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MAK & SAK feat. XANA - Indecent (Nightcore Mix)

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kosiga
Hi~ Gero :3

for your request~

here my mod~

[General]
  1. Song Setup - Audio Lead-in - It seems to be slightly short. so i suggest add 500ms

[Easy]
  1. 00:03:562 (4) - add whistle to end of the slider. for constant whistle as normal diff.
  2. 01:21:705 (1) - remove NC and 01:22:052 (2) - add NC. and grid move to x212,y44. an appearance and symmetry form
  3. 01:22:052 (2,3,4) - also 01:19:621 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - i think an appearance is very good when you make these symmetry form.
    SPOILER
    212,44,81705,1,0,0:0:0
    164,116,82052,6,0,P|186:143|178:186,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    256,228,82747,1,8,0:0:0
    332,185,83094,2,0,P|325:143|348:116,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  4. 02:07:115 - Green lines with no meaning. Although there is no problem to leave, just pointing out. but better to remove it :? and with↓
    SPOILER
    02:07:289
    02:07:810
    02:07:983
    02:13:106 (4,5) - I suggest that you change a flow here. i thought the flow of the straight line using the straight slider is too simple :? for ex: http://puu.sh/1ILU1
  5. 02:17:968 (1) - i suggest Ctrl+G. 02:20:747 (1) - prevent a flow same as this :P
  6. 02:23:178 (1) - The beginning of spinner is early for rhythm. so change to 02:23:525 is better.
[Normal]
  1. 00:27:786 - Green lines with no meaning. Although there is no problem to leave, just pointing out. but better to remove it :? and with↓
    SPOILER
    00:27:960
    00:28:481
    00:28:655
    00:29:870
    00:30:044
    00:30:565
    00:30:738
  2. 00:36:903 (5) - remove clap to end of the slider. like Easy diff.
  3. 00:50:448 (1) - remove NC and 00:51:837 (3) - add NC and 00:53:226 (1) - remove NC and 00:54:268 (2) - add NC. ( same as 00:57:394 combo color or if you do not change, it's a use that does not have a problem, but 01:57:130~02:02:687 - These should be unified with the same usage. :P
  4. 01:16:843 (1) - Do you shorten a spinner to give difficulty? I think that it is not necessary to do it :? I recommend how to use same as easy diff =~=
  5. 01:57:130 (1) - add NC and 01:59:908 (1) - remove NC and 02:00:950 (2) - add NC and 02:01:297 (1) - remove NC. ( reason same as 00:50:448 (1)
  6. 02:03:381 (1,2) - i prefer to stack them personally :3 This is personal freedom xD
  7. 02:22:136 (1) - remove NC. ( same as 02:15:190 (1,2,3,4) -
  8. 02:23:178 (1) - same as Easy diff.
[XinDecent]
  1. 00:01:826 - Red line and green line are overlapped. This is applicable only when you change slider speed :P so Please move back to the green line. maybe 00:02:173?
  2. 00:04:430 (2) - Suggestion of the flow: http://puu.sh/1INQH i think become more natural flow~
  3. 00:05:993 (6) - add NC ( same way as pattern 00:01:826 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
  4. 00:07:903 (4) - remove whistle. I think the only whistle here is not necessary :? If you want to use it, you should used to the similar point.
  5. 00:07:903 (4,5) - about 2grid down. it is improve an appearance when played :D
  6. 00:08:772 (6) - add NC
  7. 00:09:987 (9) - nazi suggestion. Placed in the center x256,y44
  8. 00:26:484 (x) - i prefer put note here, since good constant rhythm
  9. 01:16:496 (1) - it have a different start each diff :? All these use a spinner, so I think that these should all unify >_<;; As having said in normaldiff, I feel that how to use easydiff is most suitable.
  10. 01:25:178 (3) - Why is it not central placement? because this is symmetric 01:24:484 (1,2)... @_@ http://puu.sh/1IOo0
    196,172,85178,2,0,P|256:216|316:172,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  11. 01:33:513 (1,2,1,3) - these have too many whistles :? i suggest
    ・01:33:513 (1,2) - add clap instead to whistle to end of the slider.
    ・01:36:292 (1,3) - remove all whistle. and then 01:36:292 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. and 01:36:292 (1,3) - add clap to end of the slider.
  12. 01:41:849~01:49:489 - Suggestion of the hitsound: 01:42:543 (2) - use additions soft-clap for this position. and with same way point ↓
    SPOILER
    ・01:43:932
    ・01:45:322
    ・01:46:711
    ・01:48:100
    ・01:49:489
[eLtXXx's Insanity]
  1. 00:17:454 (6) - remove clap to start of the slider. When you use few whistle in this part, I recommend also that you maintain a low whistle :P
  2. 00:46:284 - KIAI TIME start. plz move to 00:46:280. Should be placed on the line as other diff
  3. 00:46:384 - Green lines with no meaning. Although there is no problem to leave, just pointing out. but better to remove it :?
  4. 00:55:994 - KIAI TIME end. plz move to 00:56:005. Should be placed on the line as other diff
  5. 01:01:215 (3) - add clap. constant clap
  6. 01:07:093 - KIAI TIME end. plz move to 01:07:118. Should be placed on the line as other diff
  7. 01:16:496 (1) - it have a different start each diff :? All these use a spinner, so I think that these should all unify >_<;; As having said in normaldiff, I feel that how to use easydiff is most suitable.
  8. 01:18:927 (1,2,3,4) - add clap o.o? I feel this is a very good fit o.o
  9. 01:46:016 (5) - add NC
  10. 02:02:687 (1) - add finish to start of the slider? Because have a finish sound here o.o
  11. 02:04:087 - KIAI TIME end. plz move to 02:04:076. Should be placed on the line as other diff
  12. 02:22:831 (3) - add clap. Even if this is intentional, i think better to put here for constant clap.
very neat map :3 star☆~ and also very cute BG xD

Good luck~ ;)
Topic Starter
Gero

The hunterx wrote:

Hola , de mi modding queue

[Easy]

00:38:986 (2) -quitar el slider y agregar circle en los siguientes tiempos 00:38:986 - 00:39:334 - 00:39:681 Me gusta como esta, estoy formando un patron aqui, asi que quiero mantener consistencia en esa parte, no hay cambios lo siento

00:40:723 (1) - eliminar esta nota y hacer una repeticion del slider que esta en 00:40:029 No gracias, aqui se escucha un cambio de combo por el BOOM! de la instrumental

01:01:214 (2) - elimina esta nota, en mi opinion para esa dificultad no es necesaria Claro que es necesaria, si la elimino romperia la cadena de claps formada anteriormente

01:27:262 (3) - elimina ese slider y agrega notas en estos tiempos 01:27:262 - 01:27:609 Me gusta como se ve y como esta, tampoco hay cambios


[Normal]

