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S.I.D-Sound Feat. Elika - Butterfly Sculpture

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Topic Starter
HelloSCV
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013년 1월 6일 일요일 at 오후 3:49:08

Artist: S.I.D-Sound Feat. Elika
Title: Butterfly Sculpture
BPM: 94
Filesize: 5271kb
Play Time: 04:05
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.37 stars, 354 notes)
  2. Normal (1.76 stars, 216 notes)
Download: S.I.D-Sound Feat. Elika - Butterfly Sculpture
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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11/8 Beatmap uploaded

Normal = Done
Hard = Done

:D
Guy
hi~ from your m4m queue

 

Normal


 ● 00:21:541 (4) - 1grid up
 ● 00:45:477 (3) - like this slider form?
 ● 01:03:350 (5,6,1) - this notes placement is not straight. plz move

 

Hard


 ● OD+1
 ● 01:34:467 (6) - move to x:100 y:296? make flow.
 ● 01:47:392 (1) - 1grid down. ugly distance.
 ● 02:17:392 (1) - difficult slider because this slider is hide by 02:16:435 (2) -

That's all~ nice map!
good luck ;)
Topic Starter
HelloSCV
Fixed thx!!!
Yumih
Hi! I'm modding from your M4M Queue!

I really liked the song, it's very relaxing (even though I can't understand Korean xD)!

Ok! Let's see...

Normal
  1. 00:22:499 - Add a note here? I think it sounds really good! You can either make it as Auto+Finish or Auto+Clap! (Personally, I prefer Auto+Finish, since it follows the background sound of the song)
  2. 00:24:414 (2) - Why is this anti-jump? I think it's not really necessary.
  3. 00:46:754 (4) - This note is too low. Whenever you get a 300 hit, the 300 mark will get cut by the window. Try making it a little bit higher. ^^
  4. 01:35:903 (2,5) - ^
  5. 01:49:307 (3) - ^
  6. 04:01:435 (2) - ^
  7. 00:57:605 (5) - Add whistle here?
  8. 01:49:307 (3) - ^
  9. 03:51:860 (3) - ^ (To follow what you did on previous parts of the song that were just like this)
Hard

This difficult follows the vocal well, but that makes a lot of "Blank spaces". I'll try to tell you some examples where you can fill those blank spaces. I think you should leave them blank just if the song has a little "pause" and asks for it.
  1. 00:22:499 - Same as the Normal difficult! How about adding a note here with Auto+Finish/Auto+Clap?
  2. 00:27:286 - Add a note here?It feels like something is missing here when playing. (At least, in my opinion. But try adding it! It follows the background drum of the song!)
  3. 00:45:158 - How about adding a note here?
  4. 00:45:158 - ^ (You could place it in the same spot as 00:44:520 (3) so that you don't have to replace every note after this one)
  5. 00:48:988 - ^ (I think it sounds good)
  6. 00:52:818 - Feels like something is missing, add a note here?
  7. 00:55:371 - You could place a note here, I think. (Ok, I'll stop here with the "add a note" thing, so that the mod won't be resumed to it. Take what I said as base to fill some other blank spaces!)
  8. 01:15:477 (3,4) - Even so (continuation of the previous item): Don't add a note between these notes, they sound good like this. (don't add notes between other notes of this type, too! xD)
  9. 01:02:392 (3,4,5) - How about making these notes more aligned? I think it will beautify things! (Don't worry about me. You can ignore these if you want, it's just that I like making things symmetric! xD *Feeling like Death The Kid from Soul Eater*)
  10. 01:13:882 (5,6,1) - ^
  11. 01:34:307 (5,6,1) - ^
  12. 01:59:839 (1,2,3) - ^ (Ha, ha! I'm stopping here with my fussiness :lol: If you are going to do this, just search for Streams like these)
Other than that, I don't think there's anything else I can complain about! I really enjoyed modding your map! I hope it gets ranked soon! ^^
Topic Starter
HelloSCV
Fixed some! thank you for your mod!
GugUCorn
M4M!

