15:00 ampzz: After a test play here.
15:00 *ampzz is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/189861 kors k - smooooch]
15:00 JappyBabes: yeah i'll throw an xmas hat or something on mine later
15:00 ampzz: Anything you find, just post here
15:01 JappyBabes: logs are too hard
15:01 ampzz: Eh?
15:01 ampzz:  /savelog
15:01 ampzz: done.
15:01 ampzz: Saves new one.
15:01 JappyBabes: i have it autod
15:01 JappyBabes: but rly
15:02 JappyBabes: can you even kd for one diff
15:02 JappyBabes: only
15:02 ampzz: Yes.
15:02 ampzz: If it's stuff that helps the map over all out it's worth it.
15:03 ampzz: Where the heck did the early breaks go?!
15:03 JappyBabes: no idea
15:04 JappyBabes: do you care about
15:04 JappyBabes: unreadable stacks only when
15:04 JappyBabes: hd
15:05 ampzz: Usually, yes, but I have my settings so things are readable regardless of opaque skin.
15:05 ampzz: Those end triples might go.
15:06 JappyBabes: unstable 118
15:06 JappyBabes: what.
15:06 ampzz: Actually sounds more 1/2
15:06 ampzz: unstable 118?
15:06 JappyBabes: is there a way
15:06 ampzz: For FPS?
15:06 JappyBabes: no
15:06 JappyBabes: when you finish watching/playing a full replay
15:06 ampzz: Ah.
15:06 JappyBabes: it shows how unstable your acc is
15:06 JappyBabes: so low for not much play
15:06 JappyBabes: anyway can i dim
15:06 JappyBabes: bg in edit
15:06 JappyBabes: this bright pink fuck
15:06 ampzz: Just remove it.
15:07 JappyBabes: 00:21:537 (1,2,1) -  this felt like a trade-off
15:07 JappyBabes: the 2 has good positioning but was hard to tell when i should let go of 1
15:08 JappyBabes: might have just been hd
15:09 JappyBabes: 00:35:097 (6,7) - seems a bit squished compared to last notes in combo
15:10 JappyBabes: 00:38:487 (8) - would prefer if this was straight like 6
15:11 JappyBabes: 00:39:165 (1,3) - can't tell if these are the same slider (same angle)
15:11 JappyBabes: but if they aren't maybe they should be
15:12 JappyBabes: and nowhere else up until here have you had them overlap like that
15:12 JappyBabes: sliders, that is
15:13 ampzz: Screwed myself over for placement resulting in a corner trap. :x
15:13 JappyBabes: 00:44:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you usually use shapes so these lines are kinda dull
15:14 JappyBabes: and the 1,2 / 4,5 overlap which i think i only saw on those 1/4s at the beginning
15:15 ampzz: Ah, the reason for more linear mappign on this was to show a change in what the rhythm I would be following goes to.
15:15 JappyBabes: dw most of this is 
15:15 JappyBabes: trying really hard to find things which could be done better
15:15 JappyBabes: 00:48:317 (4) - not sure if i've seen you use the bent sliders with 1/4 inbetween earlier in the song
15:15 JappyBabes: they were curved unless this is to do
15:16 JappyBabes: with the change of song as you just said
15:16 ampzz: Yeah.
15:16 ampzz: More angle sliders used here than anywhere else.
15:16 JappyBabes: hey look i can pick up on things \:D/
15:16 JappyBabes: 00:51:537 (2,3,4) - this felt extremely odd to play
15:17 JappyBabes: like it fits the music
15:17 JappyBabes: just didn't play well imo
15:17 ampzz: Would you want a reduction in ds?
15:18 JappyBabes: is the SV changed
15:18 JappyBabes: there
15:18 JappyBabes: like
15:19 JappyBabes: it seems like the slider finishes earlier than the next
15:19 JappyBabes: unlike other typical maps where you just hold z > x
15:19 JappyBabes: or w/e
15:21 ampzz: Which?
15:21 ampzz: Oh, that, no.
15:21 ampzz: I usually avoid SV changes.
15:24 JappyBabes: 00:54:080 (1) - personal dislike of sliders used like this were they're in a row facing outwards, could fit a hexagon w/ 1/2 sliders like val did at the end of six trillion  but this isn't needed at all
15:25 JappyBabes: 01:04:249 (1) -  really compressed stream but i'm just going to go ahead and guess that's because of the instrument being diff
15:25 JappyBabes: and the sliders that come after that.
15:25 JappyBabes: ehhh doesn't look good when they overlap oddly at least to me
15:27 JappyBabes: 01:16:792 (3,4,5,6) - could be more wave shaped like 01:19:165 (9,10,11,12) - but it is the beginning/build up to the ending so it works
