Collab(alacat & Colin Hou)

Hard(Colin Hou)

Normal(alacat)

1. 00:07:152 (1) - make a blanket with 00:06:207 (4) - ? http://puu.sh/1LX5M
2. 00:09:278 (6,7) - imperfectly blanket lol. try this:
   

   196,270,9278,2,0,P|168:240|160:188,1,90
   316,114,9750,2,0,P|344:144|352:196,1,90

3. 00:39:750 (2,3,4) - I think the rhythm here should be: http://puu.sh/1LXgi
4. 00:43:293 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - consider follow the vocal exactly? since here's a good blue line rhythm: http://puu.sh/1LXl2. just like Colin's Hard
5. 00:46:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ same
6. 01:14:711 (4,5) - isn't xx xx rhythm here?
7. 01:22:033 (5,6,7) - ^ same
8. 01:32:663 (4) - shouldn't it end at 01:32:781 - ...? don't worry of missing clap here.
9. 01:47:545 (3,4,5,6,7) - same thing with 00:43:293 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
10. 01:55:104 (3,4,5) - ^ well I'll not point out that sort of rhythm which like this again. If you don't link it feel free to ignore them.
11. 02:46:600 (2,3) - NC both? since the SV changed.
12. 03:41:876 (4) - http://puu.sh/1LXAj

1. ...AR8??
2. 01:32:781 (2,3) - 這個怎麼看都應該提前1/4拍吧...
3. 看了下01:30:537 - 01:45:183 這一整段裏面你似乎放棄了vocal的藍線節奏...orz 感覺不明
4. 找不出了...不愧是科林 太屌orz

1. inconsistent kiai time: 03:48:490 - all other diffs end at 03:46:600 -

• 00:30:774 (2) - not following any sounds. I think 1/1 slider is better.
  00:38:333 (2) - ^ and more curve slider if you can.
  00:39:986 (4) - this pattern has got very confused for beginners.
  01:12:112 (2) - let's make curve slider.
  01:40:695 (4) - same as 00:30:774 (2) -
  01:44:238 (5) - same as 00:39:986 (4) -
  02:06:443 (4) - move up grid of red.
  02:29:120 (4) - since don't playing bass from here, let add new combo.

• 00:03:136 - 00:09:986 - I want something hitsounds there.
  01:32:663 - add note here. I think not fitting 2 beats. I prefer to 3 beats.
  01:47:309 (1) - add new combo.
  02:12:112 (1) - end this at 02:12:585 -
  02:16:600 (3,4) - probably confusing at first playing. prefer to not stack.
  03:18:136 - 5% is too low.. http://puu.sh/1Olye in guidelines.
  02:50:380 (2) - why did change sampleset of sliderslide?
  03:26:876 (4) - more curve slider?
  03:52:742 - don't need green line.

• 00:08:687 (4) - more curve slider
  00:30:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about? http://puu.sh/1OkLn
  00:35:144 (5) - how about? http://puu.sh/1OmTJ
  00:39:278 (1) - let's use main spacing.
  01:03:608 (7) - add clap slider on end.
  01:08:096 (3) - 436/128
  01:18:963 (11) - remove note instead of add note here 01:18:136 -
  01:25:695 - add note? I'm hear bass.
  01:32:309 (7) - if you follow the vocal, add note here.
  01:37:152 (5,6,7,8) - let's try jump~
  01:40:577 - add note here if you following the vocal.
  02:07:860 (7) - same as 01:03:608 (7) -
  02:22:978 (6) - ^
  02:29:947 - add note? I'm hear bass.

• 02:45:360 (4) - Beat snap divisor 1/8 ? if I'm wrong , sorry.
  02:48:963 (4,5,6) - how about? http://puu.sh/1OoAO
  03:18:136 - 5% is too low.. http://puu.sh/1Olye in guidelines.

Wolf wrote:

Collab
02:36:679 (1,2,3) - Looks kinda hard to read imo. Playable, yes, but could've been improved a bit more in terms of visual. okay~~
02:45:065 (3,4) - Uhh, I hope you didn't see this before. The time of (4) is off the beat. I would fix that. no, that's on 1/6 snap
02:47:073 (3,1) - Could've given them a little more of space, unless you've wanted them to touch intentionally for some reason. I like them in this way
03:10:459 (6,7,1) - Overlap with 03:09:514 (4) - Looks a bit weird to me. I dunno, it's just me though. not supposed to be a shadow slider :p

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

[Collab]

1. 02:46:600 (2,3) - NC both? since the SV changed. a set of speeding up sliders is okay :3
2. 03:41:876 (4) - http://puu.sh/1LXAj that's for a star shape, so no

R a r e wrote:

[Collab]