00:44:891 - agrega un spinner de la cual termine en 00:45:993 el spinner seria demasiado corto para ser una diff baja
01:45:669 (3,4) -elimina el circle y el slider , luego de esto realiza lo siguiente: copia las notas que estan en el tiempo 01:44:627 (1,2) y pegalos en 01:46:016 - (suena mejor de esa manera) Si la verdad suenan de mejor manera, Fixed n.n

Me gusto tu mapa , hay te dejo una estrella :)
Muchas gracias por el mod y por la estrella :3
KokoroStudiox3
thens kosiga ♥

http://puu.sh/1IZJV all done :) :) :) :)
Topic Starter
Gero

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ Gero :3

for your request~

here my mod~

[General]
  1. Song Setup - Audio Lead-in - It seems to be slightly short. so i suggest add 500ms Fixed~

[Easy]
  1. 00:03:562 (4) - add whistle to end of the slider. for constant whistle as normal diff. Fixed~
  2. 01:21:705 (1) - remove NC and 01:22:052 (2) - add NC. and grid move to x212,y44. an appearance and symmetry formFixed~
  3. 01:22:052 (2,3,4) - also 01:19:621 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - i think an appearance is very good when you make these symmetry form.Fixed~
    SPOILER
    212,44,81705,1,0,0:0:0
    164,116,82052,6,0,P|186:143|178:186,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    256,228,82747,1,8,0:0:0
    332,185,83094,2,0,P|325:143|348:116,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  4. 02:07:115 - Green lines with no meaning. Although there is no problem to leave, just pointing out. but better to remove it :? and with↓
    SPOILER
    02:07:289
    02:07:810
    02:07:983
    Fixed~
    02:13:106 (4,5) - I suggest that you change a flow here. i thought the flow of the straight line using the straight slider is too simple :? for ex: http://puu.sh/1ILU1 Fixed~
  5. 02:17:968 (1) - i suggest Ctrl+G. 02:20:747 (1) - prevent a flow same as this :P Fixed~
  6. 02:23:178 (1) - The beginning of spinner is early for rhythm. so change to 02:23:525 is better. Fixed~
[Normal]
  1. 00:27:786 - Green lines with no meaning. Although there is no problem to leave, just pointing out. but better to remove it :? and with↓
    SPOILER
    00:27:960 Fixed~
    00:28:481
    00:28:655
    00:29:870
    00:30:044
    00:30:565
    00:30:738
    Fixed~
  2. 00:36:903 (5) - remove clap to end of the slider. like Easy diff.Fixed~
  3. 00:50:448 (1) - remove NC and 00:51:837 (3) - add NC and 00:53:226 (1) - remove NC and 00:54:268 (2) - add NC. ( same as 00:57:394 combo color or if you do not change, it's a use that does not have a problem, but 01:57:130~02:02:687 - These should be unified with the same usage. :P Fixed~
  4. 01:16:843 (1) - Do you shorten a spinner to give difficulty? I think that it is not necessary to do it :? I recommend how to use same as easy diff =~=Fixed~
  5. 01:57:130 (1) - add NC and 01:59:908 (1) - remove NC and 02:00:950 (2) - add NC and 02:01:297 (1) - remove NC. ( reason same as 00:50:448 (1)
  6. 02:03:381 (1,2) - i prefer to stack them personally :3 This is personal freedom xD I like this >W<
  7. 02:22:136 (1) - remove NC. ( same as 02:15:190 (1,2,3,4) - Fixed~
  8. 02:23:178 (1) - same as Easy diff.Fixed~
very neat map :3 star☆~ and also very cute BG xD

Good luck~ ;)
Thanks For The Mod And Thanks For The Star ♥
lovhin456
Hola.

[General]
- Todo bien.

[Easy]
- 00:04:257 El new combo no deberia empezar aqui? Tiene mas sentido en mi opinion.

[Normal]
- 01:49:837 (5,1) Una nota aqui y un slider desde 01:50:184 hasta 01:50:879 seria mejor.

[XinDecent]
- 00:09:987 Siento que esta nota esta de mas, queda en el vacio porque se siente como si algo deberia seguirla (no un spinner, sino una nota) pero no hay nada, solo mi opinion, si deseas dejala.
- 00:26:658 Siguiendo la voz, seria mejor empezar el new combo aqui.
- 00:29:436 Igual que arriba.
- 01:28:651 Whistle al inicio?
- 01:55:567 Igual que en 00:26:658
- 01:58:346 Igual que arriba

[eLtXXx's Insanity]
- Uh, alguien ha dicho algo de tu BG? Es que ahora creo que hay muchos que son bastantes estrictos con esto de mostrar cosas asi, a mi en lo personal no me importa haha, pero a otros si y mucho. Solo lo digo para que lo tengas en mente que puede venir otro MAT o BAT y decirte que lo cambies por las boobies que muestra haha.
- El ultimo kiai time termina en 02:04:076 para las otras dificultades, pero en la tuya termina en 02:04:087.
- 01:55:567 Comienza el nuevo combo aqui?
mancuso_JM_

lovhin456 wrote:

[eLtXXx's Insanity]
- Uh, alguien ha dicho algo de tu BG? Es que ahora creo que hay muchos que son bastantes estrictos con esto de mostrar cosas asi, a mi en lo personal no me importa haha, pero a otros si y mucho. Solo lo digo para que lo tengas en mente que puede venir otro MAT o BAT y decirte que lo cambies por las boobies que muestra haha.
Vi esto y se me dio por comentar xD.. No creo que esta imagen no sea permitida (si no lo es, la gente de este juego es muy suceptible haha). Hablando en serio, es un anime en Bikini lo cual no presentaria un NSFW en mi opinion. Creo que esta imagen pasa el rankeo tranquilamente, asi que no te preocupes demasiado (usa esta justificacion si algun BAT te lo dice)
[Yue]
*bump*

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

lovhin456 wrote:

[eLtXXx's Insanity]
- Uh, alguien ha dicho algo de tu BG? Es que ahora creo que hay muchos que son bastantes estrictos con esto de mostrar cosas asi, a mi en lo personal no me importa haha, pero a otros si y mucho. Solo lo digo para que lo tengas en mente que puede venir otro MAT o BAT y decirte que lo cambies por las boobies que muestra haha.
Vi esto y se me dio por comentar xD.. No creo que esta imagen no sea permitida (si no lo es, la gente de este juego es muy suceptible haha). Hablando en serio, es un anime en Bikini lo cual no presentaria un NSFW en mi opinion. Creo que esta imagen pasa el rankeo tranquilamente, asi que no te preocupes demasiado (usa esta justificacion si algun BAT te lo dice)
A mi si me gustaria ver ese BG para un mapa ranked o33333333333o

/me runs*
XinCrin

lovhin456 wrote:

