merchat7 wrote:
Hi, M4M.
[General]
No problem Yay :3
[Easy]
I won't nazi anything, this is already really good. I feel blanketting can be improve a little through. Also for stuff like 00:12:939 (1,2) - I prefer if you do the blanket the same way as 00:16:412 (3,4) - but it's very minor and not necessary. Fixed
[Normal]
01:39:070 (2,3,4) - This rhythm is hard to catch, why not do repeating slider instead? Similar feel, but much easier to play http://puu.sh/1XDto Fixed
Good as well. wii \O3O/
[Hard]
00:03:215 (1,2,3) - Adjust this a bit [break spacing for (3)] for a nicer looking pattern? http://puu.sh/1XDCy I don't like sorry, no changes
176,236,3215,6,2,P|144:216|100:220,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
232,288,3562,2,0,P|220:324|232:368,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,288,3909,1,8,0:0:0
00:08:772 (1,2,3) - Can be clean up a bit, use my code http://puu.sh/1XDIj Fixed
108,112,8772,6,0,P|64:128|48:160,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
56,236,9119,2,0,P|71:263|115:279,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
132,200,9466,2,0,P|184:156|184:68,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:12:939 (3) - Blanket this with (1), looks cleaner. Fixed
234,311,12939,2,0,P|182:265|193:182,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
Move (4) to x:260 y:140.
00:26:658 (5) - I find it better for you to stack it at begin of 00:26:831 (1) - Fixed
00:38:466 (2) - I prefer the flow when ctrl+J http://puu.sh/1XDQd Fixed
01:02:777 (2) - Same as 00:26:658. Fixed
01:05:035 (8) - I don't really like this slider shape to be honest, really think this look better http://puu.sh/1XDVP Fixed
360,148,65035,2,0,P|428:128|440:44,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:30:735 (3,4,1,2) - I think you would feel the music more here if these note follow the accent of vocal, so something like this. http://puu.sh/1XDZX. Notice that 01:30:214 (1,2,3) - and 01:31:603 (1,2,3) - are the same rhythm. I think this gives a nicer effect then following the drums. unnecessary no changes
01:36:292 (1) - Align the begin and end point on the y axis please. And move 01:36:118 (3,2) - to x:256 y:200. Use this code for the slider if you want.
172,144,96292,6,2,P|256:73|340:144,2,240,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
unnecessary no changes
01:41:849 (1) - Finish instead of whistle at begin is unnecessary here whistle would break patterns
02:04:597 (4) - Move a grid right for better blanketting with (3) Fixed
02:14:842 (1) - I feel a little too, close move a bit more to right? So for example, 02:14:842 (1) - Place at x:432 y:320 02:15:016 (2) - Place at x:468 y:248
02:15:711 (4) - Turn grid snaps off, move to x:402 y:140. Better blanketting. I like this I do not always blankets
02:20:747 (3) - Consider finish at begin unnecessary here
02:22:136 (5) - You did whistle at begin for 02:19:357 (4) - why not here? Fixed
02:23:525 (3) - Consider finish at begin unnecessary here
This diff could use some polishing. Modding can do quite a bit, but self modding is recommended here. Try to polish some pattern in this diff.
[Insane]
- Kiai time, if you want to use soft sampleset, you need a custom hitsound to follow the bass drum or hitsound is too soft. Here's a custom bass drum sound I used for one of my beatmap http://puu.sh/1XExT. Be sure to change timing point to s:c1. Put it on every white tick and do this for every part during kiai time Nice sound
00:12:245 - Hitsounding sound too soft to me, do 50% volume here and 00:12:245 (1,2) - Do drum addition, add claps http://puu.sh/1XEgN Fixed
00:32:562 and 00:32:909 - I think you can make a funner pattern if you add hit circles here. Just keep distant snap for placement http://puu.sh/1XEkQ
00:40:376 (6) - You forgot finish at end Fixed
00:46:628 (3) - Please add clap as well on this spot Fixed
01:30:040 (1,2,3,4) - Sampleset normal for these notes. Fixed
01:30:735 - 01:38:723 - Use the custom bass drum sound here as well since you did soft-sampleset here and bass drum plays here. Fixed
01:41:849 (1) - Add finish Fixed
01:43:238 (4) - Add whistle for piano Fixed
01:46:016 (5) - Whistle at begin, same reason. Fixed
01:49:837 (6,1) - Whistle on (6) and begin of (1) for piano. Fixed
02:19:357 (1) - You add finish on all other parts, why not here? If you don't like how it sound, you shouldn't' be add it on 02:22:136 (1) - for example.
Fixed
You need to add a custom bass drum or increase the volume of the soft-sampleset section when bass drum plays. Soft-hitclap is too soft at 60% volume. This is really important, the only hitsound I can really hear is the finish, all other hitsound sound too soft and hitsounding sound empty because of this.
Try to polish Hard some more. Be sure to follow my hitsound suggestions for Insane, I consider it a pretty big issue which should be taken care of. I really like Easy & Normal, good job there.
Some issues, but main reason I cannot star is that you haven't star any other people map. This breaks my starring policy, if you mod a good map, please give a star.
Good luck!