Banana wrote:

[Easy]
太蠢了remap plz

1. add kiai time in two insane diff

[ Fay]

1. 00:04:033 (1) - slope it?
2. 00:07:033 (9,10) - I think stack them is well
3. 00:08:956 (7) - traingle with 00:08:033 (4,6) -
4. 00:19:418 (1,2) - move whistle at the end of slider
5. 00:24:033 (1,2,3,4) - ^
6. 00:29:264 (1,2) - ^
7. 03:11:725 (1,2) - ^
8. 03:16:341 (1,2,3,4) - ^
9. 03:24:033 (1,2) - ^
10. 03:11:725 (1,2) - ^
11. 03:16:341 (1,2,3,4) - ^
12. 03:24:033 (1,2) - ^
13. 00:39:725 (1,2,3) - flow is not good
14. 00:48:956 (7,1) - ^
15. 01:28:341 (7,1) -
16. 01:39:418 (1,2) - ^
17. 00:57:879 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest don't make stream here, not fit your rhythm, also this 02:49:879 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) -
18. 02:21:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so confuse..
19. 02:31:725 (4,1) - maybe stack is nice
20. 02:46:187 (1) - add
21. 02:54:725 (5) - highly suggest move this
22. 02:58:341 (4) - add
23. 03:01:879 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - move 13clap on those notes plz
24. 03:21:879 (1) - add finish at the beginning of it, and also 00:29:571 (1) - 02:17:264 (1) - 02:32:648 (1) - 03:02:187 (1) - 03:31:571 (1) -
25. 03:06:341 (1) - move finish and use whistle with soft additions
    
    Edit:03:31:571 (1) - maybe the green line is useless

[ Lechenaultia]

1. I think you can add a spinner at the beginning.
2. 00:05:726 (1) - keep the distance plz
3. 00:05:571 (3,2,3) - maybe you can make a triangle here
4. 00:11:110 (1) - make a triangle with 00:10:341 (2,4) - and 00:10:341 (2,3) -
5. 00:11:725 (3,4,5,6) - traingle
6. 01:00:187 (9) - don't stack here
7. 03:00:803 (1) - ^
8. 01:02:880 (9) - not good, maybe you should not use this slider here
9. 01:10:571 (11) - ^
10. 01:07:495 (5) - delete
11. 03:05:110 (2) - two notes are better than slider

Chloe wrote:

Hello~
First, sorry for late post because I'm busy D:

And just mod as suggestions, not necessary. : )

[General]

1. add kiai time in two insane diff

[ Lechenaultia]

1. I think you can add a spinner at the beginning.
2. 00:05:726 (1) - keep the distance plz
3. 00:05:571 (3,2,3) - maybe you can make a triangle here
4. 00:11:110 (1) - make a triangle with 00:10:341 (2,4) - and 00:10:341 (2,3) -
5. 00:11:725 (3,4,5,6) - traingle
6. 01:00:187 (9) - don't stack here
7. 03:00:803 (1) - ^
8. 01:02:880 (9) - not good, maybe you should not use this slider here
9. 01:10:571 (11) - ^
10. 01:07:495 (5) - delete
11. 03:05:110 (2) - two notes are better than slider

Fin.

Eggache0 wrote:

渣mod from qqgroup
感觉感受不到这曲子是啥意思……mod了一堆啥我自己都不知道
[L]
nc没看懂怎么下的 有些地方感觉没啥意思就一段一段下吧
00:06:033 (1) - 我的风格是在后面note上下nc 顺便删00:06:802 (1) - 的nc 总之nc都随你便
00:09:264 (1) - nc挪前面slider
00:13:264 (1) - nc感受不到 顺便建议叠着 没啥意思
00:26:803 (6,7) - 前面用的是slider 这里也用吧
01:02:341 (7,8) - blanket没做好
01:05:880 (4) - ^ 顺便这和3做一样间距是不是好一点
01:07:495 (5) - del
01:08:649 (5) - 我觉得可以blanket（这人没救
01:10:187 (10) - 01:10:803 (1) - nc换到前面那里 01:11:264 (1) - 这里可以加
01:13:264 (1,2) - 这个是真没体会到为啥加速- -...
01:27:264 (1) - 后面(还是哪里)nc挪到这里 01:29:880 (1) - 这里可以加
01:55:726 (1) - 不blanket么
01:58:495 (5) - 第五个点右拖1grid刚好
02:06:649 (7) - 尾巴扭的晚了点
02:44:803 (5) - 还是叠尾巴吧 这太可怕了
03:30:649 (3,4,5,6) - 34和后面糊了一脸 换个打开点的梗

