Hi there, mod from my m4m queue
~General~
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~General~
- There is inconsistency in Tags, check it
- I think the second redline (offset: 00:44:291) is not needed. It's too late (you can notice it just listening the circle 00:45:191 (2) in the normal diff), and the first redline fits nice there too. You don't need to add an other one, then remove it. (Don't forget to resnap all elements and green lines after timing changes)
- 00:03:181 (4) - What about to change this circle with an 1/2 slider? Slider that starts here till the next downbeat (It's always good to put something on downbeats in the easiest diff of the mapset)
- 00:08:881 (4) - I'd use new combo on this slider according to whistle hitsounds
- 00:53:891 (1,3) - These 2 sliders needs to be improved, you should make them symmetric and more flowing:SPOILER
232,320,53891,6,0,B|296:356|344:316|344:316|396:356|464:316,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
400,244,55691,1,8,0:0:0
456,164,56291,2,0,B|392:128|344:168|344:168|292:128|224:168,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
220,260,58091,1,8,0:0:0 - 01:10:691 (3) - Why new combo here? I think it's useless since the vocal is still the same
- 01:19:991 (3) - Read above about 00:03:181 (4)
- 00:29:881 (1,2) - I'd switch new combo to keep symmetry with 00:27:481 (1,2) (circle-slider to slider-circle on the same combo)
- 00:37:081 (7) - New combo here, you need to add it
- 00:43:081 (6) - This slider needs to be moved 1 grid down, to keep symmetry with 00:41:881 (4) and to improve blanket with 00:42:781 (5)
- 00:05:581 (6,7,1) - I don't like how this pattern flows, to be honest. What about to make this part in this way? It's more flowing and enjoyable to play:SPOILER
280,128,5581,1,2,0:0:0
292,108,5731,1,2,0:0:0
304,88,5881,6,0,P|356:148|460:128,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
392,64,6781,1,0,0:0:0
449,137,7081,2,0,P|469:224,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,340,7681,2,0,P|352:236,1,90,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0 - 00:23:581 (4) - I don't like how this whistle sounds honestly. I'd remove it
- 01:09:491 (4) - Why whistle on this slider body? Remove it, it sounds bad and you didn't use it on previous sliders bodies :\
- 01:18:791 (3,4) - ^
- Snap correctly the elements of the map, there are so much unsnapped elements here.
I have snapped them and have modded the map with the right circle offsets. Snap them before to check the mod. - 00:03:781 (2,1) - d k sound better. Moreover, you should to add a circle on 00:04:081 (don). It sounds much better :3
- 00:10:681 (4) - Big d
- 01:16:691 (x) - Add don? The sound looks empty here, and it's bad to play only a circle placed on a red line (01:16:381 (1)) for a fuutsu IMO. d k is really good, instead.
- Unsnapped elements, snap them all here too.
- 00:49:681 (12,1) - k d
- 00:55:381 (2,3,1) - d k d
- 00:59:281 (4,1) - k d
- 01:04:981 (2,3,1) - same of 00:55:381 (2,3,1)
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