youho~! XD you might want to kill me because I heard the music was talking to me X3
[Easy]
~ :3 the flow was good ; but some of the notes, the flow was going backward , like you go foward like --------> and then you make it backward <--------- again ._.)a I think, try to flow it upward and downward too, so after -----foward----> go upward <---backward---- the go downward :3 iykwim tho
00:04:699 (2,5) - blanket this properly X3 to make it more symmetric I guess ;; 00:04:699 (2,4) - also a bit bothered with this , its just didn't look so tidy;; consider to move (4) downward
00:14:581 (1,2) - (1) x208 y128 ;; (2) x272 y124 ;; so (2) can stacked under 00:12:111 (2) - slider's head
00:15:640 (3,4,1,2) - hmm.. Idk this just look meh ;; a bit strange.. consider move 00:17:405 (1,2) - downward ;; turn out to be like
http://i.cubeupload.com/SY9oGh.jpg 00:21:640 (4) - make a V slider? to follow the music X3
00:27:640 (2,3) - remove (3) ;; make (2) 3/2 slider with a reverse to follow the vocal, I just think what you have now maybe a bit out of.. rhythm, morelikely random rhythm, because on easy, imo we should use the easiest audible "music rhythm" :3
00:39:993 (1) - stack it under 00:37:875 (2) - or move it to x252 y240 (polygonal pattern), what you have now, isn't bad ;; but still looks like random and doesn't have meaning behind those placing
00:53:405 (2) - x100 y184 ;; :3 just a nazi, to flow more smoothly~
00:56:228 (3,4,1,2) -
consider to ctrl+H this ;;; because 00:53:405 (2,3) - (3) is overlap with (2) ;; its just meh
http://i.cubeupload.com/WTVPrF.jpg00:58:346 (1,2) - remove (2) , extend (1) into 3/2 slider with a reverse
01:15:287 (3,4) - (3) x240 y168 ;; (4) x296 y136 :3 more symmetric
01:16:699 (1) - stack under 01:13:875 (1) -
[Normal]
00:20:934 (3,4) - copy paste from 00:20:228 (1,2) - ? XD or maybe that unsymmetric pattern was intentionally owo
00:37:169 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - the clap pattern was 1/3 owo;; if you can't add anyclap on 1/3 ;; don't force it, just use whistle and it was pretty good actually, example 00:37:169 (1,2,3) - 00:38:228 - remove clap here but leave the whistle there , 00:38:934 - remove clap ;; 00:39:287 - add clap ;; 00:39:640 - remove clap
01:09:640 (3) - consider ctrl+G it, because the flow was like this before (3) notes
http://i.cubeupload.com/fCdOox.jpg[Hard]
~ You didn't use the awesome custom hitsound? ;A;)a;; the front part do needs louder hitsound imo ;; try to make a bunch of timing points like Insane on each clap (1/2 and 1/4 part)
00:13:963 - add clap here X3 the drum told so
00:18:111 (2,3) - unlike ^ ;; this just sounded out of place ;; consider change it into 1/1 normal slider like 00:17:405 (1) -
01:28:346 (1) - copy paste from 01:27:640 (5) - ? What you have now it didn't look so good
01:38:758 - part like this, XD nice job adding 2 clap, consider to add whistle on both clap too XD
01:46:346 (1,1) - errr won't be this too hard? .-. at least 1/1 distance , so 01:46:346 (1) - reduce 1/2 beat, should be ended 01:47:405 - now
[Insane]
00:02:405 (6) - 2 reverse? :/ if you want to keep the pattern like that maybe, put a 1/2 circle , 1/2 slider with 1 reverse , 1/2 circle again , you used it in all place actually , and it doesn't mean bad but... err, the music was saying that 1/2 slider with a reverse is much more fit and comfortable to play so... yea :/ its just my imo tho xD
00:05:228 (6) - ^
00:08:052 (6) - ^
00:20:581 (2,4) - "each" ctrl+G? the flow should be like this now owo
http://i.cubeupload.com/T5hjxL.jpg ;; the music told so owo;;;
00:37:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as Normal , it was 1/3 clap X3
00:42:816 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - I love this pattern alot >w<)b and how you did it, it was a good job owob
00:48:287 - and 00:48:375 - ;; add clap there? so it should be sounded kdkkd , and I think it is good owo
00:51:111 (7) - kkd XD same reason as above , change other similar things too
00:51:993 (2) - ctrl+G this? because you make it like that 00:52:522 (4,5) - ;; should be the same I guess
01:13:875 (3) - If you add those finishes here, add it too 01:15:111 - and 01:15:463 - ;; I don't mention it on Normal difficulties because ;; there is no notes to put those finishes XD what you have now, I think thats just lack of something, so put those finish at 01:15:111 - and 01:15:463 - it'll sounded more cheerfull now , put it to other similar part
01:23:052 - add clap here, the drum told so
01:24:816 (1,2,3,4,5) - kdkkd XD same reason as above
01:44:934 (1) - 01:44:581 (6) - copy paste this and ctrl+shift+r and fill in -60 XD replace 01:44:934 (1) - ;; I thought it flow better on that way owo
overall~ >w<)b nice job, except Easy, it can still be pulled out more *A*)/ GoodLucky~ xDD