• 02:45:360 (4) - Beat snap divisor 1/8 ? if I'm wrong , sorry. it's 1/6
  02:48:963 (4,5,6) - how about? http://puu.sh/1OoAO I'm trying to following the vocal here
  03:18:136 - 5% is too low.. http://puu.sh/1Olye in guidelines. ok up to 15%

Dagger-Gazel wrote:

Hard(Colin Hou)

• Suggestion

1. 01:32:663 - add note? no. to follow vocal

Wolf wrote:

Colin's Hard
00:10:104 (5) - Well, I would extend this slider until 00:10:931 - As you can hear, the beat is still going on, so it shouldn't be a problem. Unless you think it'll be repetitive. was trying to keep the same with collab
00:39:514 (5) - NC to keep with your patterns? so I did't do new combo. it's obvious that they're in a same unit with former (4)
00:43:293 (6) - ^ Not long, and it's really hard to separate them both on lyrics and patter with NC.
00:47:073 (6) - ^ ^
00:50:852 (6) - ^ ^
01:32:781 (2) - Seems a bit off with the song.Even though you've used this pattern pretty much before, honestly, it doesn't fit well here. Consider moving to 01:32:663 - this note works the same as 3/4 sliders that I used in other places.
01:45:656 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Seems kinda long for your previous combos, consider reducing it. for lyrics and not long.

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

[Colin's Hard]

1. ...AR8?? 更好读点
2. 01:32:781 (2,3) - 這個怎麼看都應該提前1/4拍吧... 只是01:39:986 (1)这种的变型
3. 看了下01:30:537 - 01:45:183 這一整段裏面你似乎放棄了vocal的藍線節奏...orz 感覺不明 前面塞太满有点虚 选一段放放水

R a r e wrote:

[Colin's Hard]

• 00:03:136 - 00:09:986 - I want something hitsounds there. any of them sounds too loud for me.
  01:32:663 - add note here. I think not fitting 2 beats. I prefer to 3 beats. it works like 01:39:986 (1)
  01:47:309 (1) - add new combo. okay
  02:12:112 (1) - end this at 02:12:585 - no
  02:16:600 (3,4) - probably confusing at first playing. prefer to not stack. did some change
  03:18:136 - 5% is too low.. http://puu.sh/1Olye in guidelines. ooookaaay
  02:50:380 (2) - why did change sampleset of sliderslide? dunno what you mean
  03:26:876 (4) - more curve slider? no
  03:52:742 - don't need green line. ohhh removed

1. Clear!

1. 00:10:695 (5) - これを1/4のスライダーにして一回リピートさせませんか？　かなり音楽とマッチしてると思います。
   　
2. 00:57:467 (5,6,7,8,9) - 個人的にですがこの曲のサビはこういうリズムだと思いました。
   
   　　　00:57:821 (8) - ここに1/2スライダー
   　　　00:58:175 (9) - note追加
   　　　このような音取りの方がこの曲独特のリズムに合っていると思いました。
   　　　
   　　　後々気づいたので書きます この音取りではclapが入らないためサビの流れが悪くなってしまうと思ったため、もう一つ提案します。
   
   　　　00:57:821 (8) - 1/4スライダー
   　　　00:58:057 (9) - 1/4スライダー or 00:58:175 (9) - note追加
   　　　この音取りならば違和感もなくclapも入るため良いと思いました。自分がこの音取りで注目している場所は 00:57:821 - この位置にスライダーが来ることで、歌詞と曲に合わせた音取りが出来るといった理由です。
   　　　
   　
   　
3. 01:14:474 (3,4,5) - これも音取りの提案です
   
   　　　01:14:474 (3) - 1/2スライダー
   　　　01:14:829 (4) - note
   　　　01:14:947 (5) - 1/2スライダー
   　　　曲本来の音を完全に取るならばこの音取りが一番ベターです。(clapも入るように)
   
   　
4. 01:25:813 (7) - 音がないとこにnoteがあったので・・・こっちのほうがいいかなぁって思いました。
   
   　　　01:25:813 (7) - 1/1スライダー
   　　　もしくは
   
   　　　01:25:813 (7) - 3/4スライダー
   　　　01:26:285 (8) - 1/4スライダー
   　　　なんか寂しい感じもしますが本来の音を取るならばこれが一番だと思います。
   
   　
5. 01:43:530 (1) - 始端じゃなくて終端がfinishっぽいんで、始端のfinish削除して終端にfinish追加?
   　
6. 02:13:766 (1) - x:204 y:188くらいに移動して02:13:766 (1,2,3,4) - この４つを見栄えよくしましょう。
   　
7. 02:14:711 (5) - 1/4スライダーにして　02:14:947 - にnote追加するのはどうですか？
   　
8. 02:16:837 (3,4,5) - 上記の01:14:474 (3,4,5) -の提案と同じです。
   　
9. 03:32:427 (4) - add finish? same pattern 01:10:222 (4) -

1. AR-1?
   　
2. 00:06:797 (5) - suggestion.
   
   　　　00:06:797 (5) - change note
   　　　00:07:152 (6) - add note and NC
   　　　
   　
3. 01:32:309 - add note?
   　
4. 03:18:136 (5) - remove note?

