Gloria Guard wrote:

[fbs's Natsuki]

01:40:605 add note?

01:47:998 (6) -> remote note?

01:51:426 (6) ^

Dagger-Gazel wrote:

awesome map ❤

Gloria Guard wrote:

[Guy's Mikoto]

00:31:176 (1,2,3) -> 00:27:748 (1,2,3,4,5) with the same tempo as you mind behind I think I would be better - ok fixed

01:19:176 (4) -> Look like this would be nice. http://puu.sh/1GJUI - no change.

01:34:605 (1,3) -> http://puu.sh/1GJXf - no change.

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there, from my queue.

[Kyouzi]
01:08:890 (4) Rotate this by 17 degrees clockwise, like this: http://puu.sh/1HcuY fixed
01:16:605 Suggestion: It would be nice if this slider tick plays the clap hitsound. no change.

[Mai]
00:32:676 (4,5,1,2) Can you try curving this stream downwards, like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/548641 ok
00:54:319 (3,4,5,6,7,8) Maybe you can try something like this instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/548636 (Rotate 3,4,5 by 26 degrees clockwise, and 6,7,8 by 26 degrees counter-clockwise.) i keep better.
01:37:176 (3,4,5) Why not make a nice jump here? 4 can be further away than 3 and 5 at this point. where!!!

Hope this helps! Good luck!

Mai

fbs's Natsuki

Guy's Mikoto

Kyouzi

Dagger-Gazel wrote:

hi o/

Mai

• Suggestion

1. 00:28:605 (3) - 1grid右にすることによって上下綺麗に揃うと思います（動かすのであれば 00:29:676 - 此方も移動しなければいけませんが。。。） fixed
2. 00:49:176 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 特に提案はありませんがプレイしていて少し狭いように感じました・・ no
3. 00:50:890 (6,7) - 此方の6.7も 01:56:033 (6,7) - 此方と同じような形にしたほうがいいと思いました 音取りだけ同じにしました
4. 01:05:247 (4,1,2,3,4) - 全体的に選択して 01:05:247 (4) - ここをx 212 y164に持ってくることによって 01:04:605 (3) - ここからの流れを維持しつつ中心にもってくることができてとても綺麗に思いました ok
5. 01:08:676 (6,7,8,9) - 01:08:676 - ここにnoteを置き 01:08:890 - ここからスライダーを開始するとバックの音にもあってると思います（採用するのであればヒットサウンドもそれに応じて変更してください）　一応音取りの画像を 採用
   
6. 01:25:605 (6,7) - 手前の 01:25:176 (4,5) - 此方をCtrl+Jしたものを使う方が私は好きです～　一応画像を・・ やりやすいですねfixed
   
7. 01:26:676 - ここにnoteをおかない意味はなんでしょう。。。 裏の音を取ったまででございます。
8. 01:30:640 - add noteしたほうが叩きやすそうに思います 音とは少しあってませんが、確かに叩き易いので仮採用です。
9. 01:37:605 - 曲げないほうが綺麗に見えると思います～　ok
10. 01:44:033 (3) - 一番最後のポイントを2gridあげると 01:44:462 (5) - この位置と並行を保てるのでとてもきれいだと思います おｋ
11. 02:17:890 (4) - ここの最後の位置と 02:18:319 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ここのストリームがかぶるのでヒットバーストで見づらくなると思うのでできれば配置を変更したほうがいいかもしれません><

配置が思い浮かばないので保留糞もっどすみません＞＜

Dagger-Gazel wrote:

Guy's Mikoto

• Suggestion

1. 00:32:033 (2) - なぜこのような形にしてるかわかりません・・・手前の１の逆方向を使った方が綺麗に見えるかと・・・。- 言っている意味はわかるんですが、ここは特に上下のバランスを意識した配置をしていません。そしてこの手の配置で譜面が汚く見えることもないと思うので・・すみませんがno changeです。

とても綺麗な譜面です

Entozer wrote:

Guy's Mikoto

SPOILER

01:11:890 (2) - Change slider to circle
01:12:533 (3) - Start at 01:12:319 instead, end in 01:13:176. Maybe make it a reverse slider like the others

^You need to change because the rest of the pattern follows the beat.. and suddenly it follows the vocal. It can get people (me) off the rhythm.

