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Star Stream
From my queue

[General]
  1. I can't see a big difference between combo color 1 and 2, change one plz
  2. I feel late with your kiai part, and i don't think there should be 2 red lines, delete the 2nd red line
[Easy]
  1. 00:44:291 (1) - it has a bit weird movement, i'd just ctrl+< for a simple solvent
[Normal]
  1. 01:17:291 - finish?
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:481 (1) - just 4 circles would be better imo
  2. 00:14:881 (5,6,7) - 1/2 slider with 1 arrow?
  3. 00:18:481 (1) - remove this NC, or add NC at 00:19:381 (2) -
  4. 00:22:081 (1,2) - feels a bit weird for me, i'd put a 1/2 slider first, and add 2 circles and make jump with the 2nd circle
  5. 00:52:691 (3,4) - combine as a slider, would be better with vocal
Pretty decent map
Good luck with rank~
Aurele


What, you wanted a bubble, right? ._.
Topic Starter
Flask

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

[General]
  1. I can't see a big difference between combo color 1 and 2, change one plz k
  2. I feel late with your kiai part, and i don't think there should be 2 red lines, delete the 2nd red line It needs. Well the notes appears too soon without the red line
[Easy]
  1. 00:44:291 (1) - it has a bit weird movement, i'd just ctrl+< for a simple solvent nope
[Normal]
  1. 01:17:291 - finish? unfit o3o
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:481 (1) - just 4 circles would be better imo I hate streams :\ and it's beginning so i don't want to make it so hard :v
  2. 00:14:881 (5,6,7) - 1/2 slider with 1 arrow? Well I just doing streams
  3. 00:18:481 (1) - remove this NC, or add NC at 00:19:381 (2) - remove nc \:O/
  4. 00:22:081 (1,2) - feels a bit weird for me, i'd put a 1/2 slider first, and add 2 circles and make jump with the 2nd circle It's okay to me \==/
  5. 00:52:691 (3,4) - combine as a slider, would be better with vocal nope. the music has a space between these notes o3o
Pretty decent map
Good luck with rank~
Thanks!!



and oh you Gabe ♥
Chewin
Hi there, mod from my m4m queue

~General~

  1. There is inconsistency in Tags, check it
  2. I think the second redline (offset: 00:44:291) is not needed. It's too late (you can notice it just listening the circle 00:45:191 (2) in the normal diff), and the first redline fits nice there too. You don't need to add an other one, then remove it. (Don't forget to resnap all elements and green lines after timing changes)
~Easy~

  1. 00:03:181 (4) - What about to change this circle with an 1/2 slider? Slider that starts here till the next downbeat (It's always good to put something on downbeats in the easiest diff of the mapset)
  2. 00:08:881 (4) - I'd use new combo on this slider according to whistle hitsounds
  3. 00:53:891 (1,3) - These 2 sliders needs to be improved, you should make them symmetric and more flowing:
    SPOILER

    232,320,53891,6,0,B|296:356|344:316|344:316|396:356|464:316,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    400,244,55691,1,8,0:0:0
    456,164,56291,2,0,B|392:128|344:168|344:168|292:128|224:168,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    220,260,58091,1,8,0:0:0
  4. 01:10:691 (3) - Why new combo here? I think it's useless since the vocal is still the same
  5. 01:19:991 (3) - Read above about 00:03:181 (4)
~Normal~

  1. 00:29:881 (1,2) - I'd switch new combo to keep symmetry with 00:27:481 (1,2) (circle-slider to slider-circle on the same combo)
  2. 00:37:081 (7) - New combo here, you need to add it
  3. 00:43:081 (6) - This slider needs to be moved 1 grid down, to keep symmetry with 00:41:881 (4) and to improve blanket with 00:42:781 (5)
~Hard~

  1. 00:05:581 (6,7,1) - I don't like how this pattern flows, to be honest. What about to make this part in this way? It's more flowing and enjoyable to play:
    SPOILER

