From my queue
[General]
Good luck with rank~
[General]
- I can't see a big difference between combo color 1 and 2, change one plz
- I feel late with your kiai part, and i don't think there should be 2 red lines, delete the 2nd red line
- 00:44:291 (1) - it has a bit weird movement, i'd just ctrl+< for a simple solvent
- 01:17:291 - finish?
- 00:00:481 (1) - just 4 circles would be better imo
- 00:14:881 (5,6,7) - 1/2 slider with 1 arrow?
- 00:18:481 (1) - remove this NC, or add NC at 00:19:381 (2) -
- 00:22:081 (1,2) - feels a bit weird for me, i'd put a 1/2 slider first, and add 2 circles and make jump with the 2nd circle
- 00:52:691 (3,4) - combine as a slider, would be better with vocal
Good luck with rank~