronic instrument, either remove these or remove
03:50:426 (230426|4,230426|2,230426|1) - I don't get the need for 3 notes here, reduce to 1 since there are no instruments
Hit-Sound Check
No Problems
SV Check
.5x speed for streams is just overkill, there's too many notes for the section that will confuse the player, leave it if you want to have this a very challenging map, this will reduce the fun of it though in my opinion.
Kiai Time Check
None?
General
Ranking Criteria Check
No Problems
AiMod
No Problems
Title Check
No Problems
Pattern Check
Painfully awkward patterns to play >_> ( Ignore this if you want this to be challenging but not fun )
01:39:139 (99139|0,99213|2,99287|0) - Awkward to press with the slider in the way
02:48:198 (168198|6,168272|6,168347|6,168421|6,168495|6,168569|6,168644|6,168718|6) - Right hand bias? Compared to 02:53:842 (173842|0,173916|0,173990|0,174065|0), which has 4 notes hammer
No Misplaced Notes
Overmapping
No Overmapping
Note Count
00:49:980 (49980|5,50055|4,50129|2,50129|5,50203|4,50277|0,50277|3,50277|1,50352|4,50426|3,50426|6,50500|5,50500|2,50574|6,50574|3,50649|2,50649|5,50723|4,50723|3,50723|1,50797|2,50797|5,50871|4,50871|1,50946|0,50946|5,51020|1,51020|6,51020|3,51094|5,51094|0,51094|4) - I don't get why the 2nd stream started? If you are mapping toward the 2nd low-pitched instrument, it should start here 00:49:980
00:51:020 (51020|3,51020|6,51020|1,51094|4,51094|0,51094|5) - Why 3 notes? I don't see the need for an extra 2 notes here, change them to 2 note chords
00:55:772 (55772|6,55772|3,55772|2,55847|5,55847|4,55847|1) - If you are using 3 notes for claps, 00:55:624 (55624|6,55624|2) - This should use 3 notes, add one at 00:55:624
01:00:599 - Should have 2 notes, however, due to the odd number of columns, I guess this should be acceptable
01:05:426 - Why the sliders? You are basically using chords for no reason there o_o - I guess it's okay since BATs don't really care about the note count
02:08:099 (128099|3,128248|3) - Remove, I don't get the 3 note emphasis here, removing the space bar also removes the right hand bias ( People who press the space bar with their right hand )
02:08:099 (128099|3,128248|3,133891|3,135079|0) - What are these chords emphasizing?
02:08:396 to 02:24:881 - Sure it's fun to play but, I don't get the usage for the LNs 80% of the time here, I seriously can't find any pattern here, leave it if you think it's okay
Inconsistent note counts on the choruses, weird LN placing that seems to emphasize on drums and claps?
- Awkward appearance of a chord in the middle of LNs
- Still can be ranked though, there's no ranking criteria that says you can't use LNs on drums >_>
Recheck
01:23:842 (83842|4,83990|3,84139|2,84287|0) - 2 note chords aren't really needed for the emphasis there
01:02:753 (62753|3,83842|2,83990|2,84139|4,84287|4) - If you are emphasizing the background electronic instrument, either remove these or remove
03:50:426 (230426|4,230426|2,230426|1) - I don't get the need for 3 notes here, reduce to 1 since there are no instruments
Hit-Sound Check
No Problems
SV Check
.5x speed for streams is just overkill, there's too many notes for the section that will confuse the player, leave it if you want to have this a very challenging map, this will reduce the fun of it though in my opinion.
Kiai Time Check
None?
General
Ranking Criteria Check
No Problems
AiMod
No Problems
Title Check
No Problems
Pattern Check
Painfully awkward patterns to play >_> ( Ignore this if you want this to be challenging but not fun )
01:39:139 (99139|0,99213|2,99287|0) - Awkward to press with the slider in the way
02:48:198 (168198|6,168272|6,168347|6,168421|6,168495|6,168569|6,168644|6,168718|6) - Right hand bias? Compared to 02:53:842 (173842|0,173916|0,173990|0,174065|0), which has 4 notes hammer
Insane
Note Placement
00:41:664 (41664|2,42258|4,42852|6) - Ending LNs on a blue line is just awkward to get 300g, besides, there's no significance to end there, it is also an Overmap ( Can't consider end of LNs as overmap in standard, however mania needs accuracy on ending the slider for 300g, thus the end of a slider is as equally important as the start )
00:46:416 (46416|1,47010|3) - ^
Overmapping
00:21:466 (21466|4,21466|5,21466|2,21466|1) - 4 notes on a low volume electronic instrument is a complete overmap
01:00:079 (60079|5,60154|1,60228|5,60302|1,60376|5,60451|1,60525|5,60599|1) - No instruments?
