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Zhang Zhongjin - Lan Pi Shu Yu Da Lian Mao

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sherrie__fay
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sherrie__fay
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年4月21日 at 21:33:10

Artist: Zhang Zhongjin
Title: Lan Pi Shu Yu Da Lian Mao
BPM: 159.77
Filesize: 2748kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.55 stars, 78 notes)
  2. Hard (4.75 stars, 194 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 317 notes)
  4. Normal (3.43 stars, 103 notes)
Download: Zhang Zhongjin - Lan Pi Shu Yu Da Lian Mao
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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章中锦 - 蓝皮鼠与大脸猫
very very old chinese cartoon :)
-edit-
12-11-09 MP3 changes(+volume
12-11-18 BG changes(800x600
12-11-28 timing check and fix(thx Niva you helps a lot
13-1-31 resurrect
13-2-2 unicode title changes
13-4-14 resurrect again
Last edited by sherrie__fay , edited 24 times in total.
Scorpiour
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Scorpiour
沙发！板凳！地板！全是咱的！
Strawberry
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Strawberry
前排出售花生瓜子烤蝎薯片大草莓小草莓
a32
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a32
瞎了神曲
Royal Flare
78 posts
Joined December 2009
Royal Flare
KIRA☆~摸摸毛www（恩...以下都是大雾
HP设的有点高...（凹HD的时候好难受ORZ）
00:37:059 1的finish音移到前一组的8上
00:38:843 10的whistle音去掉（其实我感觉这个音一直很刺耳...
01:06:440-01:06:627 换成N的音效去掉clap
01:29:155 4与01:29:906 6同00:38:843
spboxer3
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spboxer3
Normal mod via IRC
萬惡的savelog
21:36  *sherrie__fay is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/189557 Zhang Zhongjin - Lan Pi Shu Yu Da Lian Mao]
21:38 sherrie__fay: 来
21:40 spboxer3: [EASY] 00:08:617 (2,1) - 基本上我不會建議讓reverse和前頭的slider 覆蓋
21:45 spboxer3: 00:10:119 (1,2) -  同樣的 部分覆蓋住了~所以建議改掉
21:45 sherrie__fay: 后边全是..ojz
21:45 sherrie__fay: 好相同的部分都改掉了
21:46 spboxer3: 00:36:402 (1) - [nazi] 雙邊未對稱
21:47 sherrie__fay: 我看下
21:47 spboxer3: 00:43:160 (1,2) - 其實我想問的是...這類的pattern 有點怪 為什麼要stack呢?
21:47 sherrie__fay: 对称了 那个
21:47 sherrie__fay: 不信你拖x轴看下?
21:47 spboxer3: 現在對稱了?
21:48 sherrie__fay: 不啊你放x轴上看下
21:48 sherrie__fay: 两边是平的0 0 
21:48 sherrie__fay: 因为DS没地方摆所以stack【理由充分(死
21:49 spboxer3: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/486476 這是我複製後兩個疊在一起的情況
21:49 spboxer3: ...
21:49 spboxer3: 看看確實是有沒重合的點
21:49 sherrie__fay: 诶……/ \我试试看
21:49 spboxer3: 水平翻轉看看
21:51 spboxer3: 00:49:168 (1,2,3) - 這個嘛... 說實話這樣排真的挺死板的... 如果要排就排點變化吧
21:51 sherrie__fay: 嗯啊
21:52 spboxer3: 01:22:209 (1,2) - 這種slider說實話並不好看 頭尾彎度並不一致 而且也不是特殊形狀
21:52 sherrie__fay: 【中间由点两下改成点三下
21:53 sherrie__fay: easy说实话没梗
21:53 spboxer3: ... 還是可以做的出什麼的啦