Sherry wrote:

hi~ 微力ながらmodいたします。
すでに多くのmodがされていて指摘箇所がすくないですので細かいことになります。

Kyouzi

SPOILER

<General>
1. book mark (青線)が残っています。　offsetもずれて残っているので使用してないものだと思いますので、特に必要ないようなら消しておきましょう。
2. 少し前のアップデートで画面左上のsamplesetからサークル１個１個にヒットサウンドを変えて置けるようになりました。　もし手間でなければ、or その他の不具合がなければ緑線から変えてみてはどうでしょうか

bookmark削除しました。 緑線については特に変更する予定は無いです。XATに指摘された場合は考える方向で。
Guy's Mikoto

SPOILER

<General>
1. Kyouziの青線と同じです。
2. 緑線がKyouziと同じなので少し変えて個性を出してみましょう。特に笛の部分の音が印象に残りすぎている感じがするので、音を下げる等、行うといいかもしれません。 特に、02:01:926あたりはKyouziのサークルがあった部分の残りなので、消す必要があります。
3. 前回も指摘があったみたいですが、
<Events>のVideo,0,"op.avi"
が消えていてムービーが表示されないようです。
マップ修正のとき消したのをそのまま上げたからでしょうか？それとも意図があるのでしょうか？ひとつの難易度だけ表示されなかったので違和感を感じました。

動画については、以前に入れ直してまた消えたりする現象が起きています。今も同じ現象です。後ほど対処を行い、動画を追加します。
Mai

SPOILER

00:36:319 (1) - 00:48:319 (1) この範囲にかけてジャンプがくどいように感じます。　少し減らしてみてはどうでしょう 特にくどく私は感じないのでno change

00:50:890 (6) リピート数が多いように感じます。 ２個減らして(00:51:105までにして)はどうでしょうか。 fixed

01:17:033 (11) - 01:17:247 (12) 連打(distance倍率低め)の次のサークルのため、終点から始点までの距離が遠くなるのが突然すぎ違和感を感じます。　01:16:819 (10) - 01:17:033 (11) の距離を遠めに配置する等すると違和感が和らぐかもしれません。　
類似箇所(01:48:747 (2)) こちらは前の段階でジャンプを行っているので違和感があまりなくプレイできます。保留

細かいですが気になったところはこんなところです。
故意にやってる部分や修正しにくい、したくない箇所などスルーしちゃってください。

TheVileOne wrote:

General
Looks good.

Kyouzi

Nothing found.　

Mai
Really fun map. It's my favorite map in the set. you could have easily have mapped it out of my skill range, but you didn't. the difficulty is right in that sweet spot, not too hard, and not too easy for me to play. Good job. thanks

00:49:819 (7,1) - For some reason I feel the spacing should be bigger here. fmm,I do not feel sense of incongruity. no change.
00:51:747 (1,2,3,4,5) - That jump is awkward. I suggest unstacking 1,2, replacing 2 with a slider that ends 00:52:605 - A jump off the end of this slider plays much better. Please do it. Note if you do have a jump there, the flow here 00:52:819 (3,4) - feels sluggish. It would be better if you unstacked there as well, because stopping the flow so soon after a jump doesn't play nicely.　I like the present state.sorry
01:06:962 (4) - Looks out of place, not sure what you could do about it though.　changed.if you ok, recheck place plz
01:18:962 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - <333 me too <3
01:34:176 (6,1) - Doesn't look perfect to me. Angles seem to be off. Try http://puu.sh/1IEXD fmm, how to fix? code want._.
01:56:890 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Same weird flow due to stacks stopping the flow. It's not as bad as your first design though. fmm this stopping is okay.. so,drift aside.
02:03:962 - add note. I completely didn't expect a gap in the beat. fmm.Reservation.