Chloe wrote:

[ Fay]

1. 00:04:033 (1) - slope it? 。。没什么必要
2. 00:07:033 (9,10) - I think stack them is well 咦？
3. 00:08:956 (7) - traingle with 00:08:033 (4,6) - done
4. 00:19:418 (1,2) - move whistle at the end of slider ……不
   我觉得后面不用改了
5. 00:39:725 (1,2,3) - flow is not good ……………………就算你这么说我也不知道怎么改啊
   后面同
6. 00:57:879 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest don't make stream here, not fit your rhythm, also this 02:49:879 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - remapped.
7. 02:21:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so confuse.. remapped.
8. 02:31:725 (4,1) - maybe stack is nice done.
9. 02:46:187 (1) - add done
10. 02:54:725 (5) - highly suggest move this done.
11. 02:58:341 (4) - add done
12. 03:01:879 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - move 13clap on those notes plz done
13. 03:21:879 (1) - add finish at the beginning of it, and also 00:29:571 (1) - 02:17:264 (1) - 02:32:648 (1) - 03:02:187 (1) - 03:31:571 (1) - 这么多finish我有点吃不下……
14. 03:06:341 (1) - move finish and use whistle with soft additions 这里音比较重不过fin音太重干脆拿掉比较好
    
    Edit:03:31:571 (1) - maybe the green line is useless ……这是变速(

Eggache0 wrote:

[F]
00:07:264 (1) - ……吞了白线？ 02:05:418 (1) - 同前 ……啥
00:57:264 (3) - x368 y100 fixed
01:00:187 - 感觉可以叠头 01:43:110 (1) - 同前叠尾 这地方我重做了
03:23:879 (11) - clap ……太吵了

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

[Fay]
最后两个减速滑条我建议你做个SB提示下，最后坑人我想很多人都会不高兴
00:04:033 (1) - 我感觉这个slider不适合，如果你非要用slider开头我觉得红线那边就可以开始拉个慢速的slider了，当然如果你这么做的话Lead-In的时间记得调一下，如果调了也请注意其他难度的Lead-In也要一并调整
00:08:495 (6) - 滑条头finish
00:11:110 (5) - 为什么不复制前面的3和4呢
00:14:956 (3) - 滑条头finish
00:19:418 (1,2) - 这两个突如其来的哨音是什么情况？
00:24:033 (1,2,3,4) - 这里也是我觉得还是换个whistle音效，显得太突兀了，轻点
00:29:264 (1,2) - 同上。。。
00:32:495 (4,5,6) - 这里不适合折返滑条来表现。。总觉得有点怪
00:39:725 (1) - 这个1为什么要刻意凸出来？不和前面的7，8重叠么
00:49:571 (2) - finish
00:50:187 (4) - 我觉得4不应该和3而应该和后面5的开头重叠
00:53:879 (1) - 又出哨子了，我总觉得违和啊违和啊怎么那么违和啊
01:13:110 (3) - 别放下面建议放上面。。。。
01:28:341 (7) - 换成和前面6那样的1/2滑条
01:34:648 (3) - 滑条头finish
03:16:341 (1,2,3,4) - 这个也是，调轻点
03:24:033 (1,2) - ^
03:24:495 (4,5,6,7) - 这里也是，我觉得用这种折返滑条不适合表现这里的节奏

good luck

Evil_Twilight wrote:

不用些combo color嗎o.o

[Lechenaultia]
其實這歌我會比較喜歡放whistle阿，聽起來爽o3o

00:12:341 (1) - 把這個拉成更S一點？
00:44:341 (6) - 我會把這裡弄成減速然後拉長到 00:44:571，00:44:649 (1) - 這個才用加速
00:54:187 (1) - 不用個kiai閃一下嗎，00:54:264在關掉就行
00:58:803 (2) - 加clap
01:11:110 (2) - 這裡加clap，01:11:264 (3) - 拿掉clap
01:28:187 (1) - 中間和尾巴加clap？
01:33:572 (6) - 這裡也是減速拉長到 01:33:802，01:33:880 (1) - 加速
01:42:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我會在1加clap，4的clap拿掉
02:50:803 (7) - 我會拉長到 02:51:033
02:58:495 (5) - 加NC
03:07:726 (3,4) - 這兩個擺得垂直一點？
03:10:187 (3,4) - 擺得橫一點
03:13:880 (3,4) - 擺成這樣？ -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/819194
03:15:418 (1) - 拿掉NC？
03:18:803 (5,6) - 改成這樣？ -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/819199
03:29:725 (7) - 加NC，我覺得會比較好看


