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[general]

fine

[hard]

00:10:681 (1,3) - 这种slider看着有点random 把结尾node放在圆圈中心 之后一样的自查我就不提了
00:16:381 (3) - 貌似blanket还不那么完美
00:24:181 (7) - 同
00:19:681 (4) - 这种slider弧度变大看着/打着都舒服http://puu.sh/1q6kd
00:25:081 (1,2) - slider弧线略偷懒
00:27:481 (1) - 同样 弧度再大点
00:37:081 (1,3) - 一眼望去也不对称
00:48:191 (5) - 这不仅间距有点奇怪之后的stream弧线也有点奇怪
00:51:491 (1,2) - 偷懒slider
00:54:791 (2,4) - blanket 你看这node骨架就知道
01:02:891 (8) - blanket
01:23:891 (3,4,5,6) - 请等边三角形

[taiko muzukashii]

fine, and easy

[Normal]

00:01:081 (2) - blanket http://puu.sh/1q6y3
00:07:081 (2) - ^
00:10:681 (1) - 这也是 如果要做blanket就别让弧线向外拐 而且这也不是那种t特殊歌
00:13:981 (5) - 弧线看着不顺眼 建议用新版slider
00:34:681 (1,2) - 这种slider还用手拉不用复制粘贴+旋转?
00:43:081 (6) - 发生了什么
00:59:591 (3) - blanket 有点nazi请谅解
01:08:291 (1) - 弧线看着歪了 同样 拉slider把结尾node放在圆圈中心
01:14:891 (3) - 感觉做成弧形比较好http://puu.sh/1q6Ba

[easy]

00:14:281 (5) - blanket
00:23:281 (4) - 拉大弧度

其实我感觉没什么可mod的 你自己查一遍 把这种slider都修一下
Topic Starter
Flask
基本上都修了 感謝拉克絲和yurunneram ~~~
merchat7
Recheck,

About the spinner, listen at 25% speed playback (be sure to remove spinner so there is no sound at the end of it to distract you). 01:29:141 is where I consider the volume of music to be equal to 5% in term of osu! hitsound volume. At 01:29:291, there is no sound at all (thus 0% would fit here if it were rankable). Also at about, 01:28:391, you see a clear decrescendo or the music is getting softer, since you used one timing point, the spinner volume stay the same while, the music doesn't. That's why I suggest for you to add some timing point so that the spinner bonus sound sounds more inline with how the music is. Personally, this is how I would do it.
01:27:791 - 25% volume
01:28:091 - 20% volume
01:28:391 - 15% volume
01:28:691 - 10% volume
01:28:991 - 5% volume

This represent what I mention above perfectly (decrescendo, no sound in music at the end...)
I won't force you through, from what I gather, not many people seem to notice this, but it's something that will make your beatmap more perfect.

[Easy]

00:00:481 (1) - Check all the other diff and you don't have a timing point here, so I'll assume you forgot to remove the timing point here.Remove this timing point so this note is 60% volume, too soft atm.
Forgot to put whistle at begin? Pretty sure I mention these in my earlier mod
00:02:281 (3) - Whistle at begin
00:04:081 (5) - Whistle on repeat
00:07:081 (2) - Whistle on begin and end
Forgot these too?
00:13:081 (3) - Maybe whistle here...
00:15:481 (1,2) - Whistle at begin of (1) and on (2) It may sound nicer to do a low volume finish ta begin of (1) like 00:17:881 (1) -
00:18:781 (2) - Whistle at begin
00:22:681 (3) - Whistle here
00:25:081 (1) - Add a whistle at begin
00:51:491 (3) - This need a whistle at end on it sounds incomplete
01:03:491 (3) - I suggest to add whistle before, but it would be better to do finish at begin like 00:53:891 (1) -
01:05:891 (2) - ^, for consistency with 00:56:291 (3) -

All should be fixed as most have to be with consistency and since you've said they were changed.

