kosiga wrote:

hoLysoup! :>

thank you for the request~

here my mod~
kosiga!! !! yay!!
General

hmm... There is not the problem with a way of ending, but It might seem a little sudden =x=;;
so I suggest that you take fade-out from 04:34:570. I think more end is finished neatly
yea because the song is too long so I decided to end here. also I like to hear the song a little bit more before fading out :>!

Normal
00:46:070 (2,1) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/1Bm99 00:46:070 (2) - I thought that you had better to put a sound to 00:46:820 if you used the sound of end of this. Because a sound begins in here. for ex: http://puu.sh/1Bmfs
However, I suggest simple rhythm~ Anyway, current situation is not bad yea I think current situation matches the song better :>
02:55:070 (1,2,3,4,5) - You should put a sound to 02:57:320 if you match it with a vocal. Because follow from 02:56:320, the sound is audible in empty when do not put it i suggest for ex: http://puu.sh/1BnVs http://puu.sh/1BnWP mm ok I will think about this
03:46:320 (1) - same as 01:46:320 (1) mm I'll keep this for now

I am slightly anxious. it is the rhythm that is totally different from the first half in the latter half .
This has the rhythm that the latter half is more complicated. I wanted you to use these without relations moderately in the first half and the latter half
and some hitsound ↓ how to use is different, so I have some questions o.o;
03:04:570 (1,2,3) -
03:20:570 (1,2,3) -
but anyway, It is not a big problem
yea you're right. I made rhythm more simple :>!!


Hard

00:49:070 (2) - add finish instead to whistle. reason same as Normal diff. I think 2 finish = too loud
01:22:070 (6) - add normalhitsound instead to clap o.o? 01:22:195 - clap sound here so hear it as having been late a little ><;
01:54:070 (1) - end is 01:54:195. match it with a vocal and back sound.
02:49:070 (2) - same as 00:49:070 (2)
03:22:070 (6) - same as 01:22:070 (6)
03:38:070 (7) - ^ 01:38:070 (7)
03:54:070 (1) - same as 01:54:070 (1)

Insane

00:49:070 (2) - add finish instead to whistle. reason same as Normal diff. I think 2 finish = too loud
01:21:320 (2,3,1,2) - This is an original rhythm. I suggest that you take the sound of back rhythm. for ex: http://puu.sh/1Brdt ( and add clap to 01:21:570. 01:22:195. ) reason same as Hard diff 01:22:070 (6) I like this simple rhythm so didn't change here :>!
01:37:320 (6) - remove normal hitsound. and 01:37:570 (7) - add normalhitsound to start of the slider is better here imo. too loud I think
02:49:070 (2) - same as Normal diff.
03:07:445 (4,5) - The spacing that you use for the first time. This is 1/2 rhythm and same distance. so I cannot recommend that only here uses it www I think it's ok.. people won't miss the beat
03:38:445 (x) - Suggestion of the rhythm: add note here. and 03:38:195 (5) - add clap. i think it matches back sound~ mm I think too many beats


love this song :> star☆~

Good luck~
you are the best modder ever.
you should be BAT right now I don't understand how you're not on the team
ありがとう！！ really thank you! :>!

Nyquill wrote:

Thanks for requesting from #ba- holy fuck its chata. I would have modded your map anyways if dkun didn't take on your map

hello! !
[Hard]
01:10:320 - Add a note here, everything in the music asks for it.
ok sure

[Insane]
00:49:945 (1) - Should just have this as two notes. I really do not see why not, and a outlying 1/4 slider just feels weird. a lot of ppl mentioned this so I guess i'll change it
00:54:320 (x) - Everything in the music here begs for a note here. Please do :< mm ok.. even though I do like the pause but I guess i'll add a note
01:55:320 (6,7) - Wanna make this go in this direction? Makes for a better drop-off (feels smoother). Just a suggestion.
02:34:320 (7) - This is fairly bad flow (unfortunately). If you ctrl-g it and then move it further it will play much better. well personally I really like this big jump at the end I think it's great. But i'll keep this in mind since kosiga mentioned this too
02:59:820 (3) - Just a suggestion: remove the repeat and stack a note under the end of this slider. Would make for a neat jump to the next slider. mm ok I rearranged it another way
03:05:570 (5) - mmm may be better if you put this note here. The current positioning makes it weird to play because of the suddenly smaller spacing.```` mm I'll keep this for now because this marks the centre of the pentagon
03:17:570 (7) - Remove a repeat and add a note 1/4 after the slider? It makes for better rhythm. Then add a note at 03:18:320 to cover the vocals better. All in all better rhythm for this section. yea it was like that before, but I changed it to this cuase I thought it was simpler and follows the voice more

I would star if I had kudosu stars.
:D thanks for modding!! lol it's ok you don't have to star