[Normal]

00:17:393 (5) - New Combo
00:18:031 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:03:350 (1) - New Combo
01:03:988 (3) - Remove New Combo
01:06:541 (6) - New Combo
01:33:988 (5) - ^
01:34:626 (1) - Remove New Combo
02:09:733 (1) - Finish end slider
02:23:775 (1) - New Combo
02:24:733 (1) - ^
02:25:690 (1) - Remove New Combo

[Hard]

+1 Circle Size

00:24:254 (4) - 뭔가 뜬금없네요 00:24:414 여기로 옮겨주세요
00:40:212 (3) - 00:39:733 (2)의 슬라이드 끝에다가 겹쳐주세요
00:41:648 (1) - Finish
01:19:467 (1) - 01:20:903 이 때 끝나게
01:21:860 (1) - 첫 부분은 01:21:860 (1), 끝부분은 01:23:809
01:34:307 (1) - New Combo
01:34:626 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:36:541 (4) - New Combo
01:36:860 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:49:307 (4) - New Combo
01:49:626 (1) - Remove New Combo
02:19:946 (4,5) - 4번 노트(x:460 y:184) 5번 노트(x:472 y:104)로 옮겨주세요
02:41:009 (1) - 02:42:605 이 때 끝나게
02:43:563 (1) - 02:42:924 이 때 시작해서 02:45:485 이때 끝나게 해주세요
Topic Starter
HelloSCV
죄송하지만 고칠만한게 없네요;
Nothing fixed :(
69653863
Mod request from our queue ヽ( ・∀・)ノ
Guide
Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Nice selection of hitsounds owob

Normal
  1. Hmm.. AR -1 to match up SV
  2. 01:32:073 (4,5) - Blanket maybe?
  3. 02:41:009 (1) - Finish?
  4. 04:02:712 (5) - NC?
Hard
  1. Same here, AR -1?
  2. 01:34:467 (6) - x:100 y:288?
  3. 01:56:329 (3,4) - Stack?
  4. 02:17:392 (1) - Ctrl+G? Flows better imo
  5. 02:23:137 (1,2) - Stack?
  6. 02:37:180 (3,4) - Combine into one slider?
  7. 02:56:169 (6) - x:380 y:316?
  8. 03:56:967 (1,2) - Blanket maybe?
Beautiful song, flawless beatmap, nice hitsounds, and good flow. HelloSCV pro mapping m(___)m

(╯ ´ ・ω ・`)╯ 彡
Topic Starter
HelloSCV
Haha am i pro mapper?!? That's looks cool xD and your modding skill is pro tooooooooo always nice for me
I'll check it tomorrow and thank you for mod and star both!
HanzeR
Mod from queue

Yo this songs really pretty lol

[General]

Hitsounds in many parts sound really too loud... I would generally avoid using volume 100% especially in relax map like this.
Delete osb, up to you or not /o/

[Hard]
01:09:733 x256 y 308
01:09:254 copy paste 01:09:094 (1) - and control g

00:36:860 (4,5) - make these not touching 00:36:541 (3) -

01:18:031 (4) - rotate ~110 degrees and reposition imo, looks ugly as is

01:52:977 (4) - this blanket could be improved ... there are lots of others like this that could look better :o

Hard to find anything to fix here, map is really good and I cant find anything else wrong lol. Sorry I couldn't be more helpful ><
Topic Starter
HelloSCV
Thank you! fixed almost :D
and .osb deleted ~
jieusieu


[Normal]
껄껄 봐도 모르겠군요

[Hard]
00:24:733 (1) - (4)의 꼬랑지를 감싸주세요
01:37:818 (3,4) - 이렇게?
02:00:158 (3) - ~모양이 좋을것 같아요
02:11:648 (4) - (2)와의 연계성 + 盧오란 (3)을 감쌈
02:50:265 (3) - (1)을 감쌈!
02:51:860 (2) - 사소하지만 (3)의 테두리를 따라
03:49:946 (1,2) - (1)과의 합!체!
Topic Starter
HelloSCV
살짝 고쳤어요 감사합니다! 저도 곧 모딩해 드릴꼐요~
Sanjenin Nagi
껄껄 할일없는데 태고만들어도됩니까.

ps. 두명의 산타빌리스
Topic Starter
HelloSCV

Sanjenin Nagi wrote:

껄껄 할일없는데 태고만들어도됩니까.

ps. 두명의 산타빌리스
글쎄요 망할놈의 랭크 규정때문에 2개를 넣어야해서. 그리고 태고맵하고 트러블도 있었던지라...
좀더 생각해볼꼐요
Gloria Guard
Hi~ HelloSCV

From my modding queue !