[Normal]

00:11:581 (2) - Need a whistle here to finish this hitsound pattern.
00:16:381 (2) - Music doesn't change in anyway, the guitar continues to play the same rhythm so should add a whistle at begin.
00:23:581 (6) - ^
00:37:081 (7) - Get the feeling this curve can be better, try the new circular slider? Change this line
452,164,37081,2,0,B|492:128|484:72|432:40|384:72,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
to
452,164,37081,2,0,P|492:128|484:72|432:40|384:72,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
Then remove two anchor points so that you only have three, for example http://puu.sh/1r05m
00:47:291 (5,6) - Inconsistency with Hard, either add whistle to the hit circles on red tick in Hard or remove from end here. I prefer removing the whistles.
00:51:491 (5) - Add whistle at end, as it's inconsistent with 01:02:291 (7) - atm (at the moment)
01:06:491 (5) - Whistle on repeat?
01:08:291 (1) - Need a whistle at end if you have one at end of 01:10:691 (1) -
01:14:291 (2) - Sound much better to me if whistle follow only violin, so remove the whistle from begin of this slider

Everything should be fixed except for stuff marked with ?

[Hard]

00:11:581 (3) - Whistle at begin, same as Hard regarding this
00:20:881 (3) - Whistle at end, same reason as above
00:23:581 (5) - Whistle here
00:25:681 (2) - Whistle at end
00:29:281 (6) - You may want to change to this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/1r0hP to follow drums, I hear the drum sounds so it felt weird playing a long slider.
00:37:981 (2) - Sound better to me without whistle
00:49:991 (3) - Whistle at end
01:01:091 (1) - Feel better if no jump on this note, picture so that it's more clear http://puu.sh/1r0mJ. Basically, just move (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) so that there is no jump on this note and adjust following notes. I think this make it play nicer, but your opinion may differ.
01:14:591 (4,5) - Whistle on (4) and on the repeat of (5) [Same whistle pattern as Hard]
01:18:791 (3) - Sound better without whistle at end

All should be fixed except rhythm and pattern suggestions.

Hmm, still some issues, but if you follow everything, hitsound should be perfect now. I'll come back again and hopefully star this. Also one other thing, no video? I always prefer playing with video and I checked if there was a video for this and there was. If you don't know how to encode a video, I can do this for you. Those who dislike video can always use no video mod/download without video anyways so it would be nice for those who prefer playing with it

You can kudosu this post if you find it helpful, good luck!
Roddie
Easy

  1. 01:27:491 (1)-This spinner is missing a new combo. Add one in.


Taiko Fuutsu
  1. 00:29:881 (3)-A big don could be fitting there?
  2. 00:39:481 (1)-^ ?
  3. 00:49:091 (14)-^ This definitely could use a big don there. :D
  4. 00:58:961 (4)-^?
  5. 01:08:291 (4)-^?


Normal

Well done on your Normal. (:

Yia's Taiko Muzukashii
  1. 00:39:191 (2, x, 1)-How about putting in a ddk taiko pattern? I think that would sound and play well, in my opinion.


Hard
  1. 00:39:181 (4, 5)-Hmm... a clap sounds a lot better than a whistle on the 4th note really. I suggest you change that. Oh and add a clap on the 5th note. That sounds better there too.(:


I like how the mapset's represented. Very clean and enjoyable to play on. Here's a star for leaving a good impression on me.

Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Flask

merchat7 wrote:

Recheck,

[Hard]

01:01:091 (1) - Feel better if no jump on this note, picture so that it's more clear http://puu.sh/1r0mJ. Basically, just move (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) so that there is no jump on this note and adjust following notes. I think this make it play nicer, but your opinion may differ. I'd like to make a jump here D:
.
Also one other thing, no video? I always prefer playing with video and I checked if there was a video for this and there was. If you don't know how to encode a video, I can do this for you. Those who dislike video can always use no video mod/download without video anyways so it would be nice for those who prefer playing with it Well I'm try to get it ;_; I'll contact you if I got a bad-quality or something wrong video and thanks btw.

You can kudosu this post if you find it helpful, good luck!
Anything I delete are all changed.