Conclusion

You have my support.

32,212,68890,2,0,B|36:156|88:132,2,100.000000596046,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

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wring wrote:

Hi
年末年始忙しくて遅くなりました ありがとです～

[Kyouzi]
00:27:748 (1) - ここの始点はsoft finishよりnormal finishの方があってると思います。
00:34:605 (1) - 終点remove clap? 何かつける場合ならsoft custom clapのvolumeを落としたもののほうが合ってると思います。
00:39:748 (3) - 始点remove clap
00:44:890 (1) - 上に向かせるよりも水平のほうが見栄えがいいと思いました。＋終点remove clap?

00:51:747 (1,2) - 終点clap
01:00:319 (1) - 終点remove clap
01:08:890 (4) - こんな感じはどうでしょう？＋終点remove clap and add finish spacingが気になるので角度は変更しspcaing調整を行いました。なので画像と違う形です。

32,212,68890,2,0,B|36:156|88:132,2,100.000000596046,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:23:033 (4) - もう1回折り返してみては？ 2回の折り返しは個人的に配置したくないのでno changeでいきます。
01:24:319 (1) - ^ の場合01:24:533 - ここからスタートで ^
01:29:462 (2) - ここは曲がってた方が見栄えがいいと思います。

01:40:605 (2) - 始点remove clap?
01:56:890 (1,2,1) - 終点clap
02:03:319 (3) - Additions Drum + whistle?
02:05:890 (4) - 終点remove whistle and add clap
02:13:176 (1) - 始点remove clap and add finish
その他は修正しました！

[Mai]
00:27:748 (1) - ここの始点はsoft finishよりnormal finishの方があってると思います。
00:29:248 (4,1) - switch NC?
00:30:855 - add note?
00:32:033 (3) - move to x:396 y:304
00:32:676 (4,1) - switch NC?
00:33:105 (3) - 終点もsoft finishをつけてみてはどうでしょう。
00:41:033 (6) - move to x:512 y:96 and 00:41:462 (1,2,3) - move to x316 y:308?
00:50:890 (6) - もう1回折り返すのはどうでしょう？
00:52:390 (2,3) - 場所を入れ替えるのはどうでしょう。
00:59:890 (3) - NC
01:08:676 (5) - move to x:76 7:184?

01:10:819 (2,3,4) - もう少し離してもいいと思います。

01:17:033 (11) - move to x:136 y:52
01:34:176 (6,1) - (5)と重ならないようにしたほうが栄えます。
02:02:890 (3,4) - こんな感じでもう少し広げてみてはどうでしょう。 この配置が気に入ってるのでこのままで行きます。

その他全部修正しました。
fight

• 
  Nothing too major, but maybe it would be better if you snapped the timing point 00:51:640 to 00:51:748 instead?

• 
  01:10:176 Its bugging me that there isn't anything here. It kind of breaks the flow for me.
  02:03:319 (3) It sounded better to me without the whistle.

• 
  00:43:176 (1) It would follow the lyrics better if you change it to a triplet (starting here, each circle a 1/4 beat away) and then add a circle where the slider originally ended.
  02:08:462 (4) I think it would be better if this was deleted (it would go better with the lyrics).

• 
  01:48:747 (2) Maybe space it out farther from 1?

CrestRising wrote:

Hi there, from my queue.

[General:]

• 
  Nothing too major, but maybe it would be better if you snapped the timing point 00:51:640 to 00:51:748 instead? all diff done.

[Kyouzi:]

• 
  01:10:176 Its bugging me that there isn't anything here. It kind of breaks the flow for me. fixed
  02:03:319 (3) It sounded better to me without the whistle. fixed

[Mai:]

• 
  01:48:747 (2) Maybe space it out farther from 1? sorry,no change. i think keep fine.

Sorry for the small mod, your map is too good .