[XinDecent]
- 00:09:987 Siento que esta nota esta de mas, queda en el vacio porque se siente como si algo deberia seguirla (no un spinner, sino una nota) pero no hay nada, solo mi opinion, si deseas dejala. El vocal dice "na na.. " como un bis o algo asi , en conclusion si sigue el vocal en esta oprtunidad
- 00:26:658 Siguiendo la voz, seria mejor empezar el new combo aqui. Hecho , aunque me quede :roll:
- 00:29:436 Igual que arriba. Hecho
- 01:28:651 Whistle al inicio? Claro , mis patrones de whistles e.e
- 01:55:567 Igual que en 00:26:658 Supongo
- 01:58:346 Igual que arriba Same :roll:
Gracias lovhin :D

SPOILER
osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: Nightcore - Indecent.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 45586
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Indecent (Nightcore Mix)
TitleUnicode:Indecent (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:MAK & SAK feat. XANA
ArtistUnicode:MAK & SAK feat. XANA
Creator:Gero
Version:XinDecent
Source:
Tags:XinCrin Catalan Remix eLtigreXXx
BeatmapID:190110
BeatmapSetID:64525

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG3.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,40923,45033
2,68708,75596
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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508,292,37945,6,0,P|416:156,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
360,212,38466,2,0,P|336:136,1,80
184,188,38987,1,8,0:0:0
256,332,39334,2,0,P|184:312|96:320,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
276,172,40376,1,8,0:0:0
128,108,40723,1,4,0:0:0
356,104,45933,6,0,P|432:76,1,80
356,104,46280,2,0,P|296:68|208:80,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
140,116,46801,1,0,0:0:0
184,184,46975,2,0,P|248:234|272:306,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
408,220,47669,2,0,P|448:224|484:248,1,80
424,136,48017,1,8,0:0:0
312,176,48190,1,0,0:0:0
336,292,48364,1,0,0:0:0
60,188,48711,6,0,P|72:232|68:268,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
60,188,49059,2,0,P|80:120|160:96,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
140,172,49580,1,0,0:0:0
216,144,49753,1,0,0:0:0
184,300,50101,1,8,0:0:0
344,308,50448,2,0,P|384:312|416:292,1,80
364,232,50795,1,8,0:0:0
420,152,50969,1,0,0:0:0
352,84,51142,1,0,0:0:0
260,216,51490,6,0,P|324:164,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,216,51837,2,0,P|260:288|184:296,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,216,52358,1,0,0:0:0
196,140,52532,2,0,P|272:120|272:120|344:160,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
232,40,53226,2,0,P|152:64,1,80
76,80,53574,1,8,0:0:0
36,148,53747,1,0,0:0:0
116,148,53921,1,0,0:0:0
124,308,54268,5,8,0:0:0
204,324,54442,1,0,0:0:0
272,284,54615,2,0,P|336:328|336:328|424:336,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
460,268,55136,1,0,0:0:0
456,188,55310,2,0,P|408:128|328:124,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
290,53,55831,2,0,P|332:128,1,80
172,100,56352,1,4,0:0:0
172,284,56699,1,4,0:0:0
328,256,57047,6,0,P|396:300,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,256,57394,2,0,P|368:184|368:184|372:104,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
300,76,57915,1,0,0:0:0
220,64,58089,2,0,P|144:72|96:136,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,284,58783,2,0,P|196:264|216:228,1,80
352,284,59130,2,0,P|316:264|296:228,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,160,59478,1,0,0:0:0
96,188,59825,6,0,P|180:188,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
96,188,60172,2,0,P|100:104|52:40,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
28,120,60693,1,0,0:0:0
16,200,60867,2,0,P|52:252|144:248,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
300,272,61562,2,0,P|376:296,1,80
300,192,61909,2,0,P|376:164,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
424,228,62256,1,0,0:0:0
340,92,62603,5,8,0:0:0
340,92,62777,1,0,0:0:0
260,76,62951,2,0,P|184:96|184:96|112:144,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
96,220,63472,1,0,0:0:0
52,288,63645,2,0,P|104:324|196:304,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,276,64340,2,0,P|344:236|312:212,1,80
277,150,64687,2,0,P|285:190|317:214,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,144,65035,2,0,P|432:160|436:100,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,68,65556,5,0,0:0:0
296,36,65729,2,0,P|136:28,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
56,108,66250,1,0,0:0:0
100,212,66424,2,0,P|260:220,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
340,224,66945,1,0,0:0:0
420,228,67118,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,67292,12,4,68508,0:0:0
256,192,76496,12,4,78232,0:0:0
256,120,78927,5,2,0:0:0
316,172,79100,1,2,0:0:0
312,252,79274,1,8,0:0:0
236,284,79448,1,2,0:0:0
232,204,79621,38,0,P|80:268,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
60,124,80316,2,0,P|100:132|144:124,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,56,80663,2,0,P|140:48|96:56,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
220,120,81010,2,0,P|292:84|332:16,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
396,164,81705,5,2,0:0:0
364,320,82052,2,0,P|328:332|288:320,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,252,82400,1,2,0:0:0
260,108,82747,1,8,0:0:0
216,264,83094,2,0,P|136:280|72:324,2,160,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,240,84136,1,8,0:0:0
376,72,84484,6,0,P|344:92|300:92,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
136,72,84831,2,0,P|168:92|212:92,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,172,85178,2,0,P|256:216|320:168,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,340,85873,5,2,0:0:0
256,348,86046,1,2,0:0:0
160,324,86220,1,8,0:0:0
92,256,86394,1,2,0:0:0
88,160,86567,2,0,P|144:100|144:24,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,124,87262,5,2,0:0:0
392,208,87609,1,8,0:0:0
368,284,87783,1,2,0:0:0
448,272,87957,2,0,P|488:200|480:120,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
324,100,88651,2,0,P|284:172|292:252,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
140,300,89346,1,4,0:0:0
32,72,90214,6,0,P|112:48,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
136,124,90561,1,0,0:0:0
184,60,90735,1,4,0:0:0
340,96,91082,1,8,0:0:0
232,236,91430,1,0,0:0:0
312,228,91603,1,0,0:0:0
392,220,91777,6,0,P|400:304|344:340,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,328,92471,1,8,0:0:0
32,276,92819,1,0,0:0:0
168,188,93166,1,8,0:0:0
324,228,93513,6,2,P|408:148|388:36,2,240,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
164,228,94903,2,2,P|80:148|100:36,2,240,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,200,96118,1,0,0:0:0
184,144,96292,6,2,P|256:68|348:140,2,240,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,200,97507,1,0,0:0:0
264,276,97681,2,2,P|200:340|148:304|104:272|24:300,2,240,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,116,99070,1,4,0:0:0
72,324,100112,5,0,0:0:0
232,312,100459,1,4,0:0:0
60,48,101849,6,0,P|220:48,1,160,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,56,102543,1,0,0:0:0
500,352,103238,6,0,P|340:352,1,160,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,360,103932,1,0,0:0:0
320,72,104627,6,0,P|328:144|404:132,2,160,2|0|0,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,312,106016,2,0,P|184:240|108:252,2,160,2|0|0,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,112,107405,6,0,P|104:100|32:40,2,160,2|0|0,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
344,272,108795,2,0,P|408:284|480:344,2,160,2|0|0,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,110184,12,4,111573,0:0:0
196,296,112615,6,0,P|124:336,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
196,296,112962,2,0,P|272:324|340:292,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,228,113483,1,0,0:0:0
344,168,113657,2,0,P|420:156|428:80,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
272,92,114352,2,0,P|192:96,1,80
180,176,114699,2,0,P|112:128,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
132,52,115046,2,0,P|52:68|32:140,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
68,208,115567,5,0,0:0:0
128,260,115741,2,0,P|176:284|176:284|216:248|280:264,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
236,332,116262,2,0,P|272:348|316:344,1,80
360,192,116783,1,8,0:0:0
252,72,117130,2,0,P|288:52|328:48,1,80
308,128,117477,2,0,P|236:168,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,228,117825,2,0,P|308:304|384:320,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
448,280,118346,5,0,0:0:0
372,252,118519,2,0,P|296:292|252:352,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
200,292,119040,2,0,P|139:233,1,80
40,112,119561,1,8,0:0:0
200,100,119908,1,0,0:0:0
276,80,120082,1,0,0:0:0
256,156,120256,2,0,P|228:184|188:184,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
412,196,120950,5,8,0:0:0
404,276,121124,1,0,0:0:0
324,284,121298,2,0,P|264:324|176:320,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,244,121819,1,0,0:0:0
240,252,121992,2,0,P|276:188|264:104,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
333,64,122513,2,0,P|261:108,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
60,60,123729,5,0,0:0:0
88,136,123902,1,0,0:0:0
96,216,124076,2,4,P|156:244|156:244|176:200|232:188,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
228,268,124597,1,0,0:0:0
296,224,124771,2,0,P|324:148|268:96,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,64,125465,5,0,0:0:0
460,140,125639,1,0,0:0:0
436,216,125813,1,8,0:0:0
392,280,125986,1,0,0:0:0
324,324,126160,2,0,P|256:360|176:344,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
104,308,126681,5,0,0:0:0
84,232,126854,2,0,P|96:184|130:175|180:168|184:108,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,76,127375,1,0,0:0:0
112,76,127549,2,0,P|188:112|268:104,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
344,228,128244,2,0,P|372:260|408:268,1,80
304,166,128591,2,0,P|292:126|260:106,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
384,160,128938,2,0,P|460:128|460:56,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
384,80,129459,5,0,0:0:0
384,80,129633,2,0,P|448:136|472:208,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
448,284,130154,1,0,0:0:0
388,336,130327,2,0,P|324:280|300:208,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,304,131022,1,0,0:3:0
164,224,131196,1,0,0:3:0
87,203,131370,1,8,0:0:0
43,270,131543,1,0,0:3:0
94,333,131717,1,0,0:3:0
256,88,132064,5,8,0:0:0
332,68,132238,1,0,0:0:0
256,88,132411,2,0,P|200:112|172:84|148:56|92:92,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
36,136,132932,1,0,0:0:0
12,220,133106,2,0,P|68:196|96:224|120:252|176:216,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
218,282,133627,2,0,P|162:218,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
404,308,134842,5,0,0:0:0
452,244,135016,1,0,0:0:0
476,168,135190,2,0,P|472:100|432:68,1,120.000004577637,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
400,140,135711,1,0,0:0:0
328,168,135884,2,0,P|332:100|369:69,1,120.000004577637,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
212,88,136579,2,0,P|156:112,1,60.0000022888184,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
140,188,136926,2,0,P|84:212,1,60.0000022888184,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
56,284,137274,1,0,1:0:0
208,324,137621,5,0,0:0:0
208,324,137794,1,0,0:0:0
208,324,137968,2,0,P|264:292|320:320|320:320|360:264|424:264,1,240.000009155274,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
176,80,139357,2,0,P|220:36,1,60.0000022888184,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
293,37,139705,2,0,P|336:80,1,60.0000022888184,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,100,140052,1,0,1:0:0
256,256,140399,5,2,0:0:0
256,256,140573,1,0,0:0:0
256,256,140747,2,0,P|192:280|140:272,2,120.000004577637,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0
396,192,141788,1,0,0:0:0
244,160,142136,2,0,P|188:136,1,60.0000022888184,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,132,142483,2,0,P|52:104,1,60.0000022888184,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
56,28,142830,1,0,1:0:0
212,36,143178,5,2,0:0:0
288,36,143351,1,0,0:0:0
364,60,143525,2,0,P|412:88|440:148,1,120.000004577637,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
460,228,144046,1,2,0:0:0
420,304,144220,2,0,P|372:340|312:340,1,120.000004577637,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
244,292,144741,1,0,0:0:0
172,248,144914,1,4,0:0:0