Roddie wrote:

Easy

  1. 01:27:491 (1)-This spinner is missing a new combo. Add one in. k


Normal

Well done on your Normal. (: (:

Hard
  1. 00:39:181 (4, 5)-Hmm... a clap sounds a lot better than a whistle on the 4th note really. I suggest you change that. Oh and add a clap on the 5th note. That sounds better there too.(: umm cool. Added!


I like how the mapset's represented. Very clean and enjoyable to play on. Here's a star for leaving a good impression on me.

Good luck! :)
Thanks both!
[Kirisame-Marisa]
Taiko two diffs'd fixed
Accepted all the suggestion thanks Roddie's mod
merchat7
Recheck once again, no kudosu for this post

Spinner volume not changed? And didn't see a reason why not, but as mention, will not force you to do this.

[Easy]

00:07:081 (2) - Still no whistle on begin and end here :S
01:10:691 (1) - Remove whistle from slider body only (don't remove finish at begin or whistle at end)

[Hard]

00:03:781 (2) - Add whistle at end, consistency with Normal
00:10:081 (5) - Remove clap from end, there is no drum sound in music there

Just curious about the spinner since you've said this was fixed, but looks like I can star now

Good luck for rank
Topic Starter
Flask
^ All fix'd

Thanks \o/
alacat
Hi:3 from My queue.

[General]
●Combo colour 1 is similar to 2.
●AVI file size is very large o.o change to around 10M ~12M.

[Easy]
●00:08:881 - try to put 60% volume ?
●00:17:881 (1) - add whistle at the head instead of finish ? a little loud >_<
●00:26:881 (2,1) - try this ? I think look good :3
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/498096

[Normal]
●circle size -1 ? I think this is a little difficult for beginners.
●00:17:281 (3) - 2 grid left ? You could improve this flow a bit.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/498097
●00:17:881 (1) - same as easy diff.
●00:18:481 (2,3) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.
●00:22:681 (4) - add new combo ?
●00:28:081 (2,3) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.

[Hard]
●OD + 1 ?
●00:17:881 (1) - same as easy diff.
●00:22:231 (2) - remove note ? it follows nothing.
●00:25:081 - volume down to 30~50% ? too loud finish sound >_<
●00:28:981 - try to put 45% volume ~
●00:29:281 - 55% ~

ika chan <3

all suggestions~ >_<

nice map :3 go go rank~ :)
Topic Starter
Flask

alacat wrote:

Hi:3 from My queue.

[General]
●Combo colour 1 is similar to 2. It's ok for me o3o
●AVI file size is very large o.o change to around 10M ~12M. well... nah D:

[Easy]
●00:08:881 - try to put 60% volume ? kkk
●00:17:881 (1) - add whistle at the head instead of finish ? a little loud >_< I think it's okay o3o
●00:26:881 (2,1) - try this ? I think look good :3 k!
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/498096

[Normal]
●circle size -1 ? I think this is a little difficult for beginners. \==/
●00:17:281 (3) - 2 grid left ? You could improve this flow a bit. k~
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/498097
●00:17:881 (1) - same as easy diff. o3o
●00:18:481 (2,3) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical. D:
●00:22:681 (4) - add new combo ? k~
●00:28:081 (2,3) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical. D:

[Hard]
●OD + 1 ? k~
●00:17:881 (1) - same as easy diff. o3o [2]
●00:22:231 (2) - remove note ? it follows nothing. Keep4now D:
●00:25:081 - volume down to 30~50% ? too loud finish sound >_< change to whistle :3
●00:28:981 - try to put 45% volume ~ k
●00:29:281 - 55% ~ k

ika chan <3

all suggestions~ >_<

nice map :3 go go rank~ :)
Thanks ><!
-xNaCLx-
Req. Taiko mod >.0

[Taiko General]
聲量太低了...我想非kiai time最少也要大概80%.

[Futsuu]
00:03:181 - 加finish
00:03:781 - k
00:46:091 - 這裡放一個d, 再在00:46:391放slider/spinner吧?
01:19:981 - 加finish
01:20:591 - k
01:26:891 - 放一個d , 再在01:27:191放spinner

[Muzu]
00:10:081 - d
00:32:881 - d
00:46:091 - kk
00:49:091 - k
01:13:091 - k
01:13:991 - k

祝rank~~
Satellite
Hi Flask's :)
Your Request via in game chat M4M thanks >.<///


[General]
  1. Mp3song bitrate128kbps.. up 192kbps :) ?