15:30 JappyBabes: 01:47:470 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - both approaching from the same side kinda odd seeing as you had 00:59:504 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 
15:31 ampzz: Thinking of removing the triples
15:31 JappyBabes: and yeah maybe you're right with removing the triples all together
15:31 ampzz: just go for 1/2 mapping here.
15:31 JappyBabes: could do a 1/2
15:31 JappyBabes: wow
15:31 JappyBabes: reading my mind
15:31 JappyBabes: large 1/2 with kinda large spacing?
15:31 JappyBabes: using same words OP
15:32 ampzz: 01:48:995 (4,5) - Did these play find?
15:32 ampzz: FIND
15:32 ampzz: Fine*
15:32 JappyBabes: yeah they felt fine
15:32 JappyBabes: but if you're going with the 10 1/2s in a row route or w/e
15:32 JappyBabes: they'll probably be in different locations 
15:32 ampzz: Mhmm
15:33 JappyBabes: this ending half minute or so after the break
15:33 JappyBabes: uses a lot of straight sliders
15:33 JappyBabes: it seems like
15:35 ampzz: Not a fan?
15:35 JappyBabes: 01:37:470 (1) - these just look weird even though i can see what you were going for
15:35 JappyBabes: w/ the 2,3,4
15:36 JappyBabes: just trying to think of
15:36 JappyBabes: if where the 1 and 3 were
15:36 JappyBabes: sliders isntead
15:36 ampzz: OH
15:36 ampzz: MY
15:36 ampzz: GOD
15:36 JappyBabes: what
15:37 ampzz: That sentence made 0 sense.
15:37 ampzz: Ahahaha
15:37 JappyBabes: what
15:37 ampzz: Oh, wrong convo.
15:37 ampzz: Grea.t
15:37 ampzz: Thanks osu!
15:37 JappyBabes: i was so confused ):
15:38 JappyBabes: 01:33:741 (2,3,4) - felt a tad condensed
15:39 JappyBabes: 01:41:029 (2,3,4) - this looks to be the lone stacked triplet in the entire map
15:39 ampzz: Yeah, nothing really worked out decently except that.
15:40 ampzz: Tried a repeat slider instad, felt shit.
15:40 JappyBabes: would a 
15:41 JappyBabes: triple going up
15:41 JappyBabes: followed by
15:41 JappyBabes: where the 9 is, flipped 
15:41 JappyBabes: for the 6
15:41 JappyBabes: 8 flipped for 7
15:41 JappyBabes: 6 flipped for 9
15:41 JappyBabes: and 10 flipped for 10
15:41 JappyBabes: vertical of
15:41 JappyBabes: c
15:42 JappyBabes: oh wait
15:42 JappyBabes: there's a note after the triple gg
15:42 ampzz: Yeah, hence being lazy.
15:43 ampzz: You get that one stop to readjust your grip slightly before next section.
15:44 ampzz: Well, that's a lie...
15:44 ampzz: I was just being slack.
15:45 JappyBabes: yeah could tell
15:45 JappyBabes: trying to work something out
15:46 JappyBabes: having trouble but
15:47 JappyBabes: something where the triplet moves up in some direction and the note after is put somewhere where cool cursor movement can start to happen, where it just loops off from one slider end to the next slider start
15:47 ampzz: Oh, and please remember that I mapped this back in late 2012.
15:47 JappyBabes: also is 'somewhere where' right
15:47 JappyBabes: there should be better vocab for that
15:47 ampzz: No.
15:47 JappyBabes: i knew it
15:47 ampzz: 'where' is redundant.
15:48 ampzz: somwhere so that there is a place for
15:48 ampzz: if I could spell that would be cool too.
15:50 ampzz: If I were to map this with my current skills the map would be ridiculously different.
15:50 JappyBabes: 01:44:249 (1,2,3) - kinda dull, easy to fuck up here too w/ aim on middle note ;<
15:50 JappyBabes: 01:43:232 (3,4,5,6) - would prefer if this was all mapped on the same angle tilt
15:51 JappyBabes: 01:35:436 (4,5) - 01:36:114 (1) - ehhhhhhh
15:53 JappyBabes: idk why i didn't say this before but this 01:02:215 (1,2,3,4,5) - kinda awkard to play but mightj ust be me
15:53 JappyBabes: 01:25:775 (3,1,2,3,4) -  same w/ this
15:54 JappyBabes: kind of like that star you did earlier w/out mapping it like a star
15:55 JappyBabes: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2386823/ FUCKING LOL.
15:55 JappyBabes: woooow
15:55 JappyBabes: ranked > nuked
15:55 JappyBabes: bl laurier
15:55 ampzz: LOL
15:56 ampzz: Soon osu! will basically be gone as everything breached copyright.
15:57 JappyBabes: anyways
15:57 JappyBabes: that's pretty much it
15:57 ampzz: Cool