EDIT :

Yue so pervert :oops:
KokoroStudiox3
http://puu.sh/1JI3O listo todo echo
gracias :) :)

pues a ver que pasa xD
Topic Starter
Gero

lovhin456 wrote:

Hola.

[General]
- Todo bien.

[Easy]
- 00:04:257 El new combo no deberia empezar aqui? Tiene mas sentido en mi opinion.

[Normal]
- 01:49:837 (5,1) Una nota aqui y un slider desde 01:50:184 hasta 01:50:879 seria mejor.
Todo hecho :)
Muchas gracias Lovhin n.n :D
Topic Starter
Gero
Gracias a todos :)!
Shohei Ohtani
from eltigre's mod4mod queue. Because I like getting mods on my maps.

Insane:
00:08:077 (3) - It looks pretty but it's a really awkward jump, especially considering where (4) is. If (4) was (3), then it'd be fine.
00:08:424 (4) - Add clap
00:08:772 (5) - Add clap on beginning of slider
00:09:466 (7) - Add clap on end of slider
00:10:161 (1) - Add clap on beginning of slider
00:10:508 (2) - Add clap on beginning of slider
00:10:855 (3) - Add clap on full slider
Pretty much instead of making a giant-ass post about adding claps, just add claps on 2 and 4 after the ones stated. The song really calls for it.
01:38:723 (7) - The endpoint is slightly lower than the beginning. If this was intentional, make it more notable

Hard:
Lower the hitsound volume to about 60%.
00:26:484 - Add a note here. I made the weirdest possible face when I attempted to hit a note here but didn't.
01:36:292 (1) - If it's at all possible, try centering this, especially since there was a symmetrical pattern just before.
01:37:681 (3) - The end of this slider is way too high and it makes the shape awkward
02:12:064 (1,2) - CTRL + G

Normal:
Claps on every white tick in the beginning. That's like, how the song goes, lol

Easy:
Same as normal
00:16:065 (2) - Slightly touching HP bar
This BG makes feelings in my pants

yay
KokoroStudiox3
Topic Starter
Gero

CDFA wrote:

from eltigre's mod4mod queue. Because I like getting mods on my maps.

