Hi Colin san :3 As requested

[General]
●fine.

[Easy]
●00:07:915 (1,2) - try to change one repeat slider ? like this here.00:03:915 (1) -
●00:19:415 - add note ? follow lyrics ~ want a sound here >_<
●00:33:165 (2) - try to put spacing (1.09x) ? same as here.00:31:165 (2) - 00:29:165 (2) -
●00:52:915 (3,4) - try to change one slider ? Rhythm here is hard to take a little for beginners.
●01:08:915 (3,4) - ^

[Normal]
●Circle size +1? 4 is difficult >_<
●00:06:415 (2,3) - try this ?
●00:11:290 (3) - the slider end follows nothing >_< hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
●00:15:290 (5) - ^
●00:18:915 (5) - try to change to 1/2 slider ? This slider is a little difficult
●00:21:915 (1) - ^
●00:33:915 (1,2) - try to change circle→slider here ?
●00:38:665 (3) - try this ?
●01:26:415 (2) - try to put spacing (1.09x) ? this note is a narrow >_<

my whistle suggestion ^^/

[Hard]
●00:11:290 (6) - it is better to use DS0.6x..? same as here.00:13:290 (7) - 00:15:290 (6) -
●00:39:540 - remove note ? you dont follow this sound . as 00:31:540 - and 00:35:540 -
●00:53:415 (6) - try to make a little jump ?
●01:19:977 - I think 40% volume is better

looks good !

my whistle suggestion ^^/
[Insane]
●00:30:040 (9) - move to x:56 y:152 ?
●01:11:165 (3) - stack on here ? 01:09:915 (10) - (slider head) so the flow is good !
●01:19:977 (1) - very hard for me >_< ww I get only 50

nice diff!Sry that I can't find any suggestion T_T

henna eigo de gomennasai

Colin san ganbatte !

Get this map rank and I'll vote 10 for it! It has a very unique note style and rhythm. Feels fresh every time I play! Well done!

kudo for irc-modding.

log is missing cuz of osu!crash, as some points I remember:

1. stacking at beginning/ending circle of slider
2. pattern consistence

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

I would have do a Random mod, but the only things I found are:
[Hard]
Overall Difficulty -1? OK

[Insane]
A bit overmapped for my taste, but this doesn't count.
01:19:977 (1) - Unrankable because it don't achieve 1000 bonus points on auto. it does get 1000, try remove the 2nd one and you'll see.

Sorry for poor mod

thanks for taking a look :3

alacat wrote:

SPOILER

Hi Colin san :3 As requested

[General]
●fine.

[Easy]
●00:07:915 (1,2) - try to change one repeat slider ? like this here.00:03:915 (1) - √
●00:19:415 - add note ? follow lyrics ~ want a sound here >_< √
●00:33:165 (2) - try to put spacing (1.09x) ? same as here.00:31:165 (2) - 00:29:165 (2) -
●00:52:915 (3,4) - try to change one slider ? Rhythm here is hard to take a little for beginners.
●01:08:915 (3,4) - ^

[Normal]
●Circle size +1? 4 is difficult >_< √
●00:06:415 (2,3) - try this ?

●00:11:290 (3) - the slider end follows nothing >_< hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
●00:15:290 (5) - ^
●00:18:915 (5) - try to change to 1/2 slider ? This slider is a little difficult
●00:21:915 (1) - ^
●00:33:915 (1,2) - try to change circle→slider here ?
●00:38:665 (3) - try this ? √

●01:26:415 (2) - try to put spacing (1.09x) ? this note is a narrow >_< √

my whistle suggestion ^^/

●00:27:165 (3) - √
●00:29:165 (3) - √
●00:31:165 (3) - slider head √
●00:33:165 (4) - ^ √
●00:34:665 (3) - ^ √
●00:37:165 (2) - √

[Hard]
●00:11:290 (6) - it is better to use DS0.6x..? same as here.00:13:290 (7) - 00:15:290 (6) - √
●00:39:540 - remove note ? you dont follow this sound . as 00:31:540 - and 00:35:540 -
●00:53:415 (6) - try to make a little jump ?
●01:19:977 - I think 40% volume is better

looks good !

my whistle suggestion ^^/

●00:29:165 (4) -
●00:31:165 (4) -
●00:33:165 (6) -
●00:35:165 (4) -
●00:37:165 (6) -

[Insane]
●00:30:040 (9) - move to x:56 y:152 ?
●01:11:165 (3) - stack on here ? 01:09:915 (10) - (slider head) so the flow is good !
●01:19:977 (1) - very hard for me >_< ww I get only 50

nice diff!Sry that I can't find any suggestion T_T

henna eigo de gomennasai

Colin san ganbatte !

I corrected first then replied and found cannot remember which is done and which is keeping the original @_@, anyway I'm sure it did al lot of help!

arigatou alacat-san!