[Hard]
00:06:495 (3) - 加clap
00:16:033 (1) - 拿掉NC？
00:20:957 (1) - ^
00:25:880 (1) - ^
00:28:341 (1) - ^
00:29:572 (1) - 拿掉前面的clap
01:04:033 (2) - 我會在這裡才加NC，前面的拿掉
01:13:264 (1,2,3,4,5) - 往下移一點？
01:28:187 (1) - 我是建議把距離拉遠
01:52:649 (11) - 尾巴加clap
01:53:110 (12) - 加clap
02:03:110 (5) - 我覺得這break有點長阿，塞些東西看看
02:43:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - 感覺不適合用normal hitsound
03:06:341 (1,2,3) - 間距用大一點？

[Normal]
00:28:341 (4) - 00:29:572 (1,2) - 弄成彎的好看些
00:35:571 (3) - 拉的更S一點？
01:38:033 (1) - 改一下位置比較好，箭頭被擋住了
01:41:880 (3) - 很多人都建議normal盡量不要放這種slider
02:03:110 (1) - 同hard
02:32:033 (1,2) - 對normal來說好像有點難阿
03:04:649 (1,2) - 弄個形狀吧，有點違和


感覺沒什麼好挑的，我果然不太會mod低難度･ﾟ･(つд`ﾟ)･ﾟ･

ts8zs wrote:

BNN.s EZ
Aimod跑一下snap= =
00:48:341 (2) - 有点奇怪吧……建议延长1/1
01:13:879 - Break拉到这里
01:20:956 - Break结束
01:24:341 (3) - 我觉得我HD这里绝对不会点中= =！
01:28:033 (1) - 往后移一个1/1= =
02:03:110 - Break
02:10:495 - BK END
02:14:802 (3) - 往返
02:38:802 - BK
02:43:110 - BK END

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455,221,100956,6,0,P|444:277|456:348,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,310,102186,2,0,P|278:316|232:309,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,251,103417,5,4,0:0:0:0:
240,196,104032,1,8,0:0:0:0:
162,288,104648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
43,271,105263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
28,212,105571,6,0,P|18:152|29:81,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,56,106494,2,0,P|128:75|204:64,1,120
307,76,107725,2,0,P|370:79|392:73,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,55,108340,6,0,P|433:120|474:166,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,227,109571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
426,330,110186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
305,331,110802,5,0,0:0:0:0:
251,303,111109,2,0,P|196:318|120:316,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,336,112032,2,0,P|78:272|56:208,1,120
49,99,113263,5,4,0:0:0:0:
168,112,113879,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,46,114494,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,78,115109,1,8,0:0:0:0:
427,118,115417,6,0,P|420:187|440:255,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,291,116340,2,0,P|375:310|339:345,1,120
229,308,117571,2,0,P|147:296|108:306,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,207,118802,5,0,0:0:0:0:
64,152,119109,2,0,P|134:123|172:71,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,59,120032,2,0,P|274:69|339:60,1,120
428,133,121263,6,0,P|442:173|458:194,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,241,122494,2,0,L|403:307,1,60,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,276,132956,6,0,P|110:303|79:303,2,90,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,216,134186,1,4,0:0:0:0:
122,112,134802,2,0,L|139:73,1,30
223,72,135417,5,4,0:0:0:0:
342,65,136032,2,0,L|381:75,1,30
404,156,136648,1,4,0:0:0:0:
445,268,137263,2,0,P|428:309|404:333,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,322,137879,6,0,P|293:319|239:336,1,120
127,295,139109,2,0,P|76:311|32:311,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,246,140340,6,0,P|94:219|65:173,1,120
141,86,141571,2,0,P|205:85|261:53,1,120
313,59,142494,2,0,P|385:60|431:87,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,202,143725,5,8,0:0:0:0:
459,318,144340,2,0,P|391:338|332:332,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,335,145571,6,0,P|154:328|95:344,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,293,146494,2,0,P|71:227|58:163,1,120
162,108,147725,6,0,P|121:69|78:58,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,152,148956,2,0,P|281:134|324:103,1,120
419,59,150186,5,0,0:0:0:0:
468,168,150802,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,285,151417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,289,151725,2,0,P|324:300|264:335,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,324,152648,6,0,P|118:329|53:300,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,248,153725,2,0,L|38:210,1,30
48,103,154494,2,0,P|128:94|165:64,1,120
217,83,155417,6,0,L|284:60,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,63,156032,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,52,156340,2,0,P|435:112|490:126,1,120
461,244,157571,6,0,P|426:288|427:361,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,300,164956,6,0,L|45:324,2,120,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,248,166494,2,0,L|271:271,2,60,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,218,167417,6,0,P|80:184|54:142,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,55,168648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,68,169263,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,91,169571,6,0,P|376:97|436:73,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,92,170494,2,0,P|443:156|448:221,1,120
474,318,171725,5,8,0:0:0:0:
357,291,172340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
237,303,172956,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,326,173263,6,0,P|120:345|50:335,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,289,174186,2,0,P|64:228|59:171,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,85,175417,6,0,P|176:84|219:65,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,58,176032,2,0,P|308:80|384:75,1,120
475,130,177263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,250,177879,5,0,0:0:0:0:
417,260,178186,2,0,P|352:294|329:356,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,351,179109,2,0,P|218:351|160:322,1,120
52,271,180340,5,0,0:0:0:0:
84,155,180956,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,145,181263,2,0,P|229:133|270:108,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,104,182186,5,4,0:0:0:0:
433,84,182802,1,8,0:0:0:0:
470,197,183417,2,0,P|476:253|468:297,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,177,184648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,247,185263,2,0,P|274:302|228:327,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,316,186340,6,0,P|105:309|67:316,2,60,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