Normal:
Claps on every white tick in the beginning. That's like, how the song goes, lol Fixed~

Easy:
Same as normal
00:16:065 (2) - Slightly touching HP bar Fixed~

This BG makes feelings in my pants Jujujuju =3~


thanks for the mod :D
yay
qkenan
Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
For m4m ~ _(:з」∠)_

General

  1. All diffs do good job~

XinDecent

  1. 00:28:220 (6) - Split it into two one-beat slider?Nearly no moving for three beats not very comfortable
  2. 00:55:310 (5) - Slider of arc not fit.Shape it like 00:54:615 (3) -

eLtXXx's Insanity

  1. 00:22:490 (5) - Use two circles instead of 1/2beat slider ? To follow vocal
  2. 00:25:095 Add a circle here? Maybe more consistent
  3. 01:21:705 (1,2,3) - Make them vertical ?
  4. 01:52:094 (1,2) - Align them vertically

Good luck~
Wafu
Black - Suggestion
Blue - I highly recommend you to fix this
Red - Unrankable

[Easy]

00:15:023 (4) - Move this note on 187;248 to be on the same line as 00:13:634 (2). You've made it as I suggested now in another part, so you could follow it.
00:06:340 (5) - Since 00:04:604 (2,4) are on the same line, 00:06:340 (5) could be on 228;246 to be on the same line with 00:05:646 (3)
00:25:442 (3) - CTRL+G to follow 00:26:831 (1) better way, it breaks flow
00:26:831 (1) - If you followed ^, move it down to don't break snap

00:32:388 (1) - Move red point on 341;233. It looks weird when is this shape so sharp at the center.
00:34:125 (2,3) - To make better blanket, move 00:34:125 (2) - on 283;168 and 00:34:472 (3) on 205;127
00:36:556 (3,4,5) - This would fit better with slider like 00:35:514 (2) also with repeat, becuase if you listen music carefuly you'll notice that these notes feels to be a bit connected with some noise.
00:50:448 (1) - Move on 185;198 to make perfect stack with 00:48:364 (3)
00:53:226 (1) - Move on 252;252 ^
00:54:268 (2) - Move on 300;181 to make perfect blanket and better distance between objects
00:59:478 (4,3) - Avoid overlap by moving 01:01:562 (3) up.

[Normal]

00:07:035 (1) - Avoid overlap with 00:05:299 (3) by rotating 00:07:035 (1)
00:31:346 (4) - Move on 278;62 to make constant distance between 00:30:304 (2,3,4)
00:36:556 (4,5) - Move the slider on 00:36:556 and add repeat. The same reason as on easy.
01:04:340 (3) - Move on 285;291 to make perfect stack.
01:39:070 (2,3) - Make slider from these because it's hard for new players to beat accurately pattern with redtick notes.
02:16:579 (2,3,4) - Better with CTRL+J, then moving it somewhere, because it breaks flow this way.
02:22:136 (2,3,4,5) - ^


[XinDecent]

Rename this diff to Xin's Hard or something or it will break diff. name consistency.

00:27:526 (3,5) - move these on the same line
00:32:735 (3) - Add clap here to be consistent with other diffs
00:33:430 - ^
00:34:125 (7) - ^

00:38:466 (2) - Rotate it about -15° with selection centre to be the same rotated as 00:37:945 (1). Also it looks really weird.
01:37:681 (3) - Move 2nd point on 201;316 to make better shape, it's really unnecessary to make weird shapes like this
01:56:262 (3) - I think it breaks flow when it's under this slider and you must go back.. so consider moving this on 335;303
02:24:046 (4,5,6,7) - What an unnecessary change of ds. Resnap all these

[eLtXXx's Insanity]

00:40:550 (7) - Nice, overmapping slider.. remove it and add circle on 00:40:723 - , also you'll be consistent with other diffs.
If I would tell you everything bad in this diff.. I could be there for a long time so I'll say it simply:
-Use more shaped sliders, not only linear
-Use consistent hitsounds with Xin's diff. or with Normal diff. I noticed you're just placing hitsounds randomly and sometimes don't place them. You'll need to fix it.


Good map though. At least eLtXXx's Insanity needs to improve hitsounds very much!
BounceBabe
Hi from the Queue!

Easy


General
It behaves like a Normal, try to reduce the spread by deleting some elements!

Normal

01:07:292 - Dont let the Break start at 01:08:508 - the player expects to incomm more objects and would get confused
01:08:508 - ^

01:35:945 (1) - Remove NC add NC on next element
01:51:573 (1) - Remove NC, really not needed

Hard

00:05:993 (6) - NC
00:08:772 (6) - ^
02:08:244 (5) - ^
02:11:022 (5) - ^
( I have seen this slider on like 5 maps today @.@ 02:17:968 (3) - )

Insane

When you go through the whole map 00:44:891 - from now on the hitsound are really quiet, up the volume a little to fit up with the others


00:17:107 (5) - NC
00:21:622 (3) - Spacing, move it closer
00:30:999 (1) - Spacing, too big jump imo, make it a little closer

00:35:861 (1) - Remove NC
00:45:933 (3) - NC here remove next
01:23:789 (1) - Remove NC
01:52:615 (3) - NC here remove next
02:00:603 (1) - Remove NC add here 02:01:298 (3) -

Good luck and text me once its updated !
Topic Starter
Gero

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi from the Queue!
Thank You :3
Easy


General
It behaves like a Normal, try to reduce the spread by deleting some elements! Okay Fixed~

Normal

01:07:292 - Dont let the Break start at 01:08:508 - the player expects to incomm more objects and would get confused
01:08:508 - ^
Okay Fixed~

01:35:945 (1) - Remove NC add NC on next element Okay Fixed~

01:51:573 (1) - Remove NC, really not needed Okay Fixed~


Hard

00:05:993 (6) - NC Okay Fixed~

00:08:772 (6) - ^ Okay Fixed~

02:08:244 (5) - ^ Okay Fixed~

02:11:022 (5) - ^ Okay Fixed~

( I have seen this slider on like 5 maps today @.@ 02:17:968 (3) - ) ;W; okay

Good luck and text me once its updated !
Topic Starter
Gero

qkenan wrote:

Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
For m4m ~ _(:з」∠)_ Hi Hi :3

General

  1. All diffs do good job~
Thanks ;^;


XinDecent

  1. 00:28:220 (6) - Split it into two one-beat slider?Nearly no moving for three beats not very comfortable
  2. 00:55:310 (5) - Slider of arc not fit.Shape it like 00:54:615 (3) -
I like how it was, No Changes

Good luck~
Thanks For The Mod =3
Topic Starter
Gero

Wafu wrote:

Black - Suggestion
Blue - I highly recommend you to fix this
Red - Unrankable

[Easy]