Love wrote:

Modding from my mod queue.

Red: Must be changed.
Black: Suggestion.

[General]
Nothing here.

[Kyouzi]
Almost all of your claps are in the wrong spots. They should be on the 2nd and 4th beat instead of 1st and 3rd. Refer to this chart: http://puu.sh/1JokR ah.. but, reservation. i think fine..
01:56:890 (1,2,1) - This is the only thing that bothers me. Maybe change the last slider? fmm? i think keep better.

[Mai]
00:58:605 (1,2) - Spread these out?　i keep hope this part.
02:07:176 (1,2,3,4) - Turn these into jumps? Just something to think about because it'll add a little more difficulty to the map. easy part this place..
02:12:319 (1) - Easier to read if you move it away from 02:12:533 (2). reservation

__________________________________________________________________________


Sorry I couldn't find much. You should definately find a MAT.

Natsu wrote:

Guy's Mikoto:

SPOILER

00:55:176 add finish - fixed
02:13:176 add finihs to the head of slider - nope

Natsu wrote:

Kyouzi:

SPOILER

01:15:748 add clap to the finish of slider? sound better fixed
01:05:890 that slider look bad maybe from this way? umm, keep


01:28:605 add finish to the head of slider no

Mai:

SPOILER

i cant mod this ^_^ so perfect thanks!

Well sorry about poor mod but your map is really good i do my best x_x
good luck in rank

Love wrote:

[fbs's Natsuki]
00:55:176 (1) - Why is this a giant circle instead of a repeat slider like before. It'll look better and play better.
01:27:748 - 01:38:033 - Maybe turn the hitsound volume down on this part as mentioned before? It will sound better at around 50-55% just like the difficulty before.
02:04:605 - 02:08:462 - Same with this part, but a little quieter.

Natsu wrote:

fbs's Natsuki:

01:26:033 add finish
02:12:319 ^ ^ to the head of slider

I am going to mod this , will edit and give my mod )) waiting for me

1. Name : The difficulties' name are too confused to identify easiest two diffs is fine , but the other diffs display the same star when selecting songs , it is too confused , change to normal name is the best way to make this issue solved , I means change the diff's name to Easy Guy's Normal fbs's Hard and Insane
2. Tags : op is not support while searching on website , try to add a number after op , if this is opening 1 , then change to op1 . If it is opening 2 , then change to op2
3. TitleUnicode : Not the same , check them please
4. Video : You forgot to add video for Kyouzi's and fbs's Natsuki's difficulties , add them

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:41:462 (1,2) - I don't like straight slider here , I hope they have some radian , like this , looks much better
      
      Picture

      
   2. 00:49:605 (2,3) - There is a bad flow between these two objects , try my suggestion : Move the endpoint to x:448 y:32 to make a nice flow!
   3. 01:05:890 (4) - Rotate this slider by -20? Nazi anyway :p
   4. 01:32:890 (3) - ( Highly suggestions ) This slider's start may be covered by 01:31:176 (1) - end's hitburst , this is not unranlable , But I recommend to adjust them ^_^
   5. 01:38:033 (1) - Maybe make the radian more obvious ? like this
      
      Picture and Code

      
      

      200,92,98033,6,0,P|312:60|280:140|392:108,1,200.000001192092,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   6. 02:20:033 - I can here something in the music... why don't you add a slider or some circles for it? use a 1/6 slider to follow the music if you change this mod , try to make a slider like this , code for you

      216,88,140033,2,0,P|240:76|272:76|296:88,2,83.3333338300383

   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:34:605 (1) - I don't know why you don't add clap on the arrow , Miss a clap here sounds very odd , consider to add one?
   2. 00:35:890 (2) - Yes , clap here
   3. 00:36:319 (3) - Add a clap end
   4. 00:37:176 (4) - Same as above
   5. 00:44:890 (1) - Clap end...
   6. 00:55:176 (1) - Finish which on this spinner is too loud for me , try to reduce volume to 40%~50%
   7. 01:08:890 (4) - Remove finish end , it is not necessary
   8. 01:44:890 (3) - Remove clap for consistent Imo
   9. 02:13:176 (1) - Remove finish start , that is too odd , and not fits the music at all