1. 00:10:187 (8) - 这个滑条的两端时间点咱感觉是要加clap的.

1. 00:11:726 (3) - 这个好像也漏了clap

1. 01:13:264 (1) - 感觉这里要加一个circle 或者拉长一下距离 因为打的时候总出50 感觉可能和距离有关系

1. 03:06:341 (1) - 这个咱建议做成倒三角 这样距离远一些感觉玩起来更舒服

1. 好像ai里面有一个提示unsnap 可以看一下

1. 最后一部分好像有一些缺音呀 节奏好难把握03:07:110 - 试着从这个点开始 每条长白线都加一个finish试一试QvQ

1. 最后的滑条太慢了一点呀> <...(咱什么都没说 蹲防

1. 前面的finish用的有点多...00:09:880 (1) - 这个fin去掉感觉好一些QvQ

1. 01:44:649 (2) - 有一点点没有包好哦> <

1. 03:06:341 (1) - 最后这个颜色还是红的呀换成其他颜色更好一些QvQ

1. 02:37:571 (1) - 这个做对称了会很好看QvQ

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

>v< 咱来看看惹 先表示支持star~~
很喜欢这个曲子....但是好高的bpm 怕mod不好....一些建议而已> <
[General]
很好啦> <
[Hard]

1. 00:10:187 (8) - 这个滑条的两端时间点咱感觉是要加clap的.

1. 00:11:726 (3) - 这个好像也漏了clap

1. 01:13:264 (1) - 感觉这里要加一个circle 或者拉长一下距离 因为打的时候总出50 感觉可能和距离有关系

1. 03:06:341 (1) - 这个咱建议做成倒三角 这样距离远一些感觉玩起来更舒服

[fay]
吓坏了 既然这么难了 就感觉除了音效都可以接受了> <

1. 好像ai里面有一个提示unsnap 可以看一下

1. 最后一部分好像有一些缺音呀 节奏好难把握03:07:110 - 试着从这个点开始 每条长白线都加一个finish试一试QvQ

1. 最后的滑条太慢了一点呀> <...(咱什么都没说 蹲防

[Lechenaultia]
....... 好有特色的图 挺喜欢的 这个咱找不出什么不合理的地方
[Normal]

1. 前面的finish用的有点多...00:09:880 (1) - 这个fin去掉感觉好一些QvQ

1. 01:44:649 (2) - 有一点点没有包好哦> <

1. 03:06:341 (1) - 最后这个颜色还是红的呀换成其他颜色更好一些QvQ

[Easy]

1. 02:37:571 (1) - 这个做对称了会很好看QvQ

这个bpm高easy好难把握的样子 看不出什么惹> <
快去rank吧 >v<~~~

SapphireGhost wrote:

Hi hi, this seems like a good song!