01:17:530 (77530|1,78124|5) - No Vocals
01:17:456 (77456|0) - ^
02:07:802 (127802|4,127876|2,127951|4,128025|2,128099|4,128173|2,128248|4,128322|2) - No instruments
03:50:797 (230797|5,231391|1) - No Vocals
Note Count
01:09:584 (69584|3,69584|0,69584|2,69881|2,69881|0,69881|4,69881|6) - I hear claps for both chords and a vocal for the second chord thus having 3 and 4 notes respectively, however, 01:09:733 (69733|3,69733|0,69733|6,69733|2) - doesn't seem to have the significance for 4 notes, use 3 instead
01:25:772 (85772|6,85772|4) - Why a 2 note chord?
01:26:292 (86292|1,86367|2,86441|1) - I don't get the significance for these 3 notes
Hit-Sound Check
No Problems
SV Check
.5x SV is more overkill on Insane, I can't even pass 5 seconds of it due to the awkward 1/4 streams and slow speed, they just conflict each other, this broken stair pattern is hard enough for 1x SV, most people will definitely miss if they are new to this pattern, having .5x will just not let them play past this section at all.
Kiai Time Check
None?
General
Ranking Criteria Check
No Problems
AiMod
No Problems
Title Check
No Problems
Pattern Check
Right hand bias again : 00:32:753 (32753|0,32827|1,32901|0,32975|1,33050|0,33124|1,33198|2) - Uses less trills on the ring and index while 00:34:832 (34832|6,34906|5,34980|6,35055|5,35129|6,35203|5,35277|6,35352|5,35426|6,35500|5,35574|4) - Uses more
Right hand bias : 00:37:505 (37505|0,37579|1,37654|0,37728|1,37802|0,37876|1,37951|2) - and 00:39:881 (39881|6,39956|5,40030|6,40104|5,40178|6,40253|5,40327|6,40401|5,40475|6) -
A ton of unneeded Shield notes, I don't get the significance of those, shield notes are to create the same feeling as hammer notes, it is just that it is easier to execute, having shield notes randomly around the song is just weird to play
00:41:664 (41664|2,42258|4,42852|6) - Ending LNs on a blue line is just awkward to get 300g, besides, there's no significance to end there, it is also an Overmap ( Can't consider end of LNs as overmap in standard, however mania needs accuracy on ending the slider for 300g, thus the end of a slider is as equally important as the start )
00:46:416 (46416|1,47010|3) - ^
Overmapping
00:21:466 (21466|4,21466|5,21466|2,21466|1) - 4 notes on a low volume electronic instrument is a complete overmap
01:00:079 (60079|5,60154|1,60228|5,60302|1,60376|5,60451|1,60525|5,60599|1) - No instruments?
01:17:530 (77530|1,78124|5) - No Vocals
01:17:456 (77456|0) - ^
02:07:802 (127802|4,127876|2,127951|4,128025|2,128099|4,128173|2,128248|4,128322|2) - No instruments
03:50:797 (230797|5,231391|1) - No Vocals
Note Count
01:09:584 (69584|3,69584|0,69584|2,69881|2,69881|0,69881|4,69881|6) - I hear claps for both chords and a vocal for the second chord thus having 3 and 4 notes respectively, however, 01:09:733 (69733|3,69733|0,69733|6,69733|2) - doesn't seem to have the significance for 4 notes, use 3 instead
01:25:772 (85772|6,85772|4) - Why a 2 note chord?
01:26:292 (86292|1,86367|2,86441|1) - I don't get the significance for these 3 notes
Hit-Sound Check
No Problems
SV Check
.5x SV is more overkill on Insane, I can't even pass 5 seconds of it due to the awkward 1/4 streams and slow speed, they just conflict each other, this broken stair pattern is hard enough for 1x SV, most people will definitely miss if they are new to this pattern, having .5x will just not let them play past this section at all.
Kiai Time Check
None?
General
Ranking Criteria Check
No Problems
AiMod
No Problems
Title Check
No Problems
Pattern Check
Right hand bias again : 00:32:753 (32753|0,32827|1,32901|0,32975|1,33050|0,33124|1,33198|2) - Uses less trills on the ring and index while 00:34:832 (34832|6,34906|5,34980|6,35055|5,35129|6,35203|5,35277|6,35352|5,35426|6,35500|5,35574|4) - Uses more
Right hand bias : 00:37:505 (37505|0,37579|1,37654|0,37728|1,37802|0,37876|1,37951|2) - and 00:39:881 (39881|6,39956|5,40030|6,40104|5,40178|6,40253|5,40327|6,40401|5,40475|6) -
A ton of unneeded Shield notes, I don't get the significance of those, shield notes are to create the same feeling as hammer notes, it is just that it is easier to execute, having shield notes randomly around the song is just weird to play
Not going to mod hard too much, feeling pretty lazy at this point listening to a 4 minute song
Same thing as the other SV checks, it is OVERKILL, I can barely pass the section on hard. >_> seems like I can't even enjoy the song without trying hard to pass a section that was supposed to be easy for me, raise the SV for both Insane and hard to 0.7 and 0.9 respectively if you want this to be fun but not challenging.
Edit: I think I was a bit too mean on the comments, frustrated I couldn't pass it X_X