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:47:890 (6) - Move this circle then adjust other objects? make a nice pentagonal looks great xD
      
      Picture

      
   2. 01:12:319 (3) - Use angle slider here is not good for me ... looks ugly .. try to make it into a circular slider ?
   3. 02:08:462 (2) - Stack with 02:06:319 (3) - for a better flow?
   4. 02:20:033 - Same as Kyouzi difficulty , Note : it is 1/6 beat
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:29:462 (3) - If you listen the music carrefully , you can know there is only one cymbal in this timing 00:29:676 - so I suggested you remove finish start
   2. 00:32:890 (3) - Same as above
   3. 00:37:176 (5) - I think you forgot to add a finish :p
   4. 00:50:033 (3) - Whistle should be on end not start , change it to consistant with other patterns
   5. 01:44:890 (3) - Yes , I really think you forgot to add a clap on the arrow
   6. 02:13:176 (1) - Only this whistle in last part , a bit odd for me , I prefer remove to leave ^_^

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:42:748 (6) - Spacing issue
   2. 01:40:497 (7) - I know you add a circle to follow the vocal , but two beat here sounds very odd , I have two ways to solved the problem , one is remove this circle , another one see this :
      
   3. 02:20:033 - Same as Kyouzi difficulty , Note : it is 1/6 beat
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:06:105 (4) - Use Auto additions here please , how do I mean? See this
4. 01:12:747 (3,4,5) - Why change clap pattern here... it make no sense in my opinion
5. 01:24:319 (1) - Remove finish , please put hitsounds according to the music...
6. 01:31:176 (1) - Same as above
7. 01:49:176 (5) - Use clap instead of finish may follow the music more
8. 01:55:176 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 01:12:747 (3,4,5) -

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:49:176 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make the spacing bigger please , the spacing is too small if you compare with other parts
   2. 00:59:890 (1) - This slider makes no sense , I would like to change to a normal straight slider
   3. 01:17:033 (11,12) - I missed this part two times >~< I prefer to change them to a 4 beat 1/4 slider and a circle
      
   4. 01:33:747 (5) - Curving this slider to the another side looks better
   5. 01:44:890 (1,2,3,4) - ( Highly Suggestion ) This is too confused for me , I think circle 3 is slider 4's start while first playing... I suggested you that change the part better , move 01:44:890 (1,2,3) - to other can solve this issue in my opinion
   6. 01:48:319 (1,2,3,4) - ( Highly Suggestion ) Played very weird... there is a rest beat 01:48:640 - but you use the same spacing on this part? I just can say this is very very weird...
   7. 02:20:033 - Same as Kyouzi difficulty , Note : it is 1/6 beat
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:33:748 (7) - Add some green timing swctions and make the volume up gradually , follow the music very well! See this :
      
      Picture

      
   2. 02:06:319 (3) - Forgot a clap end?

bossandy wrote:

　　
[ Guy's Mikoto]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:47:890 (6) - Move this circle then adjust other objects? make a nice pentagonal looks great xD - nice idea, fixed
      
      Picture

      
   2. 01:12:319 (3) - Use angle slider here is not good for me ... looks ugly .. try to make it into a circular slider ? - fixed
   3. 02:08:462 (2) - Stack with 02:06:319 (3) - for a better flow?fixed
   4. 02:20:033 - Same as Kyouzi difficulty , Note : it is 1/6 beat - ok added 1/6 slider
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:29:462 (3) - If you listen the music carrefully , you can know there is only one cymbal in this timing 00:29:676 - so I suggested you remove finish start - oh ok
   2. 00:32:890 (3) - Same as above - fixed
   3. 00:37:176 (5) - I think you forgot to add a finish :p - added~
   4. 00:50:033 (3) - Whistle should be on end not start , change it to consistant with other patterns - hm, i see
   5. 01:44:890 (3) - Yes , I really think you forgot to add a clap on the arrow - fixed
   6. 02:13:176 (1) - Only this whistle in last part , a bit odd for me , I prefer remove to leave ^_^ - ok fixed