21:53 spboxer3: [Normal]
21:53 sherrie__fay: 明明那么欢快的曲子干嘛要做一个蛋疼的三星下diff
21:53 spboxer3: 00:06:740 (4,2) - 部分重疊
21:54 sherrie__fay: 嗯
21:54 spboxer3: 00:30:394 - Easy難度 map到這邊 那為什麼Normal只停在 00:29:644 - ?
21:55 spboxer3: 00:36:402 (1) - 同Easy 用水平看一下 這個slider是偏的
21:55 sherrie__fay: 只有easymap到那里
21:55 sherrie__fay: 其余3个diff都是那里结束的
21:57 spboxer3: 01:08:692 (3,1,2) - 這個overlaps真是吃電視
21:58 spboxer3: 01:19:581 (2,3,4) - 不知道是不是故意的 但是2,3並沒有成直線
21:58 sherrie__fay: fixed
21:59 spboxer3: 01:30:845 (1) - 這個finish有點吵了一樣用60%應該就可以了
21:59 sherrie__fay: 删绿线就可以吧大概
22:00 spboxer3: 對
22:00 sherrie__fay: done
22:01 spboxer3: 00:12:372 (11,2) - 咳... 恩...overlaps>_>
22:02 sherrie__fay: =A=这个可以不改嘛
22:02 sherrie__fay: =A=没法动啊..
22:03 spboxer3: 有什麼不可以動的= = 只有你想不想動...這都Hard了 spacing什麼的只要不是太離譜都嘛OK
22:03 sherrie__fay: ok 改完
22:04 spboxer3: 00:20:257 (3,4,5) - 打起來不順
22:04 spboxer3: 你看一下這個打擊點都是在哪開始的 沒在重音上阿
22:04 spboxer3: 00:23:261 (4,5,6) - ^
22:05 spboxer3: 後面不多說 同樣也有這種問題
22:05 spboxer3: 00:37:059 - 多餘的綠線
22:05 spboxer3: 00:36:684 - ^
22:05 spboxer3: 00:37:153 - 這個finish太過大聲了
22:06 spboxer3: 00:46:915 (3,4,5) - 這個彎起來的overlaps不好 (5)的結尾已經和(3)的結尾極度貼近了
22:06 spboxer3: 這樣看起來就會很醜
22:07 spboxer3: 00:52:172 (1,2) - ^
22:08 spboxer3: 正確說法應該是角度沒有用好...複製後的那個差別小於直角又這樣貼齊會看起來怪怪的
22:09 spboxer3: 01:07:190 - finish大聲了點... 調小點吧
22:10 spboxer3: 01:10:945 (3,4) - 這個該怎麼解釋...對音樂的詮釋性不足/...\ 你可以聽到這個音樂的音高是來回的 
22:10 spboxer3: 所以前面做的挺好 但是唯讀這個地方因為上方間距問題而沒辦法擺在一起 有點可惜
22:11 spboxer3: 01:30:845 (1) - 同樣略吵了些
22:11 spboxer3: [Insnae]
22:12 spboxer3: 00:04:487 (7,8,9) - 前頭都是flow的連打 這邊怎麼頓了? 感覺不適合阿
22:13 spboxer3: 00:17:629 (5,6,7,8,9) - 這個pattern想辦法讓它對稱?
22:14 sherrie__fay: 已经很尽力了ojz
22:15 spboxer3: 00:20:632 (5,6,7,8,9) - 這串有點沒注意... 感覺沒有挺好的
22:15 spboxer3: 沒事 我說說 你看看 能改就改 不能改先擱會吧
22:15 sherrie__fay: 不过听的时候感觉就很五连0A0
22:15 sherrie__fay: 0A0嗯啊
22:16 spboxer3: 不是 我是說stream的形狀
22:16 sherrie__fay: 哦哦哦!!
22:16 spboxer3: 00:22:885 (2,3) - 跳躍點怪怪的 感覺不該是這樣跳的...
22:16 spboxer3: 00:24:950 - 這個點聽起來應該有object
22:17 sherrie__fay: ok
22:18 spboxer3: 00:29:268 (4,5,1) - 感覺間距只該變大不該變小
22:19 sherrie__fay: 35换位置你觉得怎样
22:19 spboxer3: 不好
22:20 spboxer3: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/486508
22:20 spboxer3: 類似這樣的?
22:20 spboxer3: 打起來會很順手 又不會讓形狀變很難看
22:20 sherrie__fay:  偏了啊/...\
22:21 sherrie__fay: 唔不过还好0A0
22:21 sherrie__fay: 那就这么改了/www\
22:21 spboxer3: 00:48:417 (1) - 這個slider和 00:49:168 (1) - ...
22:21 spboxer3: 00:50:107 (3) - 未對稱
22:22 sherrie__fay: 啊那个本来不是刻意去做对称的
22:22 spboxer3: >_>
22:23 sherrie__fay: 不过这么说也可以改下0A0
22:23 spboxer3: 可是01:06:627 (3,4,1) - 這間距... 不感覺(1)太短了些嗎??
22:26 spboxer3: 01:25:213 (1,2,3) - 隨意舉一下例子... 這種pattern 感覺沒意義阿 感覺有點:"就是為排出節奏" 
22:26 spboxer3: 而排的感覺可以從這邊看...感覺並沒有承接著的感覺
22:26 spboxer3: 大概就是這樣了~