00:15:023 (4) - Move this note on 187;248 to be on the same line as 00:13:634 (2). You've made it as I suggested now in another part, so you could follow it. fixed
00:06:340 (5) - Since 00:04:604 (2,4) are on the same line, 00:06:340 (5) could be on 228;246 to be on the same line with 00:05:646 (3) fixed
00:25:442 (3) - CTRL+G to follow 00:26:831 (1) better way, it breaks flow
no changes i like this
00:26:831 (1) - If you followed ^, move it down to don't break snap ^
00:32:388 (1) - Move red point on 341;233. It looks weird when is this shape so sharp at the center.
I had the red dot formed a curve so well groomed
00:34:125 (2,3) - To make better blanket, move 00:34:125 (2) - on 283;168 and 00:34:472 (3) on 205;127
circles by slider change
00:36:556 (3,4,5) - This would fit better with slider like 00:35:514 (2) also with repeat, becuase if you listen music carefuly you'll notice that these notes feels to be a bit connected with some noise.
nuu! if the instrumental tracks are good 3 strokes
00:50:448 (1) - Move on 185;198 to make perfect stack with 00:48:364 (3) ok fixed
00:53:226 (1) - Move on 252;252 ^ fixed
00:54:268 (2) - Move on 300;181 to make perfect blanket and better distance between objects fixed
00:59:478 (4,3) - Avoid overlap by moving 01:01:562 (3) up. fixed

[Normal]

00:07:035 (1) - Avoid overlap with 00:05:299 (3) by rotating 00:07:035 (1) no changes
00:31:346 (4) - Move on 278;62 to make constant distance between 00:30:304 (2,3,4) I do not understand that if I move the note to the distance indicated distace break the snap
00:36:556 (4,5) - Move the slider on 00:36:556 and add repeat. The same reason as on easy. no changes I like this
01:04:340 (3) - Move on 285;291 to make perfect stack. Fixed
01:39:070 (2,3) - Make slider from these because it's hard for new players to beat accurately pattern with redtick notes. not think it is very tough to understand so no changes
02:16:579 (2,3,4) - Better with CTRL+J, then moving it somewhere, because it breaks flow this way. I would like it very separate notes
02:22:136 (2,3,4,5) - ^ ^

Thanks You So Much For The Mod
Good map though. At least eLtXXx's Insanity needs to improve hitsounds very much!
Wafu
"All fixed" ... Please, don't lie to me. I always recheck a map after I modded it, but I see no change there. I just hate lazy mappers which almost totally ignores the mods. I'll appreciate if you'll answer this.
Topic Starter
Gero

Wafu wrote:

"All fixed" ... Please, don't lie to me. I always recheck a map after I modded it, but I see no change there. I just hate lazy mappers which almost totally ignores the mods. I'll appreciate if you'll answer this.

I made changes, so please do not place offensive words like "i hate" that are of more thanks, I answered the mod OKAY!
Wafu

Gero wrote:

Wafu wrote:

"All fixed" ... Please, don't lie to me. I always recheck a map after I modded it, but I see no change there. I just hate lazy mappers which almost totally ignores the mods. I'll appreciate if you'll answer this.

I made changes, so please do not place offensive words like "i hate" that are of more thanks, I answered the mod OKAY!
I haven't found them, at least do not lie to mr with: "all fixed" if i could not find anything fixed.
I will recheck it tomorrow to know if im blind so I cant see the change or if it is not my problem XD
BounceBabe
00:30:999 (1) - Spacing, too big jump imo, make it a little closer

not changed yet
Topic Starter
Gero

BounceBabe wrote:

00:30:999 (1) - Spacing, too big jump imo, make it a little closer


not changed yet

Oh Thanks BounceBabe Fixed~
BounceBabe
When thats fixed i will put you on his list then, good luck
Topic Starter
Gero

BounceBabe wrote:

When thats fixed i will put you on his list then, good luck

Oh Oh Thanks \^W^/!
jericho2442
Easy
clap spam at the start of this map feels waaay too much
00:40:723 (1) - remove new combo, its pointless
00:46:280 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - what part of the music are these combos following? they seem to be following none....dont like that
02:11:023 (1) - remove the new combo from here and put it onto 02:12:064 (2) - to follow your own pattern

normal
01:25:873 (1) - remove new combo, breaking your pattern
01:43:238 (1) - remove new combo
01:46:016 (1) - same again, this combo spam is not good
01:58:519 (3) - either add a new combo here or remove the one at 01:55:393 (1) - because you are making inconsistant patterns

XinDecent
00:08:772 (1,2) - this jump doesnt suit, song doesnt ask for it at all, using normal spacing at this point flows much better
00:16:760 (1) - remove new combo, your breaking your own pattern
00:33:430 (6,7,8) - spacing error, 7,8 are too close, they need more space like 6,7
00:34:993 (1,2,3) - why do these have different spacings? its no a jump and just doesnt really make much sense
00:53:574 (6,7,8) - to follow your pattern these should be a jump pattern, give them the same spacing as you used the two times before
01:19:621 (1) - remove the combo from here and put it onto the next note to follow your own pattern which currently you are breaking
01:24:484 (1,2) - again this jump doesnt suit, it doesnt follow the style you have been using for this part and seems to come out of nowhere, it breaks the flow and feels wrong to play, it should be normal spacing like the other times, i advise to remake this pattern
01:39:070 (4) - put a new combo here and remove it from the note after, it follows the music better
01:43:238 (1) - again remove combo, combo spam = bad
02:01:992 (5,6) - didnt suit having these slider ends overlapping and the spacing is also wrong, i advise to remake the 6 slider, making it more like this
02:13:106 (5,6) - same comment here too

eLtXXx's Insanity
main problem you have in this map is constantly going against your own style which keeps breaking the flow badly, sooo lets help that out

00:07:209 (8,1) - not a good unexpected jump, its the softest part of the song with no jumps then suddenly this, felt out of place so i advise to remake as normal spacing
00:07:903 (2,3,4,5) - no, just no, remake this whole pattern, in a way which follows atleast some kind of spacing and is readable. this is not rankable
00:12:939 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - whole section feels out of place, its just a jump every note, yet for all the times the song does this again its not like this. it really breaks the flow and plays bad, again remap this section so that it follows the style your using after it.
00:22:490 (5) - extend the spacing on this note to follow the rest of the pattern
00:25:095 - add a note here so that it follows your pattern
00:29:610 (5) - new combo
00:44:891 (1,1) - remove combo spam
00:45:933 (1,2,3,4) - again this pattern is too dramatic to suit how you have mapped all the rest of this section. tone it down so it follows the rest
01:00:172 (1,2,3) - (1,2) is 1/2 timing yet bigger spacing than (2,3) thats not good, respace this combo so that the spacing makes sense to the timing. 2,3 needs to be a bigger spacing than 1,2 so decrease the spacing between 1,2
01:23:094 (1,2,3,4) - level out the spacing between these
01:43:238 (1) - remove combo
01:46:016 (1) - again
01:48:795 (1) - again
01:52:615 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - same thing again, tone it down, its too much for alll the other patterns within the whole section. since this whole section is a copy paste from the 1st chorus, just apply the same things i said for that chorus again here
02:22:136 (1,2,3) - again unfitting jump, give normal spacing

overall just try to not break your own maps flow so much, dont think about trying to make a hard pattern, think about making the pattern what suits the song the best
Topic Starter
Gero

jericho2442 wrote:

Easy
clap spam at the start of this map feels waaay too much we are following the claps that sound in the instrumental
00:40:723 (1) - remove new combo, its pointless Fixed~
00:46:280 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - what part of the music are these combos following? they seem to be following none....dont like that I am following in this part of the voice, but i fix this part
02:11:023 (1) - remove the new combo from here and put it onto 02:12:064 (2) - to follow your own pattern Fixed~

normal
01:25:873 (1) - remove new combo, breaking your pattern Fixed~
01:43:238 (1) - remove new combo Fixed~
01:46:016 (1) - same again, this combo spam is not good Fixed~
01:58:519 (3) - either add a new combo here or remove the one at 01:55:393 (1) - because you are making inconsistant patterns Fixed~

XinDecent
00:08:772 (1,2) - this jump doesnt suit, song doesnt ask for it at all, using normal spacing at this point flows much better Fixed~
00:16:760 (1) - remove new combo, your breaking your own pattern Fixed~
00:33:430 (6,7,8) - spacing error, 7,8 are too close, they need more space like 6,7 Fixed~
00:34:993 (1,2,3) - why do these have different spacings? its no a jump and just doesnt really make much sense Fixed~
00:53:574 (6,7,8) - to follow your pattern these should be a jump pattern, give them the same spacing as you used the two times before Fixed~
01:19:621 (1) - remove the combo from here and put it onto the next note to follow your own pattern which currently you are breaking Fixed~
01:24:484 (1,2) - again this jump doesnt suit, it doesnt follow the style you have been using for this part and seems to come out of nowhere, it breaks the flow and feels wrong to play, it should be normal spacing like the other times, i advise to remake this pattern Fixed~
01:39:070 (4) - put a new combo here and remove it from the note after, it follows the music better Fixed~
01:43:238 (1) - again remove combo, combo spam = bad Fixed~
02:01:992 (5,6) - didnt suit having these slider ends overlapping and the spacing is also wrong, i advise to remake the 6 slider, making it more like this Fixed~
02:13:106 (5,6) - same comment here too Fixed~

eLtXXx's Insanity
main problem you have in this map is constantly going against your own style which keeps breaking the flow badly, sooo lets help that out

00:07:209 (8,1) - not a good unexpected jump, its the softest part of the song with no jumps then suddenly this, felt out of place so i advise to remake as normal spacing Fixed~
00:07:903 (2,3,4,5) - no, just no, remake this whole pattern, in a way which follows atleast some kind of spacing and is readable. this is not rankable Fixed~
00:12:939 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - whole section feels out of place, its just a jump every note, yet for all the times the song does this again its not like this. it really breaks the flow and plays bad, again remap this section so that it follows the style your using after it. Fixed~
00:22:490 (5) - extend the spacing on this note to follow the rest of the pattern Fixed~
00:25:095 - add a note here so that it follows your pattern Fixed~
00:29:610 (5) - new combo Fixed~
00:44:891 (1,1) - remove combo spam Fixed~
00:45:933 (1,2,3,4) - again this pattern is too dramatic to suit how you have mapped all the rest of this section. tone it down so it follows the rest Fixed~
01:00:172 (1,2,3) - (1,2) is 1/2 timing yet bigger spacing than (2,3) thats not good, respace this combo so that the spacing makes sense to the timing. 2,3 needs to be a bigger spacing than 1,2 so decrease the spacing between 1,2 Fixed~
01:23:094 (1,2,3,4) - level out the spacing between these Fixed~
01:43:238 (1) - remove combo Fixed~
01:46:016 (1) - again Fixed~
01:48:795 (1) - again Fixed~
01:52:615 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - same thing again, tone it down, its too much for alll the other patterns within the whole section. since this whole section is a copy paste from the 1st chorus, just apply the same things i said for that chorus again here Fixed~
02:22:136 (1,2,3) - again unfitting jump, give normal spacing Fixed~

overall just try to not break your own maps flow so much, dont think about trying to make a hard pattern, think about making the pattern what suits the song the best
Thanks For The Mod Jericho n.n!
Topic Starter
Gero
;_;
XinCrin
:o?
indyinyou
mod4mod

[Normal]
00:18:149 : remove NC
00:18:496 : NC here
00:48:711 : remove NC
00:49:059 : NC here
01:24:136 : add note ? / it up to you :)
01:39:070 : i think use silder to 01:39:591

[XinDecent]
00:07:903 : remove whistle
01:06:945 : try move to under silder 01:06:771 and add fin https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/589892
02:03:381 : add note ? / it up to you
02:03:555 : ^
02:14:495 : ^
02:14:669 : ^

[Insane]

00:54:615 : this silder end at 00:54:789 and note 00:54:963
01:06:771 : remove this silder and add note and 01:06:945 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/589899
01:18:927 - 01:29:346 : i think you Should make whistle hitsound like XinDecent diff it good better 8-)
02:03:555 : add note ?

they're just suggestions

sry my poor english

BG so cute ;) Star
Topic Starter
Gero

indyinyou wrote:

mod4mod

[Normal]
00:18:149 : remove NC Fixed
00:18:496 : NC here Fixed
00:48:711 : remove NC clearly heard the word change here so no changes
00:49:059 : NC here ^
01:24:136 : add note ? / it up to you :) Ohhh I see O: Fixed
01:39:070 : i think use silder to 01:39:591 Nuu i like this :<, No changes

[XinDecent]
00:07:903 : remove whistle Fixed
01:06:945 : try move to under silder 01:06:771 and add fin https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/589892 oh i don't like that
02:03:381 : add note ? / it up to you ^
02:03:555 : ^ ^
02:14:495 : ^ ^
02:14:669 : ^ ^

[Insane]

00:54:615 : this silder end at 00:54:789 and note 00:54:963 Fixed!
01:06:771 : remove this silder and add note and 01:06:945 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/589899 nuu i like this >< no changes
01:18:927 - 01:29:346 : i think you Should make whistle hitsound like XinDecent diff it good better 8-) ^
02:03:555 : add note ? no I do not like how it sounds with no added a note there

they're just suggestions Thanks for the mod indyinyou :3

sry my poor english No problem

BG so cute ;) Star Ohh Thanks *·*
HabiHolic
Hi~ m4m~~

[Easy]
00:25:442 (3) - Urge gun like the picture below?