　

bossandy wrote:

I am going to mod this , will edit and give my mod )) waiting for me

Edit : Hi hi~ M4M here , sorry for late
　　
[ General]
　

1. Name : The difficulties' name are too confused to identify easiest two diffs is fine , but the other diffs display the same star when selecting songs , it is too confused , change to normal name is the best way to make this issue solved , I means change the diff's name to Easy Guy's Normal fbs's Hard and Insane fmm,i like keep name.so, i add Create Word (Easy) (Normal) (Hard) (Insane) sorry,
   EDIT:

   P o M u T a wrote:

   Kyouzi → by Me (Easy)
   Guy's Mikoto → by Guy (Normal)
   fbs's Natsuki → by frost-b-spec (Hard)
   Mai→ by Me (Insane)

2. Tags : op is not support while searching on website , try to add a number after op , if this is opening 1 , then change to op1 . If it is opening 2 , then change to op2 fmm,i delete op. but,add theme
3. TitleUnicode : Not the same , check them please ok done!
4. Video : You forgot to add video for Kyouzi's and fbs's Natsuki's difficulties , add them o.o already add...

　
[ Kyouzi]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:41:462 (1,2) - I don't like straight slider here , I hope they have some radian , like this , looks much better fixed!
      
      Picture

      
   2. 00:49:605 (2,3) - There is a bad flow between these two objects , try my suggestion : Move the endpoint to x:448 y:32 to make a nice flow! sorry, i like keep mapping this part
   3. 01:05:890 (4) - Rotate this slider by -20? Nazi anyway :p okay
   4. 01:32:890 (3) - ( Highly suggestions ) This slider's start may be covered by 01:31:176 (1) - end's hitburst , this is not unranlable , But I recommend to adjust them ^_^ ok
   5. 01:38:033 (1) - Maybe make the radian more obvious ? like this changed
      
      Picture and Code

      
      

      200,92,98033,6,0,P|312:60|280:140|392:108,1,200.000001192092,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   6. 02:20:033 - I can here something in the music... why don't you add a slider or some circles for it? use a 1/6 slider to follow the music if you change this mod , try to make a slider like this , code for you changed

      216,88,140033,2,0,P|240:76|272:76|296:88,2,83.3333338300383

   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:34:605 (1) - I don't know why you don't add clap on the arrow , Miss a clap here sounds very odd , consider to add one? okay
   2. 00:35:890 (2) - Yes , clap here okay
   3. 00:36:319 (3) - Add a clap end okay
   4. 00:37:176 (4) - Same as above fmm,okay
   5. 00:44:890 (1) - Clap end... okay
   6. 00:55:176 (1) - Finish which on this spinner is too loud for me , try to reduce volume to 40%~50% nice
   7. 01:08:890 (4) - Remove finish end , it is not necessary okay
   8. 01:44:890 (3) - Remove clap for consistent Imo okay
   9. 02:13:176 (1) - Remove finish start , that is too odd , and not fits the music at all

okay
　　
[ Mai]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:49:176 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make the spacing bigger please , the spacing is too small if you compare with other parts little far change ;.;
   2. 00:59:890 (1) - This slider makes no sense , I would like to change to a normal straight slider i like keep, because,sound very much... anyway keep this hope.
   3. 01:17:033 (11,12) - I missed this part two times >~< I prefer to change them to a 4 beat 1/4 slider and a circle no change,sorry, i like rhythm keep...
      