好的好的~
Flower
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Flower
射一下 占位待编
SC-DrawerX3
76 posts
Joined March 2012
SC-DrawerX3
M4M Request from My Modding Queue~

This song.. is sooooo Cute *w* But it's really low, maby u can get a louder version? And you should think about making the hitsounds lower.
Kiai Time has to be fixed, none of your diffs has Kiai in it.

[Insane]

00:13:123 (1,4) - Finish maby on 45%? sounds better imo
00:37:153 from here to end are the clap sounds too loud >:
00:44:662 (1) - remove clap
00:45:413 (6) - add clap on slider end
00:43:911 (4) - remove clap
00:47:666 (1) - slider speed up dose not seem to be necessary
01:06:440 (1,2,3) - remove clap and try Whistle-nothing-whistle or Nothing-whistle-nothing instead.
01:29:155 (4,6) - remove whistle and make finish about 40%

[Hard]

00:38:843 (10,11) - remove finish
00:43:160 (1,3) - whistle instead of finish?
00:58:742 (2) - ^
01:08:880 (6,7) - remove finish
01:16:953 (3) - ^
01:19:769 (3) - ^
01:30:845 (1) - whistle instead of finish

[Normal]

00:36:402 (1) - remove whistle
01:07:190 (1) - finish on 50%
01:10:194 (1,2,3,4) - Unnecessary finish spam
01:30:845 (1) - whistle instead of clap

[Easy]

U did not use normal finish on the end, use them to make the hitsounding more similar to the mapset.

00:13:123 (1,2,3) - this overlap is barely visible because of the standart hitpoints, I recommend a triangle shape.
00:44:662 (2,3,4) - ^
00:46:164 (1,2) - What? this dose not fit with the rest of the sliders in this mapset. Use similar sliders.
01:22:209 (1,2) - ^
01:07:190 (1) - 50% volume q.q
01:25:213 (1,2,1,2) - This could be too hard for an easy.
01:30:845 (1) - whistle instead of finish.

Good Luck~ :3
DDT33
19 posts
Joined June 2012
DDT33
尿了这神一样的选曲
SciSSorS_old
40 posts
Joined November 2009
SciSSorS_old
wow 期待~ :)
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
sherrie__fay

SC-DrawerX3 wrote:

M4M Request from My Modding Queue~

This song.. is sooooo Cute *w* But it's really low, maby u can get a louder version? And you should think about making the hitsounds lower.
Kiai Time has to be fixed, none of your diffs has Kiai in it.

[Insane]

00:13:123 (1,4) - Finish maby on 45%? sounds better imo
00:37:153 from here to end are the clap sounds too loud >:
00:44:662 (1) - remove clap :arrow: k
00:45:413 (6) - add clap on slider end :arrow: k
00:43:911 (4) - remove clap :arrow: k
00:47:666 (1) - slider speed up dose not seem to be necessary :arrow: fix later
01:06:440 (1,2,3) - remove clap and try Whistle-nothing-whistle or Nothing-whistle-nothing instead. :arrow: :?: i think it unnessery
01:29:155 (4,6) - remove whistle and make finish about 40%

[Hard]