1. 00:30:774 (2) - 歌詞にも曲にも合っていないように思いました。
   
   　　　00:30:774 (2) - add note
   　　　00:31:010 (3) - 1/1スライダー
   　　　この音取りが最も良いと思います。
   
   　
2. 00:38:333 (2) - 上記と同じ理由です。一定なリズムになりがちのE,N差分にアクセントを加えるのはとても良いと思いますが、この場所には合っていないようです。
   　
3. 02:22:033 (4,5) - Ctrl+Gで場所移動? (03:03:136 (1,2,3,4,5) - ここのように)

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions
   

1. 00:30:774 (2) - Yours is ok, but I guess you'd better start this slider at 00:31:010 and end at 00:31:482 , since the vocal is difficult to follow in such Normal diff, it is better to follow the rhythm and make a 1/1 slider instead.
2. 00:38:333 (2) - ^^^ (not mention more)

1. AR-1? Hard diff could be easier, AR8 may be a bit high.
2. 00:30:892 (5) - It is ok you put it like this, I suggest following the vocal: put a note here and 1/4 slider starts from 00:31:010.
3. 01:32:663 (2,3,...) - Also suggest following the vocal, I think following the vocal fits this song better.
   

1. 01:38:569 (3) - Why this slider stacks under the previous? People maybe confuse about it, I guess you'd better add a note at 01:38:451 or just put this slider to other place.
2. 01:44:120 (3,4) - Vocal "ji" from (3) and it is continuous, so I guess the slider should not start at 01:44:238 , just start it from the position of (3).
3. 02:47:427 (1) - What about this arrangement? I like coverless.
   
   
4. 03:29:120 (7) - lol..Maybe this spacing is a bit large.. Many ppl will get confused and miss it xD

Guy wrote:

[Collab]

• 
  
  　

1. 03:32:427 (4) - add finish? same pattern 01:10:222 (4) - added

[Colin's Hard]

• 
  
  　

1. AR-1? no, it's for an easier readability.
   　
2. 00:06:797 (5) - suggestion. flow is not good imo
   
   　　　00:06:797 (5) - change note
   　　　00:07:152 (6) - add note and NC
   　　　
   　
3. 01:32:309 - add note? i'm not trying to follow the vocal strictly here
   　
4. 03:18:136 (5) - remove note? no. that breaks the rhythm

B2IN wrote:

[Colin's Hard]
fine. but it have a one problem.
[*]03:18:136 (5) - i thought be might confused. because low soft hitsound and no hitsound. this part of Collab diff is find. because that is included with slider. just my guess :3 i cannot put a loud hitsound on that note sorry.

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Colin's Hard]

1. AR-1? Hard diff could be easier, AR8 may be a bit high. AR7 ruins everything. I donno if you really tried that.
2. 00:30:892 (5) - It is ok you put it like this, I suggest following the vocal: put a note here and 1/4 slider starts from 00:31:010.
3. 01:32:663 (2,3,...) - Also suggest following the vocal, I think following the vocal fits this song better.
   
   I'm not doing a strckly following vocal diff here.

[Collab]

1. 02:47:427 (1) - What about this arrangement? I like coverless. no. that's not what i want
   
   
2. 03:29:120 (7) - lol..Maybe this spacing is a bit large.. Many ppl will get confused and miss it xD cuz they're not strong enough lol

Saten wrote:

[Collab]
02:45:341 (1) - this doesn't sound right. This should be using 1/4 snapping and start at 02:45:301 - and and at 02:46:010 - actually its not a slider for the drums. but makes me noticed the snap issue on that short slider before it. thanks anyway
03:48:608 (1) - Silence this spinner from the beginning. I think you know why~ volume to 40

[Colin]
00:11:167 (1) - same that I mentioned about the soft finish on the Collab nice idea
00:30:774 (4,5) - this plays kinda odd imo. There's a pretty clear beat at 00:31:010 - tried to cover it but a 4 combo might be too hard in a diff like this. so i chose to do a pattern like that.
00:54:632 (1,3,4) - finish on these. On the sliders, at the start too loud
01:32:663 - aren't you missing something here? no
01:58:884 (1,3,5) - finish on these notes too loud
03:18:136 (5) - why silence this? it just makes it harder imo. I think 80% soft is just fine 15 or 80 didn't make much difference but fine
03:48:608 - no spinner here? There is a green timing section at 03:52:742 - i dunno how this happed lol, brought it back

Pokie wrote:

　Storyboard

1. 00:14:474 - I'd suggest move the fading effect to 1/1 backward (14002), and add another scaling code which starts from 00:14:474.
   