[Hard]
    1. 00:06:781 - 1grid up x=348 y=356 nazi~
    2. 00:10:681 - I think that flow here
    3. 00:13:981 - this slider "Ctrl+Shift+R" use 45゜rotation is good
    4. 00:15:481 - 00:10:681 - same~
    5. 00:22:231 - Remove note?
    6. 00:47:291 (2,3,4,5) - Use Distance snap?
    7. 01:07:691 - 1grid left? x=256 y=144
    8. 01:07:991 - ^
    9. 01:19:991 - this note want to jump :D?


nice map >.<// shortMod sorry ;^; Good luck~ ;)

star!
Topic Starter
Flask

Dagger-Gazel wrote:

Hi Flask's :)
Your Request via in game chat M4M thanks >.<///


[General]
  1. Mp3song bitrate128kbps.. up 192kbps :) ?
Not a big problem owo


[Hard]
    1. 00:06:781 - 1grid up x=348 y=356 nazi~ k
    2. 00:10:681 - I think that flow here k
    3. 00:13:981 - this slider "Ctrl+Shift+R" use 45゜rotation is good wow I haven't used this b4 O: Thanks for mentioning!
    4. 00:15:481 - 00:10:681 - same~ kkkk
    5. 00:22:231 - Remove note? okay Q_QQQ
    6. 00:47:291 (2,3,4,5) - Use Distance snap? k
    7. 01:07:691 - 1grid left? x=256 y=144 k
    8. 01:07:991 - ^ k
    9. 01:19:991 - this note want to jump :D? no -w-


nice map >.<// shortMod sorry ;^; Good luck~ ;)

star!
Thanks Mod&Star owo!!!!!
Frostmourne
such a good mod =_=" , I can't mod as good as yours orz

General
consider finding new mp3 because this mp3 sounds a bit broken imo (it might be caused from being forced volume)

Easy
00:21:481 (2) - this should be at 00:21:181 (2) - because from 00:18:781 (2) - that you were following the vocal , it might be a bit strange for this
also increase this slider to 00:22:081 (2) - to make it proper
00:46:991 (3) - add clap ? I hear a snare on this point

Normal
01:13:091 (1) - maybe whistle here to be along with vocal more precisely?
01:25:691 (6) - new combo ? nothing more than aesthetic xD

Hard
00:51:491 (1,2,3) - these placements are not good because vocal sounds very high (her voice) but placements look like normal part which doesn't have anything interesting , I would make jump here

really thank you for your mod , good luck for rank : ) Flask
[Kirisame-Marisa]

NewibornCLivee wrote:

Req. Taiko mod >.0

[Taiko General]
聲量太低了...我想非kiai time最少也要大概80%. fixed

[Futsuu]
00:03:181 - 加finish fixed
00:03:781 - k fixed
00:46:091 - 這裡放一個d, 再在00:46:391放slider/spinner吧? fixed
01:19:981 - 加finish fixed
01:20:591 - k fixed
01:26:891 - 放一個d , 再在01:27:191放spinner fixed

[Muzu]
00:10:081 - d fixed
00:32:881 - d fixed
00:46:091 - kk fixed
00:49:091 - k Do not accept
01:13:091 - k Do not accept
01:13:991 - k fixed

祝rank~~
Thanks NewibornCLivee's Mod
BCI
hi Flask-nyan~

[General]
heya Marisa caniaskulikethat u no rename Fuutsu to Yia's Taiko Fuutsu?