[General]

offset 2712 -> 2720 change plz :)


[Normal]

00:15:485 (3) 앞에 2번노트와 맞게 1그리드 Up

02:27:613 (3) 1그리드 down

03:33:358 (5) 이 노트 지우고 짧은 슬라하나 겹치시는건 어떤가요?


[Hard]

00:29:520 요부분 노트추가하면 좋을거같네요

01:05:265 (4) 노트 제거하시고 앞의 반복슬라 땡겨놓고 01:06:222 에 노트 추가하시는것도
좋은박자 인거같아요

01:46:116 노트추가?

01:51:222 ^

02:17:392 (1) 이건 헷갈릴수있겠네요 다른곳에 두는게 좋을거같아요

03:53:173 (2) 슬라이더 머리에 크랩


시드 사운드 노래는 여전히 좋네요 ^^~ 랭크되길 바랍니다

Good Luck !
Topic Starter
HelloSCV
수정 했습니다 감사합니다!
Fixed thx~~
Hysteresis_old
Hi~HelloSCV ! From my queue^^
Thank you Request !

Normal

01:34:626 (1) - If it bends on the left?
02:01:116 (2) - 5 grid up?
03:28:882 - add note?
03:41:967 (1) - Remove New Combo?
03:42:286 (2) - New Combo?

Hard

01:45:956 (4) - 1 grid up?

01:51:063 (4) - 1 grid up.1grid left?

03:49:946 (1) - If arrangement like a picture is used?
Good music, nice map set! Good luck ;)
Topic Starter
HelloSCV
Fixed little thx~ xD
KingKrishna
NORMAL
01:38:390(7) make it x 24?
HARD
00:24:094(4) just push it to the white tick or figure out a way to make that look better
01:05:217(4) push it up to y 164
03:27:579 (3) push it up to y 248
03:27:648(4) push it up to y 180 ?

Shot a star ;) nice map
Topic Starter
HelloSCV
Fixed little, thank you for mod and star :D
Entozer
Everything is good for normal! \o/


Hard \o/
SPOILER
01:19:467 (1) - Move to white tick? (Start from 01:19:946 and end in 01:21:222) Because they play bad in mania :<
But if you are following the vocals, Maybe renote the reverse slider here 01:18:031 (4) - so you could start the spinner in 01:19:307

01:39:892 (1) - ^

00:40:212 (3) - Move to x:140 y:256
00:41:009 (4) - x:164 y:120 - They look better this way I think.

03:27:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Increasing volume? :P 80% at note #3, 90% Note #5, 100% Note #7?

03:29:041 (7) - Add note?
03:29:360 (9) - ^

Great map and hitsounds!
Topic Starter
HelloSCV
Fixed thx~~
yanlu
Hi~ M4M via my Mod Queue~ :)

[Hard]
00:38:137 (1,2)- i perfer not stack here,cuz same as 00:36:860 (4)- will confused
00:41:009 (4)- feel some strange..don't know why orz
mabybe vol. too lough or make them 3note here

00:58:563 (4)- no stack
01:00:477- empty..add note?
01:15:797- ^
01:19:467 (1,1)- i don't like 2 spin close...chane other way maybe ;w;?
01:27:286- cuz is in kiai time.. i think empty here too
01:39:892 (1,1)- 2 spin same as i say ;I
02:09:733 (1)- i think you are follow the vocal do this..
but i think add a note 02:10:371- will more fit ;3

02:15:158- add?
02:17:392 (1)- don't stack =A= put other place~
02:17:392 (1)- add?
02:35:105- add note here maybe w
02:37:499- ^
02:41:009 (1,1)- 2 spin

03:06:860- to 03:24:094- why rest?
you can keep mapping here D: this rest too long!!
03:44:839 (1,1)- 2 spin
03:52:818- add a note cuz feel empty in kiai time
03:56:648- ^
that's all I think~nothing else can mod!;3

change some spin and empty place will be a good mapset!