00:38:843 (10,11) - remove finish
00:43:160 (1,3) - whistle instead of finish?
00:58:742 (2) - ^
01:08:880 (6,7) - remove finish
01:16:953 (3) - ^
01:19:769 (3) - ^
01:30:845 (1) - whistle instead of finish

:arrow: loud music so need not to fix these? :?:

[Normal]

00:36:402 (1) - remove whistle :arrow: k
01:07:190 (1) - finish on 50%
01:10:194 (1,2,3,4) - Unnecessary finish spam :arrow: k
01:30:845 (1) - whistle instead of clap

[Easy]

U did not use normal finish on the end, use them to make the hitsounding more similar to the mapset.

00:13:123 (1,2,3) - this overlap is barely visible because of the standart hitpoints, I recommend a triangle shape. :arrow: k
00:44:662 (2,3,4) - ^ :arrow: k
00:46:164 (1,2) - What? this dose not fit with the rest of the sliders in this mapset. Use similar sliders. :arrow: k
01:22:209 (1,2) - ^ :arrow: k
01:07:190 (1) - 50% volume q.q :arrow: k
01:25:213 (1,2,1,2) - This could be too hard for an easy. :arrow: k
01:30:845 (1) - whistle instead of finish.

Good Luck~ :3
thx.
MP3 changed 0w0~
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
这熊孩子唱得
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
sherrie__fay

Breeze wrote:

这熊孩子唱得
hhh
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
two me one face
Birdy
5,720 posts
Joined April 2011
Birdy
您好〜

[Easy]
all fine

[Normal]
00:36:402 (1) - slighter curve please :?

[Hard]
00:58:179 (1,2) - weird overlap
few other overlaps too, but they look better

[Insane]
00:54:800 (2,1) - might be a bit confusing and hard to detect

great and original song choice, and creative streams on Insane, I hope to see this ranked!

再见〜
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
sherrie__fay

Static Noise Bird wrote:

您好〜

[Easy]
all fine

[Normal]
00:36:402 (1) - slighter curve please :?

[Hard]
00:58:179 (1,2) - weird overlap
few other overlaps too, but they look better

[Insane]
00:54:800 (2,1) - might be a bit confusing and hard to detect

great and original song choice, and creative streams on Insane, I hope to see this ranked!

再见〜

all fixed
thx!
Loneight
osu! Alumni
1,332 posts
Joined January 2011
Loneight
早灣 >w<
抱歉!!fay姐 >~< 咱遲到好久, 最近比較忙 ;w;
M4M from L18's & Crystal's Modding Queue.



  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是要討論的問題
    紅色 是unrankable

[general]

  1. 不知不覺 還是想吐槽一下bg的解析度大小
  2. 要不要改一下combo3 跟 combo4的顏色;w; 雖說是osu預設的, 可是太像了 >~<

[Easy]

  1. 沒問題~

[Normal]

  1. 01:28:217 (5) - NC~

[Hard]

  1. 00:14:625 (5) - NC? 咱感覺比較容易讀取這裡的方向

[Insane]

  1. 00:46:164 (7) - NC, 感覺這距離會因為前面的跳而按快了;w; 就會變成100
good song & good luck !!
小小老鼠~小小老鼠
fay姐 加油>w<!!
Kanari
1,311 posts
Joined June 2011
Kanari
Haii ~
You requested in my queue ~


[General]
- Your background should be 800x600 or 1024x768
Here you go ~
- You should have at least one spinner in each diff to some have some differences in scores.


[Easy]
- Slider tick rate 1 ? owo
00:43:160 (1) - Stack properly ~
00:59:681 (2) - Place where 00:57:428 (4) was placed.


[Normal]
- Slider tick rate 1 ? ~


[Hard]
00:11:621 (9) - New combo.
00:38:655 (9) - ^


[Insane]
00:04:863 (9) - New combo.
00:09:368 (6) - ^
00:20:632 (5) - ^
00:40:157 (9) - ^
00:46:164 (7) - ^
01:09:443 (3) - ^
01:12:447 (8) - ^


Well mapped!
Good luck ~ >w<
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
sherrie__fay

l1106188 wrote:

早灣 >w<
抱歉!!fay姐 >~< 咱遲到好久, 最近比較忙 ;w;
M4M from L18's & Crystal's Modding Queue.