1. Clear~

1. 00:20:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this steram is little ugly shape. try this code. - I actually had a more circular end to the stream here but wanted it to veer off into a more linear end to accommodate the 1/8th synth that kicks in aesthetically.
   
   

   132,236,20182,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   118,218,20266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   109,197,20351,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   107,174,20436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   112,152,20520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   122,132,20605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   138,116,20690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   158,105,20775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   180,100,20859,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   202,101,20944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   224,109,21029,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   242,122,21114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   255,141,21198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   263,162,21283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   265,184,21368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   260,206,21453,1,0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:30:182 (9) - add whistle? - Done.
3. 01:19:249 (10) - hm, i think that not fit quintuplets. remove note and replacement to peripheral notes? - I'll consider this but I would much prefer using it to kick the next section into gear.
4. 01:49:673 - there is a big sound. so add note + finish and spinner move to 01:49:843 - ? - I sort of prefer having that note kick off the spinner as (to me) a spinner is a note in itself.

1. 01:05:944 (1) - like this slider's shape? it is more good placement for me. - Done, but reshaped it differently.
   

happy30 wrote:

[Beginner]
The rhythm varies a bit from a following-the-song rhythm with 1/2s and a simplicity-rhythm following 1/1s. personally I would go for the 1/2s rhythm, I pointed out some suggestions below:

00:17:470 (1,2) - Reduce slider velocity speed on these two sliders? because this intro is a bit calmer than the rest of the song. - Done.
00:29:334 (2,3) - start these both 1/2 later to match the rhythm of the song? - Done.
00:32:385 (3) - make this slider perfectly symmetrical - Forgot about this one; fixed.
00:33:741 (1,2,1) - pen0r pattern, lol, sorry cant unsee - It is not.∑(゜Д゜;)
00:39:165 (1,2,3) - end (1) 1/2 earlier, place (2) 1/2 earlier and start (3) 1/2 earlier. - Done.
01:00:860 (1,2,3) - make slider 1 and 3 perfectly symmetrical and place the note between them in a perfect line. - Done and changed another combo later on in the song to match it.
00:49:334 (3,2) - this overlap looks messy - Oops, didn't notice that one myself; corrected.
01:18:657 (2,3,1) - spacing: make this line go straight, following the slider's track? - Done.
01:29:843 (3) - start this 1/2 later? - This I want to be left as the transition from the main whistle synthesiser you hear into the regular beat.
01:34:419 (2,3) - start both 1/2 later? - Done.
01:38:826 (1,2,3) - end (1) 1/2 earlier, place (2) 1/2 earlier and start (3) 1/2 earlier. (like 01:44:249 (1,2,3) - ) - Done.

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi ampzz o/
I told you I was to mod this earlier, but at the end I didn't arrive home at time, sorry >.<

Here I go

[Beginner]
I'd suggest to remove the first two breaks, the drain is a bit low and the arrows would be a bit stressing for beginners. Also you could decrease HP by 1 to create an even spread for this setting in the mapset. - Done.
*nazi* 00:22:893 (1) and 00:25:605 (1) don't have perfect symmetry. - Fixed these up; sort of forgot about them.
00:29:843 (3) - Shorten this by 1/2 beat, matches better the music, actually sounds a bit weird. - Oops, no idea what I did there, corrected.
00:32:385 (3) - How about making this a 1/1 slider with 1 repeat, it'd add more emphasis to these strong beats imo, or a circle + 1/1 slider. - Swapped the order to be 1/1 slider into a circle afterwards instead.
00:44:588 (1) - *nazi* You can achieve a better blanket moving the middle node around x:52 y:176 and the last one to x:152 y:108 - Done.
00:52:724 (1,2) - This blanketing looks quite sloppy, try this code, you may need to adjust a bit the spacing for 00:52:385 (4). - Applied and thanks.

219,293,52724,6,2,P|291:211|214:133,1,240,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,212,54080,2,2,P|134:135|206:53,1,240,8|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:

01:23:571 (2,3) - Maybe move it 1/2 beat later and shorten 01:23:910 (3) by 1/2 beat as in 00:29:843 (3), I think it's the same rhythm so it should have a bit of consistency. - Done.
01:17:131 (1,1) - Same as 00:22:893 (1) and 00:25:605 (1). - Done.
01:29:843 (3) - *nazi* Improve this blanket by moving the last node to x:28 y:120. - Done.

That'd be all from my part, as you asked me just Beginner diff, good luck /o/

MMzz wrote:

Some quick things on the taikos before I bubble.

[Oni]
OD and HP 6, 5 is too low for Oni.

[Muzukashii]
OD and HP 5.

00:57:131 (146) - This isn't in the snapped properly. Move it backwards to 00:57:046, then place a don at 00:57:300 to even out the rhythm.

That is all.

EDIT: Bubbled!

dkun wrote:

How about TR1 on Normal for consistency with the rest of the diffs? (Not in TR, but slider tracks and how sliders sound in general throughout the set)

A small suggestion; this set is amazing! Let me know what you think.