    F,0,14002,14475,0,1
    S,0,14474,14593,0.73,0.65

2. As I mentioned in QQ, fade out of title and info aren't sync atm.

did the change, I'll send alacat-san the newest osb when final edit is done.

　Colin's Hard

1. waca zhe diff spread
   00:36:443 (4,7) - Add stacking on these notes? As you've did that on 02:16:600 (3) - which you have another similar pattern here. there is no readability problem here I suppose.
   00:46:837 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Flipping these patterns by Ctrl+H follows the flow better o3o...? And suggestion for (9,10)'s position:
   
   SPOILER

   
   k but did own change on 10
   
   00:55:459 (4) - Uhh well ._. I think it should be a 1/8 but not 1/4. that's on another drum track. maybe 1/12
   01:32:663 - Vocal starts from here with な... add a note here to make a triple as well? And suggestion for pattern: finnnnne all 1/2
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   01:45:183 (3) - I would like adding a jump here with around 1.5x spacing... -in my own perspective ._. i'm a noob player and that might be too hard for me
   01:59:711 (5,6,7) - Convert them into a 1/8 slider as I've mentioned at 00:55:459 - too nooo
   02:10:222 (1,2,3) - Better make an equilateral triangle pattern here, looks neat and more acceptable. kkk
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   02:51:325 - Feels empty...add a circle with clap here? no
   02:56:994 - ^
   02:58:766 (4) - Spacing error between (3,4,5), please fix it with distance 0.7x i always can't understand your joke

　Collab

1. kelin hou
   02:39:986 (7) - Current position is too close to previous note imo (~0.9x), how about increasing to around 1.1x for a jump? trying to make the distance between (7), end of (6) and(8) the same/
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   02:45:341 (1) - ...seems off-beat'd, I have a solution here: remove a reverse from 02:45:065 (3) - , then move 02:45:341 (1) - to 02:45:301 - and snap it with 1/4 beat that's not for drummmms
   
   
   03:24:868 (5) - I suggest to separate this slider into 1/4 circle and 1/4 slider, which could be coorperate with music and more interesting. didn't get your point sorry
   
   SPOILER

   

1. fine~

1. 00:30:065 (1,2) - fan design; http://puu.sh/23poq
   
   SPOILER

   396,84,30065,6,0,P|350:96|298:88,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   252,72,30774,2,0,P|194:119|202:194,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

2. 00:30:774 (2) - hmm... 問題は無いのですが、私的にはvocalをフォローするならやはり00:31:010のほうが音が強いので、無理してリズム増やさず。のほうが好みだったり。 同じような箇所は書き込みません >.< 　無視してもらって構いません~
3. 02:30:065 (3) - 提案だけ: http://puu.sh/23q5b ( use copy 02:28:175 (3) - Ctrl+C,V,H,J. 02:30:065 (3) - x292,y204. 02:31:010 (1) - x256,y52. )
4. 03:03:136 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 今まで7コンボ以上がありませんでしたので、normalの為にコンボ数を調整してるものだと思ってたのですが ( 気になったところはここ 01:00:301 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ) http://puu.sh/23quv　どんなリズムでも良いのですが、私的には6コンボ以下に抑えたほうがしっくりきます >_<
5. 03:47:545 (3,1) - 03:48:490には他のdiffのようにfinishsoundと共に音を置いても良いのでは? http://puu.sh/23qCy 特に難しさが上がるということも無いので。
6. 03:48:490 - 不要な緑線。 消しても消さなくても良いですが、指摘だけ
7. 03:48:490 (1) - スピナー音 音量40%を一定で使うには少しうるさくないでしょうか ==? 提案: 音の響きに合わせて徐々に音量を下げる or 20%くらいの音量を使用

1. 00:09:514 (3) - tick move to 00:09:632 ? I think this is the right sound, if match it with a drum. but is this intentional ==?
2. 00:33:136 (4) - add clap. yep. this is the original clap. ( The custom clap sound is too much outstanding a little. and You have put a sound consisting mainly of vocal, so you cannot put clap. In this case, I thought that you should not use clap with an outstanding sound. actually, 「00:26:285~00:30:537 - During this time, it have constant clap. but 00:30:537~00:33:372 - clap only at the end. 」 I felt this strange sound >.<
   It is not necessary to change a clap sound. I think that clap of the suggestion improves a sound than put it only at the end. it like 00:48:254 (9) - )
3. 01:33:372 (4,5) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/23smH Vocal rhythm that is different from other. for my senses =~=;
4. 01:40:459 (2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/23svR ...orz
5. 01:52:270 (5) - add clap to end of the slider? reason same as 00:33:136 (4).
6. 02:14:947 (3) - you put clap of end of the slider, I think that you should put it to 02:15:419 together. >_<; http://puu.sh/23sRN In this way also this rhythm matches well i think. As I wrote above, clap is outstanding. so It had better put them in a set of two.
7. 03:02:191 (5) - ^ maybe does not match its rhythm, so remove the clap?
8. 03:24:868 (1) - remove NC. ( For other similar pattern 01:02:191 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:06:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 02:53:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - )
9. 03:43:766 (1) - ^
10. 03:48:608 (1) - Do you not feel that the sound of this spinner is too loud? From the middle particularly... It is a sound that gradually fade away. I thought that it was not most suitable to use the constant volume( vol40%) in that. so i suggest: gradually lower the volume　or　use volume about 20%( Volume not to be outstanding from a beginning )