  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是要討論的問題
    紅色 是unrankable

[general]

  1. 不知不覺 還是想吐槽一下bg的解析度大小
  2. 要不要改一下combo3 跟 combo4的顏色;w; 雖說是osu預設的, 可是太像了 >~<

[Easy]

  1. 沒問題~

[Normal]

  1. 01:28:217 (5) - NC~

[Hard]

  1. 00:14:625 (5) - NC? 咱感覺比較容易讀取這裡的方向

[Insane]

  1. 00:46:164 (7) - NC, 感覺這距離會因為前面的跳而按快了;w; 就會變成100
good song & good luck !!
小小老鼠~小小老鼠
fay姐 加油>w<!!

all fixed!
thx mod!!
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
sherrie__fay

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~
You requested in my queue ~


[General]
- Your background should be 800x600 or 1024x768
Here you go ~
- You should have at least one spinner in each diff to some have some differences in scores.


[Easy]
- Slider tick rate 1 ? owo
00:43:160 (1) - Stack properly ~
00:59:681 (2) - Place where 00:57:428 (4) was placed.


[Normal]
- Slider tick rate 1 ? ~


[Hard]
00:11:621 (9) - New combo.
00:38:655 (9) - ^


[Insane]
00:04:863 (9) - New combo.
00:09:368 (6) - ^
00:20:632 (5) - ^
00:40:157 (9) - ^
00:46:164 (7) - ^
01:09:443 (3) - ^
01:12:447 (8) - ^


Well mapped!
Good luck ~ >w<

all fixed~
thx♥
KokoroStudiox3
1,272 posts
Joined April 2011
KokoroStudiox3
kiai time ?
1# 01:19:205 start 01:30:845 end
or 1# 00:49:168 - start 01:00:432 end

[Insane]
00:04:769 (8) delete note sounds better


[hard]
00:27:391 - http://puu.sh/1rDts ?

nice map :) :) :)
I could not find anything

I'll give you a star
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Sagisawa-Yukari


only suggest~

Insane
HP Drain-1
00:01:765 (4) - 这个note放到00:02:422 -
00:11:621 (5) - NC？
00:17:629 (5) - NC？
00:18:943 (1) - remove NC
00:19:130 (2) - 如果你按照上面这么做了，NC放在这里
00:21:571 (1) - remove NC
00:27:578 (1) - remove NC
00:29:831 - 这里不来个spinner么？
00:36:402 (1) - 00:37:059 (8) - 这里的绿线感觉不用这样放，不如就直接一串20%啥的（被打
00:38:655 (9) - 建议这里NC然后把00:39:406 (1) - 的NC去掉
00:47:666 (1) - 这个为什么突然换SV了>A<
00:59:493 (5) - 这个建议放到x:392,Y:200
01:11:696 (5) - NC
01:12:447 (1) - remove NC


Hard
00:15:939 - 感觉这里可以加个note
00:29:831 - 同Insane
00:42:973 - add note？
01:00:432 (1) - remove NC

Normal
01:30:845 (1) - 这个建议做成折返slider，其他地方没什么了

Easy
Easy的话建议把HP Drain调上去1-2然后用AR3 OD2
Slier Tice Rate建议为1
00:36:402 - 这。。这里的绿线？
01:09:443 (3) - 建议改成slider，结束在01:09:819 -
01:12:447 (3) - 同上，结束在01:12:823 -

其他没什么了，菲姐加油~
Niva
Global Moderator
3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
Timing help~