Inconsistency in Tags: -
Easy : OVA OAD ikamusume Kanemoto Hisako squid girl Diomedea invasion! ending [kirisame-marisa] yia pazuru
Hard : OVA OAD ikamusume Kanemoto Hisako squid girl Diomedea invasion! ending [kirisame-marisa] yia pazuru
Normal : OVA OAD ikamusume Kanemoto Hisako squid girl Diomedea invasion! ending [kirisame-marisa] yia pazuru
Taiko Fuutsu : OVA OAD ikamusume Diomedea Kanemoto Hisako squid girl invasion! ending [kirisame-marisa] yia pazuru
Yia's Taiko Muzukashii : OVA OAD ikamusume Diomedea Kanemoto Hisako squid girl invasion! ending [kirisame-marisa] yia pazuru
hope u get it, just copy the tags from Taikos

also i get 25ms earlier, pls check timing owo

[EZ]
00:04:081 (5) - how about move it 1/2 earlier? http://puu.sh/1u3Id fits with the music better but idk how to move all elements to save the spacing so ignore
00:22:681 (3) - move it to x:436 y:280 to do som triangle (then if u do this move last point on (4) ~two grids down
01:01:091 (1,3) - swap the NC pls u don't folloving vocals as always
01:05:291 (1) - RNC if u do ^
01:20:891 (4) - same as 00:04:081 (5) ;w;

[NM]
00:04:381 (3) - x< pls do smf like http://puu.sh/1u3OC
00:08:881 (1) - also so ugly ;w; do it with new sliders http://puu.sh/1u3PN
00:38:881 (8) - this slider overlap nothing, so u can do it for another form ;w;
00:51:491 (5) - ehmm do it with new slider system pls ;_;

[HD]
HP-1 since u folloving jump on a NC and it will be easy to miss
00:31:681 (3,1,2,3,4) - i can got stack with first (3) and (4) \о/ code
420,196,32281,5,8,0:0:0
376,372,32881,1,8,0:0:0
204,324,33481,1,8,0:0:0
252,152,34081,1,8,0:0:0
00:46:391 (1,3) - when i playing this, (3) got unstacked owo so better to unstack (3) and put it to x:204 y:216 for nice triangle
00:54:791 (2,4) - pls remake these sliders with new slider system, current is a bit.. idk how to say D:
00:59:291 (2) - jump is unintiniative at all and don't fit pls enable distanse snap and move it somewhere else

on Taikos pls up the volume ~80% i don't hear any of objects
good luck \^w^/
Topic Starter
Flask

Frostmourne wrote:

such a good mod =_=" , I can't mod as good as yours orz =A=

General
consider finding new mp3 because this mp3 sounds a bit broken imo (it might be caused from being forced volume) will try maybe :\

Easy
00:21:481 (2) - this should be at 00:21:181 (2) - because from 00:18:781 (2) - that you were following the vocal , it might be a bit strange for this I think simple 1/1 rhythm is better :~
also increase this slider to 00:22:081 (2) - to make it proper
00:46:991 (3) - add clap ? I hear a snare on this point keep 4 now owo

Normal
01:13:091 (1) - maybe whistle here to be along with vocal more precisely? k
01:25:691 (6) - new combo ? nothing more than aesthetic xD k -w-

Hard
00:51:491 (1,2,3) - these placements are not good because vocal sounds very high (her voice) but placements look like normal part which doesn't have anything interesting , I would make jump here ctrl+G for (2) and jump for (3) owo~

really thank you for your mod , good luck for rank : ) Flask

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

hi Flask-nyan~

[General]
heya Marisa caniaskulikethat u no rename Fuutsu to Yia's Taiko Fuutsu? Yia says that futsuu is so simple so he won't add his name owo and idk why he said dat ;n;

Inconsistency in Tags: -
Easy : OVA OAD ikamusume Kanemoto Hisako squid girl Diomedea invasion! ending [kirisame-marisa] yia pazuru
Hard : OVA OAD ikamusume Kanemoto Hisako squid girl Diomedea invasion! ending [kirisame-marisa] yia pazuru
Normal : OVA OAD ikamusume Kanemoto Hisako squid girl Diomedea invasion! ending [kirisame-marisa] yia pazuru
Taiko Fuutsu : OVA OAD ikamusume Diomedea Kanemoto Hisako squid girl invasion! ending [kirisame-marisa] yia pazuru
Yia's Taiko Muzukashii : OVA OAD ikamusume Diomedea Kanemoto Hisako squid girl invasion! ending [kirisame-marisa] yia pazuru
hope u get it, just copy the tags from Taikos k!