    280,128,5581,1,2,0:0:0
    292,108,5731,1,2,0:0:0
    304,88,5881,6,0,P|356:148|460:128,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    392,64,6781,1,0,0:0:0
    449,137,7081,2,0,P|469:224,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    376,340,7681,2,0,P|352:236,1,90,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  2. 00:23:581 (4) - I don't like how this whistle sounds honestly. I'd remove it
  3. 01:09:491 (4) - Why whistle on this slider body? Remove it, it sounds bad and you didn't use it on previous sliders bodies :\
  4. 01:18:791 (3,4) - ^
~Taiko Fuutsu~

  1. Snap correctly the elements of the map, there are so much unsnapped elements here.
    I have snapped them and have modded the map with the right circle offsets. Snap them before to check the mod.
  2. 00:03:781 (2,1) - d k sound better. Moreover, you should to add a circle on 00:04:081 (don). It sounds much better :3
  3. 00:10:681 (4) - Big d
  4. 01:16:691 (x) - Add don? The sound looks empty here, and it's bad to play only a circle placed on a red line (01:16:381 (1)) for a fuutsu IMO. d k is really good, instead.
~Yia's Taiko Muzukashii~

  1. Unsnapped elements, snap them all here too.
  2. 00:49:681 (12,1) - k d
  3. 00:55:381 (2,3,1) - d k d
  4. 00:59:281 (4,1) - k d
  5. 01:04:981 (2,3,1) - same of 00:55:381 (2,3,1)
Good mapset.
You can call me back for a recheck
[Kirisame-Marisa]

Chewin wrote:

~Taiko Fuutsu~

  1. Snap correctly the elements of the map, there are so much unsnapped elements here.
    I have snapped them and have modded the map with the right circle offsets. Snap them before to check the mod.
  2. 00:03:781 (2,1) - d k sound better. Moreover, you should to add a circle on 00:04:081(don). It sounds much better :3 fixed
  3. 00:10:681 (4) - Big d fixed
  4. 01:16:691 (x) - Add don? The sound looks empty here, and it's bad to play only a circle placed on a red line (01:16:381 (1)) for a fuutsu IMO. d k is really good, instead.01:16:691 add a d ; 01:16:381 (1)change to d
~Yia's Taiko Muzukashii~

  1. Unsnapped elements, snap them all here too.
  2. 00:49:681 (12,1) - k d fixed
  3. 00:55:381 (2,3,1) - d k d fixed
  4. 00:59:281 (4,1) - k d fixed
  5. 01:04:981 (2,3,1) - same of 00:55:381 (2,3,1) fixed
Thanks Chewin's mod
Topic Starter
Flask

Chewin wrote:

Hi there, mod from my m4m queue

~General~

  1. There is inconsistency in Tags, check it k
  2. I think the second redline (offset: 00:44:291) is not needed. It's too late (you can notice it just listening the circle 00:45:191 (2) in the normal diff), and the first redline fits nice there too. You don't need to add an other one, then remove it. (Don't forget to resnap all elements and green lines after timing changes) okay D:
~Easy~

  1. 00:03:181 (4) - What about to change this circle with an 1/2 slider? Slider that starts here till the next downbeat (It's always good to put something on downbeats in the easiest diff of the mapset) It's ok to me since the music has only sound at red tick.
  2. 00:08:881 (4) - I'd use new combo on this slider according to whistle hitsounds k
  3. 00:53:891 (1,3) - These 2 sliders needs to be improved, you should make them symmetric and more flowing: oh great :3
    SPOILER

    232,320,53891,6,0,B|296:356|344:316|344:316|396:356|464:316,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    400,244,55691,1,8,0:0:0
    456,164,56291,2,0,B|392:128|344:168|344:168|292:128|224:168,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    220,260,58091,1,8,0:0:0
  4. 01:10:691 (3) - Why new combo here? I think it's useless since the vocal is still the same k
  5. 01:19:991 (3) - Read above about 00:03:181 (4) :3
~Normal~