SPOILER
19:43 sherrie__fay: hi niva good evening>.<. do you have free time to check my beatmap's timing
19:43 Niva: ah, of course~
19:43 sherrie__fay: !!!
19:43 sherrie__fay: thx!!
19:43  *sherrie__fay is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/189557 Zhang Zhongjin - Lan Pi Shu Yu Da Lian Mao]
19:44 sherrie__fay: please!! i need help about it ;_;
19:45 Niva: ok, downloading (:
19:45 sherrie__fay: just timing check is enough ;w; thank you veryveryveryverymuch (orz
19:46 sherrie__fay: ←*searching timing help for 3 days but found nobody
19:49 Niva: oh, I got flat bpm here o.o
19:50 sherrie__fay: e!
19:50 sherrie__fay: thx owo!!
19:50 Niva: BPM 159.77
19:50 Niva: offset 1111
19:51 sherrie__fay: e!!
19:51 sherrie__fay: let me try it!!
19:52 Niva: xD
19:59 Niva: does it work? :D
19:59 sherrie__fay: yes!! QwQ

Good luck sherrie__fay (:
sherrie__fay
437 posts
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sherrie__fay

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

only suggest~

Insane
HP Drain-1
00:01:765 (4) - 这个note放到00:02:422 - :arrow: 不太合适 感觉会破坏流畅性
00:11:621 (5) - NC？ :arrow: 大概是加了
00:17:629 (5) - NC？ :arrow: 同
00:18:943 (1) - remove NC :arrow: done
00:19:130 (2) - 如果你按照上面这么做了，NC放在这里 :arrow: done
00:21:571 (1) - remove NC
00:27:578 (1) - remove NC :arrow: 这俩忘了改了没了
00:29:831 - 这里不来个spinner么？ :arrow: 不来
00:36:402 (1) - 00:37:059 (8) - 这里的绿线感觉不用这样放，不如就直接一串20%啥的（被打 :arrow: 。。
00:38:655 (9) - 建议这里NC然后把00:39:406 (1) - 的NC去掉 :arrow: 大概改了吧
00:47:666 (1) - 这个为什么突然换SV了>A< :arrow: 去掉了
00:59:493 (5) - 这个建议放到x:392,Y:200 :arrow: 不要。。
01:11:696 (5) - NC :arrow: 改了吧大概
01:12:447 (1) - remove NC :arrow: 同


Hard
00:15:939 - 感觉这里可以加个note :arrow: 不要
00:29:831 - 同Insane :arrow: 不来
00:42:973 - add note？ :arrow: 不要
01:00:432 (1) - remove NC :arrow: 为啥 我挺喜欢

Normal
01:30:845 (1) - 这个建议做成折返slider，其他地方没什么了 :arrow: 这个我也忘了改没改了……

Easy
Easy的话建议把HP Drain调上去1-2然后用AR3 OD2 :arrow: 一开始是OD3然后被吐槽miss一个条掉血掉一半orz
Slier Tice Rate建议为1 :arrow: done
00:36:402 - 这。。这里的绿线？ :arrow: 删了
01:09:443 (3) - 建议改成slider，结束在01:09:819 - :arrow: 好像。。改了？
01:12:447 (3) - 同上，结束在01:12:823 - :arrow: 也是

其他没什么了，菲姐加油~

由于是后回的mod所以有些地方记不清了orz
不过帮大忙了www
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
sherrie__fay

Niva wrote:

Timing help~

SPOILER
19:43 sherrie__fay: hi niva good evening>.<. do you have free time to check my beatmap's timing
19:43 Niva: ah, of course~
19:43 sherrie__fay: !!!
19:43 sherrie__fay: thx!!
19:43  *sherrie__fay is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/189557 Zhang Zhongjin - Lan Pi Shu Yu Da Lian Mao]
19:44 sherrie__fay: please!! i need help about it ;_;
19:45 Niva: ok, downloading (:
19:45 sherrie__fay: just timing check is enough ;w; thank you veryveryveryverymuch (orz
19:46 sherrie__fay: ←*searching timing help for 3 days but found nobody
19:49 Niva: oh, I got flat bpm here o.o
19:50 sherrie__fay: e!
19:50 sherrie__fay: thx owo!!
19:50 Niva: BPM 159.77
19:50 Niva: offset 1111
19:51 sherrie__fay: e!!
19:51 sherrie__fay: let me try it!!
19:52 Niva: xD
19:59 Niva: does it work? :D
19:59 sherrie__fay: yes!! QwQ