Insane是異端! (誤

嚎 flow方面的都改掉了 音效重做 然后加了点更蛋疼的东西

00:40:040 - insert breaktime like this? http://puu.sh/1rMOu

In fact... Insane's Drain is harsh for me XD

Btw, It's very Nice map. Star~

I used to try that, but current situation fit the song better.

thanks for taking a look and the star ^ ^

General, Timing and Design
Er... I've noticed you haven't used custom hit sounds. You need those, even if it's just a bit. And whoah, that's a lot of combo colours O_O

Easy
No Prob

Normal
00:18:915 (5) - Make the slider end at 00:19:165

Hard
No Prob

Insane was too hard for me -_-"
Sorry for small and late mod ^^" My com had problems downloading your map. You have my star~ <3

You have been modded out by Yurun Neram

haha you must downloaded this long ago, before I redid the hitsounds.

the sliderend in normal is on where it should be, thanks for checking through and star :3

mod as requested, srry for the delay (too many essays and stuff orz)
maybe i should watch this sometimes

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
Everything looks good

[Easy]
00:31:915 (1) - i think u forgot clap on head?
00:51:915 (1,2,3,4) - this square doesnt look perfect~ move 00:52:915 (3,4) right a bit, snapping it on grid with the current grid level would do (and fix spacing with next slider)
01:08:915 (3,4) - similar concern, it would be better if u can lower 01:08:915 (3) so it forms a good looking triangle with 01:07:915 (1,2), and fix the later positions accordingly

[Normal]
OD+1? doesnt change star rating display and it fits the diff better imo
00:17:915 (1,2,3,4) - make it more square? corresponds with 00:19:415 (1,2,3,4) well 00:21:915 (1) - spacing, or was it intentional?
00:29:665 (4,1,2,3) - something like this? 00:41:915 (1) - finish?
00:50:540 (2,3) - i find this sharp turn a bit flow breaking, maybe adjust the first slider so the path is more smooth. same applies to 01:06:540 (2,3)
01:17:915 (2) - stack this on where 01:15:915 (4) is?

[Hard]
I've felt that there is something wrong with those triplets when i hit them...turned out that beats like 00:04:415 (2) and 00:08:415 (3,4,5) have their ends 1/16 later than their current endings (00:04:665 -> 00:04:696 and 00:08:665 -> 00:08:696). If you dont want to get all these weirdly timed objects then i suggest that you make all the triplets at these locations repeat sliders like 00:04:415 (2), because when i testplayed i got a lot of random 100s on the last notes of these triplets
00:48:165 (2) - for some reason i find the sliderslide really annoying just at this location...swap it for 2 notes instead?
00:56:165 (2,3,4,5,6) - how bout make this symmetrical? 01:22:915 (3,4,5,6) - make this shape look smoother, at least like 01:24:915 (4,5,6,7)

[Insane]
Same issue as hard, but there seems to be more repeat sliders on this diff...after all its up to you
00:36:665 (3) - reverse selection? flows better
00:57:415 (5,6,7,8) - it would be better if you can make this part of the stream more straight, would look really good
01:09:915 (10) - NC here and take NC off at 01:10:415 (1)
01:15:915 (8) - NC?

Thats about all i can find. Very nice song and mapset, good luck on ranking~

thanks for the catches on hitsounds, and fix some patterns and combo.

好快！

can i make a taiko diff?

jinchuu ya vizard wrote:

can i make a taiko diff?

no plan to add any sorry

Why is this not on rank yet?!

是2kd我就骗了算了

[Easy]
01:16:790 (2) - start 1/4 earlier? (more consitent with 01:13:915 (1) -

[Normal]
00:13:665 - add a note like the other places?
00:39:665 (1) - start 1/4 earlier?
01:22:415 - add a note?

[Hard]
00:02:915 (4,5,6,7) - curves a bit strange...

[Insane]
00:04:915 (4,5) - what about http://puu.sh/1BPcL
00:37:415 (1) - slower than i expected.
01:19:977 (1) - probably can't let this pass. (use some notes instead of the spinners?)

NatsumeRin wrote:

是2kd我就骗了算了

[Easy]
01:16:790 (2) - start 1/4 earlier? (more consitent with 01:13:915 (1) - it's a really rapidly showed rhythm in the earlier part. would keep it.

[Normal]
00:13:665 - add a note like the other places? done.
00:39:665 (1) - start 1/4 earlier? done. and added repeat.
01:22:415 - add a note? done

[Hard]
00:02:915 (4,5,6,7) - curves a bit strange... changed

[Insane]
00:04:915 (4,5) - what about http://puu.sh/1BPcL too much 1/8, I tried to not using it for long time.
00:37:415 (1) - slower than i expected. x1.0 might not give a good shape with 00:37:915 (2), tend to stay as it is
01:19:977 (1) - probably can't let this pass. (use some notes instead of the spinners?) the first one can get 1000 by auto, it's totally ok.

得不到心了 x_x

bubbled.

Boom.

gratz 科林 0.0

恭喜~

恭喜~

gratz~

Colin san omedeto -

Wow this map is really fun to play, Grats!

Thanks a lot!

epic. thanks for mapping this

作者還我瞬(誤

..What ?

most awesome song in 2012 fall yeah

@Faust-san Character Name/CV Name. imo 2nd one is better?

that's shown in ED and wiki, also confirmed by amazon.jp info of this single CD.

Colin Hou wrote:

that's shown in ED and wiki, also confirmed by amazon.jp info of this single CD.

Yes yes.. that's apparently so.

almost all maps use CV Name not Character Name/Shown Artist?
maybe need a new rules

keeping the official choice is enough

I was mistaken about that at first, yes.

@Curisu.

Authentically, it's "Saki Watanabe - Wareta Ringo"
I don't think "(CV: Taneda Risa)" is an actual inclusion to the artist listing, but more of a side notice, per se.
That said, I haven't been able to take a look at any scans of the booklet for concrete confirmation.

Faust wrote:

I was mistaken about that at first, yes.

@Curisu.

Authentically, it's "Saki Watanabe - Wareta Ringo"
I don't think "(CV: Taneda Risa)" is an actual inclusion to the artist listing, but more of a side notice, per se.
That said, I haven't been able to take a look at any scans of the booklet for concrete confirmation.

k you got to the point