bbj0920 wrote:

Ra-s' Insane od8 please

Star Stream wrote:

bbj0920 wrote:

Ra-s' Insane od8 please

why?

Cah-m wrote:

I'm making my dif more difficult.
sorry for taking so long time

Huskatron wrote:

So...? I'm guessing this is staying dead?

toybot wrote:

Cah-m hasnt been very active... ;w;
Keep hope for ranked one day

Enon wrote:

welcome back

Shioi wrote:

Good to see this map making some progress

근대 하드 난이도 Shioi's Hard ㄱㄱ

1. I'm still a bit worried about the N-H spread, due to the note density difference and the huge AR gap between those difficulties. Please contact a QAT member to see if it is okay.
2. You have inconsistent "Letterbox during breaks" for all difficulties. Unless if some of the difficulties actually don't have break time, then this is okay.
   
   if (break_time==true) {enable letterbox;} else {disable letterbox;}

1. For a fast BPM like this one, I would recommend AR3 for this difficulty.
2. 00:27:929 (4,1) - 02:53:350 (2,3) - 03:02:823 (3,1) - Fix spacing at these notes.
3. 01:29:350 (1,2) - If you like, you could make a good blanket pattern here.
4. 02:35:666 (2,3) - 03:08:508 (2,3) - 03:09:771 (5,6) - 03:41:981 (1,2,3,4) - 04:16:087 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't recommend using stacked notes on an Easy difficulty. Save it for Normal difficulty.
5. 01:22:402 (2,3) - 02:53:350 (2,3) - 03:31:244 (3,1) - 03:32:508 (2,1) - I don't recommend using notes that are 1/2 beats apart from each other or lower. Easy difficulty should be simple.
6. 03:59:034 (1,1) - I know this is an older style map, but in today's standards this note appears too soon after spinner. Post-spinner notes should be at least a measure (4 beats) away from the spinner. In this case, I would just remove the spinner (and maybe replace it with a few notes or something).
7. 04:12:297 (1,2) - A pattern like this is fine for Easy difficulty.
8. 04:20:508 (1) - This note on the other hand is something I would personally avoid (using 1/2 or lower sliders with more than 1 repeat). Even if it's the last note of the map, I would still avoid using this note for this difficulty.

1. 00:26:192 (4,1) - 02:30:297 (2,3) - I guess fix spacing here if not intentional.
2. 01:28:087 (4) - Not sure if intentional (probably not), but remove the normal-sliderslide hitsound on this slider.
3. 01:57:139 (1) - You can hear the cymbal crashes at the start of this slider. Add a soft-finish at the start of this slider to emphasize it.
4. 02:54:613 (4,5) - Avoid using jumps on Normal difficulty. Please reverse select (ctrl+G) these notes to fix that.

1. Good map, but I still recommend AR 7~7.5 o3o

1. Good map as well, but you have a useless green timing section at 00:23:666.

1. Good map #3, but I would personally add a 1/2 slider at 01:46:876 or add two notes at 01:46:876 and 01:47:034.

1. Let's see.....it's a Guy map. Hmm...it's probably good as it is www. Good map #4.

1. Sadly, I won't be able to mod this map correctly, due to high difficulty. Try getting some testplay/feedback from skilled players.

BeatofIke wrote:

[General]

1. I'm still a bit worried about the N-H spread, due to the note density difference and the huge AR gap between those difficulties. Please contact a QAT member to see if it is okay.

It's almost impossible to increase notes...

[Cah-m's Normal]

1. 00:26:192 (4,1) - 02:30:297 (2,3) - I guess fix spacing here if not intentional. =>fix
2. 01:28:087 (4) - Not sure if intentional (probably not), but remove the normal-sliderslide hitsound on this slider. =>fix. not intentional, thanks.
3. 01:57:139 (1) - You can hear the cymbal crashes at the start of this slider. Add a soft-finish at the start of this slider to emphasize it. =>fix
4. 02:54:613 (4,5) - Avoid using jumps on Normal difficulty. Please reverse select (ctrl+G) these notes to fix that. =>fix

Kingkevin30 wrote:

i want to see this qualified again so badly qwq

• Collab:

• Guy's Extra:

• Ra's Insane

• toybot's insane

rest is insanely clean, amazing diff by toybot.
i guess that about raps it up, i'll post this in queue in a sec sorry for bad format

Rumia- wrote:

ITS BACK! !

1. you should put other names of moeka because he/she has a lot of ranked maps with different name like no dap. I don't really know anything else so ask him/her for more detail about it.
2. maybe remove letter box in every difficulties.