   4. 01:33:747 (5) - Curving this slider to the another side looks better fmm, idk, how change... so, keep is fine, i think, sorry.
   5. 01:44:890 (1,2,3,4) - ( Highly Suggestion ) This is too confused for me , I think circle 3 is slider 4's start while first playing... I suggested you that change the part better , move 01:44:890 (1,2,3) - to other can solve this issue in my opinion no change, because many test player is not confused and i think good. i keep soory.
   6. 01:48:319 (1,2,3,4) - ( Highly Suggestion ) Played very weird... there is a rest beat 01:48:640 - but you use the same spacing on this part? I just can say this is very very weird... little far change ;.;
   7. 02:20:033 - Same as Kyouzi difficulty , Note : it is 1/6 beat okay
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:33:748 (7) - Add some green timing swctions and make the volume up gradually , follow the music very well! See this : nice
      
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   2. 02:06:319 (3) - Forgot a clap end? nice

　
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Hmm... Hard and Insane needs more work , sorry I just can leave a star icon for now >~<
Good Luck :3

Notice

1. Please reply my mod and tell me which you fix which you don't fix , thanks !
   Do not just "quote" my mod and say "Thanks for mod" or something else like this kind of sentence
   If I see you don't do the thing as above , I will add you in my blacklist for 1 month!!
   It means you can't get my mod for 1 month

bbj0920 wrote:

[Kyouzi]
00:45:319 - clap ok

no problem ._.;

1. The diff spread between Natsuki and Mikoto is a bit too high, as Natsuki already uses 1/6 and triplets. To fix this, you could add a diff between Mikoto and Natsuki. Or just try to make Natsuki a bit simpler and Mikoto harder.

1. 01:21:748 (2) - As your previous mapping was very neat and not overlaping, how do you think about removing this bad overlap? A good way of getting rid of it would be to add a repeat to 2, removing 3 CTRL + G and respacing 4 - have a try, I think it fits better :3
2. 02:20:033 (2) - The end sounds too enduring to ignore it just like that. How do you think about a quit finish or clap for the end? I think it fits hitsounding quite well.

1. 00:38:890 (2) - Considering you added whistles to all the strong vocal parts in this part, you will want to add a whistle to keep it consistent.
2. 01:30:748 (4) - Uhm, the whistle on the end is inconsistent and sounds a bit unfiting and spammed with the following whistle on 5. What do you think about removing it?
3. 01:41:033 (4) - If you remove the one above, I would remove this one too for consistency, anyways: I'd remove this one at all as it doesn't fit all of this sudden placed.
4. 01:56:890 (1) - That overlap with 3 looks ugly. To fix this, I would rotate this or just replace this. I guess that would keep your pattern the most.
5. 01:58:605 (3) - Try CTRL + G and I mean by this, to try the flow here. In my opinion, such pattern (these circles) flow much better like this, if you go to the one direction with the first Slider and in the other with the next Slider.
6. 02:20:033 (6) - As this plays much later than the previous notes and instruments - and doesnt really belong to them - I would recommend you to add a NC here.

1. 02:13:176 (5,6,7,8,9) - This circle stream is a bit too long for hard difficulty, switching to a Slider would sure be easier.
2. 02:08:676 (4,5) - This formation flows a bit unclean and doesn't fit with your previous mapping at all. I'd recommend to move 5 a bit to the right and up to create a better flow at this point, as I think it fits the preivous pattern better and makes transition from 4 to 5 a bit cooler.
3. In general I think many of your triplets sound overmaped you could reduce some like 01:05:890 (2,3,4) - which sound really kinda odd and overdone.