also i get 25ms earlier, pls check timing owo :\

[EZ]
00:04:081 (5) - how about move it 1/2 earlier? http://puu.sh/1u3Id fits with the music better but idk how to move all elements to save the spacing so ignore well I like the rhythm now so keep ><
00:22:681 (3) - move it to x:436 y:280 to do som triangle (then if u do this move last point on (4) ~two grids down k
01:01:091 (1,3) - swap the NC pls u don't folloving vocals as always k
01:05:291 (1) - RNC if u do ^ ~
01:20:891 (4) - same as 00:04:081 (5) ;w; ~

[NM]
00:04:381 (3) - x< pls do smf like http://puu.sh/1u3OC k
00:08:881 (1) - also so ugly ;w; do it with new sliders http://puu.sh/1u3PN k
00:38:881 (8) - this slider overlap nothing, so u can do it for another form ;w; I like my way D:
00:51:491 (5) - ehmm do it with new slider system pls ;_; k

[HD]
HP-1 since u folloving jump on a NC and it will be easy to miss k wow so easy
00:31:681 (3,1,2,3,4) - i can got stack with first (3) and (4) \о/ code -w- thanks
420,196,32281,5,8,0:0:0
376,372,32881,1,8,0:0:0
204,324,33481,1,8,0:0:0
252,152,34081,1,8,0:0:0
00:46:391 (1,3) - when i playing this, (3) got unstacked owo so better to unstack (3) and put it to x:204 y:216 for nice triangle k
00:54:791 (2,4) - pls remake these sliders with new slider system, current is a bit.. idk how to say D: k
00:59:291 (2) - jump is unintiniative at all and don't fit pls enable distanse snap and move it somewhere else k

on Taikos pls up the volume ~80% i don't hear any of objects waiting for yia~owo
good luck \^w^/
Thanks both owo!!!
Star Stream
From my queue

[General]
  1. I can't see a big difference between combo color 1 and 2, change one plz
  2. I feel late with your kiai part, and i don't think there should be 2 red lines, delete the 2nd red line


[Easy]
  1. 00:44:291 (1) - it has a bit weird movement, i'd just ctrl+< for a simple solvent


[Normal]
  1. 01:17:291 - finish?


[Hard]
  1. 00:00:481 (1) - just 4 circles would be better imo
  2. 00:14:881 (5,6,7) - 1/2 slider with 1 arrow?
  3. 00:18:481 (1) - remove this NC, or add NC at 00:19:381 (2) -
  4. 00:22:081 (1,2) - feels a bit weird for me, i'd put a 1/2 slider first, and add 2 circles and make jump with the 2nd circle
  5. 00:52:691 (3,4) - combine as a slider, would be better with vocal


Pretty decent map
Good luck with rank~
Gabe


What, you wanted a bubble, right? ._.
Topic Starter
Flask

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

[General]
  1. I can't see a big difference between combo color 1 and 2, change one plz k
  2. I feel late with your kiai part, and i don't think there should be 2 red lines, delete the 2nd red line It needs. Well the notes appears too soon without the red line


[Easy]
  1. 00:44:291 (1) - it has a bit weird movement, i'd just ctrl+< for a simple solvent nope


[Normal]
  1. 01:17:291 - finish? unfit o3o


[Hard]
  1. 00:00:481 (1) - just 4 circles would be better imo I hate streams :\ and it's beginning so i don't want to make it so hard :v
  2. 00:14:881 (5,6,7) - 1/2 slider with 1 arrow? Well I just doing streams
  3. 00:18:481 (1) - remove this NC, or add NC at 00:19:381 (2) - remove nc \:O/
  4. 00:22:081 (1,2) - feels a bit weird for me, i'd put a 1/2 slider first, and add 2 circles and make jump with the 2nd circle It's okay to me \==/
  5. 00:52:691 (3,4) - combine as a slider, would be better with vocal nope. the music has a space between these notes o3o


Pretty decent map
Good luck with rank~
Thanks!!



and oh you Gabe ♥
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