1. 01:45:656 (1) - add finish?
2. 01:53:215 (1) - ^
   
3. 02:45:183 - Green lines with no meaning. Although there is no problem to leave, just pointing out.
4. 03:46:600 (1) - add finish and 03:47:073 (2) - add finish to start of the slider? like your hard ==?
5. 03:48:608 (1) - same as hard diff.
   
   interesting jump and rhythm pattern. :3 There is nothing to point out~

1. You have a lot of files of the same thing. =.=
   ・「03_5」 = 「06_5」 = 「08_5」
   ・「03_6」 = 「06_6」 = 「08_6」
   ・「03_1~03_8」 = 「07_1~07_8」
   ・「06_1~06_8」 = 「08_1~08_8」
   hmm... Is the set of 07_.png and 08_.png necessary =~=;? Those sets are the same. and i think it is not difficult to summarize these
   It copy&paste a code of the fade.. for ex: move code , unnecessary code
   
   SPOILER

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lyrics\03_5.png",324,240
   S,0,0,,0.7
   F,0,71404,71876,0,1
   F,0,75183,75419,1,0
   F,0,135419,135892,0,1
   F,0,139435,139671,1,0
   F,0,213136,213608,0,1
   F,0,216915,217152,1,0
   
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lyrics\06_5.png",324,240
   S,0,0,,0.7
   F,0,135419,135892,0,1
   F,0,139435,139671,1,0
   
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lyrics\08_5.png",324,240
   S,0,0,,0.7
   F,0,213136,213608,0,1
   F,0,216915,217152,1,0
   If you do not have time, I can fix these other =.=
2. 00:11:167~00:26:285 - In this long break time, is it not early that title&info.png disappears? so i suggest to leave a little more.
   and about info.png - I suggest that fade-in does it from clap after downbeat.
   changed point
   
   SPOILER

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"title.png",173,278
   F,0,11167,11640,0.3,1
   S,0,11167,11640,0.45
   S,0,11640,11758,0.5,0.45
   S,0,12585,12703,0.5,0.45
   S,0,13530,13648,0.5,0.45
   S,0,14474,14593,0.5,0.45
   S,0,15419,15537,0.5,0.45
   S,0,16364,16482,0.5,0.45
   S,0,17309,17427,0.5,0.45
   S,0,17900,18018,0.47,0.45
   S,0,18254,18372,0.5,0.45
   F,0,18726,19671,1,0 ⇒　remove
   S,0,19199,19317,0.5,0.45
   S,0,20144,20262,0.5,0.45
   S,0,21089,21207,0.5,0.45
   S,0,22033,22152,0.5,0.45
   S,0,22978,23096,0.5,0.45
   F,0,23451,25813,1,0
   S,0,23923,24041,0.5,0.45
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"info.png",233,357
   F,0,14002,14475,0,1 ⇒ F,0,14947,15419,0,1
   S,0,14474,14593,0.73,0.65 ⇒ remove
   S,0,15419,15537,0.73,0.65
   S,0,16364,16482,0.73,0.65
   S,0,17309,17427,0.73,0.65
   S,0,17900,18018,0.69,0.65
   S,0,18254,18372,0.73,0.65
   F,0,18726,19671,1,0 ⇒　remove
   S,0,19199,19317,0.73,0.65
   S,0,20144,20262,0.73,0.65
   S,0,21089,21207,0.73,0.65
   S,0,22033,22152,0.73,0.65
   S,0,22978,23096,0.73,0.65
   F,0,23451,25813,1,0
   S,0,23923,24041,0.73,0.65
3. I Came up with the SB that is the beating heart of BG. but I do not have the technique that can prepare for heart BG... orz so I just said..TxT

kosiga wrote:

[Colin's Hard]