1. 00:45:748 (3,4,5,6) - Not only kinda tricky to read but flows annoying bad. Please unstack those 3 and 4,5,6 to have a better readability here.
2. 00:50:462 (5) - To make your transition here work better, I'd recommend you to make this shape a bit smoother, not that much like a curve.
3. 01:00:533 (1) - Please get rid of this antijump, it plays kinda bad after the powerful part here.
4. 01:02:890 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is really overmaped - listening to the music will make you understand that there are no drums or other instruments following this stream.
5. 01:15:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same for these one, which really sound annoying overmaped.
6. 01:26:890 (2,3,4,5) - Having such a low spacing for this stream is kinda inconsistent and confusing to read. I think you should space it the same way you did on your previous streams.
7. 01:30:319 (3,4,5,6) - Same as above.
8. 02:07:176 (1,2,3,4) - Stacking their ends seems strange to me. How about increasing the spacing and create something like this http://puu.sh/1T6ru
   It is your pattern just spaced out and I think it works better and looks neater. If you don't, ignore this suggestion.
9. 02:12:319 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 00:45:748
10. 02:17:247 (6) - This is too hard to read in my opinion :< Unstacking and replacing this would make things much more pleasing and well flowing.
11. 02:17:462 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:45:748
12. 02:20:033 (2) - You did use finishes here. I think it would be a good thing to apply this on other diffs too, to keep a hitsound consistency between difficultys.
13. I did say some things were overmaped. If you want to say, you want to make it hard or it belongs to your style, I would like to say that overmaping is not a style or a good way to map, you should be following the song, but I guess you know this

Konei wrote:

Sorry for the delay >.<

[Kyouzuki]

1. 01:21:748 (2) - As your previous mapping was very neat and not overlaping, how do you think about removing this bad overlap? A good way of getting rid of it would be to add a repeat to 2, removing 3 CTRL + G and respacing 4 - have a try, I think it fits better :3 nice
2. 02:20:033 (2) - The end sounds too enduring to ignore it just like that. How do you think about a quit finish or clap for the end? I think it fits hitsounding quite well. add finish!

[Mai]

1. 00:45:748 (3,4,5,6) - Not only kinda tricky to read but flows annoying bad. Please unstack those 3 and 4,5,6 to have a better readability here. little confused part. but,i like mapping part. sorry no change.
2. 00:50:462 (5) - To make your transition here work better, I'd recommend you to make this shape a bit smoother, not that much like a curve. fmm, i think keep better curve
3. 01:00:533 (1) - Please get rid of this antijump, it plays kinda bad after the powerful part here. but, i think beautiful part.. and no problem ... sorry
4. 01:02:890 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is really overmaped - listening to the music will make you understand that there are no drums or other instruments following this stream. i use overmapped this diff. so, my style overmap. but, not difficult. so, i use.
5. 01:15:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same for these one, which really sound annoying overmaped. sound match, and not difficult. keep
6. 01:26:890 (2,3,4,5) - Having such a low spacing for this stream is kinda inconsistent and confusing to read. I think you should space it the same way you did on your previous streams. fmm,little space this time, so, can reaction . and sound match... keep
7. 01:30:319 (3,4,5,6) - Same as above. ^
8. 02:07:176 (1,2,3,4) - Stacking their ends seems strange to me. How about increasing the spacing and create something like this http://puu.sh/1T6ru
   It is your pattern just spaced out and I think it works better and looks neater. If you don't, ignore this suggestion. i like end stacking this part... sorry
9. 02:12:319 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 00:45:748 little difficult and confused. but, i think no problem, sorry keep
10. 02:17:247 (6) - This is too hard to read in my opinion :< Unstacking and replacing this would make things much more pleasing and well flowing. Eh,, i think no problem stacking...
11. 02:17:462 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:45:748 no
12. 02:20:033 (2) - You did use finishes here. I think it would be a good thing to apply this on other diffs too, to keep a hitsound consistency between difficultys. ok
13. I did say some things were overmaped. If you want to say, you want to make it hard or it belongs to your style, I would like to say that overmaping is not a style or a good way to map, you should be following the song, but I guess you know this My style may be overmapping. But I am said to people and do not change it. I carry through one's faith. I use the placement that is not difficult personally. I continue keeping it.

That's about it :3
Kinda nice Easy and Normal, but hard could need a bit tweaking.
Insane is a bit strange with this overmaped streams and also Hard could remove some useless triplets.

Good luck ></