  1. 00:29:881 (1,2) - I'd switch new combo to keep symmetry with 00:27:481 (1,2) (circle-slider to slider-circle on the same combo) Well the downbeat started and I think it should be nc :\
  2. 00:37:081 (7) - New combo here, you need to add it k
  3. 00:43:081 (6) - This slider needs to be moved 1 grid down, to keep symmetry with 00:41:881 (4) and to improve blanket with 00:42:781 (5) k
~Hard~

  1. 00:05:581 (6,7,1) - I don't like how this pattern flows, to be honest. What about to make this part in this way? It's more flowing and enjoyable to play: great <3
    SPOILER

    280,128,5581,1,2,0:0:0
    292,108,5731,1,2,0:0:0
    304,88,5881,6,0,P|356:148|460:128,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    392,64,6781,1,0,0:0:0
    449,137,7081,2,0,P|469:224,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    376,340,7681,2,0,P|352:236,1,90,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  2. 00:23:581 (4) - I don't like how this whistle sounds honestly. I'd remove it k
  3. 01:09:491 (4) - Why whistle on this slider body? Remove it, it sounds bad and you didn't use it on previous sliders bodies :\ k
  4. 01:18:791 (3,4) - ^ k
Good mapset.
You can call me back for a recheck
OwO Thanks proChewin !
Chewin
~Easy~

Flask wrote:

Chewin wrote:

  1. 00:03:181 (4) - What about to change this circle with an 1/2 slider? Slider that starts here till the next downbeat (It's always good to put something on downbeats in the easiest diff of the mapset) It's ok to me since the music has only sound at red tick.
  1. Well, you should add circle on 00:03:781 because of that sound, also because the timeline from 00:03:181 (4) till 00:04:081 (5) is too empty, and it could confuse novice players. Adding a circle there would fix this issue.
~Normal~

  1. It may sound nazi but 00:43:081 (6) move 1 grid left, please. It is still asymmetric, and it's bad.
Fix those and I will bubble.
Topic Starter
Flask
All fixed \o/
Chewin
Fixed some stuff in the Normal via IRC.

Bubbled ~
Suimya
WAAAA~~~FLASK <3333

HAVE MY LAST BABY <3~~~
Breeze
[Timing]

  1. I've got a offset: 1085 (actually +4 from yours), change it only if you agree with it
[Normal]

  1. 01:20:881 (2,3) - I feel the rhythm here sounds a little odd, try use note at 01:20:881, then a slider during 01:21:181 - 01:21:781. It fits music more imo
let me know when you have reply
Topic Starter
Flask
~ 全修了
Breeze
rebubbled
Topic Starter
Flask
~
MMzz
[General]
Set the tickrate to 1 on every osu! standard diff! There are not enough beats to represent all the slidderticks. (Especially on easy.)

[Yia's Taiko Muzukashii]
00:10:685 (4) - Finisher? I an hear it in the music.
00:44:285 (1) - ^
00:58:685 (2) - ^
01:13:085 (3) - ^
01:15:485 (1) - ^

You should always try and represent the finishers! It gives a better feel to the music and makes the map more interesting.

[Taiko Futsuu]
00:59:285 (1) - Remove this finisher. There is no finisher beat in the music so it makes no sense really.
01:13:085 (11) - Add a finisher?
01:15:485 (1) - ^

Change the things in red and I will rank.
Topic Starter
Flask
Fix tick rates to 1, now waiting for Taiko diffs.
[Kirisame-Marisa]
Taiko two diffs'd fixed
Accepted all the suggestion
Thanks MMzz's mod
MMzz
Ranked!
mintong89
i mean 1st

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Xinely
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lkx_Shore
3个太鼓难度无法直视
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咱也好想... (淚奔
Stefan
Flask pro!
Topic Starter
Flask
Thanks everyone -w- <3
XinCrin
Congratz !!
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恭喜啦~ :3
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grats~
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Topic Starter
Flask
Thanks all ~~
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congratz~
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congrats =w=
Kanari
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Aurele
OMG, IT'S RANKED? I'VE JUST SEEN IT ON THE MOST PLAYED!

Congratulation Flask!
Topic Starter
Flask
<3 Thanks !!!!!!
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