1. 00:09:514 (3) - tick move to 00:09:632 ? I think this is the right sound, if match it with a drum. but is this intentional ==? cannot recall why I did that, so fixed
2. 00:33:136 (4) - add clap. yep. this is the original clap. ( The custom clap sound is too much outstanding a little. and You have put a sound consisting mainly of vocal, so you cannot put clap. In this case, I thought that you should not use clap with an outstanding sound. actually, 「00:26:285~00:30:537 - During this time, it have constant clap. but 00:30:537~00:33:372 - clap only at the end. 」 I felt this strange sound >.< hmm, leaving no clap in the place you pointed is because I cannot set clap at that place except using SB sounds, which is not working well in taiko mode.
   It is not necessary to change a clap sound. I think that clap of the suggestion improves a sound than put it only at the end. it like 00:48:254 (9) - yeah added)
3. 01:33:372 (4,5) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/23smH Vocal rhythm that is different from other. for my senses =~=; I used to do something alike this but most of modders said no ;w;
4. 01:40:459 (2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/23svR ...orz a little complicated
5. 01:52:270 (5) - add clap to end of the slider? reason same as 00:33:136 (4). done/
6. 02:14:947 (3) - you put clap of end of the slider, I think that you should put it to 02:15:419 together. >_<; http://puu.sh/23sRN In this way also this rhythm matches well i think. As I wrote above, clap is outstanding. so It had better put them in a set of two. yeah, this is the most painful thing I met in mapping this orz. anyway I still wanna keep this rhythm.
7. 03:02:191 (5) - ^ maybe does not match its rhythm, so remove the clap? following the keyboard(I suppose it is)
8. 03:24:868 (1) - remove NC. ( For other similar pattern 01:02:191 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:06:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 02:53:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ) done.
9. 03:43:766 (1) - ^ done
10. 03:48:608 (1) - Do you not feel that the sound of this spinner is too loud? From the middle particularly... It is a sound that gradually fade away. I thought that it was not most suitable to use the constant volume( vol40%) in that. so i suggest: gradually lower the volume　or　use volume about 20%( Volume not to be outstanding from a beginning ) done.

[Collab]

1. 02:45:183 - Green lines with no meaning. Although there is no problem to leave, just pointing out.
2. 03:46:600 (1) - add finish and 03:47:073 (2) - add finish to start of the slider? like your hard ==?
3. 03:48:608 (1) - same as hard diff.
   
   all fixed

[SB]

1. You have a lot of files of the same thing. =.= aye I know this but that's for keeping a good maintainable form in code and image. changing this can save little space but once I need to change something, it might add much more work
   ・「03_5」 = 「06_5」 = 「08_5」
   ・「03_6」 = 「06_6」 = 「08_6」
   ・「03_1~03_8」 = 「07_1~07_8」
   ・「06_1~06_8」 = 「08_1~08_8」
   hmm... Is the set of 07_.png and 08_.png necessary =~=;? Those sets are the same. and i think it is not difficult to summarize these
   It copy&paste a code of the fade.. for ex: move code , unnecessary code
   
   SPOILER

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lyrics\03_5.png",324,240
   S,0,0,,0.7
   F,0,71404,71876,0,1
   F,0,75183,75419,1,0
   F,0,135419,135892,0,1
   F,0,139435,139671,1,0
   F,0,213136,213608,0,1
   F,0,216915,217152,1,0
   
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lyrics\06_5.png",324,240
   S,0,0,,0.7
   F,0,135419,135892,0,1
   F,0,139435,139671,1,0
   
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lyrics\08_5.png",324,240
   S,0,0,,0.7
   F,0,213136,213608,0,1
   F,0,216915,217152,1,0
   If you do not have time, I can fix these other =.=
2. 00:11:167~00:26:285 - In this long break time, is it not early that title&info.png disappears? so i suggest to leave a little more.
   and about info.png - I suggest that fade-in does it from clap after downbeat. changed and did fade out in ownway
   changed point
   
   SPOILER

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"title.png",173,278
   F,0,11167,11640,0.3,1
   S,0,11167,11640,0.45
   S,0,11640,11758,0.5,0.45
   S,0,12585,12703,0.5,0.45
   S,0,13530,13648,0.5,0.45
   S,0,14474,14593,0.5,0.45
   S,0,15419,15537,0.5,0.45
   S,0,16364,16482,0.5,0.45
   S,0,17309,17427,0.5,0.45
   S,0,17900,18018,0.47,0.45
   S,0,18254,18372,0.5,0.45
   F,0,18726,19671,1,0 ⇒　remove
   S,0,19199,19317,0.5,0.45
   S,0,20144,20262,0.5,0.45
   S,0,21089,21207,0.5,0.45
   S,0,22033,22152,0.5,0.45
   S,0,22978,23096,0.5,0.45
   F,0,23451,25813,1,0
   S,0,23923,24041,0.5,0.45
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"info.png",233,357
   F,0,14002,14475,0,1 ⇒ F,0,14947,15419,0,1
   S,0,14474,14593,0.73,0.65 ⇒ remove
   S,0,15419,15537,0.73,0.65
   S,0,16364,16482,0.73,0.65
   S,0,17309,17427,0.73,0.65
   S,0,17900,18018,0.69,0.65
   S,0,18254,18372,0.73,0.65
   F,0,18726,19671,1,0 ⇒　remove
   S,0,19199,19317,0.73,0.65
   S,0,20144,20262,0.73,0.65
   S,0,21089,21207,0.73,0.65
   S,0,22033,22152,0.73,0.65
   S,0,22978,23096,0.73,0.65
   F,0,23451,25813,1,0
   S,0,23923,24041,0.73,0.65
3. I Came up with the SB that is the beating heart of BG. but I do not have the technique that can prepare for heart BG... orz so I just said..TxT :P I tried that for name board, it's not difficult to implement but have some trouble with lyrics so gave up.