1. 00:03:566 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is a very minor stuff, you could just decrease the distance a bit as you done 00:06:566 (1,2,3,4) - after it and it feels not the best. I'm not force you to make them consistent, I just prefer lower distance for them.
2. 01:01:718 (2) - you could place this consistently between 01:01:560 (1) - and 01:01:876 (3) - because you didn't really do like this one in the whole your parts. also the pattern after it 01:02:192 (4,5,6) - has been mapped well consistent so what I suggest would make more sense to your mapping imo.
3. 01:44:666 (7) - like can i have a new combo here, to make the jump between triplet and 01:44:981 (4) - well, and the phrase of the lyrics also different.
4. 01:56:981 (1) - hitnormal of the drum feels not fitting well, first reason is the volume is too high even though the part already starts changing to calm one. secondly, you would notice it already but it plays at 3rd custom hitsound so the sound doesn't really fit here. I would just move the inherited point at 01:57:139 onto the circle.
5. 02:00:929 (1,2,3) - I'm probably going to ruin your mapping style, separating this stacked circles into two circle stacks would fits song better. though I like this as well.
6. 02:52:244 (3) - I hear only two strong sounds of the piano, therefore a whistle on this sounds off. this could be just my preference though.
7. 03:15:455 (1,2,3) - I suck with timing stuff but I still can feel this doesn't fit to the vocals on the song, in 25% play rate it's obvious.
8. 03:28:087 (1) - finish on the head for the cymbal? is still not really loud imo.
9. 03:51:771 (4) - an nc for 1/3 stream is nice idea as it obviously makes it easier to read.
10. 04:21:139 (1) - this shouldn't be finished at 04:26:192? as the music will completely stop at there.
    

1. 00:10:208 (2) - this is similar case to why you didn't put whistle at the tail of 00:18:994 (2) - , you could remove the whistle the slider I mentioned first. it sounds kinda off, there's nothing issue to keep having that but removing it would be better imo.
2. 01:18:929 (3,4) - I personally feel this awkward in playing, since this stacked after the jump which has an anti-jump before. so I would make this unstacking and anti-jump like you've done for 01:18:297 (2,3) - instead so making more sense. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4537112
3. 01:38:429 (5,6,7,8) - this stream can be placed more larger, I mean in x1.0 or something similar. it obviously flows better as you strongly emphasized it with clap, this would've been a larger stream.
4. 02:37:876 (1) - I would decrease the volume by around 20% for serious, this is too loud for my ears. 80% for this is still somehow loud but not as current one.
5. 02:51:613 - the drum hitsound should be from here, if you've wanted to follow the drum sound properly. in 25% play rate drum sound which music provides has obviously started at 02:51:613 so feels comfier.
6. 02:55:244 (5) - I would make this in 1/1 since you've been mapping this like easy reading / keep flowing good, though this is hard to catch in the map, for me.
7. 03:31:087 (6,1) - swap the nc like 03:32:034 (1) -, I literally can read how it stacked easier and it'll be consistently fitting with second pattern well.
8. 03:34:087 (1,2,3,4) - put somehow hitsound?
9. 04:19:876 (5) - put an nc makes the whole pattern pretty clearn.
10. 04:21:060 (1) - same as Collab diff, end this spinner at 04:26:192 will work better here.
    
    もしGuyさんが直すのであればスイマセン・・・汗

1. 00:27:297 (1) - nazi, place this in correct distance as how this should be. this currently doesn't even look good in playing.
2. 00:53:666 - maybe you could've put drum sound from here, since the music seems to provide the drum sound to half of the stream. if you didn't like overlapping the hitsound with soft clap there, I would recommend you to put drum hit for 00:53:744 (6) - at least.
3. 01:31:718 - you could increase the volume rather though.
4. 03:56:823 (3,4,5) - a triple should be at red tick 03:56:666 -, I feel you made the rhythm through the difficulty really well but this suddenly happens. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4537278

1. 00:58:718 (4) - this feels overmapping unless you have the reason making this 3/4 and jump to 00:59:034 (1) -. a 1/2 slider is really enough here, at least the jump is unnecessary.
2. 02:22:718 - even removing this break will be better to express the mapping for the song. well it's just my opinion so really up to you. same goes to other parts of this.
3. 02:26:823 (1) - this is nice
4. 04:00:929 - I think you needed to hitsound like 04:11:034 - there's no big music structure changes here so I wonder why you did do different. it feels just somehow empty at all.
5. 04:19:087 (2,3,4) - how about putting a drum hitsound or something nice for this triplet.

