happy30 wrote:

[Beginner]
The rhythm varies a bit from a following-the-song rhythm with 1/2s and a simplicity-rhythm following 1/1s. personally I would go for the 1/2s rhythm, I pointed out some suggestions below:

00:17:470 (1,2) - Reduce slider velocity speed on these two sliders? because this intro is a bit calmer than the rest of the song. - Done.
00:29:334 (2,3) - start these both 1/2 later to match the rhythm of the song? - Done.
00:32:385 (3) - make this slider perfectly symmetrical - Forgot about this one; fixed.
00:33:741 (1,2,1) - pen0r pattern, lol, sorry cant unsee - It is not.∑(゜Д゜;)
00:39:165 (1,2,3) - end (1) 1/2 earlier, place (2) 1/2 earlier and start (3) 1/2 earlier. - Done.
01:00:860 (1,2,3) - make slider 1 and 3 perfectly symmetrical and place the note between them in a perfect line. - Done and changed another combo later on in the song to match it.
00:49:334 (3,2) - this overlap looks messy - Oops, didn't notice that one myself; corrected.
01:18:657 (2,3,1) - spacing: make this line go straight, following the slider's track? - Done.
01:29:843 (3) - start this 1/2 later? - This I want to be left as the transition from the main whistle synthesiser you hear into the regular beat.
01:34:419 (2,3) - start both 1/2 later? - Done.
01:38:826 (1,2,3) - end (1) 1/2 earlier, place (2) 1/2 earlier and start (3) 1/2 earlier. (like 01:44:249 (1,2,3) - ) - Done.

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi ampzz o/
I told you I was to mod this earlier, but at the end I didn't arrive home at time, sorry >.<

Here I go

[Beginner]
I'd suggest to remove the first two breaks, the drain is a bit low and the arrows would be a bit stressing for beginners. Also you could decrease HP by 1 to create an even spread for this setting in the mapset. - Done.
*nazi* 00:22:893 (1) and 00:25:605 (1) don't have perfect symmetry. - Fixed these up; sort of forgot about them.
00:29:843 (3) - Shorten this by 1/2 beat, matches better the music, actually sounds a bit weird. - Oops, no idea what I did there, corrected.
00:32:385 (3) - How about making this a 1/1 slider with 1 repeat, it'd add more emphasis to these strong beats imo, or a circle + 1/1 slider. - Swapped the order to be 1/1 slider into a circle afterwards instead.
00:44:588 (1) - *nazi* You can achieve a better blanket moving the middle node around x:52 y:176 and the last one to x:152 y:108 - Done.
00:52:724 (1,2) - This blanketing looks quite sloppy, try this code, you may need to adjust a bit the spacing for 00:52:385 (4). - Applied and thanks.

219,293,52724,6,2,P|291:211|214:133,1,240,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,212,54080,2,2,P|134:135|206:53,1,240,8|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:

01:23:571 (2,3) - Maybe move it 1/2 beat later and shorten 01:23:910 (3) by 1/2 beat as in 00:29:843 (3), I think it's the same rhythm so it should have a bit of consistency. - Done.
01:17:131 (1,1) - Same as 00:22:893 (1) and 00:25:605 (1). - Done.
01:29:843 (3) - *nazi* Improve this blanket by moving the last node to x:28 y:120. - Done.

That'd be all from my part, as you asked me just Beginner diff, good luck /o/

MMzz wrote:

Some quick things on the taikos before I bubble.

[Oni]
OD and HP 6, 5 is too low for Oni.

[Muzukashii]
OD and HP 5.

00:57:131 (146) - This isn't in the snapped properly. Move it backwards to 00:57:046, then place a don at 00:57:300 to even out the rhythm.

That is all.

EDIT: Bubbled!

dkun wrote:

How about TR1 on Normal for consistency with the rest of the diffs? (Not in TR, but slider tracks and how sliders sound in general throughout the set)

A small suggestion; this set is amazing! Let me know what you think.