good luck 'w'/
Topic Starter
HelloSCV
Fixed thank you xD
XinCrin
Hi HelloSCV

[Normal]

Mapping

  1. 00:20:584 (3) Hey ! this flows bad . In my opinion you should move this slider to x:436 y:180 then move this slider 00:21:541 (4) to x:384 y:48 , is better imo
  2. 01:09:094 (1) Move to x:216 y:284 If you want to create a better blanket with (5)
  3. 02:24:733 (6) Move this slider 2 grids down but i think that the flow is a little bad . It would be better if copies 02:23:775 (5) then CTRL + H and CTRL + G . You move this slider to x:444 y:316 and fix the spacing with the following notes, is better imo
  4. 02:28:243 (4) Move this slider to x:328 y:124 to create a better triangle, if that was your intention
Hitsounds

  1. 01:44:839 (1) Put a Finish in the beginning of the slider. Besides following the music also put him in the diff. Hard, so have a consistency with the other diff
[Hard]

Mapping

  1. 00:53:137 (4) This place feels very empty in my opinion, alsO following the music would be nice to use a small stream triple
  2. 02:01:435 (5) This blanket really is a bit ugly. I would recommend that you use the slider creation system with only three points
  3. 02:09:733 (1,2,3) In the slow parts are using the spacing of 0.9x, and I see that here you increased to 1.0x. I would recommend that you keep your spacing of 0.9x in these three notes. Not bad but it would be better to keep a consistency
  4. 02:14:839 (4) Same as 00:53:137 (4) . Use a triple stream because follow the music, and plays better in my opinion
  5. 02:17:392 (1) Put a slider on another in the same place play badly, in my opinion. Consider move this slider to another place, respecting the spacing would be better imo
  6. 03:24:414 (1) This slider ends in a red tick and do not quite understand . I have a better idea . Make this spinner finished in 03:26:329 with a clap then put a circle here 03:26:967 with a Finish , is better imo
  1. 01:02:392 (3,4,5) The way you put the slider with the stream flows very bad in my opinion . Maybe try to give a more interesting and look better
  2. 01:03:350 (1,2,3,4,1) The same as I explained above. I feel you put the circles very random. Maybe if you do it a better way . Maybe you could do a straight stream, flows better in my opinion
Hitsounds

  1. 01:21:860 (1) Listen the instrumental of the music on this spinner. Do you hear the beat? . In conclusion put a clap on the spinner because it sounds much better than the whistle, and also follow the music
  2. 02:03:350 (1) The same as I explained above . Put a clap in this spinner osunds better and follow the music

    The diff. not bad but need to improve your blankets
  • ~ O.O ~

  1. The diffs. not bad but I've noticed that there is a great inconsistency with your combos patterns in diff. hard to normal. In the diff. Hard, put most combos in red tick, but you put them in the normal whites. Even if you used 1/2

Good Luck ~ :)
Topic Starter
HelloSCV
Fixed almost :D great mod thank you!
Hinsvar
Hi there.

Mod.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General
  1. 03:29:520 - 04:05:265 - Considering the song becomes more energetic/louder here, use 95% volume?
>Normal
  1. ...This feels like an Easy diff, to be honest. It's most likely because of the BPM, but still... I recommend AR+1 and OD+1.
  2. 00:32:073 - Emphasize the sound here by adding whistle? It's there on Hard, anyway.
  3. 01:53:775 (3) - ^. (Head and tail)
  4. 02:38:137 (4) - Clap to emphasize the vocal?
  5. 02:58:563 (4) - ^
  6. 03:41:967 (1) - ^
  7. 04:02:392 (4) - ^
Hard looks fine.

Sorry, couldn't find too much things. This map looks fine, seems to be pretty well-mapped, and is almost ready for ranking, IMO... At least, that's my opinion.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Topic Starter
HelloSCV
Fixed thank you :D
it is so hard to find MAT ;( any way thank you again!
ShiroiYume
Thanks for requesting me for mod, but I think that your map is just perfect! And I couldn't mod it at all... Sorry! :(
Topic Starter
HelloSCV

ShiroiYume wrote:

Thanks for requesting me for mod, but I think that your map is just perfect! And I couldn't mod it at all... Sorry! :(
oh.. it's ok i'm glad to take a look at my map xD
thank you!
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