Good luck sherrie__fay (:

really helps a lot
thx.
hoLysoup
1,846 posts
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hoLysoup
sherrie菲!
圖已經很好了 我只指出一些個人覺得不順的地方

[Insane]
00:01:768 (4) - 這應該delete掉因為比較準確的節奏
00:11:626 (5) - 恩 這~應該是跟前面的1/4一樣啊.. 怎是1/8. 後面也沒有
00:19:136 (1) - 這應該remove repeat, 然後這裡再加circle or slider 00:19:512 (x) 感覺比較順而且跟著歌聲
00:22:141 (1) - ^ 其他的我不說了 因為只是我個人的感覺 哈哈
00:30:403 (x) - 應該map到這裡才合適, 像這裡01:00:446 (1) - 你就有啊
00:38:664 (9,10) - 恩~ 這裡要不要修一下.. 為了在這裡00:39:040 加個clap, 不然聽起來感覺有點怪
00:43:922 (4) - 這個頭上的clap是故意的嗎?? 這裡00:13:879 (4,5)沒有啊
01:06:924 (5) - 這個要不要remove? 比較準確的節奏

[Hard]
要不要用AR7?
00:26:272 (4) - 恩~ 往上移一格?
00:30:403 (x) - 應該map到這裡才合適, Insane也有講
00:38:664 (1,2,3) - 覺得finish太多了
01:08:708 (5,6,7) - ^
01:28:799 (2,3,4) - 這裡的節奏應該slider從01:29:175~01:29:550, 然後這裡加圈 01:28:799
very nice difficulty

恩就這些~
其他都沒事
:> good luck!
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
sherrie__fay

hoLysoup wrote:

sherrie菲!
圖已經很好了 我只指出一些個人覺得不順的地方

[Insane]
00:01:768 (4) - 這應該delete掉因為比較準確的節奏 :arrow: 我觉得前面有一个1/4然后怕到这里手指会收不住才加了一个note在这里
00:11:626 (5) - 恩 這~應該是跟前面的1/4一樣啊.. 怎是1/8. 後面也沒有 :arrow: fixed
00:19:136 (1) - 這應該remove repeat, 然後這裡再加circle or slider 00:19:512 (x) 感覺比較順而且跟著歌聲 :arrow: 没什么吧大概orz
00:22:141 (1) - ^ 其他的我不說了 因為只是我個人的感覺 哈哈 :arrow: 同
00:30:403 (x) - 應該map到這裡才合適, 像這裡01:00:446 (1) - 你就有啊 :arrow: 这里熊孩子唱的时候收比较果断233 所以觉得这里停止才比较好玩~
00:38:664 (9,10) - 恩~ 這裡要不要修一下.. 為了在這裡00:39:040 加個clap, 不然聽起來感覺有點怪 :arrow: 没觉得
00:43:922 (4) - 這個頭上的clap是故意的嗎?? 這裡00:13:879 (4,5)沒有啊 :arrow: fixed
01:06:924 (5) - 這個要不要remove? 比較準確的節奏 :arrow: 但是结构上还是对称一点比较好吧

[Hard]
要不要用AR7? :arrow: 好~
00:26:272 (4) - 恩~ 往上移一格? :arrow: fixed
00:30:403 (x) - 應該map到這裡才合適, Insane也有講 :arrow: 解释过了orz
00:38:664 (1,2,3) - 覺得finish太多了 :arrow: 不加fin我也找不到什么能强调这个高音的声音了
01:08:708 (5,6,7) - ^ :arrow: 同
01:28:799 (2,3,4) - 這裡的節奏應該slider從01:29:175~01:29:550, 然後這裡加圈 01:28:799 :arrow: 虽然我觉得也不太对劲但是感觉改起来比较麻烦。。
very nice difficulty

恩就這些~
其他都沒事
:> good luck!
thx for modding~
Breeze
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2009
Breeze
我以为我没射星, 结果发现我射过...再射一发好了
什么时候做福禄娃?
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
sherrie__fay

Breeze wrote:

我以为我没射星, 结果发现我射过...再射一发好了
什么时候做福禄娃?
我想做舒克贝塔
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