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Colin's Hard]
00:30:892 (5) - for this one, i find this slider unfitting because it feels if a circle should go here since it repeats itself in the vocals, so in this case, you should move this slider up by 1/4 and add a circle here instead. it'll play more fittingly as it goes along with the vocals during gameplay IMO. kept this for consistance in this small part.
00:32:663 (3) - perhaps you can move this down a bit to make it flow smoother during gameplay? i find it easier to follow as it's not cluttered IMO. it should look like this. did some change
01:03:136 (3,4,5) - perhaps you can re-arrange this so that there would be an equal gap in this triangular pattern like this. i find it nicer and somewhat neater to follow during gameplay IMO. the code is in the box if you can't do it. did some change

SPOILER

393,149,63136,2,0,P|384:105|378:69,1,80
332,56,63490,2,0,P|298:85|263:109,1,80
280,152,63844,2,0,P|356:188,2,80,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:20:498 (4) - maybe you can move this to the right, slightly aligning to the end of the previous note for a somewhat smoother feeling to the diff during gameplay? ok
01:36:679 (8) - i think that if you do Ctrl+J on this slider, the traisition would feel smoother to follow and fun for players during gameplay IMO. o_o that would be more than insane
02:16:600 (3) - hmm i think you moved this up so that it won't confuse players that (3) is a circle and 94) is the slider. if not then i suggest that you stack this on the end of (4) so that it'd be neater during gameplay. I tried to make it easier to read by manual stacking.

[Collab]
03:04:435 (5,6) - perhaps you can move it like this because from what i see, it looks similar to 03:05:970 (4,5) - IMO(minus the jump between (5,6). in other words it'll look somewhat neater and consistent during gameplay IMO. the shape is clear, so kept
03:06:679 (6) - for this one, move this between the ends of (4,5) so that it'll look like a triangular pattern in this part. i find it more exciting to follow during gameplay IMO. it should look like this. kept, i prefer putting it right after the end.

Byakugan249 wrote:

hai~ Re-check . :3/

[Normal]
00:26:758 (2) - up to you, but perhaps you can move this to the left a bit for a smoother feeling to the diff? it should look like this. ok!

[Collab]
01:16:718 (6) - set the DS to 0.8 because it'll be consistent with 01:12:939 (4,5) - and 01:14:947 (5) - since it follows similar vocal pitches.
02:26:640 (6) - ^
I want to keep current pattern >.<

that's all for now :3.

1. 01:26:764 (1) - Ugh, I just think that soft finish would have been much better here, just like at 00:11:173 (1). The normal finish is so loud to me and the sound lasts for way too long. -.- The music after this is too soft for the normal finish.

1. 00:11:173 (1) - It feels really strange to me to have it so close. I think it fits the idea in the music better to have a bit of a jump to this note like the collab has. Silence after the repeating slider and then a loud finish, I just feel like it calls for a small jump rather than an anti jump. Maybe try placing it in the center of the grid.
   
   
2. 00:30:780 (4,5) - Ehh, to me this doesn't really fit. We follow the vocals through 00:30:071 (1,2,3) but this stack and slider is sort of random and feel bad because they aren't following the vocals precisely. I suggest doing the same thing here that you do at 00:38:339 (2,3). That plays really, really well to me. If you're worried about having the same rhythm at each spot, you shouldn't be. It's not noticeable and it plays really well.
   
   
   00:30:071 (1) to 00:31:370 (6)
   
   
3. 02:16:606 (3,4) - It looks pretty cool in the editor, but in play this overlap looks really strange. I love overlap, but this one is a bit too off the wall imo, I don't think people will like it much. Better to just stack the 3 on the 4's tail.

1. 00:39:992 (6) - Better to me to include a clap on the head here like in the insane diff. It makes the 1/4 to 1/1 rhythm here easier to understand.
   
   
2. 00:54:638 (1) - We don't get an epic 30% volume finish here? I think it feels nice after the build up before this with the increasing volume in the music.
   
   
3. 01:26:764 (6) - Same as normal, I think soft finish would fit much better here.