01:38:723 (1) - To repeat that slide

do not see any particularly pointed to ^ ^
good diff~

[Normal]
Not normal and I do not have much difficulty difference...;;
00:59:130 (5) - Urge gun like the picture below?


01:22:052 (2) - Circle 2
01:24:484 (1) - ^
01:25:873 (4) - ^

good~

[XinDecent]

none.. good.. map...

[eLtXXx's Insanity]

none.. Perfect!!

good Beatmap star~~!!!
meiikyuu
hello, m4m ^^

Easy
  1. 00:13:634 (2,3,4) - maybe you can try to align these 3 notes on the center of the y-axis somehow ~ it doesn't matter too much i guess though
  2. 01:05:382 (1) - blanket more neater around 01:04:687 (3) - by adjusting the 2nd point a bit
  3. 01:08:508 - you should drag the break to here :P it has a nice effect ^^
  4. 01:21:358 (2) - make neater curve around previous slider? make symmetrical basically if you can
  5. 01:24:484 (1) - move last point to x:368 y:288
  6. 01:39:765 (2) - move to x:220 y:100
Normal
  1. 01:08:508 - same as Easy diff., drag break if you did it at easy (applies to other diffs too ~)
  2. 01:51:573 (5) - why not move to center of the axis xD, looks neater
XinDecent
  1. 00:18:496 (3) - i made a better curve for you here if you want (code is in spoiler)
    SPOILER

    224,188,18496,2,0,P|284:224|292:308,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  2. 01:07:118 (6) - add finish
eLtXXx's Insanity
  1. 00:07:209 (8) - one grid to left so that (7) curves around it neater. Also so that you can create a better triangle pattern
  2. 01:03:298 (3) - imo it would flow much better if this was placed below 01:02:603 (1) - , rather than above it ~
  3. 01:24:484 (1,2) - you could try to horizontal flip 01:24:136 (4) - and having these 2 notes at this position instead so you can create a perfect geometris shape with 01:23:094 (1,2,3,4,1) -
nice job ^^ gl
neonat
Didn't really find anything to mod. Possibly too short for any kudosu haha. Anyways these are my suggestions. (From modding queue)

XinDecent

00:10:161 (1) - shift the spinner to 00:10:334, end it at the same spot. Add a circle at 00:10:161
00:33:430 (6) - new combo?
02:03:381 - maybe add a slider here, end at 02:03:555
Topic Starter
Gero

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi~ m4m~~

[Easy]
00:25:442 (3) - Urge gun like the picture below?


01:38:723 (1) - To repeat that slide

do not see any particularly pointed to ^ ^
good diff~

[Normal]
Not normal and I do not have much difficulty difference...;;
00:59:130 (5) - Urge gun like the picture below?


01:22:052 (2) - Circle 2
01:24:484 (1) - ^
01:25:873 (4) - ^

good~

[XinDecent]

none.. good.. map...

[eLtXXx's Insanity]

none.. Perfect!!

good Beatmap star~~!!!
Thanks For The Mod n3n!
Topic Starter
Gero

meiikyuu wrote:

hello, m4m ^^

Easy
  1. 00:13:634 (2,3,4) - maybe you can try to align these 3 notes on the center of the y-axis somehow ~ it doesn't matter too much i guess though
  2. 01:05:382 (1) - blanket more neater around 01:04:687 (3) - by adjusting the 2nd point a bit Fixed
  3. 01:08:508 - you should drag the break to here :P it has a nice effect ^^ Fixed
    Fixed
  4. 01:21:358 (2) - make neater curve around previous slider? make symmetrical basically if you can Fixed
  5. 01:24:484 (1) - move last point to x:368 y:288 Fixed
  6. 01:39:765 (2) - move to x:220 y:100 Fixed
Normal
  1. 01:08:508 - same as Easy diff., drag break if you did it at easy (applies to other diffs too ~) Fixed
  2. 01:51:573 (5) - why not move to center of the axis xD, looks neater
Fixed

XinDecent
  1. 00:18:496 (3) - i made a better curve for you here if you want (code is in spoiler) Fixed
    SPOILER
    Fixed
    224,188,18496,2,0,P|284:224|292:308,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  2. 01:07:118 (6) - add finish
Fixed

eLtXXx's Insanity
  1. 00:07:209 (8) - one grid to left so that (7) curves around it neater. Also so that you can create a better triangle pattern Fixed
  2. 01:03:298 (3) - imo it would flow much better if this was placed below 01:02:603 (1) - , rather than above it ~ Fixed
  3. 01:24:484 (1,2) - you could try to horizontal flip 01:24:136 (4) - and having these 2 notes at this position instead so you can create a perfect geometris shape with 01:23:094 (1,2,3,4,1) - Fixed
nice job ^^ gl
Thanks For The Awesome MOD! :3
Topic Starter
Gero

neonat wrote:

Didn't really find anything to mod. Possibly too short for any kudosu haha. Anyways these are my suggestions. (From modding queue)

XinDecent

00:10:161 (1) - shift the spinner to 00:10:334, end it at the same spot. Add a circle at 00:10:161 i dont like no changes :3
00:33:430 (6) - new combo? Fixed
Thanks For The Mod
L_P


[eltXX's Insane]
00:10:161 (1,2,3,4,5) - here, the music is building up and i feel like you can make all short sliders here, so instead of 00:10:855 (3) - this long one..make a short one
00:34:993 (1,2) - dont you feel that 00:35:167 - here is the strong beat..? slider ends here sounds awkward to me, swap slider 1 and note 2 would be better :D
00:36:903 (5) - head cancel finish, dont spam imo. if you wanna keep it, 00:37:598 (6) - this has to be a finish as well. (4 finishes in a row makes more sense..)
00:49:059 (1,2) - these 2 heads finish, in responce to 00:46:280 (2,3) -
00:51:663 (1,3) - add finishes here on white tick ^
00:54:615 (2,3) - ^
01:00:172 (1,2) - ^
01:02:951 (2,3) - ^
01:18:927 (1,2,3,4,1) - could do some antijump or star pattern here, feel like now is too ordinary starting.
01:24:484 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ i would suggest antijumps http://puu.sh/1Wewc
add some finish at last kiai as well~

[XinDecent]
00:05:299 (5) - here...not that pretty, blanket the note well it might looks better http://puu.sh/1Weyp
00:19:191 (5) - either make a straight one or blanket last slider's tail
00:37:250 (7,8,1) - looks messy.. blanket note 8 with slider 7 plz
01:36:292 (1) - place at x:300 y:148 or something like that? now it looks like failing to blanket 01:36:118 (3) - haha

[Normal]
00:09:466 (6,7) - make a slider? like slider 5, and ctrl + h something
01:08:594 - the break starts at wrong point... should be at 01:08:508 -

thats all
the map has no major mistakes itself however some arrangement is quite messy.
The map does not really makes others love it but the song is really charming <3
good luck~
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