General
- The title should be romanised and not translated, so change "Goodbye Lechenaultia" to "Sayonara Lechenaultia".
- I very strongly advocate all difficulties ending at the same time. It makes your mapset more complete and available to a larger audience (I want this done before I bubble the map).
- Set custom combo colours to make sure your colourhaxing works correctly. Skins with a different number of combo colours may look odd otherwise.

Lechenaultia
01:28:033 (11,1) - Since there are two different combos, it looks nicer if these objects are not stacked.
02:05:572 (5) - Offscreen slightly, it needs to be moved up.
02:12:957 (5,6) - Looks like a stacking mistake, try to move (6) so it looks neater.

Fay
- As with the Lechenaultia difficulty, this map would work well with Tick Rate 2.
01:12:033 (3) - Unsnapped sliderend.
02:54:495 (4,1) - Please change the spacing here, it is too easy to mistake for 1/4.

Hard
00:43:726 (5,6,1) - Confusing pattern here. It seems that (6) is meant to start 1/2 beat later.
02:38:187 (6) - Space this further from (5) so it's more intuitive.

Normal
01:42:187 (4,5,1) - Spacing is odd here, it's better to just follow distance snap in this case.

Banana's Easy
01:13:879 - Start the break at this time (drag it in the timeline).
02:03:110 - ^

Alright! Contact me when you're done and we can see about getting this map a bubble.

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

[Easy]

1. 02:37:571 (1) - 这个做对称了会很好看QvQ 想了一下改成直滑条表示一下区别好了 嗯（不喜欢对称不要打我）

这个bpm高easy好难把握的样子 看不出什么惹> < （就是说嘛 某qq...ahfbidagper

SapphireGhost wrote:

Banana's Easy
01:13:879 - Start the break at this time (drag it in the timeline). done this two
02:03:110 - ^

Banana wrote:

http://puu.sh/3zu3b.zip

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

[Easy]

1. 02:37:571 (1) - 这个做对称了会很好看QvQ 想了一下改成直滑条表示一下区别好了 嗯（不喜欢对称不要打我）

这个bpm高easy好难把握的样子 看不出什么惹> < （就是说嘛 某qq...ahfbidagper

SapphireGhost wrote:

Banana's Easy
01:13:879 - Start the break at this time (drag it in the timeline). done this two
02:03:110 - ^

384059043 wrote:

快去PM找SG吧

qq944364487 wrote:

384059043 wrote:

快去PM找SG吧

他没补完我怎么找

[Colours]
Combo1 : 240,170,130
Combo2 : 90,90,140
Combo3 : 200,140,130
Combo4 : 180,150,80

SapphireGhost wrote:

Hello again, I was visiting some people yesterday but I'm back now. A few last things:

- In Banana's Easy, it appears the breaks aren't moved yet (should look like this).
- I really think colours would be appropriate here, so I made some for you, hopefully you can use them!

[Colours]
Combo1 : 240,170,130
Combo2 : 90,90,140
Combo3 : 200,140,130
Combo4 : 180,150,80

And then go ahead and poke me again.

SapphireGhost wrote:

In that case, all is well. Good luck with your map!

Bubbled!

ts8zs wrote:

我来试着戳泡……我非得把这个kd骗到手
[Banana's Easy]
Object's end is not snapped! 00:59:416
Object's end is not snapped! 01:05:262
Object's end is not snapped! 02:16:185

ts8zs wrote:

我来试着戳泡……我非得把这个kd骗到手
[Banana's Easy]
Object's end is not snapped! 00:59:416
Object's end is not snapped! 01:05:262
Object's end is not snapped! 02:16:185

qq944364487 wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

我来试着戳泡……我非得把这个kd骗到手
[Banana's Easy]
Object's end is not snapped! 00:59:416
Object's end is not snapped! 01:05:262
Object's end is not snapped! 02:16:185

永久黑名单不用说了 mutual已revoke

1.Give me kd
2.I put you into blacklist about a month ago,The post you don't kd:3
3.反正unrankable我不戳别人也会戳，怕你啊，有种你来戳我的啊~
(If I don't poke this bubble,others will poke,if you are mad,come on!pokes me:3)
4.You never moded me,mutual is useless:3

384059043 wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

我来试着戳泡……我非得把这个kd骗到手
[Banana's Easy]
Object's end is not snapped! 00:59:416
Object's end is not snapped! 01:05:262
Object's end is not snapped! 02:16:185

Recalculate does not work any more and I don't know why. Maybe it is a bug like this map... http://osu.ppy.sh/s/72134

重拉再resnap就有用了。。麻花啊传上去以后找SG rebubble一下吧