1. 02:58:417 (3,4,1) - I think you could play around with placements here. With the current placement, the rhythm is super hard to read. With how they are placed, it looks like they have a similar rhythm to 00:27:236 (5,6). I think players might miss here and then rage at the map, and I wouldn't want to see that happen.
   I tried a bunch myself. Here's one that I feel plays really well and fits your style here the best:
   
   

1. 01:26:764 (1) - Same, a soft finish fits better imo.
   
   
2. 01:38:102 (1) - Don't you want to have a finish on the head here? o.o
   
   
3. 01:44:244 (4) - Don't you want to have a finish on the end to hit with the one in the music and make this 1/4 rhythm more apparent?
   
   
4. 02:19:677 (1) - No need for finish here imo. There is no finish in the music here, and the other diffs don't include one.
   
   
5. 02:44:244 (1) - How about adding a 30% volume soft finish here like you did at earlier similar sections like 00:54:638 (3)? I think it really fits nicely.
   
   
6. 03:27:709 (1) - There's a pretty loud finish in the music here, don't you want to have a finish on this circle? Sounds good to me. -.-

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hi hi~
I'm late. -.-
It's probably a waste of my time, but I'll try to mod anyways.

[先生's Normal]

Hitsounds

1. 01:26:764 (1) - Ugh, I just think that soft finish would have been much better here, just like at 00:11:173 (1). The normal finish is so loud to me and the sound lasts for way too long. -.- The music after this is too soft for the normal finish.

Awesome! Teach me to map. ;_; Thank you *w*

[Collab]

Map Design/Rhythm

Hitsounds

1. 01:26:764 (1) - Same, a soft finish fits better imo.
   
   
2. 01:38:102 (1) - Don't you want to have a finish on the head here? o.o
   
   
3. 01:44:244 (4) - Don't you want to have a finish on the end to hit with the one in the music and make this 1/4 rhythm more apparent?
   
   
4. 02:19:677 (1) - No need for finish here imo. There is no finish in the music here, and the other diffs don't include one.

i have forgot about finish sound *w* ,so fix all \:3/

Thank you for modding

Ok, that's all from me. Awesome mapset. (:
I'll star. <3　<3

ztrot wrote:

everything looks good I can rank this whenever the counter resets but if you didn't use the mod below don't kudo it please if you did then the mat that bubbled or rebubbled should of posted.

UnitedWeSin wrote:

[Collin's Hard]

Map Design/Rhythm

1. 00:11:173 (1) - It feels really strange to me to have it so close. I think it fits the idea in the music better to have a bit of a jump to this note like the collab has. Silence after the repeating slider and then a loud finish, I just feel like it calls for a small jump rather than an anti jump. Maybe try placing it in the center of the grid. fixed
   
   
2. 00:30:780 (4,5) - Ehh, to me this doesn't really fit. We follow the vocals through 00:30:071 (1,2,3) but this stack and slider is sort of random and feel bad because they aren't following the vocals precisely. I suggest doing the same thing here that you do at 00:38:339 (2,3). That plays really, really well to me. If you're worried about having the same rhythm at each spot, you shouldn't be. It's not noticeable and it plays really well. no, i'd keep this for some rhythm consistence in this part
   
   
   00:30:071 (1) to 00:31:370 (6)
   
   
3. 02:16:606 (3,4) - It looks pretty cool in the editor, but in play this overlap looks really strange. I love overlap, but this one is a bit too off the wall imo, I don't think people will like it much. Better to just stack the 3 on the 4's tail. this is what I want, and is necessary for better sightreading

Hitsounds

1. 00:39:992 (6) - Better to me to include a clap on the head here like in the insane diff. It makes the 1/4 to 1/1 rhythm here easier to understand. no.
   
   
2. 00:54:638 (1) - We don't get an epic 30% volume finish here? I think it feels nice after the build up before this with the increasing volume in the music. k, added as well as the same spot in later part
   
   
3. 01:26:764 (6) - Same as normal, I think soft finish would fit much better here. k

[Collab]

Map Design/Rhythm

1. 02:58:417 (3,4,1) - I think you could play around with placements here. With the current placement, the rhythm is super hard to read. With how they are placed, it looks like they have a similar rhythm to 00:27:236 (5,6). I think players might miss here and then rage at the map, and I wouldn't want to see that happen. dislike the overlaps sorry
   I tried a bunch myself. Here's one that I feel plays really well and fits your style here the best:
   
   

Hitsounds

1. 02:44:244 (1) - How about adding a 30% volume soft finish here like you did at earlier similar sections like 00:54:638 (3)? I think it really fits nicely. no. I need the hitnormal
   
   
2. 03:27:709 (1) - There's a pretty loud finish in the music here, don't you want to have a finish on this circle? Sounds good to me. -.-added