Delis wrote:

[Collab]

1. 00:03:566 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is a very minor stuff, you could just decrease the distance a bit as you done 00:06:566 (1,2,3,4) - after it and it feels not the best. I'm not force you to make them consistent, I just prefer lower distance for them. did something else
2. 01:01:718 (2) - you could place this consistently between 01:01:560 (1) - and 01:01:876 (3) - because you didn't really do like this one in the whole your parts. also the pattern after it 01:02:192 (4,5,6) - has been mapped well consistent so what I suggest would make more sense to your mapping imo.
3. 01:44:666 (7) - like can i have a new combo here, to make the jump between triplet and 01:44:981 (4) - well, and the phrase of the lyrics also different.
4. 01:56:981 (1) - hitnormal of the drum feels not fitting well, first reason is the volume is too high even though the part already starts changing to calm one. secondly, you would notice it already but it plays at 3rd custom hitsound so the sound doesn't really fit here. I would just move the inherited point at 01:57:139 onto the circle. k
5. 02:00:929 (1,2,3) - I'm probably going to ruin your mapping style, separating this stacked circles into two circle stacks would fits song better. though I like this as well. yea, personal preference, i think its fine
6. 02:52:244 (3) - I hear only two strong sounds of the piano, therefore a whistle on this sounds off. this could be just my preference though.
7. 03:15:455 (1,2,3) - I suck with timing stuff but I still can feel this doesn't fit to the vocals on the song, in 25% play rate it's obvious. i'm purposely skipping the beat on the white tick because that is not actually what is emphasized in the music. it also fits the pattern i have better
8. 03:28:087 (1) - finish on the head for the cymbal? is still not really loud imo.
9. 03:51:771 (4) - an nc for 1/3 stream is nice idea as it obviously makes it easier to read. doesn't make sense to me because this is only singular curve under one particular rhythm, so it should be one combo imo
10. 04:21:139 (1) - this shouldn't be finished at 04:26:192? as the music will completely stop at there.
    

winber1 wrote:

I am back from the ded. iirc these are the parts that i mapped, and yea just fixed/answered for those parts.

Delis wrote:

[Collab]

1. 00:03:566 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is a very minor stuff, you could just decrease the distance a bit as you done 00:06:566 (1,2,3,4) - after it and it feels not the best. I'm not force you to make them consistent, I just prefer lower distance for them. did something else
2. 01:01:718 (2) - you could place this consistently between 01:01:560 (1) - and 01:01:876 (3) - because you didn't really do like this one in the whole your parts. also the pattern after it 01:02:192 (4,5,6) - has been mapped well consistent so what I suggest would make more sense to your mapping imo.
3. 01:44:666 (7) - like can i have a new combo here, to make the jump between triplet and 01:44:981 (4) - well, and the phrase of the lyrics also different.
4. 01:56:981 (1) - hitnormal of the drum feels not fitting well, first reason is the volume is too high even though the part already starts changing to calm one. secondly, you would notice it already but it plays at 3rd custom hitsound so the sound doesn't really fit here. I would just move the inherited point at 01:57:139 onto the circle. k
5. 02:00:929 (1,2,3) - I'm probably going to ruin your mapping style, separating this stacked circles into two circle stacks would fits song better. though I like this as well. yea, personal preference, i think its fine
6. 02:52:244 (3) - I hear only two strong sounds of the piano, therefore a whistle on this sounds off. this could be just my preference though.
7. 03:15:455 (1,2,3) - I suck with timing stuff but I still can feel this doesn't fit to the vocals on the song, in 25% play rate it's obvious. i'm purposely skipping the beat on the white tick because that is not actually what is emphasized in the music. it also fits the pattern i have better
8. 03:28:087 (1) - finish on the head for the cymbal? is still not really loud imo.
9. 03:51:771 (4) - an nc for 1/3 stream is nice idea as it obviously makes it easier to read. doesn't make sense to me because this is only singular curve under one particular rhythm, so it should be one combo imo
10. 04:21:139 (1) - this shouldn't be finished at 04:26:192? as the music will completely stop at there.
    

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BeatofIke wrote:

Please don't let this mapset die again ;w;

BeatofIke wrote:

I know it's not, don't worry

Anyways....I checked the mapset and I think that Easy, Moeka's Hard, and toybot's Insane, Ra's Insane, and Guy's Extra are fine. Cah-m's Normal is fine too, but you have unsnapped notes at 01:08:506 and 01:35:506. Just remember to update all them once all of the guest mappers checks and fixes their respective difficulties.

In addition, you have inconsistent tags on toybot's Insane difficulty (replace "No Dap" with "Moeka" in tags) and you have disabled letterbox on toybot's Insane and Guy's Extra while the rest of the difficulties have letterbox enabled, so fix those as well. Also, drum-sliderslide5.wav is unusued, so remove it if you are not planning on using it.

Lastly I think N-H spread is passable nowadays, so just call me back for a re-check once you fixed and updated everything.

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