Gero wrote:

Mod Request From My Queue O3O/

because this map is not ranked? :<

I want to see it ranked TWT
hihi!!
[Normal]

* 00:32:570 (1) - This note is wrong the snap distance please check either the slider, because this can make the following notes continue with a bad snap distance. ok fixed~
* 01:02:570 (1) - ^ok fixed~
* 01:49:570 (5) - ^ok fixed~
* 02:50:570 (1) - This slider is being covered by previous circles, you could move it elsewhere to make it look better ok fixed~
* 00:32:570 (1) - Finish? Music is a highlight here no I think this is too loud

[Hard]

* 00:32:570 (1) - Finish, sounds good if you add no I think this is too loud
* 03:01:320 (6) - note no distance snap check please ok fixed~
* 03:07:820 (2) - ^ 03:12:070 (4) - ^ ok fixed~

Nice Mapset *·*
I hope and I serve my mod n.n Good luck in your map
Thanks for modding!!

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]

1. Since you used custom skins for notes, so you should add a line "SliderBorder : 255,255,255" into [Colours] to prevent skin blending. White would fit nicely.

oh yes sorry I forgot. fixed!

[Insane]
00:38:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I want to hear some whistles in this part. You added whistles in Hard diff at this time. mm yea this will ruin the strong down beat drum sound i have on the big white ticks. but I guess it's ok.. I'll just add whistles to it
01:05:570 (5) - Add clap fixed~
01:28:570 (5) - Uhm.. I've never seen this kind of slider shape before, that linear style looks disharmonious imo. mm yea this one is just to add variety to the sliders because they're mostly S-sliders, so I'll add some angular ones.
02:10:570 (1) - Remove NC to be consistent with 01:54:570 (5) ok I fixed the NC at the start of the kiai so it's consistent now. I like having NC on the downbeat better.
02:58:070 (5) - Move down a bit, it touches HP bar. rearranged~
03:28:570 (5) - Mentioned this above explained above~
04:10:570 (1) - Remove NC fixed this like above

I don't like copypasta like this... ;_;
mm.. yea I copypasted different sections that's probably why it seems really similar in the second half. but I mostly just copied the sliders cause I like the s-sliders so I didn't want to keep remaking different looking ones.

[Hard]
01:05:820 (4) - Add whistle to tail done
01:43:320 (2) - Bend this slider a little bit, it's a part of 01:42:570 (1,2,3,4,5), others were curved. done
03:05:820 (4) - Add whistle to repeat arrowdone


[Normal]

1. I suggest HP 4 & OD 4. It will increase score and reduce the huge score gap between Hard and Normal.

02:25:570 (3) - Add whistles to head and tail, seems you missed. done
02:26:570 (1) - Add whistle to head. I heard those three whistles in other diffs, also music says so o3o done
02:30:820 (1) - Add clap done
02:57:570 (4) - Maybe change its shape to non-linear? fixed this to be S-slider~
03:04:570 (1) - Add whistle to tail done


Pretty good mapset, I would like to bubble this when you respond to my mod.

Saten wrote:

hii
hihi!~!!
[General]
Default

Custom


The custom you are using are kinda uncomfortable to play with. It feels like it blends in with the background
oh.. well the skin is a whole set together so I'd rather not change it. I thought it looked nicer than the original approach circle that's why I included it. mm nobody really mentioned this actually so I believe it's alright? but yea it's a preference thing so sorry it looks confusing to you :<
[Insane]
AR8 feels kinda off in this difficulty.This difficulty kinda feels like a Hard (a bit harder than Hard) really..? is it too hard?
00:50:445 (4) - add a clap here, feels odd without a clap here done!
01:05:570 (5) - clap fixed~
02:50:445 (4) - clapfixed~
02:53:320 (2) - Flipping this horizonally looks better imo

SPOILER

fixed~
03:05:570 (5) - clapfixed~
03:37:570 (1) - ^fixed~
03:38:195 (5) - ^fixed~
04:10:195 (2,4) - ^well actually not this one.. I thought it sounded strange.. :O!
04:26:320 (8) - whistle mm this one i'll leave it for now

[Hard]
00:28:570 (1,1,1) - Why didn't you custom stack this like you did on Insane? mmm.. I actually don't really recall why I didn't do it D: fixed!!
03:17:570 (7) - the clap here feels kinda off. Yeah, it's supposed to be on the upbeat (03:18:070 - ) ok fixed

[Normal]
01:35:070 (1) - What do you think of moving the middle points more to the middle?

SPOILER

mm maybe it's too curvy now? lol I'll leave this one
01:38:070 (3) - same as above since it's a copy ^


I was hoping that I was going to sneak before yk but here we are lol
Goodluck anyway
thanks for modding!!